16รีวิว
4.6
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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Holds a lot of potential, so far its been really good if i had to pick at anything it'd be the release of new chapters is abysmal, sigh i guess i'll have to go back to my faceslapping novels till theres an update
Story is relatively high quality compared to most others on this platform but you have dogcr*p update stability. I would like to see more stable updates but not putting any pressure on you as most of us are already used to bad update stability and discontinuation of works. I would however wish you good luck in life
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Nice stuff. Grammar and writing is good. Nice. ...........................................................................................................
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Story still in its early phase, but it has shown promise. Nothing much of noteworthy for now except for the Mc introduction to the chat group. He doesn't proceed to blabber to chat members that he know them all are from fictional work, manga/anime. Instead leave it ambiguous... For now. I just hope the Author keep it that way cause I see absolutely no benefit from telling that piece of information. All member of the chat group are all massively influential characters on their own right, so I'm really curious to see if the MC has what it take to demonstrate the authority of a chat group admin, Or, will he become overshadowed...
If the chaPter increses over 100+ the novel will Have so many supporter [img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
hoho!... what do we have here I'm seeing the tittle of all the strongest characters or kind of a main characters from the anime I wonder how this gonna turn hoping that it'll be interesting! (*^o^)／＼(^-^*)
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Seems Kool so far keep up the good work ............ ..........,..................,.......................... ,. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .
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I'm waiting, waiting and waiting... This fanfiction definitely has potential. But every time I look, there is no update at all... Admins! Come back and add another chapter!!! Not only me, but maybe there are several other people waiting for the latest chapter of this fanfiction. So, come back *ssh*le!!!
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Holds a lot of potential, so far its been really good if i had to pick at anything it'd be the release of new chapters is abysmal, sigh i guess i'll have to go back to my faceslapping novels till theres an update
Story is relatively high quality compared to most others on this platform but you have dogcr*p update stability. I would like to see more stable updates but not putting any pressure on you as most of us are already used to bad update stability and discontinuation of works. I would however wish you good luck in life
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Nice stuff. Grammar and writing is good. Nice. ...........................................................................................................
Slow updates but gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Story still in its early phase, but it has shown promise. Nothing much of noteworthy for now except for the Mc introduction to the chat group. He doesn't proceed to blabber to chat members that he know them all are from fictional work, manga/anime. Instead leave it ambiguous... For now. I just hope the Author keep it that way cause I see absolutely no benefit from telling that piece of information. All member of the chat group are all massively influential characters on their own right, so I'm really curious to see if the MC has what it take to demonstrate the authority of a chat group admin, Or, will he become overshadowed...
If the chaPter increses over 100+ the novel will Have so many supporter [img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
hoho!... what do we have here I'm seeing the tittle of all the strongest characters or kind of a main characters from the anime I wonder how this gonna turn hoping that it'll be interesting! (*^o^)／＼(^-^*)
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Seems Kool so far keep up the good work ............ ..........,..................,.......................... ,. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .
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I'm waiting, waiting and waiting... This fanfiction definitely has potential. But every time I look, there is no update at all... Admins! Come back and add another chapter!!! Not only me, but maybe there are several other people waiting for the latest chapter of this fanfiction. So, come back *ssh*le!!!