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4.6
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Seems a little young. EVerything progresses really fast, with very little world building to start. If I would describe this I’d say very wattpad ish. It’s good start, I have high hopes for this authors future writing. I decided to give a review just so the rating made a little more sense.
This story is definitely my jam ! 😂💜 I enjoy everything so far and it’s so satisfying to grow with Trevor and Max ! I really recommend this novel ! I love Omegaverse and this novel is one of my favorite 😍 Thank you author for your work and just you know, I’ll be on there for the next chapters :3
I'll start with...I love the story! I've only read few chapters (and would definitely continue the book) but I'm already down. I love Trevor's personality the most. All the characters are fleshed out really well and the pace is just as good. Overall, it's amazing~
It was a good story with a great plot, and I also really like the writing style. The characterization was good, and the characters' background was well thought. It wasn't awkward to read the conversations, and there were just quite a few grammatical errors.
First of all, great writing. The way everything is described in novel is just too great. From character building to plot, from plot to background, from background to story development. The writer has a great charm. Conversations are well written and there are close to no grammatical mistakes which makes the reading more pleasurable. All and all, the work has great potential. Well done Author! Waiting for more chapters.
Shameless self-appreciation!!! I'm enjoying writing this story, guys! And I'm happy that they are people who are liking it too. I'll keep on going and try to give you one chap a day!!! Cheer me up!!!!!!!!!!
The story is beautifully described and arranged. I love the way the story has taken a start. and I would love to see how the story will turn in the future. The synopsis is catchy and has the capability of hooking the readers. I would like to thank the author for introducing us to such a beautifully designed world.
this is a masterpiece! furthermore, it's my fav genre! lovely story with intriguing synopsis.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I truly like this story and its one of my fav genres it might not have many chapters yet but im looking forward to the love journey between the leads
good starting sweetheart so far am loving the story and picking up grammars I can say that this book is a must read, and it would do wn good if it was well appreciated.
Well, I love the start of this story! The fact that it's an omega verse is even more exciting, I want to see how it will be different from another omegaverse story. I want to see if Trevor will be more than just the wife int the house waiting for his alpha husband ahahahah!! Waiting for more!!
The author is smart by putting the "There's no major misunderstanding" in the summary. Many readers don't like major misunderstanding, and that's a smart way to convince the readers to read this book 😁 I enjoy reading this story, but the omega is too weak for my liking 😅 but, that's just my preference, I respect the character design here. This book is interesting and well-written, so I will look forward to the next chapters 😉[img=recommend]
Good starting I'm liking the dynamic between the two lead, There are so cute and sexy at the same time! I'm waiting to see where the story will lead us!
I like both Trevor and Max. They are so cute. The story is written beautifully with cute scenes of these two babies. I couldn't stop reading and I am definitely adding it to my library. Author keep it up.
Seems a little young. EVerything progresses really fast, with very little world building to start. If I would describe this I’d say very wattpad ish. It’s good start, I have high hopes for this authors future writing. I decided to give a review just so the rating made a little more sense.
This story is definitely my jam ! 😂💜 I enjoy everything so far and it’s so satisfying to grow with Trevor and Max ! I really recommend this novel ! I love Omegaverse and this novel is one of my favorite 😍 Thank you author for your work and just you know, I’ll be on there for the next chapters :3
I'll start with...I love the story! I've only read few chapters (and would definitely continue the book) but I'm already down. I love Trevor's personality the most. All the characters are fleshed out really well and the pace is just as good. Overall, it's amazing~
It was a good story with a great plot, and I also really like the writing style. The characterization was good, and the characters' background was well thought. It wasn't awkward to read the conversations, and there were just quite a few grammatical errors.
First of all, great writing. The way everything is described in novel is just too great. From character building to plot, from plot to background, from background to story development. The writer has a great charm. Conversations are well written and there are close to no grammatical mistakes which makes the reading more pleasurable. All and all, the work has great potential. Well done Author! Waiting for more chapters.
Shameless self-appreciation!!! I'm enjoying writing this story, guys! And I'm happy that they are people who are liking it too. I'll keep on going and try to give you one chap a day!!! Cheer me up!!!!!!!!!!
The story is beautifully described and arranged. I love the way the story has taken a start. and I would love to see how the story will turn in the future. The synopsis is catchy and has the capability of hooking the readers. I would like to thank the author for introducing us to such a beautifully designed world.
this is a masterpiece! furthermore, it's my fav genre! lovely story with intriguing synopsis.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I truly like this story and its one of my fav genres it might not have many chapters yet but im looking forward to the love journey between the leads
good starting sweetheart so far am loving the story and picking up grammars I can say that this book is a must read, and it would do wn good if it was well appreciated.
Well, I love the start of this story! The fact that it's an omega verse is even more exciting, I want to see how it will be different from another omegaverse story. I want to see if Trevor will be more than just the wife int the house waiting for his alpha husband ahahahah!! Waiting for more!!
The author is smart by putting the "There's no major misunderstanding" in the summary. Many readers don't like major misunderstanding, and that's a smart way to convince the readers to read this book 😁 I enjoy reading this story, but the omega is too weak for my liking 😅 but, that's just my preference, I respect the character design here. This book is interesting and well-written, so I will look forward to the next chapters 😉[img=recommend]
Good starting I'm liking the dynamic between the two lead, There are so cute and sexy at the same time! I'm waiting to see where the story will lead us!
I like both Trevor and Max. They are so cute. The story is written beautifully with cute scenes of these two babies. I couldn't stop reading and I am definitely adding it to my library. Author keep it up.