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NC fanfic! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Is this dropped? Just asking since the last update is more than 20d already. I hope it isn't
Killing the Main Female Protagonist for the so called "Character Development" is one of the things Deadpool hates the most since it happened to him too. Although Deadpool did change. This FanFic MC just became plain boring and some what edgy...
Your works is always good [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Очень даже хорошее произведение, с достаточной драммой, раскрытием персонажей и что лично мне очень нравится, немного бкзумным главным героем, который потысется понять себя и свое место в этом мире. Хотя друоим это произведеник может показаться очнь тяжелым, мне очень понравилось. Рекомендую
this story primarily focuses on the two characters. Jeanne and Mael. the author literally writes about his undying love towards Jeanne. this story is boring. as simple as that. the author finds aspects that usually makes novels interesting to not be worth writing. Particularly on a family's overall situation (in terms of finance, home, settlement, jobs, etc), their training (like tell me more than just him doing saitamas training plan; he literally became a knight, but how?), the social interaction, and your time skips are just so dull, the main reason why Jeanne fights is about the war between Britain and France yet all these time skips and you don't explain the overall situation. there's also only interaction between mael and Jeanne, that's why I find it so boring, side characters make some of the best novels interesting. the world background, bruh you only talk about Britain and France, as for character development, I don't see any; the man literally adores Jeanne and that's why he transmigrated, so I don't see any progress there. people saying this dxd fanfic is good must have pretty low standards, but hey who am I kidding this is Webnovel
Nice story, but after MC become angel everything is very boring. He become too powerful, although slowly getting stronger, but he became an ordinary character because being an angel everything about MC both from attitude, strength, and looks improved drastically compared to when the MC was still human and bad for future MC development. At least when he was human he could worry about death, etc. But when he becomes an angel he becomes a Chinese novel character who is blind to revenge and hypocritical that he is heartbroken when his wife leaves him while approaching another woman. The story when the MC was a human was quite interesting but when he became an angel everything got weird.
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Lacks protein and the best part of the novel is when Jeanne appears or the Omake... Author also add Tiamat to the harem Author also add Tiamat to the harem Author also add Tiamat to the harem Author also add Tiamat to the harem Author also add Tiamat to the harem Author also add Tiamat to the harem Author also add Tiamat to the harem Author also add Tiamat to the harem Author also add Tiamat to the harem Author also add Tiamat to the harem
这是我读过的第四本同人小说。你的写作进步是惊人的。我希望你能完成这部小说。[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
man you really are a good writer. How you focus on character development to your world devlopement is really great you know and your plot the way you focus on slowly building plot is amazing if someone is able to survive the cringey anime special romantic scenes then they will see how your plot progress . The way you change mael's personality from a average issekaied protagonist to a knight and from a knight to a devil hater angel is really great same can be said for Einar overall your works are fun to read
Haven't read but the cover dragged me here i love it <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
Five stars for best cover image I've ever seen Thanks for coming to my TED Talk
From the title you wrote, I already know that this story is full of despair. Also you have to post new chapters often or this story will be forgotten.
I am just asking as a confirmation but Ain sofh aur is the one from date a Live right? also this is a great dxd ff keep up the great work author
i dont read this ,i only ggggve may revieeew cuz of the cute jean d arc hug by jesus. . . . ...... . . . . . . . itsydodpydyodsoyslyyosxogoyzypxhpxpyxypx
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Nyahahaha, forgot to bring this down here in the first chapters. So like uhhh... oops... it's so good tbh. .......................
Wryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy................................... ...... Reject Humanity, become Monke Reject Humanity, become Monke Reject Humanity, become Monke Reject Humanity, become Monke Reject Humanity, become Monke Reject Humanity, become Monke
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You know what author, I'll throw every single power stone I have in your face, And I will promise I will make you write another chapter! ⠀
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I've read you last work thinking its a light read, but i got an emotional rollercoaster instead. so this time I'll expect this one to be another rollercoaster, perhaps im wrong again :v
Soy fan de tu trabajo, umumumumumumumumumununununununmumymymumymymymumymymymymymymymymymyymmumumumumumumumumumumumumummumumumumuummumumumuym
Hi !! !! !! !! !! !! !!! !! !! !! !!! !! !! !!! !! !! !! !! !! !! !!! !! !! !! !! !! !! The fate fight was awesome please if possible continue !!! !! !! !! !! !! !! !! !!! !! !! !! !! Ps Thank you for this new fanfic
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NC fanfic! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Is this dropped? Just asking since the last update is more than 20d already. I hope it isn't
Killing the Main Female Protagonist for the so called "Character Development" is one of the things Deadpool hates the most since it happened to him too. Although Deadpool did change. This FanFic MC just became plain boring and some what edgy...
Your works is always good [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Очень даже хорошее произведение, с достаточной драммой, раскрытием персонажей и что лично мне очень нравится, немного бкзумным главным героем, который потысется понять себя и свое место в этом мире. Хотя друоим это произведеник может показаться очнь тяжелым, мне очень понравилось. Рекомендую
this story primarily focuses on the two characters. Jeanne and Mael. the author literally writes about his undying love towards Jeanne. this story is boring. as simple as that. the author finds aspects that usually makes novels interesting to not be worth writing. Particularly on a family's overall situation (in terms of finance, home, settlement, jobs, etc), their training (like tell me more than just him doing saitamas training plan; he literally became a knight, but how?), the social interaction, and your time skips are just so dull, the main reason why Jeanne fights is about the war between Britain and France yet all these time skips and you don't explain the overall situation. there's also only interaction between mael and Jeanne, that's why I find it so boring, side characters make some of the best novels interesting. the world background, bruh you only talk about Britain and France, as for character development, I don't see any; the man literally adores Jeanne and that's why he transmigrated, so I don't see any progress there. people saying this dxd fanfic is good must have pretty low standards, but hey who am I kidding this is Webnovel
Nice story, but after MC become angel everything is very boring. He become too powerful, although slowly getting stronger, but he became an ordinary character because being an angel everything about MC both from attitude, strength, and looks improved drastically compared to when the MC was still human and bad for future MC development. At least when he was human he could worry about death, etc. But when he becomes an angel he becomes a Chinese novel character who is blind to revenge and hypocritical that he is heartbroken when his wife leaves him while approaching another woman. The story when the MC was a human was quite interesting but when he became an angel everything got weird.
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Lacks protein and the best part of the novel is when Jeanne appears or the Omake... Author also add Tiamat to the harem Author also add Tiamat to the harem Author also add Tiamat to the harem Author also add Tiamat to the harem Author also add Tiamat to the harem Author also add Tiamat to the harem Author also add Tiamat to the harem Author also add Tiamat to the harem Author also add Tiamat to the harem Author also add Tiamat to the harem
这是我读过的第四本同人小说。你的写作进步是惊人的。我希望你能完成这部小说。[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
man you really are a good writer. How you focus on character development to your world devlopement is really great you know and your plot the way you focus on slowly building plot is amazing if someone is able to survive the cringey anime special romantic scenes then they will see how your plot progress . The way you change mael's personality from a average issekaied protagonist to a knight and from a knight to a devil hater angel is really great same can be said for Einar overall your works are fun to read
Haven't read but the cover dragged me here i love it <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
Five stars for best cover image I've ever seen Thanks for coming to my TED Talk
From the title you wrote, I already know that this story is full of despair. Also you have to post new chapters often or this story will be forgotten.
I am just asking as a confirmation but Ain sofh aur is the one from date a Live right? also this is a great dxd ff keep up the great work author
i dont read this ,i only ggggve may revieeew cuz of the cute jean d arc hug by jesus. . . . ...... . . . . . . . itsydodpydyodsoyslyyosxogoyzypxhpxpyxypx
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Nyahahaha, forgot to bring this down here in the first chapters. So like uhhh... oops... it's so good tbh. .......................
Wryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy................................... ...... Reject Humanity, become Monke Reject Humanity, become Monke Reject Humanity, become Monke Reject Humanity, become Monke Reject Humanity, become Monke Reject Humanity, become Monke
Jeanne best waifu Jeanne best waifu Jeanne best waifu Jeanne best waifu Jeanne best waifu Jeanne best waifu Jeanne best waifu Jeanne best waifu Jeanne best waifu Jeanne best waifu Jeanne best waifu Jeanne best waifu Jeanne best waifu Jeanne best waifu
You know what author, I'll throw every single power stone I have in your face, And I will promise I will make you write another chapter! ⠀
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I've read you last work thinking its a light read, but i got an emotional rollercoaster instead. so this time I'll expect this one to be another rollercoaster, perhaps im wrong again :v
Soy fan de tu trabajo, umumumumumumumumumununununununmumymymumymymymumymymymymymymymymymyymmumumumumumumumumumumumumummumumumumuummumumumuym
Hi !! !! !! !! !! !! !!! !! !! !! !!! !! !! !!! !! !! !! !! !! !! !!! !! !! !! !! !! !! The fate fight was awesome please if possible continue !!! !! !! !! !! !! !! !! !!! !! !! !! !! Ps Thank you for this new fanfic
upload more please i like it[img=coins][img=fp][img=update][img=exp][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=faceslap]