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l'histoire est vraiment interresante surout cette maniere qua l'auteur de cree un concpet les choses se passent comme dans la serie mais avec plus de contexte et de legere differente mais dommage quil yai pas suite
i loved it all of the 14 ch i read ,thou i hate that the MC was paird with an oc as a lover i hate that in any singeler love interest fanfic like half the fun is getting with a waifu why take that out of the story
I would like to say a few words. I came to find this story looking for avatar the last airbender fanfictions because all the ones i was finding were ocxzuko or some bs like that, thats when i found this. in the first couple of chapters i quickly saw that this wasnt ATLA it was TLOK so i had low expectations i started reading and before i knew it i was immersed even though korra is TRASH the author makes an actually good and readable story out of it. I dare say it is one of the best fanfictions ive read and these days ive read more than i care to remember. in conclusion if you want an amazing fanfic thats quite different from the rest youve found it here.
I like it so far, however, I hope you don't give Zane, Nya, and Kai too much importance in the story. I don't really like when authors bring original characters into fanfiction.
good story but just realized that webnovel for some reason made all tags smaller like why tho???
Great FanFic. By the way Author-san How does the MC look like. Srry cause I need Imagination to motivate me to read sometimes. Thank you and please continue :)
people say it's good I'm gonna give it a try even though I don't watch Avatar Korra I only watch The Last Airbender ........................
Uno de los mejores fanfic de avatar al principio si se me hizo algo mal que no tuviera poderes a pesar de las herramientas que usaba pero con eso del místerio que pone para saber al final que después de todo si tiene te deja con intriga y
(ﾉ^ヮ^)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧✧ﾟ・:*ﾉ(^ヮ^ﾉ) (ﾉ^ヮ^)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧✧ﾟ・:*ﾉ(^ヮ^ﾉ) (ﾉ^ヮ^)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧✧ﾟ・:*ﾉ(^ヮ^ﾉ) (ﾉ^ヮ^)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧✧ﾟ・:*ﾉ(^ヮ^ﾉ) (ﾉ^ヮ^)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧✧ﾟ・:*ﾉ(^ヮ^ﾉ) (ﾉ^ヮ^)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧✧ﾟ・:*ﾉ(^ヮ^ﾉ)
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Free five star review so I can ask a couple of questions that hopefully get answered. 1. Has the mc awakened bending yet? 2. What type of bending(I remember asking earlier if the mc would eventually become a bender and I’m pretty sure the author confirmed it for me that he would eventually)?
I’m trading a 5 star review for someone to answer my question. Hopefully the author. Does the mc have any bending? And if not could he awaken air bending after the harmonic convergence?
i have nothing to say... but it's good, it's more realistic than other fanfics actually... truly a hidden gem. ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎
the story is really good so far. i hope that you dont kill off his lover as that would be heart breaking for me. other than that i dont know what else to write.
Hey, nice story. The first Volume had great overall development, and a satisfying ending. The story so far only has the one volume which is why this is short. All in all, I'll give it 8.5 out 10, good job.
a good story and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.
I like it so far, however, I hope you don't give Zane, Nya, and Kai too much importance in the story. I don't really like when authors bring original characters into fanfiction.
The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fsacinating escape from reality into another world. A great read
l'histoire est vraiment interresante surout cette maniere qua l'auteur de cree un concpet les choses se passent comme dans la serie mais avec plus de contexte et de legere differente mais dommage quil yai pas suite
i loved it all of the 14 ch i read ,thou i hate that the MC was paird with an oc as a lover i hate that in any singeler love interest fanfic like half the fun is getting with a waifu why take that out of the story
I would like to say a few words. I came to find this story looking for avatar the last airbender fanfictions because all the ones i was finding were ocxzuko or some bs like that, thats when i found this. in the first couple of chapters i quickly saw that this wasnt ATLA it was TLOK so i had low expectations i started reading and before i knew it i was immersed even though korra is TRASH the author makes an actually good and readable story out of it. I dare say it is one of the best fanfictions ive read and these days ive read more than i care to remember. in conclusion if you want an amazing fanfic thats quite different from the rest youve found it here.
I like it so far, however, I hope you don't give Zane, Nya, and Kai too much importance in the story. I don't really like when authors bring original characters into fanfiction.
good story but just realized that webnovel for some reason made all tags smaller like why tho???
Great FanFic. By the way Author-san How does the MC look like. Srry cause I need Imagination to motivate me to read sometimes. Thank you and please continue :)
people say it's good I'm gonna give it a try even though I don't watch Avatar Korra I only watch The Last Airbender ........................
Uno de los mejores fanfic de avatar al principio si se me hizo algo mal que no tuviera poderes a pesar de las herramientas que usaba pero con eso del místerio que pone para saber al final que después de todo si tiene te deja con intriga y
(ﾉ^ヮ^)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧✧ﾟ・:*ﾉ(^ヮ^ﾉ) (ﾉ^ヮ^)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧✧ﾟ・:*ﾉ(^ヮ^ﾉ) (ﾉ^ヮ^)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧✧ﾟ・:*ﾉ(^ヮ^ﾉ) (ﾉ^ヮ^)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧✧ﾟ・:*ﾉ(^ヮ^ﾉ) (ﾉ^ヮ^)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧✧ﾟ・:*ﾉ(^ヮ^ﾉ) (ﾉ^ヮ^)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧✧ﾟ・:*ﾉ(^ヮ^ﾉ)
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Free five star review so I can ask a couple of questions that hopefully get answered. 1. Has the mc awakened bending yet? 2. What type of bending(I remember asking earlier if the mc would eventually become a bender and I’m pretty sure the author confirmed it for me that he would eventually)?
I’m trading a 5 star review for someone to answer my question. Hopefully the author. Does the mc have any bending? And if not could he awaken air bending after the harmonic convergence?
i have nothing to say... but it's good, it's more realistic than other fanfics actually... truly a hidden gem. ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎
the story is really good so far. i hope that you dont kill off his lover as that would be heart breaking for me. other than that i dont know what else to write.
Hey, nice story. The first Volume had great overall development, and a satisfying ending. The story so far only has the one volume which is why this is short. All in all, I'll give it 8.5 out 10, good job.
a good story and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.
I like it so far, however, I hope you don't give Zane, Nya, and Kai too much importance in the story. I don't really like when authors bring original characters into fanfiction.
The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fsacinating escape from reality into another world. A great read