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เขียนรีวิวHi 👋 my fellow Daoist my pen name is shifu7 . As you can see that this novel is pertaining martial arts. And I really love novels portraying Cultivation. THIS IS MY FIRST NOVEL and I would like to thank you for reading my first novel. Don't forget to give thumbs up . Have a great day!!!! shifu7 while cupping his hand.
I am in love with your writing, the words flow off the page so brilliantly that I feel like I'm actually there. This is an amazing read and I look forward to reading more ♡
hi, I know that I probably should write this in the novel area but I can't help but say that the reason that I quit reading the novel is because there were too many areas that needed to be fixed. there were areas that had words put together where it needed to be spaced also there were some parts that just were inconsistent with what was being said. I think the author should go through their story again and review what needs to be fixed. I believe that this novel has potential but it won't reach that potential if the novel isn't fixed by an editor.
I have read this story, but I think this type of genre is difficult for me to understand. The story could be really good if the grammatical errors can be correct. However, as a budding writer myself, I know how hard it is to write. Therefore, I just want to say, keep going strong.
This seems to be a standard cultivation novel. However I'd like to point out some of its great qualities. For this genre, a first person perspective is very unique. The lore is very well developed, that can be seen throughout the detailed text. Also, I've never seen the sound effect, Tud Tud Tud. Well done author.
really thought that his father is the village chief lol. But there is an actually twist. So what happened in the past ? Is his family came from Ancient Era? So why did the old man says he doesn't know that Immemorial Cultivation. And I'm curious about his mom. Is she dead ? Or his dad trying to revive her.
I love how you leading chinese novel to a new direction. I can predict pretty much what's gonna happen next everytime I read those novels but you're an exception. Keep it up!!! I am looking ahead for more chapters....!!!!!
I was hook by your novel since you post it on social media. This is a good novel . My pointers are 1. Good character building. I LOVE THEIR CHARACTERS. 2. Good world building " the Cultivation world , realms , miniature world, lower world's etc. 3. Good Cultivation system "really awesome it's has original Cultivation system, a new plot. 4. Good Romance !!!! Yes It has a good Romance !!!! The conversation is really good. ! And the female lead is also strong as MC! 5. Mystery " the novel has mystery itself. Cons : It's has little action for now since the events are currently developing . It's still early. like massacre's , war , etc. But yeah so far, it's still under 36 chapters so It shouldn't be rush. Overall thumbs up 👍
This book is interesting right from the beginning. It's a good one to check out if you like cultivation, martial arts, action and romance. Great work fellow daoist![img=recommend]
It's an awesome read! The events are so immersive for the readers, and there is also this subtle comedy of the character's personaltiy and the way he learns the way of a cultivator. The only points i'd like to point out are the tenses mixes (especially on the first few lines (from "is" to "was" and "have" to "had"). Besides that, I think this novel is really awesome! ^^
The character development is nice as well as the flow of the story. It's interesting and thrilling also that readers will crave for the next chapters. Great work, author!
This is unexpectedly good ! The mc is a bit unique and the world building is pique my interest to the world of the novel . The title is interesting too
I just came across here so far I enjoying it. the female leads characters has different style which gives twist in the story. I am also loving the cultivation system new style .
As expected , Really good story , As for the female leads I really like them . They are not useless . Actually their character growth amaze me cause their dialogs are just natural
The development is getting good each chapters . And many characters slowly introduce in the story . The development is getting good each chapters . And many characters slowly introduce in the story
I'm a silent reader but now I am commenting here. This novel is actually a hidden gem. Those who haven't tried to read this hidden gem . I tell you This is actually a hidden gem. 1. Characters 5 star 2. Romance 5 star 3. Action 5 star 4. World building so far I only give 4 star It's still early. 5 . Cultivation It's a new style 4 star
The characters are so awesome !!!!! 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀 This is realistic. I love every characters on this Novel I really like it . Each every chapter You will love them. So far there are three characters I like . But their characters is solid than 100 people.
The character building is Awesome Perfect!!!!! 👍😊😊😊🥰😊😊😊😊 While I can’t say this is the best written Xianxia, The novel as a whole has a sense of mystery and wonder.
It starts off so well. Translation is average. The main character is interesting and fairly unique, and the progression happens at a pretty good rate. He seems intelligent
If nothing else, read this novel. It starts out a little slow, but the character developmentnt makes it all worth it. If nothing else, read this novel. It starts out a little slow, but the character development makes it all worth it.
This is quite literally the best Xianxia novel I have read to date . It is a Xianxia which actually has a plot! A most shocking thing! This is quite literally the best Xianxia novel I have read to date . It is a Xianxia which actually has a plot! A most shocking thing!
This is by far the best novel here, and I've read a lot of them. All the characters are well fleshed out and the relationships between characters are very well developed
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Good novel . I hope more chapters . Good novel . I hope more chapters . Good novel . I hope more chapters . Good novel . I hope more chapters .
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Cute story. Thats the thing should be don't give ur ****** I like this. Cute story. Thats the thing should be don't give ur ***** Cute story. Thats the thing should be don't give ur ******
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์This is fantastic novel . Not only Action and Cultivation . but also romance !!!! I love it !!!!! Good novel!!! This is fantastic novel . Not only Action and Cultivation . but also romance !!!! I love it !!!!! Good novel!!!
This is Quit Interesting . So far I love the character building of the female lead. More updates . Need more updates. This is Quit Interesting . So far I love the character building of the female lead. More updates . Need more updates. It's like I'm more excited of their romance than the actions
Hi 👋 my fellow Daoist my pen name is shifu7 . As you can see that this novel is pertaining martial arts. And I really love novels portraying Cultivation. THIS IS MY FIRST NOVEL and I would like to thank you for reading my first novel. Don't forget to give thumbs up . Have a great day!!!! shifu7 while cupping his hand.
I am in love with your writing, the words flow off the page so brilliantly that I feel like I'm actually there. This is an amazing read and I look forward to reading more ♡
hi, I know that I probably should write this in the novel area but I can't help but say that the reason that I quit reading the novel is because there were too many areas that needed to be fixed. there were areas that had words put together where it needed to be spaced also there were some parts that just were inconsistent with what was being said. I think the author should go through their story again and review what needs to be fixed. I believe that this novel has potential but it won't reach that potential if the novel isn't fixed by an editor.
I have read this story, but I think this type of genre is difficult for me to understand. The story could be really good if the grammatical errors can be correct. However, as a budding writer myself, I know how hard it is to write. Therefore, I just want to say, keep going strong.
This seems to be a standard cultivation novel. However I'd like to point out some of its great qualities. For this genre, a first person perspective is very unique. The lore is very well developed, that can be seen throughout the detailed text. Also, I've never seen the sound effect, Tud Tud Tud. Well done author.
really thought that his father is the village chief lol. But there is an actually twist. So what happened in the past ? Is his family came from Ancient Era? So why did the old man says he doesn't know that Immemorial Cultivation. And I'm curious about his mom. Is she dead ? Or his dad trying to revive her.
I love how you leading chinese novel to a new direction. I can predict pretty much what's gonna happen next everytime I read those novels but you're an exception. Keep it up!!! I am looking ahead for more chapters....!!!!!
I was hook by your novel since you post it on social media. This is a good novel . My pointers are 1. Good character building. I LOVE THEIR CHARACTERS. 2. Good world building " the Cultivation world , realms , miniature world, lower world's etc. 3. Good Cultivation system "really awesome it's has original Cultivation system, a new plot. 4. Good Romance !!!! Yes It has a good Romance !!!! The conversation is really good. ! And the female lead is also strong as MC! 5. Mystery " the novel has mystery itself. Cons : It's has little action for now since the events are currently developing . It's still early. like massacre's , war , etc. But yeah so far, it's still under 36 chapters so It shouldn't be rush. Overall thumbs up 👍
This book is interesting right from the beginning. It's a good one to check out if you like cultivation, martial arts, action and romance. Great work fellow daoist![img=recommend]
It's an awesome read! The events are so immersive for the readers, and there is also this subtle comedy of the character's personaltiy and the way he learns the way of a cultivator. The only points i'd like to point out are the tenses mixes (especially on the first few lines (from "is" to "was" and "have" to "had"). Besides that, I think this novel is really awesome! ^^
The character development is nice as well as the flow of the story. It's interesting and thrilling also that readers will crave for the next chapters. Great work, author!
This is unexpectedly good ! The mc is a bit unique and the world building is pique my interest to the world of the novel . The title is interesting too
I just came across here so far I enjoying it. the female leads characters has different style which gives twist in the story. I am also loving the cultivation system new style .
As expected , Really good story , As for the female leads I really like them . They are not useless . Actually their character growth amaze me cause their dialogs are just natural
The development is getting good each chapters . And many characters slowly introduce in the story . The development is getting good each chapters . And many characters slowly introduce in the story
I'm a silent reader but now I am commenting here. This novel is actually a hidden gem. Those who haven't tried to read this hidden gem . I tell you This is actually a hidden gem. 1. Characters 5 star 2. Romance 5 star 3. Action 5 star 4. World building so far I only give 4 star It's still early. 5 . Cultivation It's a new style 4 star
The characters are so awesome !!!!! 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀 This is realistic. I love every characters on this Novel I really like it . Each every chapter You will love them. So far there are three characters I like . But their characters is solid than 100 people.
The character building is Awesome Perfect!!!!! 👍😊😊😊🥰😊😊😊😊 While I can’t say this is the best written Xianxia, The novel as a whole has a sense of mystery and wonder.
It starts off so well. Translation is average. The main character is interesting and fairly unique, and the progression happens at a pretty good rate. He seems intelligent
If nothing else, read this novel. It starts out a little slow, but the character developmentnt makes it all worth it. If nothing else, read this novel. It starts out a little slow, but the character development makes it all worth it.
This is quite literally the best Xianxia novel I have read to date . It is a Xianxia which actually has a plot! A most shocking thing! This is quite literally the best Xianxia novel I have read to date . It is a Xianxia which actually has a plot! A most shocking thing!
This is by far the best novel here, and I've read a lot of them. All the characters are well fleshed out and the relationships between characters are very well developed
读万卷书不如行万里路. 👍 读万卷书不如行万里路读万卷书不如行万里路读万卷书不如行万里路读万卷书不如行万里路读万卷书不如行万里路万卷书不如行万里路读万卷书不如行万里路读万卷书不如行万里路读万卷书不如行万里路读万卷书不如行万里路万卷书不如行万里路读万卷书不如行万里路读万卷书不如行万里路读万卷书不如行万里路读万卷书不如行万里路
Good novel . I hope more chapters . Good novel . I hope more chapters . Good novel . I hope more chapters . Good novel . I hope more chapters .
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Cute story. Thats the thing should be don't give ur ****** I like this. Cute story. Thats the thing should be don't give ur ***** Cute story. Thats the thing should be don't give ur ******
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์This is fantastic novel . Not only Action and Cultivation . but also romance !!!! I love it !!!!! Good novel!!! This is fantastic novel . Not only Action and Cultivation . but also romance !!!! I love it !!!!! Good novel!!!
This is Quit Interesting . So far I love the character building of the female lead. More updates . Need more updates. This is Quit Interesting . So far I love the character building of the female lead. More updates . Need more updates. It's like I'm more excited of their romance than the actions