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I absolutly adore this fanfic. The only problem is that it is seemingly dropped. Writing such a famn slow build up only to drop it as soon as the build up is over makes this a flawed work
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a very great novel that takes into consideration the pokemon universe at large and crafts a great novel about it. it's been a few days since the last update, but I'm giving this a great review because it deserves it. and I want more.
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I really like this fic. The mc being a researcher make it diferent and i love the direction is going the plot. Also, i dont thing that the "rival" power is a reason for not liking this story like the other reviews says.
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Great story, kind of slow at the beggining but managed to build up a suitable rival. Just sad how the updates suddently went from 2/day to 1/week
Me encanto es una muy buena historia de las mejores que e leído hasta ahora ....................................................................
love the story can't wait for next chapter a request to not make the character overpowered in pokémon battles make him strong but don't make him win 100% of the time it happened in some other pokemon fanfics which made me dislike them also losing offers a chance for character building there are plenty of fanfic where the mc doesn't lose a single battle plz don't do that
I’m confused who the MC of this fanfic is. It’s just trash. Letting other characters have high potential pokemon out of nowhere. It’s like he doesn’t know how to properly represent the potential of the pokemons. And he made that himself. What a waste. It has good potential, too.
This is the best pokemon fanfic you'll find, so stop reading reviews and read it. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
This was honestly an unexpected read for me. Most Pokémon fanfics in this app that I have read are abysmal in world building and character development. However due to the slow pace which the story progresses, the world building and character development in this story is beyond amazing. Definitely recommend this read.
Really well written pokemon world setting, cant fault any of the logic, just wished the author had fleshed out the battle scenes better. But otherwise is an amazing read
I absolutely loved this story and its development. please Keep it up with this fanfiction.[img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update]
I really like this story, it caught me from the start. I hope it continues like this and lasts a long time, at least I would like that. Although the Mc has a system to see the talent of the pokemon I do not dislike it, it seems to me that he knew how to take advantage of it without being too broken, I liked that a lot.
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this story is too slow .... what should be a single chapter is being streched to 10 or more chapters .... the concept and the various facts used are good but it is dragged down by the slow pace
Good slow pace pokemon novel. A novel that is told in a day-by-day format is not for everyone. But I find it very interesting and hope the author does not drop it. I hope the author continues the journey until he has gone through all regions. Kanto to Galar, please!!! Keep up the good work.
Story telling is okay, pace is slow but its an authors choice of direction, story plots seems to be a mash up of multiple different Pokémon fanfics such as "The Natural and Y'now nothing Jon Snow" from fanfiction net which is fine but the application in the story is some what forced into it without any background info or event pertaining such a situation may happen or is logical in any sense. Overall a fine read as long as you don't overthink everything and remember this is a fanfic, anything goes.
Good chapter i like how you got the mc to hire a fighting expert to help you with the machop. also do you mean cerulean instead of celedon becasue celedon is four gym.
Good 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Nice, no sistem 5 star...................................................................................................................................
I love this fanfic.....................................................................................................................................
well this is very good book fleshing out the characteristics of mc and other supporting characters.The only thing that leave sour taste in this story, when author decide to give better Pokemon to his rival and for 30-36 chapter it's all about the rival and mc feel like a side character. After that story pickup the pace and you will hook up to story and to mc journey..
Charizard Shiny 5 star.................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I love slow history................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Decent story, worth reading. MC's personality bothers me a little because of how plain he is, feels like he has close to 0 personality, but it's fine, what matters is how the dialogs are not goofy and cringe, and the other caracters are not there just for the MC, they too have their own will and goals to achieve. Writing quality is good, i guess... english is not my first language. The thing that bothes me the most is how short the chapters are, feels like you split 1 entire chapter in 3 or 4 just to gather more attention about the quantity of chapters.
I absolutly adore this fanfic. The only problem is that it is seemingly dropped. Writing such a famn slow build up only to drop it as soon as the build up is over makes this a flawed work
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a very great novel that takes into consideration the pokemon universe at large and crafts a great novel about it. it's been a few days since the last update, but I'm giving this a great review because it deserves it. and I want more.
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
I really like this fic. The mc being a researcher make it diferent and i love the direction is going the plot. Also, i dont thing that the "rival" power is a reason for not liking this story like the other reviews says.
good jheuebehenehjenejejejej rjrneje ejenje ejenejeuejejieiriruririiriririririieieieieiieieieieieieieiieieieieieiieiehrirntirkjtjtjtktjthjtj
Great story, kind of slow at the beggining but managed to build up a suitable rival. Just sad how the updates suddently went from 2/day to 1/week
Me encanto es una muy buena historia de las mejores que e leído hasta ahora ....................................................................
love the story can't wait for next chapter a request to not make the character overpowered in pokémon battles make him strong but don't make him win 100% of the time it happened in some other pokemon fanfics which made me dislike them also losing offers a chance for character building there are plenty of fanfic where the mc doesn't lose a single battle plz don't do that
I’m confused who the MC of this fanfic is. It’s just trash. Letting other characters have high potential pokemon out of nowhere. It’s like he doesn’t know how to properly represent the potential of the pokemons. And he made that himself. What a waste. It has good potential, too.
This is the best pokemon fanfic you'll find, so stop reading reviews and read it. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
This was honestly an unexpected read for me. Most Pokémon fanfics in this app that I have read are abysmal in world building and character development. However due to the slow pace which the story progresses, the world building and character development in this story is beyond amazing. Definitely recommend this read.
Really well written pokemon world setting, cant fault any of the logic, just wished the author had fleshed out the battle scenes better. But otherwise is an amazing read
I absolutely loved this story and its development. please Keep it up with this fanfiction.[img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update]
I really like this story, it caught me from the start. I hope it continues like this and lasts a long time, at least I would like that. Although the Mc has a system to see the talent of the pokemon I do not dislike it, it seems to me that he knew how to take advantage of it without being too broken, I liked that a lot.
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this story is too slow .... what should be a single chapter is being streched to 10 or more chapters .... the concept and the various facts used are good but it is dragged down by the slow pace
Good slow pace pokemon novel. A novel that is told in a day-by-day format is not for everyone. But I find it very interesting and hope the author does not drop it. I hope the author continues the journey until he has gone through all regions. Kanto to Galar, please!!! Keep up the good work.
Story telling is okay, pace is slow but its an authors choice of direction, story plots seems to be a mash up of multiple different Pokémon fanfics such as "The Natural and Y'now nothing Jon Snow" from fanfiction net which is fine but the application in the story is some what forced into it without any background info or event pertaining such a situation may happen or is logical in any sense. Overall a fine read as long as you don't overthink everything and remember this is a fanfic, anything goes.
Good chapter i like how you got the mc to hire a fighting expert to help you with the machop. also do you mean cerulean instead of celedon becasue celedon is four gym.
Good 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Nice, no sistem 5 star...................................................................................................................................
I love this fanfic.....................................................................................................................................
well this is very good book fleshing out the characteristics of mc and other supporting characters.The only thing that leave sour taste in this story, when author decide to give better Pokemon to his rival and for 30-36 chapter it's all about the rival and mc feel like a side character. After that story pickup the pace and you will hook up to story and to mc journey..
Charizard Shiny 5 star.................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I love slow history................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Decent story, worth reading. MC's personality bothers me a little because of how plain he is, feels like he has close to 0 personality, but it's fine, what matters is how the dialogs are not goofy and cringe, and the other caracters are not there just for the MC, they too have their own will and goals to achieve. Writing quality is good, i guess... english is not my first language. The thing that bothes me the most is how short the chapters are, feels like you split 1 entire chapter in 3 or 4 just to gather more attention about the quantity of chapters.