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Writing Quality 3/5 The ff is understandable but the conversations are weird and too little in quantity so i can't say i relate / feel anything with whatever could happen to any of the charac. The story is quite rushed , i understand that it's basically the start of the manga but there is no real interaction between garra and anyone (maybe chukaku ...) so th Mc feel a little blank (my opinion). Stability of Updates 4/5 Story Development 4/5 Story follow the normal naruto storyline until the genin exam with no/very little change so i can't really say anything about it , it's not bad but need more to be really 'good' Character Design 3/5 Already said what i though of the Mc before World Background 3/5 Not a lot of World background , just enough for the story. Total : 3.4/5 Again , this is only my opinion, have a nice day <3
The moment he was born as a child and his mom was dead his first thought was helping Naruto. And because he is Gaara he felt regret that he won't be able to help Naruto. Also the fact the it felt more like he is playing game not living. Same with the fact that the first thought should have been about how he will live. So, I am sorry i couldn't tolerate the MC anymore. I hope you luck.
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This novel is very good, good work author!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Very interesting fanfic keep up the work author! The system is kind of confusing with how it is setup, but as long as you explain it then all is good. Also, don't make him overpowered so fast. I mean he gets 50 points of health for just one vitality or something like that. And my last advice for the author is try reading the fanfic in this site about a guys reincarnated as Gaara, its very entertaining and character is a great balance. Good luck!
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You must conquer the other villages and discover the world for the great sand ninja empire! Thx & mooooooooore pls [img=pièces][img=exp][img=exp]
Writing Quality 3/5 The ff is understandable but the conversations are weird and too little in quantity so i can't say i relate / feel anything with whatever could happen to any of the charac. The story is quite rushed , i understand that it's basically the start of the manga but there is no real interaction between garra and anyone (maybe chukaku ...) so th Mc feel a little blank (my opinion). Stability of Updates 4/5 Story Development 4/5 Story follow the normal naruto storyline until the genin exam with no/very little change so i can't really say anything about it , it's not bad but need more to be really 'good' Character Design 3/5 Already said what i though of the Mc before World Background 3/5 Not a lot of World background , just enough for the story. Total : 3.4/5 Again , this is only my opinion, have a nice day <3
The moment he was born as a child and his mom was dead his first thought was helping Naruto. And because he is Gaara he felt regret that he won't be able to help Naruto. Also the fact the it felt more like he is playing game not living. Same with the fact that the first thought should have been about how he will live. So, I am sorry i couldn't tolerate the MC anymore. I hope you luck.
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This novel is very good, good work author!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Very interesting fanfic keep up the work author! The system is kind of confusing with how it is setup, but as long as you explain it then all is good. Also, don't make him overpowered so fast. I mean he gets 50 points of health for just one vitality or something like that. And my last advice for the author is try reading the fanfic in this site about a guys reincarnated as Gaara, its very entertaining and character is a great balance. Good luck!
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
You must conquer the other villages and discover the world for the great sand ninja empire! Thx & mooooooooore pls [img=pièces][img=exp][img=exp]