Reviews of Madara Uchiha With The Omniverse System First World: One Piece by Your_host_HK - Webnovel

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ZoneTail

▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆○ - not really 4, but I will give 4☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆○○ - too fast. the lack of context makes the story boring. ▪︎Character Design...........☆○○○○ - huge disappointment on the character Design. the mc was reincarnated as Luffy, because of the system he end up looking like Madara. - so the mc's name is luffy with madara's body who can transform into a dragon(sigh) + 5 elements. (you could have at least change his name or just make an oc mc, but no imma be luffy and the same time looks like madara) ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆○ 《Overall 3.2》

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Your_host_HK

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3yr
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Spike009

A very good novel. And Author has kept it interesting so far. Which is what some novels are unable to do. For now the world is one piece. And it’s been written well.

3yr
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Sharata_draw

The title of this novel say “madara uchiha” not transmitted so yeah

1yr
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Ren_AshBell

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Daoist756131

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AngelsCreed

I don’t know if anyone else noticed this but everytime a definition (ability/weapon) was given was straight copy paste from wiki. Just overall disrespect for original characters plus making them all girls threw me off. Zoro was completely ignored, God Usopp is dead, Sanji doesnt exist and thats all within 10 chapters. This story might have turned out better if the author put more effort into making his own OC and story line. Also single FL is preferred, max 2. This MC has 5 already within 10 chapters. Just doesn’t seem like there Will be any charactEr deVelopment ever

3yr
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ReaderLove

Author that falsify their novel rating are a scum. Also the novel is probably dropped since there is no update for almost a month. I dont get how people write novel and then drop it without noticing their reader.

3yr
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Frizepize

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Golias

Uwooo, just… uwoooo! Bravo! Clap clap clap! it only took two chapters for me to give up, wow, unexpected, to make an 80 year old mc look like he's fifteen and still give him 5 wives in 2 chapters, just… bravo! amazing! amazing! great!

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3yr
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Frizepize

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Frizepize

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3yr
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Riyanda_Knehan

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Joaoterminus3110

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Dekxz
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Strawberrybonanza

Good story bro. Also thanks for frequent updates.... Sorry you got to deal with Haters that sucks mayne. Haters gun hate. Thanks for the story tho

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Riyanda_Knehan

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TrueImmortalDevil

only read if you are ok with following: inconsistancy, disrespecting cool characters, stupidity and calling a gun a sword and claim it to be swordsmanship ...

3yr
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Spike009

Just giving him some encouragement . He is writing a good novel 1. Listens to readers ideas 2. Keeps it interesting 3. Epic fights 4. Op mc. Like I just realized when writing a comment he is too OP at this point.

3yr
ดู 9 การตอบกลับ
Yami_Sensei_25

Nice one author-sama. Man, I hope you don't dropped this, cause' I love the story. Pls update more. 😁😁😁😂😂😂😍😍😍🥳🥳🥳 Also I recommend Fate or Dxd for the next world

3yr
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Daoist571053

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Riyanda_Knehan

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Daoist571053

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Riyanda_Knehan

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Riyanda_Knehan

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3yr
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Retro_

I don't give many harsh ratings but I will give to this book. Mc is what u will call a young master type mc who likes to be toxic and loves collecting girls... He is luffy but with Madara's body, Author could have just made him an Oc but no he soes not eant to create his own plot so makes him luffy. This in other words is a typical fan-fic of this site which is not worth reading in my opinion.

3yr
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Shaska

I feel that many times the ones that give 5 stars are multi-accounts or bots... ...........................................................................

3yr
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Daoist571053

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Riyanda_Knehan

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Daoist816290

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ZoneTail

▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆○ - not really 4, but I will give 4☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆○○ - too fast. the lack of context makes the story boring. ▪︎Character Design...........☆○○○○ - huge disappointment on the character Design. the mc was reincarnated as Luffy, because of the system he end up looking like Madara. - so the mc's name is luffy with madara's body who can transform into a dragon(sigh) + 5 elements. (you could have at least change his name or just make an oc mc, but no imma be luffy and the same time looks like madara) ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆○ 《Overall 3.2》

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Your_host_HK

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3yr
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Spike009

A very good novel. And Author has kept it interesting so far. Which is what some novels are unable to do. For now the world is one piece. And it’s been written well.

3yr
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Sharata_draw

The title of this novel say “madara uchiha” not transmitted so yeah

1yr
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Ren_AshBell

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AngelsCreed

I don’t know if anyone else noticed this but everytime a definition (ability/weapon) was given was straight copy paste from wiki. Just overall disrespect for original characters plus making them all girls threw me off. Zoro was completely ignored, God Usopp is dead, Sanji doesnt exist and thats all within 10 chapters. This story might have turned out better if the author put more effort into making his own OC and story line. Also single FL is preferred, max 2. This MC has 5 already within 10 chapters. Just doesn’t seem like there Will be any charactEr deVelopment ever

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ReaderLove

Author that falsify their novel rating are a scum. Also the novel is probably dropped since there is no update for almost a month. I dont get how people write novel and then drop it without noticing their reader.

3yr
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Golias

Uwooo, just… uwoooo! Bravo! Clap clap clap! it only took two chapters for me to give up, wow, unexpected, to make an 80 year old mc look like he's fifteen and still give him 5 wives in 2 chapters, just… bravo! amazing! amazing! great!

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Frizepize

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Frizepize

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Riyanda_Knehan

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Joaoterminus3110

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Dekxz
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Strawberrybonanza

Good story bro. Also thanks for frequent updates.... Sorry you got to deal with Haters that sucks mayne. Haters gun hate. Thanks for the story tho

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Riyanda_Knehan

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Daoist571053

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TrueImmortalDevil

only read if you are ok with following: inconsistancy, disrespecting cool characters, stupidity and calling a gun a sword and claim it to be swordsmanship ...

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Spike009

Just giving him some encouragement . He is writing a good novel 1. Listens to readers ideas 2. Keeps it interesting 3. Epic fights 4. Op mc. Like I just realized when writing a comment he is too OP at this point.

3yr
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Yami_Sensei_25

Nice one author-sama. Man, I hope you don't dropped this, cause' I love the story. Pls update more. 😁😁😁😂😂😂😍😍😍🥳🥳🥳 Also I recommend Fate or Dxd for the next world

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Daoist571053

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Riyanda_Knehan

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Daoist571053

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Riyanda_Knehan

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Riyanda_Knehan

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Retro_

I don't give many harsh ratings but I will give to this book. Mc is what u will call a young master type mc who likes to be toxic and loves collecting girls... He is luffy but with Madara's body, Author could have just made him an Oc but no he soes not eant to create his own plot so makes him luffy. This in other words is a typical fan-fic of this site which is not worth reading in my opinion.

3yr
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Shaska

I feel that many times the ones that give 5 stars are multi-accounts or bots... ...........................................................................

3yr
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Daoist571053

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Riyanda_Knehan

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Daoist816290

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