Pokemon: Master of Poison

LV 15

reddragon

I enjoy the storyline so far and hope it continues to be a great story I like the Pokemon he chooses and how you need to gather the right items for the potential to rise

LV 3

Tandoris

Story is nice, that change from the endless fanfiction with pallet strater, , pace is ok, the system isn't totally broken (at least at chapter 10, we wil see in the future). A lot of potential in my opinion Writing Quality 4/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 5/5 Character Design 4/5 World Background 4/5 total 4.4/5 Hae a nice day (night?) <3

LV 14

JoSauer

This one is a Gem. The initial setup is realy nice and unique to potential pokemon fanfics. I like that the mc specilaises in poison types and that that was a reasonable decision by circumstance and not just randomly decided.

LV 15

Barnacleboy

This has a lot of potential but after the recent two chaters 68-69 I cant help but reconsider. The mc is just too evil for anyone to relate to unless they have sick humor. Any anti hero or even evil mc have a bottom line and usually one of those bottom lines is children and its for a reason. No one wants to read a story about a main character enslaving, abusing, theatening, or killing children. At this point in the story i already wish i could go and kill this mc myself seeing as how hes a grown man thats taken over a childs body. I get the mc was written to have trust issues because of past life but how does that traslate to being a child abuser. im just disappointed because this is such a serious topic to write about but its written like its not a big deal to abuse those children. im giving this novel another 5 chapter till i drop because im not going to read nor do i recommend people reading about child abuse.

LV 15

Docnox

Its readable grammar wise, and the setting gets a pass. Its practically naruto in theme with clans and warring nations. But … The MC is a total jerk and him going on any kind of journey or training at 4! Is one of the most absurd things I’ve ever read. Four year olds can barely run without face planting. You can’t even use reincarnation as an excuse, the brain just isn’t physically developed enough yet. This also makes the clan setting feel like a joke.

LV 12

Shujinko_Josei

put more tag. if it #gruesome #wilderness #survival #war #comedy #ruthlessMC #cheat #goldenfinger #mob #selfinsert #romance #poweroffriendship

LV 3

SageOfSins

Quality-⭐⭐ Plot-⭐ Update-⭐⭐⭐ Character-⭐ Background Research-⭐⭐ _________ The story routes through the Gen 1 area with MC being in Kanto. It gives very bland narrative, almost cold with barely any emotion or atmosphere of the new world. And most of all, the author is a massive D. Who could not even show a hint of sincerity to atleast research and browse through the animes or other elements... The story reflect pretty much wish fulfillment story, a worthless one... And to punctuate my point, the fic is rated at 4.5 by hordes of People with combine IQ that could barely light up a 5 watt bulb.

LV 4

asaade_ragnarokm

i only read the auxiliary chapter and i know this is not for me and the reason is the power level here is trash and doesnt make any sense, he made too much nonsense about pokemon power level and add a bunch of nonsense and whatnot for example that he gives a 5 star potential weedle can be defeated by a 2 star potential metapod that was on infant tier, apparently the potential is useless and that also include level,type, ev, iv,moveset and actually only the TIER matters

LV 2

MelinaU

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LV 4

Beelzeibub

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LV 5

Starcat777

Story is very good and interesting whic auther can write his own story because of the timeline and worlds situation. I hope this story not drop

LV 2

Isaiah_York_6900

It makes me wanna burst on how good this story is it is one of the best pokemon fan fictions I have ever read owo uwu pwp Thanks for the chapter

LV 4

Unknown_Bystander_

Great story only downside is the leveling sustem changed which is confusing. Apart from that being in a war state kanto with clans keeps it entretaining. butterfree tower dragged alot but the next unique event pulled me back in hope that it keeps up the pace. Especially wanna see how the war dynamic is gonna play out.

LV 4

Alexander_Velez_6173

it really good you should read this.........................................................................................................

LV 4

LittleVamp

Yeah, Like the fic, Keep up the good work. 👍 .................................. .................................. ..................................

LV 2

Urajimiru_Pascua

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LV 6

laboonlaboon

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