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The books grammar is ok. This is similar to another better book. Why 1 or 2 stars is simple it's because your focus on equality and women. At least the way you write about it. Now the way I wrote this sounds bad, but in that time frame, historical women and equality was bad for a reason which brought me out of the book an made reading this fustraiting to do. Also you make the MC feel like a wimp while making Unrealistic decisions no one would make. There isn't much character development or any story development that took my interest to read. To sum it up don't read this if you don't want to see left vs right politics view while reading.
if you want to read similar novel. read "Reincarnated in 17th century with black technology".
I wish there were more chapters posted daily. Other than that, it is a really great book and recommend it to all
Bro I think you should encourage sanskrit as the main language as it is the the source of all languages of India and will help create unity among diff states Hindus and also create awareness about the true meaning of relegious texts It is also considered most scientific appropriate language. English should only be used for trade purposes and for people who engage in contact with English nations. Now if you say all the world uses English as it will be global language you should know that Japan, china and Korea and many other nations do not have English language as their official language, still they are very successful. Also if English languish is spread, it will create more control of western society and media over Indian civilization . Like today where people speaking English are more respected and English people are always considered advance. Using sanskrit willl also help to bridge the gap be casted as people will become aware of the true meaning of varna system and teachings of gods. In today's time, very few hindupeople who engage in contact with English nations. Now if you say all the world uses English as it will be global language you should know that Japan, china and Korea and many other nations do not have English language as their official language, still they are very successful. Also if English languish is spread, it will create more control of western society and media over Indian civilization. Like today where people speaking English are more respected and English people are always considered advance. Using sanskrit willl also help to bridge the gap be casted as people will become aware of the true meaning of varna system and teachings of gods. In today's time, very few hindu peole understand their religious texts and teachings and so they are more likely to be exploited by other religion people and lose their faith. It will also hep challenge social evils such as sati as in none of our Vedic texts, it is is written to do sati. English should only be taught to some scholars or at high levels where translation of English knowledge can be translated for improving some things .
Finally some novels on India. I have not read it yet but because of its name I'm giving a review
oh yes finally a good story, really like it keep going author if possibleake 5he chapters free to read pls
You know, I dropped it after you introduced English. And get facts straight, India had huge literacy before Colonialisation, who destroyed our Gurukul system to make us slaves with their 'obedience' education system. You could have made Hindi or Sanskrit the second official language. Hindi was understood by the most of the population. But you went ahead and introduced an illogical language English. Plus, it's not like people wouldn't know the alphabets. India was a well connected country, and the centre of World Trade along with China, which stopped trading from outside world during an era
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I highly recommend that you read that you read this one it won't disappoint now all that's needed is more updates it will be perfection and it doesn't need to be in the aye of the beholder for it speaks for it self
from Pakistan. my first idea steam engine and how it push the fast forward button to Europe industrial time as steam engine used in almost every thing including trains ships. second idea culinary utensils oven and various yummy foreign dishes salad 🥗 cheese production for making pizza lazania fried rice baking backry items etc 3rd ideas for diplomatic and trade relations to near civilizations like china and through navy development with help of pure steam engine or with old style hybrid ships to Japan and Arab Africa routes. bonus of providing safety of trade routes as inventer of first bulb and telephone crude primary one invention of first microscope and it's positive effects in development of medicine. creation intravenous injection or syringe production. first crude method of penicillin antibiotic from fungus. acquiring plants from which antimalarial drugs extracted and used
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I liked the story very much and the only problem for me is chapters are locked quite early ...............
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please don't drop this book. this was a very relaxing read and I would like more of it.
I like this novel because of it concept, every Indian have some dream to change past for betterment of country, you need to be careful about history of our country and its development for betterment of it
Love the stories direction, but just starting the story and may edit my review later on. Having said that, there are a couple of things that stand out to me: Writing quality: Seems to be well written but lacks flow. Good vocabulary though. Story development: So far so good. Character design: Suffers most from "telling and not showing". So far, instead of showing us through dialogue and character interactions, it just tells us. World background: Similar issues. All that said, love the premises and will keep reading to see how the author improves.
i would like to read this however i think it locks the chapters way to early so for now I won't
It feels like I'm reading a summary more than anything else. There are no actual conversations, reactions, description or anything at all. It's all just written like a summary. It's no fun to read. The readers have said the same thing a lot of times but the Author doesn't care.
After I read tyranny of steal I always wanted similar novel about Indian culture .
Good, very good, super duper good. I am also writing a novel where my SI OC reincarnates in Pre-independent India and later becomes it's first Prime Minister. Please do read it.
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The best History fanfic I have read.I am a big fan of History and India's history so this is delight to read especially with the quality and no grammar mistakes.Just read it,i know you will enjoy.
Your story so far is very good. I think you should make a new novel. this is my personal request. "A modern young boy of India who is follower of Tenali Rama show of SAB TV get reincarnated as an extra when the first episode started . he thought that by following the story he can enjoy this ancient life and start doing it but he discover that this is not the same as so because some people have super human strength and some people have magical powers and there are some mysterious beings that are spotted by him" Can you make a new novel using this synopsis please
The books grammar is ok. This is similar to another better book. Why 1 or 2 stars is simple it's because your focus on equality and women. At least the way you write about it. Now the way I wrote this sounds bad, but in that time frame, historical women and equality was bad for a reason which brought me out of the book an made reading this fustraiting to do. Also you make the MC feel like a wimp while making Unrealistic decisions no one would make. There isn't much character development or any story development that took my interest to read. To sum it up don't read this if you don't want to see left vs right politics view while reading.
if you want to read similar novel. read "Reincarnated in 17th century with black technology".
I wish there were more chapters posted daily. Other than that, it is a really great book and recommend it to all
Bro I think you should encourage sanskrit as the main language as it is the the source of all languages of India and will help create unity among diff states Hindus and also create awareness about the true meaning of relegious texts It is also considered most scientific appropriate language. English should only be used for trade purposes and for people who engage in contact with English nations. Now if you say all the world uses English as it will be global language you should know that Japan, china and Korea and many other nations do not have English language as their official language, still they are very successful. Also if English languish is spread, it will create more control of western society and media over Indian civilization . Like today where people speaking English are more respected and English people are always considered advance. Using sanskrit willl also help to bridge the gap be casted as people will become aware of the true meaning of varna system and teachings of gods. In today's time, very few hindupeople who engage in contact with English nations. Now if you say all the world uses English as it will be global language you should know that Japan, china and Korea and many other nations do not have English language as their official language, still they are very successful. Also if English languish is spread, it will create more control of western society and media over Indian civilization. Like today where people speaking English are more respected and English people are always considered advance. Using sanskrit willl also help to bridge the gap be casted as people will become aware of the true meaning of varna system and teachings of gods. In today's time, very few hindu peole understand their religious texts and teachings and so they are more likely to be exploited by other religion people and lose their faith. It will also hep challenge social evils such as sati as in none of our Vedic texts, it is is written to do sati. English should only be taught to some scholars or at high levels where translation of English knowledge can be translated for improving some things .
Finally some novels on India. I have not read it yet but because of its name I'm giving a review
oh yes finally a good story, really like it keep going author if possibleake 5he chapters free to read pls
You know, I dropped it after you introduced English. And get facts straight, India had huge literacy before Colonialisation, who destroyed our Gurukul system to make us slaves with their 'obedience' education system. You could have made Hindi or Sanskrit the second official language. Hindi was understood by the most of the population. But you went ahead and introduced an illogical language English. Plus, it's not like people wouldn't know the alphabets. India was a well connected country, and the centre of World Trade along with China, which stopped trading from outside world during an era
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I highly recommend that you read that you read this one it won't disappoint now all that's needed is more updates it will be perfection and it doesn't need to be in the aye of the beholder for it speaks for it self
from Pakistan. my first idea steam engine and how it push the fast forward button to Europe industrial time as steam engine used in almost every thing including trains ships. second idea culinary utensils oven and various yummy foreign dishes salad 🥗 cheese production for making pizza lazania fried rice baking backry items etc 3rd ideas for diplomatic and trade relations to near civilizations like china and through navy development with help of pure steam engine or with old style hybrid ships to Japan and Arab Africa routes. bonus of providing safety of trade routes as inventer of first bulb and telephone crude primary one invention of first microscope and it's positive effects in development of medicine. creation intravenous injection or syringe production. first crude method of penicillin antibiotic from fungus. acquiring plants from which antimalarial drugs extracted and used
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I liked the story very much and the only problem for me is chapters are locked quite early ...............
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please don't drop this book. this was a very relaxing read and I would like more of it.
I like this novel because of it concept, every Indian have some dream to change past for betterment of country, you need to be careful about history of our country and its development for betterment of it
Love the stories direction, but just starting the story and may edit my review later on. Having said that, there are a couple of things that stand out to me: Writing quality: Seems to be well written but lacks flow. Good vocabulary though. Story development: So far so good. Character design: Suffers most from "telling and not showing". So far, instead of showing us through dialogue and character interactions, it just tells us. World background: Similar issues. All that said, love the premises and will keep reading to see how the author improves.
i would like to read this however i think it locks the chapters way to early so for now I won't
It feels like I'm reading a summary more than anything else. There are no actual conversations, reactions, description or anything at all. It's all just written like a summary. It's no fun to read. The readers have said the same thing a lot of times but the Author doesn't care.
After I read tyranny of steal I always wanted similar novel about Indian culture .
Good, very good, super duper good. I am also writing a novel where my SI OC reincarnates in Pre-independent India and later becomes it's first Prime Minister. Please do read it.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The best History fanfic I have read.I am a big fan of History and India's history so this is delight to read especially with the quality and no grammar mistakes.Just read it,i know you will enjoy.
Your story so far is very good. I think you should make a new novel. this is my personal request. "A modern young boy of India who is follower of Tenali Rama show of SAB TV get reincarnated as an extra when the first episode started . he thought that by following the story he can enjoy this ancient life and start doing it but he discover that this is not the same as so because some people have super human strength and some people have magical powers and there are some mysterious beings that are spotted by him" Can you make a new novel using this synopsis please