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As I continue to read this book it keeps solidifying itself into my favorite books on Webnovel. There is a sort of uniqueness to this novel that I like and I cant wait to see where we go from here.
This is an amazing story , whether it is the story or the characters or just how dark it is sometimes is a pure bliss to read. I wish the author doesn't drop this novel and wish there were more novels like this. Lesssgooooo
Kommers, how far along are you with your editing? I love your novel and would like to read more! Yours truly - a reading enthusiast.
Does anyone know how long the author is going to be editing the novel? I feel like a lifetime has passed already.
I would recommend author of this story attemtp writing this story again after growing up a little bit, cause it really looks like kid writing doctors degree philosophy research after reading one from internet. The mc has no logic in his actions. I would expect some expert style moveset from mc that can play around with police by refueling his bike on high speed and shooting down a copter easily but then he acts like 8 year old moron (kids act more logical than this mc). Out of logic parts is about whom adress his hatred, not understanding the "will", the essence and magic stuff, even blue burger, if his ancestors was from earth and u don't get blue bread from earth's wheat. U could just find tons of out of logic parts in every chapter
Bro did you get kidnapped by a cartel or something? Both of your books did not updated more than 4 months ffs The author seems to dissappeared
Great book thus far, author takes care to go back and edit if needed instead of just authors notes later. Great choice in music references and easy to get into and flow is smooth. Overall a very good read. Looking forward to the rest of the book.
(As of ch 151) Been on Webnovel for years now, I still remember spirit stones, but this story is pretty uniqe and in a good way, it is writen in a way that the parts that are slow don’t really exist there is very good pacing world developmen is great with a bit of a feeling of discovery. I just want more people to read this so more chapters are made. There are some grammar slip ups but overall very good and I would’v given this 5 star character design but I’ve stumbled apon character design I could only imginge.
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It's finally back let's gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Seems like a really cool hidden gem but before I start reading it, I have one single question. 1. What is the character of protagonist? Is he evil or good. If any how much and where does his bottom line lay.
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pls dis is amazing
its good the character is balanced and he doesn't get powers out of no were like other novels so ya 5 star 5555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555
I love the story so far so good ! Both the writing quality , story development and world background are well done and stuctured . i'm hooked already !
It's the story uniqueness for me.. and there is nothing more good than reading a story that leaves an impression So far I've been stuck and there is nothing more I want to say that! UPLOAD A NEW CHAPTER...
I really love the author's writing style. He manages to evoke vivid imagery as well sprinkling in some humor. The story is interesting, and I'm curious to see what happens with Mack. I highly recommend giving the story a read and following along.
Great writing, funny characters, intresting and unique plotpoint. What more could someone want. A great read by far, and easily one of my new favorites.
As I continue to read this book it keeps solidifying itself into my favorite books on Webnovel. There is a sort of uniqueness to this novel that I like and I cant wait to see where we go from here.
This is an amazing story , whether it is the story or the characters or just how dark it is sometimes is a pure bliss to read. I wish the author doesn't drop this novel and wish there were more novels like this. Lesssgooooo
Kommers, how far along are you with your editing? I love your novel and would like to read more! Yours truly - a reading enthusiast.
Does anyone know how long the author is going to be editing the novel? I feel like a lifetime has passed already.
I would recommend author of this story attemtp writing this story again after growing up a little bit, cause it really looks like kid writing doctors degree philosophy research after reading one from internet. The mc has no logic in his actions. I would expect some expert style moveset from mc that can play around with police by refueling his bike on high speed and shooting down a copter easily but then he acts like 8 year old moron (kids act more logical than this mc). Out of logic parts is about whom adress his hatred, not understanding the "will", the essence and magic stuff, even blue burger, if his ancestors was from earth and u don't get blue bread from earth's wheat. U could just find tons of out of logic parts in every chapter
Bro did you get kidnapped by a cartel or something? Both of your books did not updated more than 4 months ffs The author seems to dissappeared
Great book thus far, author takes care to go back and edit if needed instead of just authors notes later. Great choice in music references and easy to get into and flow is smooth. Overall a very good read. Looking forward to the rest of the book.
(As of ch 151) Been on Webnovel for years now, I still remember spirit stones, but this story is pretty uniqe and in a good way, it is writen in a way that the parts that are slow don’t really exist there is very good pacing world developmen is great with a bit of a feeling of discovery. I just want more people to read this so more chapters are made. There are some grammar slip ups but overall very good and I would’v given this 5 star character design but I’ve stumbled apon character design I could only imginge.
Excelente livro irmão[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It's finally back let's gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Seems like a really cool hidden gem but before I start reading it, I have one single question. 1. What is the character of protagonist? Is he evil or good. If any how much and where does his bottom line lay.
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pls dis is amazing
its good the character is balanced and he doesn't get powers out of no were like other novels so ya 5 star 5555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555
I love the story so far so good ! Both the writing quality , story development and world background are well done and stuctured . i'm hooked already !
It's the story uniqueness for me.. and there is nothing more good than reading a story that leaves an impression So far I've been stuck and there is nothing more I want to say that! UPLOAD A NEW CHAPTER...
I really love the author's writing style. He manages to evoke vivid imagery as well sprinkling in some humor. The story is interesting, and I'm curious to see what happens with Mack. I highly recommend giving the story a read and following along.
Great writing, funny characters, intresting and unique plotpoint. What more could someone want. A great read by far, and easily one of my new favorites.