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10/10 gran novela ero lastima que no la volvieron a actualizar.. .......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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amazing story and writing , love the fanfic . wish it had more updates . left me curious about the story progression and which charas will be introduced
Muito bom, espero que tradutor volte com a história, a última atualização foi a mais de nove meses e eu quero ver como termina essa história, espero que autor original também esteja continuando a escrever.
wonderful, best HP fanfic ever...............................................................................................................................................................
A story for those who are not afraid to read stronger scenes, I would say weak minds don't read. for those with strong minds, welcome, but don't get carried away, the story is well thought out but what got in the way was the cliffhanger and the hiatus at the end
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A gem. I hope this ain't the end of it. .................................................. ..................................................
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Wow. Realmente está muy bueno, me gudtaria muchos más capitulos. Eso es lo unico con lo que tengo por criticar. En realidad no es una critics porque solo quiero más capitulos por lo bueno que esta esto.
By far one of my favourite fanfic,a good writing and character developement but i had to ask do you continue this story or did you drop it.
My favorite author. Also only author where I love all of their stories. Go to FF and check out their other stories if you are looking for a good read or something else lol
One of the most unique Harry Potter fanfictions I have read. Happy that the the author used Draco Malfoy instead of Harry or some oc character. Please update.
A good read unlike other fan fictions I have read. But why has it stopped uploading. I hope they don't drop the novel. Anyways I am just writing for word count.
Wowwww!! This is the best HP fanfic I've ever read so far. I really love this. This thing needs more attention. I really love Hermoine. Please continue writing this cause I need more of it.
ꭿⓈ ⓈιＲ 𝓑ꭿＲⓣᕼỖŁΜ𝔼Ŵ Ỗ𝓷Č𝔼 ⓈꭿιĐ "ι𝓷Č𝔼Ⓢⓣ ιⓈ Ŵι𝓷Č𝔼Ⓢⓣ". 𝕥ħ𝐞𝐫𝐞𝐟Ｏ𝐫𝐞 ᶤ ħ𝓐𝕧𝐞 𝐫𝓐𝕥𝐞Ⓓ 𝕥ħᶤⓢ p͓̽i͓̽e͓̽c̽ҽ օƒ ąɾէ 5.0 [img=recommend][img=coins]
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One of the best HP fanfictions! One thing though is that some times the lemons go on for a while and not enough of the story is being displayed. Maybe limit them a tad bit or include more story in between! Don't get me wrong I love the lemons as much as you but after a while I can't stop myself from wondering what's is happening around.
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More chapters please🥺(´༎ຶོρ༎ຶོ`)thanks for this amazing fanfic🥰🥰🥰🥰😘😘😘))))))))))))))))))))[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
nice, you the best lemons kkk please end the novel fanfic 250 chp + !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
By far one of the the most well written fanfic about Harry Potter yet the s*x scene's are amazingly well done better than alot of novels I read the details is amazing honestly it deserves this rating
10/10 gran novela ero lastima que no la volvieron a actualizar.. .......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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god please Forgive me .............................................................................................................................................................
amazing story and writing , love the fanfic . wish it had more updates . left me curious about the story progression and which charas will be introduced
Muito bom, espero que tradutor volte com a história, a última atualização foi a mais de nove meses e eu quero ver como termina essa história, espero que autor original também esteja continuando a escrever.
wonderful, best HP fanfic ever...............................................................................................................................................................
A story for those who are not afraid to read stronger scenes, I would say weak minds don't read. for those with strong minds, welcome, but don't get carried away, the story is well thought out but what got in the way was the cliffhanger and the hiatus at the end
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A gem. I hope this ain't the end of it. .................................................. ..................................................
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Wow. Realmente está muy bueno, me gudtaria muchos más capitulos. Eso es lo unico con lo que tengo por criticar. En realidad no es una critics porque solo quiero más capitulos por lo bueno que esta esto.
By far one of my favourite fanfic,a good writing and character developement but i had to ask do you continue this story or did you drop it.
My favorite author. Also only author where I love all of their stories. Go to FF and check out their other stories if you are looking for a good read or something else lol
One of the most unique Harry Potter fanfictions I have read. Happy that the the author used Draco Malfoy instead of Harry or some oc character. Please update.
A good read unlike other fan fictions I have read. But why has it stopped uploading. I hope they don't drop the novel. Anyways I am just writing for word count.
Wowwww!! This is the best HP fanfic I've ever read so far. I really love this. This thing needs more attention. I really love Hermoine. Please continue writing this cause I need more of it.
ꭿⓈ ⓈιＲ 𝓑ꭿＲⓣᕼỖŁΜ𝔼Ŵ Ỗ𝓷Č𝔼 ⓈꭿιĐ "ι𝓷Č𝔼Ⓢⓣ ιⓈ Ŵι𝓷Č𝔼Ⓢⓣ". 𝕥ħ𝐞𝐫𝐞𝐟Ｏ𝐫𝐞 ᶤ ħ𝓐𝕧𝐞 𝐫𝓐𝕥𝐞Ⓓ 𝕥ħᶤⓢ p͓̽i͓̽e͓̽c̽ҽ օƒ ąɾէ 5.0 [img=recommend][img=coins]
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One of the best HP fanfictions! One thing though is that some times the lemons go on for a while and not enough of the story is being displayed. Maybe limit them a tad bit or include more story in between! Don't get me wrong I love the lemons as much as you but after a while I can't stop myself from wondering what's is happening around.
Muito bom Muito bom Muito bom Muito bom Muito bom Muito bom Muito bom Muito bom Muito bom Muito bom Muito bom Muito bom Muito bom Muito bom Muito bom
El verdadero autor es genial. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
More chapters please🥺(´༎ຶོρ༎ຶོ`)thanks for this amazing fanfic🥰🥰🥰🥰😘😘😘))))))))))))))))))))[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
nice, you the best lemons kkk please end the novel fanfic 250 chp + !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
By far one of the the most well written fanfic about Harry Potter yet the s*x scene's are amazingly well done better than alot of novels I read the details is amazing honestly it deserves this rating