2รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
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While there are a few mistakes when it comes to writing, you can still get the gist of it. It's an interesting concept that will hopefully turn into an amazing story. It may be a bit early to judge though seeing as there's only 1 chapter as of now.
LV 4 ![Badge]()
While there are a few mistakes when it comes to writing, you can still get the gist of it. It's an interesting concept that will hopefully turn into an amazing story. It may be a bit early to judge though seeing as there's only 1 chapter as of now.
When is next chapter?