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Just an examination of the writer's style. There's a frequent lack or overuse of punctuation that makes sentences flow awkwardly. The author's sentence structuring and wording, in general, can also create a strange read at times. However, grammatical errors are minimal, and to give credit where credit's due, the Author has an exceptional vocabulary and word sense. This prevents them from overdoing one of my biggest irks with novels on the site, rapidly overusing the same words in a small area of text. An example of what I mean would be, "The other boys were going to attack but the leader stood up gesturing to not attack." This example was ripped straight out of a fairly popular novel.
Captivating descriptions and an engaging plotline, the author wonderfully combines different genres into this piece, and when the reader-based choices are added to the mix, this is considered a good novel. Apart from a few unnoticeable grammatical errors here and there, it's a good read.
Best book ive read in a while REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
This is very Interesting and new concept. I will like to see how it going to evolve in time. We need to see the chapter 2. Nice work, Mate....
I love how you started the novel. It seemed a lot more interesting. And I especially liked your synopsis—short and concise. Keep up the good work, author!
The story's description is suberb and makes you experience what the characters are experiencing. I like the start, the grammar, characters and everything is amazing that you have to continue reading once you start.
Definitely something different from what I've read before. Different in a good way! Love the background, love the plot, and love the idea. Can't wait for more chapters!
Really liked the 'Your Choice' thing going on, extremely unique if i do say so myself. Moreover, the choice of words is commendable and I really like how the story makes the reader feel as if they are in the world. Although only a few chapters have been uploaded, the quality and writing style is really good. Keep it up!
I really don't know where it is lacking. I just hope you could split the chapters though? too lengthy even though interesting. Real Good intro I would say. Fine pace. Keep on updating. all the best (◕ᴗ◕✿)
The story is interesting, the character is interesting, the concepts are interesting, the writing is great, there is almost nothing that could make this story better. It's only 1 chapter but already it captivates me, gets me feeling all sorts of emotion but all in all, it is incredibly interesting with amazing writing and plot.
Rogue God? Welp, another god to hate then. Quite vivid descriptions but needs to work a little bit more on the grammar side. Overall, a good start!
5/5 d(=^･ω･^=)b Wow this is one of the best descriptive books I've read! ヽ(=^･ω･^=)丿 Each scene forms a vision in my mind as I read through each word (ะ`・ω・´ะ) I hope the author continues writing it! V(=^･ω･^=)v
Thank you all for your kind words. This is a story that needs the reader's help to advance. This means, make choices for more chapters. Show your support this way.
The prologue took my ducking breath away! Seems like writing in present does have its perks, as it really gave the feeling of 'urgency' writing in past tense doesn't have. As for the idea, isn't it conpletely fresh? Don't you guys want to see where this is going to go? So anyway, thumbs up to the author. I hope you continue writing this novel.
The idea is really interesting, but the execution desires better. It's all bare bones. I wish the author best of luck, though. And to read Homestuck.
Nerve-wracking. The descriptions contain enough information to create a complete picture. It feels so vivid to the point that not breathing seems natural.
Although only the first chapter, it was good. It’s interesting with good details and descriptions. MC although we didn’t get a good grasp of him yet he seems good (?) we need more chapters to see.
Good calculation, the novel doesnt have any info dump and the most surprising is that it has good calculation of everything it points out......
The author of this novel must have a strong inclination with math subject! Anyway, the concept is good. Please continue updating. I hope to see this novel be completed!
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This novel is fun and engaging with the readers! We get to know what happened right at the beginning and author does a fantastic job in detailing the surroundings. It makes you really wonder what would happen next for MC and you are the one to choose his path! Amazing work! I recommend!!
An interesting concept in which the reader chooses the path of the main character. It is the perfect read for someone who wishes to interact with the story in a meaningful way while reading a well-written plot. Good work, author!
The story is quite interesting and has a new concept. The way how story progresses based on our options gives a whole new level of interest! I am very excited to see how the novel progresses!! You should try this novel for a whole new level of mysteriousness and adventure. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This reminds me of books I used to read as a kid where you have to pick whether the hero does one thing or the next and if you're not careful your choices end your reading. The writing is great, the world background is enough to paint a picture in your mind without cluttering your mind with too much detail. I tried pacing myself to read a little each day and now I'm caught up with the latest update🤩😅. I totally recommend this for those who love adventure with action and realistic characters. The chapters are long enough to entertain too! See you in the comments!
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Just an examination of the writer's style. There's a frequent lack or overuse of punctuation that makes sentences flow awkwardly. The author's sentence structuring and wording, in general, can also create a strange read at times. However, grammatical errors are minimal, and to give credit where credit's due, the Author has an exceptional vocabulary and word sense. This prevents them from overdoing one of my biggest irks with novels on the site, rapidly overusing the same words in a small area of text. An example of what I mean would be, "The other boys were going to attack but the leader stood up gesturing to not attack." This example was ripped straight out of a fairly popular novel.
Captivating descriptions and an engaging plotline, the author wonderfully combines different genres into this piece, and when the reader-based choices are added to the mix, this is considered a good novel. Apart from a few unnoticeable grammatical errors here and there, it's a good read.
Best book ive read in a while REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
This is very Interesting and new concept. I will like to see how it going to evolve in time. We need to see the chapter 2. Nice work, Mate....
I love how you started the novel. It seemed a lot more interesting. And I especially liked your synopsis—short and concise. Keep up the good work, author!
The story's description is suberb and makes you experience what the characters are experiencing. I like the start, the grammar, characters and everything is amazing that you have to continue reading once you start.
Definitely something different from what I've read before. Different in a good way! Love the background, love the plot, and love the idea. Can't wait for more chapters!
Really liked the 'Your Choice' thing going on, extremely unique if i do say so myself. Moreover, the choice of words is commendable and I really like how the story makes the reader feel as if they are in the world. Although only a few chapters have been uploaded, the quality and writing style is really good. Keep it up!
I really don't know where it is lacking. I just hope you could split the chapters though? too lengthy even though interesting. Real Good intro I would say. Fine pace. Keep on updating. all the best (◕ᴗ◕✿)
The story is interesting, the character is interesting, the concepts are interesting, the writing is great, there is almost nothing that could make this story better. It's only 1 chapter but already it captivates me, gets me feeling all sorts of emotion but all in all, it is incredibly interesting with amazing writing and plot.
Rogue God? Welp, another god to hate then. Quite vivid descriptions but needs to work a little bit more on the grammar side. Overall, a good start!
5/5 d(=^･ω･^=)b Wow this is one of the best descriptive books I've read! ヽ(=^･ω･^=)丿 Each scene forms a vision in my mind as I read through each word (ะ`・ω・´ะ) I hope the author continues writing it! V(=^･ω･^=)v
Thank you all for your kind words. This is a story that needs the reader's help to advance. This means, make choices for more chapters. Show your support this way.
The prologue took my ducking breath away! Seems like writing in present does have its perks, as it really gave the feeling of 'urgency' writing in past tense doesn't have. As for the idea, isn't it conpletely fresh? Don't you guys want to see where this is going to go? So anyway, thumbs up to the author. I hope you continue writing this novel.
The idea is really interesting, but the execution desires better. It's all bare bones. I wish the author best of luck, though. And to read Homestuck.
Nerve-wracking. The descriptions contain enough information to create a complete picture. It feels so vivid to the point that not breathing seems natural.
Although only the first chapter, it was good. It’s interesting with good details and descriptions. MC although we didn’t get a good grasp of him yet he seems good (?) we need more chapters to see.
Good calculation, the novel doesnt have any info dump and the most surprising is that it has good calculation of everything it points out......
The author of this novel must have a strong inclination with math subject! Anyway, the concept is good. Please continue updating. I hope to see this novel be completed!
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This novel is fun and engaging with the readers! We get to know what happened right at the beginning and author does a fantastic job in detailing the surroundings. It makes you really wonder what would happen next for MC and you are the one to choose his path! Amazing work! I recommend!!
An interesting concept in which the reader chooses the path of the main character. It is the perfect read for someone who wishes to interact with the story in a meaningful way while reading a well-written plot. Good work, author!
The story is quite interesting and has a new concept. The way how story progresses based on our options gives a whole new level of interest! I am very excited to see how the novel progresses!! You should try this novel for a whole new level of mysteriousness and adventure. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This reminds me of books I used to read as a kid where you have to pick whether the hero does one thing or the next and if you're not careful your choices end your reading. The writing is great, the world background is enough to paint a picture in your mind without cluttering your mind with too much detail. I tried pacing myself to read a little each day and now I'm caught up with the latest update🤩😅. I totally recommend this for those who love adventure with action and realistic characters. The chapters are long enough to entertain too! See you in the comments!