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It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
world background is good obviously, update timing is not stable writing quality is self observed,not good character design is generic what can i say, istill like the story though and would have given 5stars if not for the update and wiritng problem
It looks like machine translation. Difficult to read and I can't go after 12th charpter because of that.
Siggghhhhh~~~~Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.
This is a good fanfic, I'm looking forward to the development of the story, and I hope the storyline will be more interesting in the future............ ........................I look forward to the continuation
Itulah saya benci reinkarnator yang menjijikkan.. Dia masuk dan menganggap dirinya sendiri hebat.. Semakin saya membaca semakin muak saya dengan sikap MC yang tidak tau malu
-Typical Doulou dalu fanfiction. -bad writing .................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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It tries to be a story in doulou world but fails miserably. All the rules of the world are thrown away and the MC can do anything he wants. 20 spirits, no problem, get 5 spirit rings while only being level 10? Sure of course. Get 10,000 and 100,000 spirit ring at 6 years old with out your soul backlash? Absolutely. Basically the MC does not follow any rules and goes from a 6 year old to 15 year old in one month and courting girls. So read if you can ignore all the flaws of the world if not it will drive you crazy with the amount of plot holes that are never explained.
the sign in is good but the story just to weird it doesn't like douluo dalu 6 years old didn't cultivated but already absorb multiple spirt ring
Hope you improve your Writing The story is GOOD but its Hard to understand because the Writing is a mess It makes My head ache [img=faceslap]
Too bad that the hero is becoming OP too fast and the story writing is not clear. focus on quality of chapters rather than quantity...and directly increasing 6 yr old guy to spirit level 60 is a buzz kill
i presonally like overpowered MC.so this is big hit for me from the start.thank you for writing for us readers although you have no obligation to.So I wholeheartly thank you for this story.
it's all MTL, the story has a good flow but it's ruined by the poor translation
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
world background is good obviously, update timing is not stable writing quality is self observed,not good character design is generic what can i say, istill like the story though and would have given 5stars if not for the update and wiritng problem
It looks like machine translation. Difficult to read and I can't go after 12th charpter because of that.
Siggghhhhh~~~~Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.Cowardly MC.
This is a good fanfic, I'm looking forward to the development of the story, and I hope the storyline will be more interesting in the future............ ........................I look forward to the continuation
Itulah saya benci reinkarnator yang menjijikkan.. Dia masuk dan menganggap dirinya sendiri hebat.. Semakin saya membaca semakin muak saya dengan sikap MC yang tidak tau malu
-Typical Doulou dalu fanfiction. -bad writing .................................................................................................................................................................................................................
jdjjfjttjfjt d Dr f f f f ft ft f f f f t ft f f f f f ft f f f f f fjtgkgkkdkdkrjddndndndnd . rrf rrr Dr Dr ddnrnrkdkdkddls
It tries to be a story in doulou world but fails miserably. All the rules of the world are thrown away and the MC can do anything he wants. 20 spirits, no problem, get 5 spirit rings while only being level 10? Sure of course. Get 10,000 and 100,000 spirit ring at 6 years old with out your soul backlash? Absolutely. Basically the MC does not follow any rules and goes from a 6 year old to 15 year old in one month and courting girls. So read if you can ignore all the flaws of the world if not it will drive you crazy with the amount of plot holes that are never explained.
the sign in is good but the story just to weird it doesn't like douluo dalu 6 years old didn't cultivated but already absorb multiple spirt ring
Hope you improve your Writing The story is GOOD but its Hard to understand because the Writing is a mess It makes My head ache [img=faceslap]
Too bad that the hero is becoming OP too fast and the story writing is not clear. focus on quality of chapters rather than quantity...and directly increasing 6 yr old guy to spirit level 60 is a buzz kill
i presonally like overpowered MC.so this is big hit for me from the start.thank you for writing for us readers although you have no obligation to.So I wholeheartly thank you for this story.
it's all MTL, the story has a good flow but it's ruined by the poor translation