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Bittersweet Life

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นักเขียน: ElJaneDM

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SHE

Who had fair and glowing skin... Thick, long, and shiny black wavy hair... A pair of aqua-colored, sparkling eyes. And the one who'd been loved by elders, admired by children, and the pride of the family.

SHE is my sister...

My sister, who had everything that I don't, who got all that I want and received all that I've longed for.

I hate her, but I want to be like her.

Despite being a boy, I strived to be an equal to her. I've grown my hair and taken good care of my skin. I achieved the perfect replica of her.

But just being only a copycat has never been enough.
I lived as a living picture of her image and became the scenery of my family who misses her. I'm still not equal.

Then one day, no one saw it coming...

A circumstance occurred that twisted the cycle of our world which I did not expect would change everything that we used to and opened the door to the next chapter of my bittersweet life.

The circumstance that crossed my path to the girl I never thought would play a huge part in my life...

That one girl who spoiled me with attention and filled my empty existence with genuine affection.

But... In just a blink of an eye, death took her from me.

Her sudden death caused dubiety to all of us...

Suicidal? No... Someone surely murdered her...


But... Our only question is...
.
.
.
Who?


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    Junever_Daylo

    What an exciting chapters! It is so intense. I really love it! This story is worthwhile.. I hope you keep updating it and don't lose the spice of every chapters.. Goodluck..

    3yr
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    Dankie123

    cool beans dude...............👋🤚🖐✋🖖👌👌🤌🤏✌🤞🤟🤘🤙👉👈👆👉☝👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏻👍🏻👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

    3yr
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    Braiden_Hawkins_5082

    It amazing im not kidding about it i’m normally not a big fan of these types of books but this book is perfect all I needs now is the rest of The chapter of the book

    3yr
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    JJ_Prakoso

    Here is my thought about this novel based on what I have read so far, Character: I do really like the characters due to they have different personalities from one another. Tristan and Trish as a character are very decent, especially they are distinct with another when comes to reacting on the situation. Another thing I like is the author creates a dialogue as if they are talking like a real human being on the character interaction and I appreciate that effort. World-Building: So far the world-building is quite fine for now or I can say it's alright. But, I believe the author can further more the world-building within the story or even the surroundings. Writing: Even though the writing is pretty smooth and can feel the flow, but there are also minor flaws. Such flaws are grammar placement and it's pretty small and easy to be fixed. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel and I would love to see more chapters. Thank you and keep up the good work!!

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    Mel_Aniv

    The author has a great knack for details and narration. A big plus too at the plot and the character dialogues and interactions. The characters were very realistic and act life-like. This got potential I must say and the author will improve more in the future. I am not the best reviewer but I tried to point out things that may help the author. And I hope that It did help 🙏 You got my support! 👍

    2yr
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    Karan_Mewada

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    Bad_Totodile

    It's actually very complicated and sweet, the story seems real and has a life. The writing is also good and clean, so easy to understand. I hope the author never lose hope in writing and in life. keep on fighting/writing. Gambaree

    3yr
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    Draejon
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    3yr
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    Madyan_wani

    The synopsisis quite intriguing..for one moment i felt it...idk how ..The author depicts the scenario the best way as it si. I love the characters, background and the story development. Hope it continues further..Good luck to author!!! Fighting

    3yr
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    rzasrsna

    This is intriguing and satisfying to read! I got hooked by the chapter one! Pity for trish I hope she will be fine and nothing worse will happen! and I hope tristan will play his part and to not disappoint people around him special his sister!.😸 after all this novel is promising and I coudn't wait to read the other chapters. keep it up and goodluck to your journey as an author.😻

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    callmeotooosan

    Acting like a proxy for his sister and hmmmmmm possible crossdressing (was there any---i dropped a review after reading chapter 2----ah ah I had to find out). Author-nim, the plot incited me to read another chapter, as I'm always a sucker on pretend-identity type of novels, and it didn't disappoint as it was to .my expectations. The occasional grammar mistakes are bearable, not to the point that it would make one unable to read it so it's a plus. All in all, I love your wooooork!! (sorry for shipping Tristan and Whif----)

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    3yr
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    _lixiethy

    I read the chapter 1 before dropping a review but... I wonder what will happen to Tristan now that he had to be a proxy and act like her twin sister. This is interesting! I never knew the first chapter will make me read all of if up to the recent. Thank you for your hard work, Author!

    3yr
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    caichii

    reading the synopsis, I already knew that the plot would be something really heart touching. this story could relate to many people out there, teens alike who would do anything just to be appreciated. I myself is one. overall, this is an amazing book. beautifully written too! I love your writing style. keep up the good job!

    3yr
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    ElJaneDM

    Hey, Good day readers. I am the author of this novel. I used the review section to announce this, I don't know if this is appropriate. I just want to apologize for some messed up and rambled chapters that are kinda confusing. I am going to have a massive edit of this novel starting in December. I hope you will give me some time to make this a better one. Thank you 😇

    2yr
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    supporthero

    Here is my honest review: WQ: 4/5 Reason: The most obvious reason here is the shifting tenses that most authors have problems dealing with. I mean, I know it is hard to keep the tenses in uniform without making the novel sounds really awkward. Next thing is the ellipses. Chill with the ellipses, dear author. I think in every sentence that you drop there is like an ellipsis. But other than that, there is nothing more. SoU: 4/5 Reason: Still waiting for the next update, ngl. SD: 4/5 Reason: Great story development. But I need more squeeze and a little of background for the characters. CD: 4/5 Reason: I love the characters. But I think they need a clearer image of what they look like or what they are in the novel. Some characters were getting out of their own role. WB: 5/5 It was an outstanding book. Good world background and yeah, that thing do happens sometimes. Overall: 4.2/5 Reason: I have not much to say for this novel. The author clearly knows what she is doing other than the problem with the shifting tenses and the usage of the ellipsis.

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    ElJaneDM

    Hiii Everyoneeee! I am the author of this novel and of course, I am supporting my own work! I will do my really best to update this as frequently as I can despite my busyness... So please, bear with me... Hopefully, you'll support my piece and be part of my MC's journey till the end! Thank you so much! Love you all😍

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    Chapter 236: 'E: Change 2' 1 years ago

    จำนวน 1

    1. 1
      ONE 3 years ago
    2. 2
      'The Start!!' 3 years ago
    3. 3
      'Actually... Tristan has...' 3 years ago
    4. 4
      'Please... Let me do this...' 3 years ago
    5. 5
      'SPECIAL CHAPTER' 3 years ago
    6. 6
      'Just a Girl stuff' 3 years ago
    7. 7
      'First Test?' 3 years ago
    8. 8
      'Meeting Summer' 3 years ago
    9. 9
      'Stone of Courage' 3 years ago
    10. 10
      "It's alright Tristan.." 3 years ago
    11. 11
      'Gale Sebastian' 3 years ago
    12. 12
      'S-She noticed. What should I do?' 3 years ago
    13. 13
      'Falsification' 3 years ago
    14. 14
      'My sister and who?' 3 years ago
    15. 15
      'Happy Birthday!' 3 years ago
    16. 16
      'Why am I smiling?' 3 years ago
    17. 17
      '22nd!' 3 years ago
    18. 18
      'Molested?' 3 years ago
    19. 19
      'Accusations' 3 years ago
    20. 20
      'Busted' 3 years ago
    21. 21
      'Payback!' 3 years ago
    22. 22
      'Warmth and coldness.' 3 years ago
    23. 23
      'Painful Truth' 3 years ago
    24. 24
      'She's everywhere!' 3 years ago
    25. 25
      'Angel Figurine' 3 years ago
    26. 26
      Am I really swinging this way? 3 years ago
    27. 27
      Two Options 3 years ago
    28. 28
      She got worse 3 years ago
    29. 29
      Mysterious Room 3 years ago
    30. 30
      "I... I like you" 3 years ago
    31. 31
      Torn 3 years ago
    32. 32
      'When did you become my mother?' 3 years ago
    33. 33
      'S-She nearly killed the man' 3 years ago
    34. 34
      'Yeah... I should wait' 2 years ago
    35. 35
      'Where my passion lies' 2 years ago
    36. 36
      Like A Captured Birds. 2 years ago
    37. 37
      Apologize 2 years ago
    38. 38
      'I'll meet her' 2 years ago
    39. 39
      'Favor' 2 years ago
    40. 40
      'Happy and Satisfied' 2 years ago
    41. 41
      'You make me fall in love with you even more' 2 years ago
    42. 42
      'I delivered him well to hell' 2 years ago
    43. 43
      'We need to talk' 2 years ago
    44. 44
      'We need to talk' |2| 2 years ago
    45. 45
      'No. Coming here wasn't a mistake. Yes. Definitely not!' 2 years ago
    46. 46
      White Tulips 2 years ago
    47. 47
      White Tulips 2 2 years ago
    48. 48
      'I just can't afford to see the past repeat itself' 2 years ago
    49. 49
      'Traitor' 2 years ago
    50. 50
      'I found you, bitch' 2 years ago
    51. 51
      Heart Lockets 2 years ago
    52. 52
      Why? 2 years ago
    53. 53
      'I will never accept this!' 2 years ago
    54. 54
      'Melissa' 2 years ago
    55. 55
      'The Voice' 2 years ago
    56. 56
      'She's gone' 2 years ago
    57. 57
      'Grief' 2 years ago
    58. 58
      Grief |2| 2 years ago
    59. 59
      'Vigil' 2 years ago
    60. 60
      'Tired' 2 years ago
    61. 61
      'The Note' 2 years ago
    62. 62
      'Weak Evidence' 2 years ago
    63. 63
      'The calls' 2 years ago
    64. 64
      'The calls' |2| 2 years ago
    65. 65
      'Belligerent' 2 years ago
    66. 66
      'Suspicious' 2 years ago
    67. 67
      'Top of the Lamppost' 2 years ago
    68. 68
      'Footage' 2 years ago
    69. 69
      'Hoodies' 2 years ago
    70. 70
      'Incomprehensible' 2 years ago
    71. 71
      'Locate: Part 1' 2 years ago
    72. 72
      'Locate: Part 2' 2 years ago
    73. 73
      'Clear Motive' 2 years ago
    74. 74
      'Fridge Magnet' 2 years ago
    75. 75
      'Video' 2 years ago
    76. 76
      'Nightmare' 2 years ago
    77. 77
      'Symbol of Apology' 2 years ago
    78. 78
      'Not Yet' 2 years ago
    79. 79
      'Selfishness?' 2 years ago
    80. 80
      'I am really glad' 2 years ago
    81. 81
      'Given Hoodie' 2 years ago
    82. 82
      'Interview' Part: 1 2 years ago
    83. 83
      'Interview' Part: 2 2 years ago
    84. 84
      'I refuse to take the interview' 2 years ago
    85. 85
      'Torn Picture' 2 years ago
    86. 86
      'Interview Part: 3' 2 years ago
    87. 87
      'Distrust' 2 years ago
    88. 88
      'Determined' 2 years ago
    89. 89
      'Strange Cat' 2 years ago
    90. 90
      'Track down' 2 years ago
    91. 91
      'Impureness' 2 years ago
    92. 92
      'Cuff Bracelet' 2 years ago
    93. 93
      'Prime Suspect' 2 years ago
    94. 94
      'Watched' 2 years ago
    95. 95
      'Touched a Sore Spot' 2 years ago
    96. 96
      'Touched a Sore Spot: 2' 2 years ago
    97. 97
      "It was Summer's father, right?" 2 years ago
    98. 98
      'Choke Mark' 2 years ago
    99. 99
      'I Got You' 2 years ago
    100. 100
      'Good news?' 2 years ago
    101. 101
      'Rely On Me' 2 years ago
    102. 102
      'Questioning.' 2 years ago
    103. 103
      'Dangerous Tactic' 2 years ago
    104. 104
      'We are a family' 2 years ago
    105. 105
      'Lucas' 2 years ago
    106. 106
      'Similar' 2 years ago
    107. 107
      'Fix' 2 years ago
    108. 108
      'Confessor' 2 years ago
    109. 109
      'Lily' 2 years ago
    110. 110
      'Arrested' 2 years ago
    111. 111
      'Arrested: 2' 2 years ago
    112. 112
      'Not done with you yet.' 2 years ago
    113. 113
      'Sign' 2 years ago
    114. 114
      'Own Plan' 2 years ago
    115. 115
      'Photos' 2 years ago
    116. 116
      'Photos: 2' 2 years ago
    117. 117
      'Photos: 3' 2 years ago
    118. 118
      'Hitman' 2 years ago
    119. 119
      'Hitman: 2' 2 years ago
    120. 120
      'He seemed changed?' 2 years ago
    121. 121
      'Harry and Tanya' 2 years ago
    122. 122
      'Harry and Tanya: 2' 2 years ago
    123. 123
      'They both committed suicide' 2 years ago
    124. 124
      'Suicide Pill' 2 years ago
    125. 125
      'Confession' 2 years ago
    126. 126
      'Unrequited' 2 years ago
    127. 127
      'Unrequited: 2' 2 years ago
    128. 128
      'Brown Envelope' 2 years ago
    129. 129
      'No Detour' 2 years ago
    130. 130
      'Thrown off the Cliff' 2 years ago
    131. 131
      'Thrown off the Cliff: 2' 2 years ago
    132. 132
      'Blood and Flesh' 2 years ago
    133. 133
      'Crucial Statement' 2 years ago
    134. 134
      'Bracelet's Owner' 2 years ago
    135. 135
      'Bracelet's Owner: 2' 2 years ago
    136. 136
      'Bracelet's Owner: 3' 2 years ago
    137. 137
      'See you in hell, Reign' 2 years ago
    138. 138
      'See you in hell, Reign: 2' 2 years ago
    139. 139
      'Love Karma' 2 years ago
    140. 140
      'Huge Help' 2 years ago
    141. 141
      'The Missing Diary' 2 years ago
    142. 142
      'Box of Evidence' 2 years ago
    143. 143
      'Box of Evidence: 2' 2 years ago
    144. 144
      'Gale's Phone' 2 years ago
    145. 145
      'Gale's Phone: 2' 2 years ago
    146. 146
      'Help Me Out' 2 years ago
    147. 147
      'Reign' 2 years ago
    148. 148
      'Reign: 2' 2 years ago
    149. 149
      'Reign: 3' 2 years ago
    150. 150
      'Damnation' 2 years ago
    151. 151
      'Damnation: 2' 2 years ago
    152. 152
      'The Crime: Part 1' 2 years ago
    153. 153
      'The Crime: Part 2' 2 years ago
    154. 154
      'The Crime: Part 3' 2 years ago
    155. 155
      'The Crime: Part 4' 2 years ago
    156. 156
      'The Crime: Part 5' 2 years ago
    157. 157
      'The Crime: Part 6' 2 years ago
    158. 158
      'The Last Crime' 2 years ago
    159. 159
      'Memory of You' 2 years ago
    160. 160
      'Unexplainable' 2 years ago
    161. 161
      'Nostalgia' 2 years ago
    162. 162
      'Nostalgia: 2' 2 years ago
    163. 163
      'Nostalgia: 3' 2 years ago
    164. 164
      'Last Will' 2 years ago
    165. 165
      'I Hate My Blood' 2 years ago
    166. 166
      'False Memory' 2 years ago
    167. 167
      'False Memory: 2' 2 years ago
    168. 168
      'False Memory: 3' 2 years ago
    169. 169
      'Did you know my father?' 2 years ago
    170. 170
      'Rot in Jail' 2 years ago
    171. 171
      'Anew' 2 years ago
    172. 172
      'Hear me out' 2 years ago
    173. 173
      'Insane' 2 years ago
    174. 174
      'Insane: 2' 2 years ago
    175. 175
      'Insane: 3' 2 years ago
    176. 176
      'Edit' 2 years ago
    177. 177
      'Edit: 2' 2 years ago
    178. 178
      'Edit: 3' 2 years ago
    179. 179
      'Session' 2 years ago
    180. 180
      'Edit: Session 2' 2 years ago
    181. 181
      'Edit: Family Bonding' 2 years ago
    182. 182
      'Edit: Dare and Confession' 2 years ago
    183. 183
      'E: Mysterious' 2 years ago
    184. 184
      'E: Mysterious 2' 2 years ago
    185. 185
      'E: Mysterious 3' 2 years ago
    186. 186
      'E: Hidden Crime' 2 years ago
    187. 187
      'E: Desire' 2 years ago
    188. 188
      'E: Finding' 2 years ago
    189. 189
      'E: No Remorse' 2 years ago
    190. 190
      'E: Finally' 2 years ago
    191. 191
      'E: Finally 2' 2 years ago
    192. 192
      'E: Miserable' 2 years ago
    193. 193
      'E: Put In The Right Place' 2 years ago
    194. 194
      'E: Leaving' 2 years ago
    195. 195
      'E: Lost her Sanity' 2 years ago
    196. 196
      'E: Aden' 2 years ago
    197. 197
      "E: Aden 2" 2 years ago
    198. 198
      'E: Found Treasure' 2 years ago
    199. 199
      'E: Found Treasure 2' 2 years ago
    200. 200
      'E: Her Back Story' 2 years ago
    201. 201
      'E: Her Backstory 2' 2 years ago
    202. 202
      'E: Her backstory 3' 2 years ago
    203. 203
      'E: Completely Crazy' 2 years ago
    204. 204
      'E: Comepletely Crazy 2' 2 years ago
    205. 205
      'E: Court Room' 2 years ago
    206. 206
      'E: Court Room 2' 2 years ago
    207. 207
      'E: Ghost' 2 years ago
    208. 208
      'E: Ghost 2' 2 years ago
    209. 209
      'E: Ghost 3' 2 years ago
    210. 210
      'E: Doubt' 2 years ago
    211. 211
      'E: Doubt 2' 2 years ago
    212. 212
      'E: Doubt 3' 2 years ago
    213. 213
      'E: Observing' 2 years ago
    214. 214
      'E: Revealed' 2 years ago
    215. 215
      'E: Attacked' 2 years ago
    216. 216
      'E: Attacked 2' 2 years ago
    217. 217
      'E: Plan' 2 years ago
    218. 218
      'E: Plan 2' 2 years ago
    219. 219
      'E: Plan 3' 2 years ago
    220. 220
      'E: Plan 4' 2 years ago
    221. 221
      'E: Plan 5' 2 years ago
    222. 222
      'E: Escape' 2 years ago
    223. 223
      'E: Escape 2' 2 years ago
    224. 224
      'E: Pitiful' 1 years ago
    225. 225
      'E: Voices' 1 years ago
    226. 226
      'Voices 2' 1 years ago
    227. 227
      'E: Confusion' 1 years ago
    228. 228
      'E: Observe' 1 years ago
    229. 229
      'E: Hung' 1 years ago
    230. 230
      'E: Hung 2' 1 years ago
    231. 231
      'E: Hung 3' 1 years ago
    232. 232
      'E: Happy?' 1 years ago
    233. 233
      'E: Come back' 1 years ago
    234. 234
      'E: Come Back 2' 1 years ago
    235. 235
      'E: Change' 1 years ago
    236. 236
      'E: Change 2' 1 years ago

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