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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
I haven't read enough to actually review this in anyway but I can say that you should make the time skips less frequent and of course grammar mistakes,,,Keep Updating!!
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let's continue this has potential and I rarely give 5 stars only ", I'm very curious. Because MC is transmigration, the MC category is: Smart, not naive, not silly, mature, good planner, not submissive to women etc. The rest is up to you how the plot goes how, I think you can find a little reference from Naruto with a perverted system
mmoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I haven't read enough to actually review this in anyway but I can say that you should make the time skips less frequent and of course grammar mistakes,,,Keep Updating!!
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
let's continue this has potential and I rarely give 5 stars only ", I'm very curious. Because MC is transmigration, the MC category is: Smart, not naive, not silly, mature, good planner, not submissive to women etc. The rest is up to you how the plot goes how, I think you can find a little reference from Naruto with a perverted system