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I like it it's one of the best so far that I've red please continue I like the character development and he's interaction and the perfect combination of the different anime is good
I will be honest (100%)... I hate the first 6 chapters. It's honestly a headache to understand what's going on. Let's talk about MC, an ugly and fat person, emo and depressive. He is missing his tongue (or so I managed to understand) and attends school to get his daily dose of beating, strangely everyone seems to ignore this fact, or the author didn't bother to think that if one person is killing another in the middle There are other people outside the school who can see what happened and call the authorities/police. In addition there is a clear lack of connection with the MC, the author gives more prominence to other scenes and other people irrelevant to the plot, also MC is rarely mentioned and speaks / writes in a cringe way, which I honestly can't stand. Everything is messy and confusing and there are countless errors and nonsense here that I couldn't ignore because of how grotesque they are. There are many other things that annoy me about this novel but I don't want to continue writing. # So I will say my personal rating: not recommended until complete rewrite where the author removes all the scenes and fights of people who are not MC and if the author cleans up his mess and create a normal or slightly supernatural world. He wanted to create a mega world with powers lvl universe but this is a disaster 😬😬😬 (Google translate)
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good good good great great great please dont drop please dont drop i wanna see this to the end i hope it isnt dropped i love how youve incorperated so many anime chracters into this novel and it actually makes sense to
more chapers fast author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Im wordless Wednesday so fricking awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the problem i have with this fanfic is mainly the writing quality, because of some typo, weird choice of word, misplacement of (" "), lack of uses of comma in a sentence, and some sentence is so convoluted that i have to read multiple times to make sense of it. for the minor problem of this fanfic is the character design of some antagonist(?) kinda off put for me and the upload schedule is not consistent. for the story and world background i think I will give 5 star(?)
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Hm this is a odd one, have you ever heard a joke and stead of laughing you just thought 'that was funny', like this looks like a good story, but I'm having zero fun. The author is really creative that's for sure, interesting world overall, but the biggest fault here is the storytelling, if I had to guess I would say author is not that used to writting in english, which is not that much of a problem on fanfics, but massive world building + bad storytelling coupled with the non-linear style of explaning will live you confused, the fanfic part of the story didn't even began and I was bored out of my mind. Just my opinion, no hate. Much love.
Just some gammar mistakes so far in the first 5 chapters(what I'm up to so I dont know the rest). It's pretty good so far, no issues except for gammar. please use grammerly, im almost dying from reading this. xD
The story is good, the idea for the novel is also interesting. Your characters are also okay in my open. But the huge turnoff of this novel is the writing. Sentences are jumbled and mixed together due to lack of proper periods and marks. This made the story to be hard to read. You can use this (') mark for the MC dialogue and any character thoughts, while you can use (") quotation mark for normal dialogue.
Noice keep it up👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
I realy enjoy this story very well written like your another story i hope you keep uploading chapters and don't drop this. ...................
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[OC]Pandora Best WAIFU wooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! Good stuff btw keep it up ...............................................................................
it is a great read. keep up the good work..............................................................................................................
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The author is great and is a great writer in my opinion. Also, the author may incorporate a couple of memes here and there and they are funny af well the way he writes them in. If you don't like yandere's you are a prude lets be honest here.
love it please dont drop love it please dont drop love it please dont drop love it please dont drop love it please dont drop love it please dont drop love it please dont drop love it please dont drop
I am the True-god of creation who created the daughter of nothingness my existence is abstract so picture me however you like but because I made the world of loner I shall shamelessly give myself a 5-star review P.S this project actually has story already planned out as far as volume 1 please do enjoy.
Not much to say so far but it’s an interesting idea! Yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes yup yup yes yes I
I like it it's one of the best so far that I've red please continue I like the character development and he's interaction and the perfect combination of the different anime is good
I will be honest (100%)... I hate the first 6 chapters. It's honestly a headache to understand what's going on. Let's talk about MC, an ugly and fat person, emo and depressive. He is missing his tongue (or so I managed to understand) and attends school to get his daily dose of beating, strangely everyone seems to ignore this fact, or the author didn't bother to think that if one person is killing another in the middle There are other people outside the school who can see what happened and call the authorities/police. In addition there is a clear lack of connection with the MC, the author gives more prominence to other scenes and other people irrelevant to the plot, also MC is rarely mentioned and speaks / writes in a cringe way, which I honestly can't stand. Everything is messy and confusing and there are countless errors and nonsense here that I couldn't ignore because of how grotesque they are. There are many other things that annoy me about this novel but I don't want to continue writing. # So I will say my personal rating: not recommended until complete rewrite where the author removes all the scenes and fights of people who are not MC and if the author cleans up his mess and create a normal or slightly supernatural world. He wanted to create a mega world with powers lvl universe but this is a disaster 😬😬😬 (Google translate)
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good good good great great great please dont drop please dont drop i wanna see this to the end i hope it isnt dropped i love how youve incorperated so many anime chracters into this novel and it actually makes sense to
more chapers fast author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Im wordless Wednesday so fricking awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the problem i have with this fanfic is mainly the writing quality, because of some typo, weird choice of word, misplacement of (" "), lack of uses of comma in a sentence, and some sentence is so convoluted that i have to read multiple times to make sense of it. for the minor problem of this fanfic is the character design of some antagonist(?) kinda off put for me and the upload schedule is not consistent. for the story and world background i think I will give 5 star(?)
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Hm this is a odd one, have you ever heard a joke and stead of laughing you just thought 'that was funny', like this looks like a good story, but I'm having zero fun. The author is really creative that's for sure, interesting world overall, but the biggest fault here is the storytelling, if I had to guess I would say author is not that used to writting in english, which is not that much of a problem on fanfics, but massive world building + bad storytelling coupled with the non-linear style of explaning will live you confused, the fanfic part of the story didn't even began and I was bored out of my mind. Just my opinion, no hate. Much love.
Just some gammar mistakes so far in the first 5 chapters(what I'm up to so I dont know the rest). It's pretty good so far, no issues except for gammar. please use grammerly, im almost dying from reading this. xD
The story is good, the idea for the novel is also interesting. Your characters are also okay in my open. But the huge turnoff of this novel is the writing. Sentences are jumbled and mixed together due to lack of proper periods and marks. This made the story to be hard to read. You can use this (') mark for the MC dialogue and any character thoughts, while you can use (") quotation mark for normal dialogue.
Noice keep it up👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
I realy enjoy this story very well written like your another story i hope you keep uploading chapters and don't drop this. ...................
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[OC]Pandora Best WAIFU wooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! Good stuff btw keep it up ...............................................................................
it is a great read. keep up the good work..............................................................................................................
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The author is great and is a great writer in my opinion. Also, the author may incorporate a couple of memes here and there and they are funny af well the way he writes them in. If you don't like yandere's you are a prude lets be honest here.
love it please dont drop love it please dont drop love it please dont drop love it please dont drop love it please dont drop love it please dont drop love it please dont drop love it please dont drop
I am the True-god of creation who created the daughter of nothingness my existence is abstract so picture me however you like but because I made the world of loner I shall shamelessly give myself a 5-star review P.S this project actually has story already planned out as far as volume 1 please do enjoy.
Not much to say so far but it’s an interesting idea! Yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes yup yup yes yes I
I is good but the author need to update.