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This is very good, but pls dont drop lol. Bojan, into the dc verse are the good ones
Absolutely perfect 😀😁😁😁😂😂😂😁😁😁😀😀😀😃😃😃😄😃😃😄😃😄😃😃😆😆😉😉😉😊😊😊😊😊😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😊😊😉😆😊😉😆😉😆😉😆😊😉😆😉😀😁😆😆😉😉😉😆😆😆😃😄😃😄😃😄😃😄😄🤔😗😗😙😙😙😙😚☺😚☺😚☺😚😚
We need a sequel, поэтому давай быстрее выкладывай главу , ты же заходишь на сайт и читаешь другие работы , а глав новых нет. Люди уже устали ждать , но не теряют надежды в тебя !
its good, I like the world building and the mc and the description of other character's but dear god the updates are so fvking slow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Good Novel!! nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say,
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I am enjoying this story a lot. The character design and portrayal is brilliant in my eyes and im looking forward to more interactions between the characters. I'm not the most versed in DC lore so i wont comment on it. So far the story is developing well and at (what i think) is a good pace at the ver least, and i haven't spotted eggregious atrocities in writing quality (but then again i only really notice errors that completely stop things from making sense. so take it with a grain of salt.) All in all. I want more. Good job. Thanks for the story so far.
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Its a great read with good grammar and well written characters though sometimes there are a few grammatical mistakes but not a pot not to mention the mistakes are pretty minor welp thats it here is a picture of hades and persephone from orv
King of The Dead is better than that. .....................................................................................................................................
Good story. Author desapeared from the world. But he came so that's good I guess. This story was the one that hooked me on this garbage app.
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this fanfic is great. good job author-san! this fanfic is great. good job author-san! this fanfic is great. good job author-san! this fanfic is great. good job author-san!
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Love the story so far and I hope the author keeps it up. I think it would be interesting if Hades goes around the universe conquering planets and learning. but still failing not 100 present success ever time.
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well...this is not a review, but a clarification...i only saw some DC movies inthe the cinema, so im lost...can someone help me here please??🙏🙏🙏
amazing) plz dont drop this. I dont know much about dc uni but what u writing its like fresh air) im so tired of fanfic about system or mega op loosers. Like i can read about it 1-2 times but when authors write it again and again and again. But u doing good job with it .Now it's too difficult to find an original work without any stupid systems and God's wishes
amazing) plz dont drop this. I dont know much about dc uni but what u writing its like fresh air) im so tired of fanfic about system or mega op loosers. Like i can read about it 1-2 times but when authors write it again and again and again. But u doing good job with it .Now it's too difficult to find an original work without any stupid systems and God's wishes
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Shameless author shamelessly self promoting his work. It my try a DC fic. I haven't seen any really good DC fic while Marvel fics are over saturated. The only ones I've ever seen are usually just cross overs or just dropped after 10 chapters. There was one really good one in which the MC is reborn as Archangel Michael, that one was really good but it was mostly geared towards the Supernatural show with a sprinkle of the DC universe. Anyways, hope you like my work. Do like some reviews if you like it. CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM is appreciated not some 1 star review filled with emojis. Atleast give your misgivings or problems with my work. 👍👍👍👍
This is very good, but pls dont drop lol. Bojan, into the dc verse are the good ones
Absolutely perfect 😀😁😁😁😂😂😂😁😁😁😀😀😀😃😃😃😄😃😃😄😃😄😃😃😆😆😉😉😉😊😊😊😊😊😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😊😊😉😆😊😉😆😉😆😉😆😊😉😆😉😀😁😆😆😉😉😉😆😆😆😃😄😃😄😃😄😃😄😄🤔😗😗😙😙😙😙😚☺😚☺😚☺😚😚
We need a sequel, поэтому давай быстрее выкладывай главу , ты же заходишь на сайт и читаешь другие работы , а глав новых нет. Люди уже устали ждать , но не теряют надежды в тебя !
its good, I like the world building and the mc and the description of other character's but dear god the updates are so fvking slow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice........................................................................................................................................
Good Novel!! nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say,
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I am enjoying this story a lot. The character design and portrayal is brilliant in my eyes and im looking forward to more interactions between the characters. I'm not the most versed in DC lore so i wont comment on it. So far the story is developing well and at (what i think) is a good pace at the ver least, and i haven't spotted eggregious atrocities in writing quality (but then again i only really notice errors that completely stop things from making sense. so take it with a grain of salt.) All in all. I want more. Good job. Thanks for the story so far.
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Its a great read with good grammar and well written characters though sometimes there are a few grammatical mistakes but not a pot not to mention the mistakes are pretty minor welp thats it here is a picture of hades and persephone from orv
King of The Dead is better than that. .....................................................................................................................................
Good story. Author desapeared from the world. But he came so that's good I guess. This story was the one that hooked me on this garbage app.
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this fanfic is great. good job author-san! this fanfic is great. good job author-san! this fanfic is great. good job author-san! this fanfic is great. good job author-san!
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Love the story so far and I hope the author keeps it up. I think it would be interesting if Hades goes around the universe conquering planets and learning. but still failing not 100 present success ever time.
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well...this is not a review, but a clarification...i only saw some DC movies inthe the cinema, so im lost...can someone help me here please??🙏🙏🙏
amazing) plz dont drop this. I dont know much about dc uni but what u writing its like fresh air) im so tired of fanfic about system or mega op loosers. Like i can read about it 1-2 times but when authors write it again and again and again. But u doing good job with it .Now it's too difficult to find an original work without any stupid systems and God's wishes
amazing) plz dont drop this. I dont know much about dc uni but what u writing its like fresh air) im so tired of fanfic about system or mega op loosers. Like i can read about it 1-2 times but when authors write it again and again and again. But u doing good job with it .Now it's too difficult to find an original work without any stupid systems and God's wishes
Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. Amazing...........................................................................................................................
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Men men exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
Shameless author shamelessly self promoting his work. It my try a DC fic. I haven't seen any really good DC fic while Marvel fics are over saturated. The only ones I've ever seen are usually just cross overs or just dropped after 10 chapters. There was one really good one in which the MC is reborn as Archangel Michael, that one was really good but it was mostly geared towards the Supernatural show with a sprinkle of the DC universe. Anyways, hope you like my work. Do like some reviews if you like it. CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM is appreciated not some 1 star review filled with emojis. Atleast give your misgivings or problems with my work. 👍👍👍👍