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UPDATE DECEMBER 2, 2021: I have written a summary for Chapters 1 - 37. It's very short and should spare you from the bad chapters I had written in the past. I know I should've done this sooner, but I really hate rewriting. It's very mentally taxing to that point that I get lazy. Before 2022, I aim to finish rewriting all of those chapters for a brand new start for my novel, and I hope all of you gain a maid fetish after reading my novel. Thank you! Spread maid love to the world!!
One of the most unlikable MC's you will ever meet. The mc is a coward, stupid and a pervert. Yuck . Then the MC will have a change in personality ( somewhat) . But the beginning of the the novel was so badly written that I decided not to continue with the novel. Sorry
By now I've read 400 chapters.I wanna clarify that I'm not bad mouthing anything. But my frustrations will be evident.I'm not gonna mention <50 chapters since its's common sense that they are rushed and full of confusion.I think the Author should first and foremost set a clear path for the story As of chapter 400 it seems like he's writing things as he thinks of them. Without care for plot. Just moving forward in order to add another 18 scene.We all love sex scenes. Descriptions and such. The word here is MODERATION. I know he's got to have a harem of maids. But since that is you main focus than at least make story with it. The most i saw was him being afraid of one of them having had other men before and even that concluded with a single chapter.World building and power structure Please think more on what can and cannot happen. Stop changing things so much. Looks like you read a comment than change everything.He learned a spell. Than lightning was everything he could do. U change to the possibility of having more. Than change to he's already to advanced and finally changed again to him having fire.The Power scale?looks like the only difference is how much mana one the have in his body Whats triggers me the most?Character are too stupid.The MC isn't a prodigy. He is just slightly smarter than everyone else.I mean. He decided to become king.Just because Than to help people support him he goes to cities telling the city lord"Hey. I'm doing a coup. be my supporter and the 3rd princes supports me"and the City lord answers"Well since the princes is with you I'm going to trust you"i mean.... WHAT???How does that even make sense?U are losing a lot of possible plots. Full of doubt and betrayal.Ps. Im posting from my phone. So its hard to write long text. I'll edit and add on later
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This is an amazing novel especially world build up and magical workings of world. I also enjoyed various hot scenes of mc and heroines, our maids 🥰 If I have to really nitpick then it would be that this novel has a bit too many ero scenes. Like reducing their quantity and adding more storyline would have been perfect 😔 Won't you continue this novel and reach finishing line? Because I feel we are quite close to end of journey and its very saddening to see incomplete masterpieces 😔😿
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Within 100 chapters the story went from mediocre to absolutely stupid. Massive plot holes, literally the entire plot just drops off a cliff for no reason.
After reading for 10+ chapter, I simply lost interest. The MC is so stupid and cowardly and the first heroine (maybe?), Aleshia is simply dislikeble. It doesn't matter if her sister is sick and in need of money, she will kill anyone for money. The best I could feel toward her is dislike, no way I felt sympathy for her, just like she doesn't care about her victim. I tried to read the summary for chapters 1-37, but still not found any interest.
If I was the author I woulda stopped writing. All the reviews but like 2 are how bad it is 😭 honestly that just tells me I shouldnt read it and indeed I wont. Gg on you for still writing but I suggest make ur mc better next time u make a novel
I like the concept of this novel but... When I ever think the Beta Mc make me want to throw up.................................................................
it would be a better if mc wasn't a beta I read 200+ chapters mc is still beta and idiot
The start was bad, but then it got better when he was getting stronger. The children were the clincher for me that MC and Author don't seem to think much about their actions.. First MC gets a bunch of them Pregnant, they sail across the ocean to a new continent. MC then ends up doing something and cultivating for a Year straight... Wakes up, and finds the girls have bought an Inn and made it profitable. He decides to do a stupid competition, then goes back to the main continent. What was the point of going over there if he only spends 2 - 3 months on the continent and comes back. Now back home, he and the Moms decide to raise the Children to age 5 (FIVE) to when they start developing their relationships and memories yet MC and MOMS say ok time to ditch the kids to run the original Country.. At AGE 5.. come on. I dropped it after that chapter.
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One of the most frustrating read. Nonexistent character development for so many chapters then a sudden change. if you gonna do it like that do it in as few chapters as possible. Character development that takes many chapters must show gradual change. not an abrupt one.
fk this novel............... the mc should have left aliesha even if he didn't kill her or punished her.. whole mood is ruined.. ufycigivibobbibiviviviv
Nice novel and I'm proud that I was able to endure MC's stupidity in the first 40chaps which make me happy that I didn't miss this good novel😁
Right, the first 10+ Chapters were so STUPID, CRINGE, FORCED, and LAME. The Guards' behaviour & reaction, the girl action to the MC, the old healer behaviour, the conflict, everything is so forced and stupid. THE MC haven't shown up yet after the first chapter. it gets better. But that beginning is too horrible. i'm the 'first 10 Chapters guy', and those chapters are 3 star almost 2.
I really love this book. it has a well written story, it has fun characters, it has an intriguing world building, it has Erotika moments, and finally it is just perfect.
I read when only 200chp were here and took a beake. I noticed the book was not updated for almost a month. I am going to finish the missing chaps but I need to know isthe author dropping or just on hiatus?
I like this story but the author has a 40 chapter paywall when he at most provides 16 chapters a month. this means that if you are essentially paying for 40 chapters and only getting 16 after the first month. save your money and go with an author that can at least meet their privilege wall with the number of uploads they make a month or you will just be throwing your money away after the first month!
What can I say? This novel is just too disgusting. I've read till the chap 100. Don't know how I was able to endure so far. The author degrades a girl because she isn't pure. It seems like he is a 40ty y.o. virgin and doesn't know what a true relationship means. Futhermore plot is too chaotic. Mc is going to be a merchant, then mage, transmigrator and so on. Quality is bad too. I'm too lazy to explain all flaws of this novel. Drop
So far, after reading 300+ chapters, I give my take. The characters are good, the worldbuilding is good, and the lovemaking scenes can be pretty hot. The only faults I can find are Lawrend being kind of a dolt at times and Humility's... uh... quirks.
I liked it a lot, being a strong supporter of the maids but unfortunately it's over for me, what can I say I hate the yuri in the harem, especially here I feel like the mc is getting ntr by his maid, in short so disappointing it should at least be said in the summary, I don't mind it's a threesome but here bruhh anyway it's chap 150 for info 😤
Don't do it, Save yourself .................................................................................................................
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it is not bad. thiis got my attention . i didnt read all of them. i skipped many times. fcjhvjctxggcjkckk hv jtxhhgcghckghcghchgckhkvjjj (just to make 140 words dont mind)
As you start reading , you can tell the writing quality is quite high , the author does indeed have talent. Normally I would get excited whenever I encounter this level of writing because this tells me the author is capable to write at least a decent story and somewhat compelling characters. Once you have those elements ..other flaws can be more or less ignored. Well ...with all I said above this should have been at the minimum an ok novel for me to read ....and yet...I stopped at ch 22. Why? Due to the author's choice of MC. Within the first few chapters we have the interactions between the MC and the "first maid". In every interaction between them the MC is getting (to put it mildly) bullied , humiliated and extorted and yet he is getting more and more excited about her. This tells you everything you need to know about the MC. In short , the author presents the MC as being a generic , "lame"/ "beta"/ "doormat", taken straight from any mediocre JP novel with an added twist of the "step on me" fetish.
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don't like story begineeing section. Too much coward type mc. come on man you could at least developed the scenrio. mc lacking some gut man.
Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter latar belakang dunia Tarif Keseluruhan 5.0 Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter
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I practice the Dao of Shamelessness! You'll see how cultured I really am when you read this novel. Why don't you tip maids too? Maids are special, you know? They clean your clothes, cook dishes, and especially do night services! Crazy, right!?
UPDATE DECEMBER 2, 2021: I have written a summary for Chapters 1 - 37. It's very short and should spare you from the bad chapters I had written in the past. I know I should've done this sooner, but I really hate rewriting. It's very mentally taxing to that point that I get lazy. Before 2022, I aim to finish rewriting all of those chapters for a brand new start for my novel, and I hope all of you gain a maid fetish after reading my novel. Thank you! Spread maid love to the world!!
One of the most unlikable MC's you will ever meet. The mc is a coward, stupid and a pervert. Yuck . Then the MC will have a change in personality ( somewhat) . But the beginning of the the novel was so badly written that I decided not to continue with the novel. Sorry
By now I've read 400 chapters.I wanna clarify that I'm not bad mouthing anything. But my frustrations will be evident.I'm not gonna mention <50 chapters since its's common sense that they are rushed and full of confusion.I think the Author should first and foremost set a clear path for the story As of chapter 400 it seems like he's writing things as he thinks of them. Without care for plot. Just moving forward in order to add another 18 scene.We all love sex scenes. Descriptions and such. The word here is MODERATION. I know he's got to have a harem of maids. But since that is you main focus than at least make story with it. The most i saw was him being afraid of one of them having had other men before and even that concluded with a single chapter.World building and power structure Please think more on what can and cannot happen. Stop changing things so much. Looks like you read a comment than change everything.He learned a spell. Than lightning was everything he could do. U change to the possibility of having more. Than change to he's already to advanced and finally changed again to him having fire.The Power scale?looks like the only difference is how much mana one the have in his body Whats triggers me the most?Character are too stupid.The MC isn't a prodigy. He is just slightly smarter than everyone else.I mean. He decided to become king.Just because Than to help people support him he goes to cities telling the city lord"Hey. I'm doing a coup. be my supporter and the 3rd princes supports me"and the City lord answers"Well since the princes is with you I'm going to trust you"i mean.... WHAT???How does that even make sense?U are losing a lot of possible plots. Full of doubt and betrayal.Ps. Im posting from my phone. So its hard to write long text. I'll edit and add on later
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This is an amazing novel especially world build up and magical workings of world. I also enjoyed various hot scenes of mc and heroines, our maids 🥰 If I have to really nitpick then it would be that this novel has a bit too many ero scenes. Like reducing their quantity and adding more storyline would have been perfect 😔 Won't you continue this novel and reach finishing line? Because I feel we are quite close to end of journey and its very saddening to see incomplete masterpieces 😔😿
Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter rrrrrrTambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter
Within 100 chapters the story went from mediocre to absolutely stupid. Massive plot holes, literally the entire plot just drops off a cliff for no reason.
After reading for 10+ chapter, I simply lost interest. The MC is so stupid and cowardly and the first heroine (maybe?), Aleshia is simply dislikeble. It doesn't matter if her sister is sick and in need of money, she will kill anyone for money. The best I could feel toward her is dislike, no way I felt sympathy for her, just like she doesn't care about her victim. I tried to read the summary for chapters 1-37, but still not found any interest.
If I was the author I woulda stopped writing. All the reviews but like 2 are how bad it is 😭 honestly that just tells me I shouldnt read it and indeed I wont. Gg on you for still writing but I suggest make ur mc better next time u make a novel
I like the concept of this novel but... When I ever think the Beta Mc make me want to throw up.................................................................
it would be a better if mc wasn't a beta I read 200+ chapters mc is still beta and idiot
The start was bad, but then it got better when he was getting stronger. The children were the clincher for me that MC and Author don't seem to think much about their actions.. First MC gets a bunch of them Pregnant, they sail across the ocean to a new continent. MC then ends up doing something and cultivating for a Year straight... Wakes up, and finds the girls have bought an Inn and made it profitable. He decides to do a stupid competition, then goes back to the main continent. What was the point of going over there if he only spends 2 - 3 months on the continent and comes back. Now back home, he and the Moms decide to raise the Children to age 5 (FIVE) to when they start developing their relationships and memories yet MC and MOMS say ok time to ditch the kids to run the original Country.. At AGE 5.. come on. I dropped it after that chapter.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ One of the most frustrating read. Nonexistent character development for so many chapters then a sudden change. if you gonna do it like that do it in as few chapters as possible. Character development that takes many chapters must show gradual change. not an abrupt one.
fk this novel............... the mc should have left aliesha even if he didn't kill her or punished her.. whole mood is ruined.. ufycigivibobbibiviviviv
Nice novel and I'm proud that I was able to endure MC's stupidity in the first 40chaps which make me happy that I didn't miss this good novel😁
Right, the first 10+ Chapters were so STUPID, CRINGE, FORCED, and LAME. The Guards' behaviour & reaction, the girl action to the MC, the old healer behaviour, the conflict, everything is so forced and stupid. THE MC haven't shown up yet after the first chapter. it gets better. But that beginning is too horrible. i'm the 'first 10 Chapters guy', and those chapters are 3 star almost 2.
I really love this book. it has a well written story, it has fun characters, it has an intriguing world building, it has Erotika moments, and finally it is just perfect.
I read when only 200chp were here and took a beake. I noticed the book was not updated for almost a month. I am going to finish the missing chaps but I need to know isthe author dropping or just on hiatus?
I like this story but the author has a 40 chapter paywall when he at most provides 16 chapters a month. this means that if you are essentially paying for 40 chapters and only getting 16 after the first month. save your money and go with an author that can at least meet their privilege wall with the number of uploads they make a month or you will just be throwing your money away after the first month!
What can I say? This novel is just too disgusting. I've read till the chap 100. Don't know how I was able to endure so far. The author degrades a girl because she isn't pure. It seems like he is a 40ty y.o. virgin and doesn't know what a true relationship means. Futhermore plot is too chaotic. Mc is going to be a merchant, then mage, transmigrator and so on. Quality is bad too. I'm too lazy to explain all flaws of this novel. Drop
So far, after reading 300+ chapters, I give my take. The characters are good, the worldbuilding is good, and the lovemaking scenes can be pretty hot. The only faults I can find are Lawrend being kind of a dolt at times and Humility's... uh... quirks.
I liked it a lot, being a strong supporter of the maids but unfortunately it's over for me, what can I say I hate the yuri in the harem, especially here I feel like the mc is getting ntr by his maid, in short so disappointing it should at least be said in the summary, I don't mind it's a threesome but here bruhh anyway it's chap 150 for info 😤
Don't do it, Save yourself .................................................................................................................
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ it is not bad. thiis got my attention . i didnt read all of them. i skipped many times. fcjhvjctxggcjkckk hv jtxhhgcghckghcghchgckhkvjjj (just to make 140 words dont mind)
As you start reading , you can tell the writing quality is quite high , the author does indeed have talent. Normally I would get excited whenever I encounter this level of writing because this tells me the author is capable to write at least a decent story and somewhat compelling characters. Once you have those elements ..other flaws can be more or less ignored. Well ...with all I said above this should have been at the minimum an ok novel for me to read ....and yet...I stopped at ch 22. Why? Due to the author's choice of MC. Within the first few chapters we have the interactions between the MC and the "first maid". In every interaction between them the MC is getting (to put it mildly) bullied , humiliated and extorted and yet he is getting more and more excited about her. This tells you everything you need to know about the MC. In short , the author presents the MC as being a generic , "lame"/ "beta"/ "doormat", taken straight from any mediocre JP novel with an added twist of the "step on me" fetish.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ don't like story begineeing section. Too much coward type mc. come on man you could at least developed the scenrio. mc lacking some gut man.
Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter latar belakang dunia Tarif Keseluruhan 5.0 Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter
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I practice the Dao of Shamelessness! You'll see how cultured I really am when you read this novel. Why don't you tip maids too? Maids are special, you know? They clean your clothes, cook dishes, and especially do night services! Crazy, right!?