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So far, quite enjoyable, perhaps the most decently written tbate fanfic with an OC( not cross over) I have ever read. Perhaps also a very good tbate brother fanfic where the author isn't copying the original plot. the MC is strong, but he's also independent and not strictly bound to follow Arthur. And he actually has his own personalities and not a knock off version of Arthur. The actions battles are top notch and detailed. And there's also the sonic hawk bond with good interactions with the MC, RIP old bird. Hope the author will come back one day.
I just want more can't get enough of this. The story was The Best, MC is not Arthur labdog, the Phoenix was subperb👌
This FF hits my spot, perfectly following his own plot and foreshadowing the events and his goals. A nice steady not fast just the right amount. I could tell the amount of effort put into this, you could tell every chapter is thought of and very deeply unique from other writing styles. Entertaining with just a little bit of detail. Best out there
Мне понравиться это фафник советею это фафник гг не собака артура у него есть свой история и он сильнее артура у него есть свой история? Help with this page and the following review this page of
what's wrong with those other low star reviews that I'm seeing?? The reason stated for those low star is totally wronggg, I bet they did not even read the story and decided to just hate it. For others whose deciding whether to read this then dont listen to those low star reviews since its totally misleading. In my opinion this is a good tbate fanfic and you should give it a read. 7mth
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Hope u are having good day author~San...when i first start reading this find everything rushed, it felt like the story doesn't have any emotion, but i know a writer's pain when its their first time...now since the death of 'Tuk' before i know it i can feel the emotion from the story just like in original tbate....i know its pain but please don't drop it...u are fast learner author u have improved a lot..
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BEST TBATE fanfic on webnovel till this day.................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Can't say anything but.......... aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
love it can't wait to see more cute Jaron x Kathyln moments and some ArtxTess moments to. Jaron x Kathyln loved there first kiss and can't wait to see there relationship go further (When they're older)😏😏 And love the jaron x kathyln cute moments can't wait to see more🥰🥰🥰🥰
yo everything ia good here,though i am still wrapping my head around the story line and various thongs since i did not read the OG book,Hope our Author keeps updating regularly,hehe
love ittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
He awakens his core at 2 and becomes a silver core at 5????? Bruh... it´s like all the other TBATE ff where they get op in few years. This one is at least decent at storytelling, but there are still small things that aren´t 100% accurate, but which ff is, to be honest... So all in all an ok ff 3/5....
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Peak fanfic of TBATE, Has it's own adventures while also altering the canon story so it makes in unpredictable, love the Kathyln and Jaron moments
I love this story but am not very good at making reviews, but the people who are leaving one star reviews are listing problems that aren’t in the book and have clearly never read it instead just leaving a review based on the synopsis. I can’t find any problem i have about the story.
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I personally love this fanfic. I hope the author would not let the haters get to him and continue writing this fanific. [img=update][img=update]
what's wrong with those other low star reviews that I'm seeing?? The reason stated for those low star is totally wronggg, I bet they did not even read the story and decided to just hate it. For others whose deciding whether to read this then dont listen to those low star reviews since its totally misleading. In my opinion this is a good tbate fanfic and you should give it a read.
We Need more of this ....................................................... ..........................................................................
I disagree with the author on many things. The memories inherited from other phoenixes is my main problem, I think it irreparably affected the development of the mc's abilities. There are a few other minor points, but despite that I think this story is very good and the positives far outweigh the negatives. Thanks for the chapters.
Hey just finished reading this novel.. I loved it and waiting for future updates and this is my first TBATE FF.. CAN anyone tell me if there is any other good FF of TBATE.. cause I am fan of TBATE but I don't like Arthur character that much too much depressing later on story
I really love the book because there is not many the beginning After the end FanFiction
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- But for real, the story is good. Hope you come back
So far, quite enjoyable, perhaps the most decently written tbate fanfic with an OC( not cross over) I have ever read. Perhaps also a very good tbate brother fanfic where the author isn't copying the original plot. the MC is strong, but he's also independent and not strictly bound to follow Arthur. And he actually has his own personalities and not a knock off version of Arthur. The actions battles are top notch and detailed. And there's also the sonic hawk bond with good interactions with the MC, RIP old bird. Hope the author will come back one day.
I just want more can't get enough of this. The story was The Best, MC is not Arthur labdog, the Phoenix was subperb👌
This FF hits my spot, perfectly following his own plot and foreshadowing the events and his goals. A nice steady not fast just the right amount. I could tell the amount of effort put into this, you could tell every chapter is thought of and very deeply unique from other writing styles. Entertaining with just a little bit of detail. Best out there
Мне понравиться это фафник советею это фафник гг не собака артура у него есть свой история и он сильнее артура у него есть свой история? Help with this page and the following review this page of
what's wrong with those other low star reviews that I'm seeing?? The reason stated for those low star is totally wronggg, I bet they did not even read the story and decided to just hate it. For others whose deciding whether to read this then dont listen to those low star reviews since its totally misleading. In my opinion this is a good tbate fanfic and you should give it a read. 7mth
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Hope u are having good day author~San...when i first start reading this find everything rushed, it felt like the story doesn't have any emotion, but i know a writer's pain when its their first time...now since the death of 'Tuk' before i know it i can feel the emotion from the story just like in original tbate....i know its pain but please don't drop it...u are fast learner author u have improved a lot..
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BEST TBATE fanfic on webnovel till this day.................................................................................................................................................................................................................
i like this novel i hope author won't drop this [img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Can't say anything but.......... aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
love it can't wait to see more cute Jaron x Kathyln moments and some ArtxTess moments to. Jaron x Kathyln loved there first kiss and can't wait to see there relationship go further (When they're older)😏😏 And love the jaron x kathyln cute moments can't wait to see more🥰🥰🥰🥰
yo everything ia good here,though i am still wrapping my head around the story line and various thongs since i did not read the OG book,Hope our Author keeps updating regularly,hehe
love ittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
He awakens his core at 2 and becomes a silver core at 5????? Bruh... it´s like all the other TBATE ff where they get op in few years. This one is at least decent at storytelling, but there are still small things that aren´t 100% accurate, but which ff is, to be honest... So all in all an ok ff 3/5....
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Peak fanfic of TBATE, Has it's own adventures while also altering the canon story so it makes in unpredictable, love the Kathyln and Jaron moments
I love this story but am not very good at making reviews, but the people who are leaving one star reviews are listing problems that aren’t in the book and have clearly never read it instead just leaving a review based on the synopsis. I can’t find any problem i have about the story.
Who will be the love inTerest aUthor sama?[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Read It!!! and don't let those low star reviews that didn't even read the book prevent you from reading this fanfic [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
I personally love this fanfic. I hope the author would not let the haters get to him and continue writing this fanific. [img=update][img=update]
what's wrong with those other low star reviews that I'm seeing?? The reason stated for those low star is totally wronggg, I bet they did not even read the story and decided to just hate it. For others whose deciding whether to read this then dont listen to those low star reviews since its totally misleading. In my opinion this is a good tbate fanfic and you should give it a read.
We Need more of this ....................................................... ..........................................................................
I disagree with the author on many things. The memories inherited from other phoenixes is my main problem, I think it irreparably affected the development of the mc's abilities. There are a few other minor points, but despite that I think this story is very good and the positives far outweigh the negatives. Thanks for the chapters.
Hey just finished reading this novel.. I loved it and waiting for future updates and this is my first TBATE FF.. CAN anyone tell me if there is any other good FF of TBATE.. cause I am fan of TBATE but I don't like Arthur character that much too much depressing later on story
I really love the book because there is not many the beginning After the end FanFiction
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- But for real, the story is good. Hope you come back