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Till the Village chapter(23).Meh. For a FanFic(FF) it is normal. The writing is okayish, the characters are semi-shota- protag-heros and the protagonist becomes a Dragon/Dovahkiin(Iamconfused). I know 16ish years he spent on the world with the Yggdrasil GAME and forgot some stuff(98%apparently) plus he could have his friend help him learn THE DRAGON LANGUAGE FROM SKYRIM BUT NOO, MF DIDN'T LEARN EVEN ALL SPELS AND WORDS OF POWER apparently. There is more but I can't remember. So to the Author, good luck and if you see this maybe take ideas or not, it is your fic.
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Pretty good job by the author, overall I give it 4*. The biggest issues I had with the story were the multiple main characters (which is fixed in the rewrite since ONLY the MC goes to the New World now) and the Story Development. Since the multiple characters deal was fixed, the largest issue now is just the story development. Overall, the development seems...shallow I guess. The MC doesn't struggle really for anything and basically just skips right to being the most powerful player in YGGDRASIL and stays that way throughout the story with no real challenges or changes at all. I don't mind OP characters but typically there is a buildup or something and the characters are working towards a goal. Here, the MC has (seemingly) no goal whatsoever other than going to the New World with his friends, which ends up not happening so basically nothing happens. On top of that, only in the last few chapters does the MC finally get his Dragonborn powers that he wished for, which is pretty annoying since many people will be reading this SPECIFICALLY to see the Skyrim additions. Up to the newest chapter as of this review, chapter 25, MC has used exactly 1 Shout and it was just Unrelenting Force to show off in front of the NPC's after arriving to the New World. Overall, the 'Dragonborn' addition to the story is basically irrelevant since it has no impact on the story other than the MC being a Dragonoid race. My recommendations for the story would be to stop following Canon so closely and to add more Dragonborn content (as in, using his shouts or developing shouts or something). Also, just as a side note, I would drop the entire part about the side OC Hinata and her daughter Nemu since they are completely irrelevant to the story and just make the MC seem like a 'Do Gooder' or something. Who tf gives money to some random chick you aren't even trying to date just so they can live happily ever after? Just get rid of it. MC is already borderline TOO good for some people and this unnecessary addition just makes it worse. ... ... ... ... ... ...
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It's a good overlord fan fic. One of the best. That's all I had to say... ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
You need to update ......................,..,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,..........................,..,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,..........................,..,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,....
Is there no lemons? Or he at least going to F*** them not like the Japanese MCs that either cockblocked or who Acts like a blushing vergin?.
The very fact that your writing about “Skyrims” Dovakiin, is more than enough for you to get five stars from me! Also The very idea of this crossover is F*cken awesome. can’t wait to see where this will take me. Ima bout to read rn so I’ll come back later and edit this comment. that way I’ll be giving a much more “solid” review… chiao
Esta buena el ff pero necesita mas actualizaciones, si recuerdo esta novela la leere por que pasa mucho tiempo y olvido la trama y no quiero leerla del comienzo cada vez :( si el autor puede subir mas capitulos seria genial
pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update!!!!!!!!! or I shall kill you in the name of God!
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Good book just slow on updates -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
where is the chapters!?(⊙_⊙)？(⊙_⊙;)(⊙_(⊙_⊙)_⊙)Σ(っ °Д °;)(°ー°〃) (○´･д･)ﾉ┬┴┬┴┤(･_├┬┴┬┴(((φ(◎ロ◎;)φ)))!!!!!!
so um.....what about that mass release? (⊙_⊙)？(⊙_(⊙_⊙)_⊙)Σ(っ °Д °;)っ(。>︿<)_θI NEED MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
I really like the story and look forward for more content, although I approve of writing quality, story development and character design, I can't say the same for update stability?
The story is good, but updates are rare ☹️.........................................................................................................................
i like it pls more .........................................................................................................................
is it non human mc if not im out overlord as goody two shoe human ruins it............................................................................
Till the Village chapter(23).Meh. For a FanFic(FF) it is normal. The writing is okayish, the characters are semi-shota- protag-heros and the protagonist becomes a Dragon/Dovahkiin(Iamconfused). I know 16ish years he spent on the world with the Yggdrasil GAME and forgot some stuff(98%apparently) plus he could have his friend help him learn THE DRAGON LANGUAGE FROM SKYRIM BUT NOO, MF DIDN'T LEARN EVEN ALL SPELS AND WORDS OF POWER apparently. There is more but I can't remember. So to the Author, good luck and if you see this maybe take ideas or not, it is your fic.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Pretty good job by the author, overall I give it 4*. The biggest issues I had with the story were the multiple main characters (which is fixed in the rewrite since ONLY the MC goes to the New World now) and the Story Development. Since the multiple characters deal was fixed, the largest issue now is just the story development. Overall, the development seems...shallow I guess. The MC doesn't struggle really for anything and basically just skips right to being the most powerful player in YGGDRASIL and stays that way throughout the story with no real challenges or changes at all. I don't mind OP characters but typically there is a buildup or something and the characters are working towards a goal. Here, the MC has (seemingly) no goal whatsoever other than going to the New World with his friends, which ends up not happening so basically nothing happens. On top of that, only in the last few chapters does the MC finally get his Dragonborn powers that he wished for, which is pretty annoying since many people will be reading this SPECIFICALLY to see the Skyrim additions. Up to the newest chapter as of this review, chapter 25, MC has used exactly 1 Shout and it was just Unrelenting Force to show off in front of the NPC's after arriving to the New World. Overall, the 'Dragonborn' addition to the story is basically irrelevant since it has no impact on the story other than the MC being a Dragonoid race. My recommendations for the story would be to stop following Canon so closely and to add more Dragonborn content (as in, using his shouts or developing shouts or something). Also, just as a side note, I would drop the entire part about the side OC Hinata and her daughter Nemu since they are completely irrelevant to the story and just make the MC seem like a 'Do Gooder' or something. Who tf gives money to some random chick you aren't even trying to date just so they can live happily ever after? Just get rid of it. MC is already borderline TOO good for some people and this unnecessary addition just makes it worse. ... ... ... ... ... ...
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ It's a good overlord fan fic. One of the best. That's all I had to say... ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
You need to update ......................,..,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,..........................,..,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,..........................,..,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,....
Is there no lemons? Or he at least going to F*** them not like the Japanese MCs that either cockblocked or who Acts like a blushing vergin?.
The very fact that your writing about “Skyrims” Dovakiin, is more than enough for you to get five stars from me! Also The very idea of this crossover is F*cken awesome. can’t wait to see where this will take me. Ima bout to read rn so I’ll come back later and edit this comment. that way I’ll be giving a much more “solid” review… chiao
Esta buena el ff pero necesita mas actualizaciones, si recuerdo esta novela la leere por que pasa mucho tiempo y olvido la trama y no quiero leerla del comienzo cada vez :( si el autor puede subir mas capitulos seria genial
pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update pls update!!!!!!!!! or I shall kill you in the name of God!
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Good book just slow on updates -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
where is the chapters!?(⊙_⊙)？(⊙_⊙;)(⊙_(⊙_⊙)_⊙)Σ(っ °Д °;)(°ー°〃) (○´･д･)ﾉ┬┴┬┴┤(･_├┬┴┬┴(((φ(◎ロ◎;)φ)))!!!!!!
so um.....what about that mass release? (⊙_⊙)？(⊙_(⊙_⊙)_⊙)Σ(っ °Д °;)っ(。>︿<)_θI NEED MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
I really like the story and look forward for more content, although I approve of writing quality, story development and character design, I can't say the same for update stability?
The story is good, but updates are rare ☹️.........................................................................................................................
i like it pls more .........................................................................................................................
is it non human mc if not im out overlord as goody two shoe human ruins it............................................................................
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