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Good story good characters good background good snusnu good transitions good everything really hope i can read more of this story.[img=faceslap]
good, I'm waiting to see the next episode, practically Gary already has a team to overcome many. How will he fare in battles? 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤞
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The is a great pokemon story that you should read. so far i read up to chapter 13 and im really enjoying it. other than the slow pace of updates (which is fine) i would highly recommend people to give it a try
Hi. I love you story cant wait whats next. Just beg you dont do much romanc it is far more intresting about jorney and battel. Hope for intresting stuff and i like how he trains his pokemon. Thank you for this amazing work, cant wait whats next. ( it will be intresting if he mets some legendarys on jorney )
A very good pokemon fanfic. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Amazing job, please update soon. I love It. Love How your MC work too [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I must say this is one of the most logical and interesting pokemon fic I have read. logical due to the fact they send children when they have matured enough to actually survive and make logical decisions to advance further in their career. and interesting because almost all fics have a orphan mc or a ordinary mc with ordinary background but here mc is gray oak and so he got enough resources to actually have a advantage on others and uses his brain. The author has a good ranking system for potential of pokemon and the pokemo actually train to evolve and it is realistic. the mc wants to no.1 in everything and is giving it all and taking advantage of every little thing he can use. he has a metang with platinum potential and he himself is a psychic. and grammer is also good and mc is mature than most mc I have seen pokemon and as a bonus he does not stick to ash and does not help or sympathize with him. This is one of best pokemon fics I have ever read and it has potential to be best. well done my dear author keep this up and this fic will wil lie in top in no time.
One of the best pokemon fanfic i read in a long time , hope there keep coming more chapters,...... ..... .... .. ........... .. . . ....
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This story has a lot of potential. It is a really intriguing and enjoyable read. I like the mc personality so far and also the more realistic pokemon world you are making. Can’t wait for the start of the journey. Will he travel alone? Thanks for sharing this story. 🤘
A very good and interesting fanfic.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
10 chapters in and waiting for more, too few good pokemon fanfics on here this one could turn out pretty good................. ... ......... .
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Till now good ......waiting for a timeskip till he goes on a journey...............👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥
This fanfic is amazing. I swear there are not many fanfics as good as this one. The only thing that's lacking is the amount of chapters. I'm waiting for more and looking forward to the direction you want to take this story as a whole. :)
One of the best fanfic I have ever read please continue it also can you add some features from other games or anime. Continue this👍🏻 also [img=recommend] There should be pokemon rom hack of this web novel
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Es pokemon asi que toma tus 5 estrellas 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I like this novel. Please always update it I will always give you the stone. Keep up the good work! God bless you!!! Stay Safe Guys Don't Go Out Now A Days
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Good story good characters good background good snusnu good transitions good everything really hope i can read more of this story.[img=faceslap]
good, I'm waiting to see the next episode, practically Gary already has a team to overcome many. How will he fare in battles? 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤞
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The is a great pokemon story that you should read. so far i read up to chapter 13 and im really enjoying it. other than the slow pace of updates (which is fine) i would highly recommend people to give it a try
Hi. I love you story cant wait whats next. Just beg you dont do much romanc it is far more intresting about jorney and battel. Hope for intresting stuff and i like how he trains his pokemon. Thank you for this amazing work, cant wait whats next. ( it will be intresting if he mets some legendarys on jorney )
A very good pokemon fanfic. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Amazing job, please update soon. I love It. Love How your MC work too [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I must say this is one of the most logical and interesting pokemon fic I have read. logical due to the fact they send children when they have matured enough to actually survive and make logical decisions to advance further in their career. and interesting because almost all fics have a orphan mc or a ordinary mc with ordinary background but here mc is gray oak and so he got enough resources to actually have a advantage on others and uses his brain. The author has a good ranking system for potential of pokemon and the pokemo actually train to evolve and it is realistic. the mc wants to no.1 in everything and is giving it all and taking advantage of every little thing he can use. he has a metang with platinum potential and he himself is a psychic. and grammer is also good and mc is mature than most mc I have seen pokemon and as a bonus he does not stick to ash and does not help or sympathize with him. This is one of best pokemon fics I have ever read and it has potential to be best. well done my dear author keep this up and this fic will wil lie in top in no time.
One of the best pokemon fanfic i read in a long time , hope there keep coming more chapters,...... ..... .... .. ........... .. . . ....
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This story has a lot of potential. It is a really intriguing and enjoyable read. I like the mc personality so far and also the more realistic pokemon world you are making. Can’t wait for the start of the journey. Will he travel alone? Thanks for sharing this story. 🤘
A very good and interesting fanfic.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
10 chapters in and waiting for more, too few good pokemon fanfics on here this one could turn out pretty good................. ... ......... .
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Till now good ......waiting for a timeskip till he goes on a journey...............👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥
This fanfic is amazing. I swear there are not many fanfics as good as this one. The only thing that's lacking is the amount of chapters. I'm waiting for more and looking forward to the direction you want to take this story as a whole. :)
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