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The characters is great so far and i love how the mc choose VIOLENCE 🙌🙌 THANK YOU AUTHOR I'LL WAIT 🙇♀️
I’m greatly enjoying this story I think it’s really neat that the mc goes the mafia route can’t say I’ve ever read a story like that I really hope it can go the triangle route but if it doesn’t then it is what it is it’s not my story
Es una historia muy entretenida. Lo enamorada que estoy de Dakota Kaede 😍😍😍 dios mio, esa mujer es todo lo que esta bien. Me muero por saber como sigue la historia, tengo algunas teorías de lo que puede pasar después. Me gusta mucho Kannon también, es tan lindaaa
Su historia de la novela que escribe , me encantó , la escritura y el desarrollo de la historia sobre la traducción es inevitable hermoso y genial, cada vez q lo leo estaría pendiente de todos los capítulos todos los días.... Ay también sigo esperando su actualización ya pasó 6 meses o casi 1 año me encantaría ver capitulos nuevos actualizados, porsupuesto gracias por el capítulo 🌈❤️🎉🌠🌈👋🙏
Interesting idea, lousy execution. ......................................................................................................................
Tolong yang teratur updatenya sama kalau bisa sering-sering diupdatenya. Kadang itu Beberapa bulan baru update kadang serasa cape tunggunya, serasa gak puas gitu perasaannya.
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I very much like this novel. The storyline is great and interesting. The romance isn't too rushed or too slow, just right. I'm dying from the semi lack of updates, but it doesn't matter. I'll wait forever if I have to. This a great ABO that I have read from here. There should be more ABO in here.
hey I was just wondering if this was still going?? i love it so much I don't want it to no longer update, I'm completely obsessed please tell me it will update soon it has been 5 months, oh but if u r struggling with heath or something like that, that is different there is no rush I just wanna know if it's still on going or not
author i just love this story😆, everything is perfect and suits my taste for novels 🤩❤ i wish you would update now plssssss🤧 author give us update plssss😫🤧🤩
É muito bom a escrita, a historia é interessante e não é repetitiva de se ler e você consegui imaginar bem as cenas descritas e acompanhar a historia e voce não se perde nela e o desenvolvimento romantico dos personagens principais ou secundarios é legal e voce consegui seguir como comecou ele
Really good... binge read it.. Adorable as ^^*%$$/>[(:#×%>$=</$^&<=/*&$578[^$:*; alpha Why 140 chars.. woof woof bark bark bark bark bark bark woof woooooooooooof
I very much like this novel so please keep writing author. I don't have much money but I will keep giving power stone cause I like this novel very much.
I LOVE THE PLOT, THE CHARACTERS, AND THE GENRE ITSELF. I HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WOULD UPDATE THE STORY A LITTLE CONSTANT SO THAT THE READERS WOULDN'T HAVE TO WAIT FOR SUCH A LONG TIME FOR AN UPDATE OR TWO. BUT ALL IN ALL, IT WAS GOOD. I'M EXCITED FOR THE PROGRESS, I MAY ADD. 🔥
Great yuri omegaverse, good quality story with cool character's . 10/10 Can't wait for more ^^ Woof woof bark bark cuz I must spend more words if I want add this comment.
It's a great novel, since I rarely see ABO Yuri novels anywhere that aren't chinese. It's a great novel, and while it's spacing and plot might seem a bit jumpy or plain it's something you would read if you were bored. Though If I could complain on one thing, It would be it's inconsistent update schedule, but I understand why. Nonetheless thank you for making such a nice novel!
The story is really good. Though I have read many omegaverse novels, this is the first one from a female's perspective. I like how the story moves forward. The style of writing is good but sometimes the spelling is off (don't know whether translation mistake or typo error)
First things first, I must say that the writing style is pretty good, it's easy to understand and it's well organized so we don't get lost between thoughts, narrations and dialogs. Secondly, I also enjoyed the way the MC is personally was displayed, after all in the sinopse it's clear that she will have a cold personally and the author captured it's essence really well - I'm writing this because I've recently read one novel that told the MC was cold and emotionless, but it's author wasn't able to develop it and the novel became a trash to read - and even when she encountered with her mate it still wasn't a deception, 'cause the author didn't mixed the MC feelings for her mate with other people around (like beginning to be good to others just for her mate or to show more expressions with people that are not her mate, etc) Thirdly, I just want to warn that the update stability is low and it takes a really good Wille to read another chapter. Taking this last remark of consideration it's an awesome novel!!!!!
Apesar do autor exagerar em alguns lugares eu gostei bastante; principalmente do jeito que a personagem principal trata a segunda protagonista considerando os sentimentos e a privacidade; E eu acho que acontecerá algum mal entendido com a protagonista e a original protagonista do mangá. Ou a original protagonista do mangá pode se apaixonar pela protagonista.
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the story is developing pretty good 🙂🙂🙂🙂and I like the characters too 🙂🙂🙂🙂 but the irregular updates are killing me ugh 😩😩😩😩😩😩
The Novel overall is pretty good, nice concepts, Its Yuri so there's not really anything not to like and it looks like there won't be any NTR, however the update speed is abysmal and if I coukd give Zero stars for it I would.
The characters is great so far and i love how the mc choose VIOLENCE 🙌🙌 THANK YOU AUTHOR I'LL WAIT 🙇♀️
I’m greatly enjoying this story I think it’s really neat that the mc goes the mafia route can’t say I’ve ever read a story like that I really hope it can go the triangle route but if it doesn’t then it is what it is it’s not my story
Es una historia muy entretenida. Lo enamorada que estoy de Dakota Kaede 😍😍😍 dios mio, esa mujer es todo lo que esta bien. Me muero por saber como sigue la historia, tengo algunas teorías de lo que puede pasar después. Me gusta mucho Kannon también, es tan lindaaa
Su historia de la novela que escribe , me encantó , la escritura y el desarrollo de la historia sobre la traducción es inevitable hermoso y genial, cada vez q lo leo estaría pendiente de todos los capítulos todos los días.... Ay también sigo esperando su actualización ya pasó 6 meses o casi 1 año me encantaría ver capitulos nuevos actualizados, porsupuesto gracias por el capítulo 🌈❤️🎉🌠🌈👋🙏
Interesting idea, lousy execution. ......................................................................................................................
Tolong yang teratur updatenya sama kalau bisa sering-sering diupdatenya. Kadang itu Beberapa bulan baru update kadang serasa cape tunggunya, serasa gak puas gitu perasaannya.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I very much like this novel. The storyline is great and interesting. The romance isn't too rushed or too slow, just right. I'm dying from the semi lack of updates, but it doesn't matter. I'll wait forever if I have to. This a great ABO that I have read from here. There should be more ABO in here.
hey I was just wondering if this was still going?? i love it so much I don't want it to no longer update, I'm completely obsessed please tell me it will update soon it has been 5 months, oh but if u r struggling with heath or something like that, that is different there is no rush I just wanna know if it's still on going or not
author i just love this story😆, everything is perfect and suits my taste for novels 🤩❤ i wish you would update now plssssss🤧 author give us update plssss😫🤧🤩
É muito bom a escrita, a historia é interessante e não é repetitiva de se ler e você consegui imaginar bem as cenas descritas e acompanhar a historia e voce não se perde nela e o desenvolvimento romantico dos personagens principais ou secundarios é legal e voce consegui seguir como comecou ele
Really good... binge read it.. Adorable as ^^*%$$/>[(:#×%>$=</$^&<=/*&$578[^$:*; alpha Why 140 chars.. woof woof bark bark bark bark bark bark woof woooooooooooof
I very much like this novel so please keep writing author. I don't have much money but I will keep giving power stone cause I like this novel very much.
I LOVE THE PLOT, THE CHARACTERS, AND THE GENRE ITSELF. I HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WOULD UPDATE THE STORY A LITTLE CONSTANT SO THAT THE READERS WOULDN'T HAVE TO WAIT FOR SUCH A LONG TIME FOR AN UPDATE OR TWO. BUT ALL IN ALL, IT WAS GOOD. I'M EXCITED FOR THE PROGRESS, I MAY ADD. 🔥
Great yuri omegaverse, good quality story with cool character's . 10/10 Can't wait for more ^^ Woof woof bark bark cuz I must spend more words if I want add this comment.
It's a great novel, since I rarely see ABO Yuri novels anywhere that aren't chinese. It's a great novel, and while it's spacing and plot might seem a bit jumpy or plain it's something you would read if you were bored. Though If I could complain on one thing, It would be it's inconsistent update schedule, but I understand why. Nonetheless thank you for making such a nice novel!
The story is really good. Though I have read many omegaverse novels, this is the first one from a female's perspective. I like how the story moves forward. The style of writing is good but sometimes the spelling is off (don't know whether translation mistake or typo error)
First things first, I must say that the writing style is pretty good, it's easy to understand and it's well organized so we don't get lost between thoughts, narrations and dialogs. Secondly, I also enjoyed the way the MC is personally was displayed, after all in the sinopse it's clear that she will have a cold personally and the author captured it's essence really well - I'm writing this because I've recently read one novel that told the MC was cold and emotionless, but it's author wasn't able to develop it and the novel became a trash to read - and even when she encountered with her mate it still wasn't a deception, 'cause the author didn't mixed the MC feelings for her mate with other people around (like beginning to be good to others just for her mate or to show more expressions with people that are not her mate, etc) Thirdly, I just want to warn that the update stability is low and it takes a really good Wille to read another chapter. Taking this last remark of consideration it's an awesome novel!!!!!
Apesar do autor exagerar em alguns lugares eu gostei bastante; principalmente do jeito que a personagem principal trata a segunda protagonista considerando os sentimentos e a privacidade; E eu acho que acontecerá algum mal entendido com a protagonista e a original protagonista do mangá. Ou a original protagonista do mangá pode se apaixonar pela protagonista.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ the story is developing pretty good 🙂🙂🙂🙂and I like the characters too 🙂🙂🙂🙂 but the irregular updates are killing me ugh 😩😩😩😩😩😩
The Novel overall is pretty good, nice concepts, Its Yuri so there's not really anything not to like and it looks like there won't be any NTR, however the update speed is abysmal and if I coukd give Zero stars for it I would.
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