A Cliché Multiverse Story (Naruto start)(Dropped)

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Bangbangbangboom

the story was good at the beginning 13 chapters and the talk of multiverse was fine but your tendency for completely random changes for no real reason or trying to make a FICTION story realistic at chapter 14 complelty random no reason after been together for 3 YEARS he decides that temari is out and kaguya is in saying in RL most people don't end up with the first girl this completly breaks alot of sense and honestly the way it was done ruined this for me as their wasn't a valid reason for the break up besides completly throwing all realistic out the window

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Bibbylon

Very interesting fanfic. Hope the character isn’t actually. Love the original kekkei genkai!! Hope the MC get with Temari please, she’s actually very underrated and underdeveloped character. Keep up to amazing work!!

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GGBETTER08

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Gd_Sys

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CookieFighter

It’s a good story, sometimes some elements are false if we follow the original world but it’s more like a slight AU than cannon. keep it up

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HankTheFisherMan

Is there gonna be a love interest???????????? ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

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FrEeZe

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Sakkaku_no_mori

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MasterOfDeath7777

I love it!!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍Pls keep it up...Author_san👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Ezzaldien_s

More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More

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CarrolStark

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BasamDragon

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