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เขียนรีวิวFor anyone who is looking upon reviews to know if you want to read this novel or not, I'll make it as simple as i can. I've read the other book of this author and i can see the similarities in the way of writing. Let me make something clear ahead. If you want a hollow novel... this is not for you. If you want an OP mc on the get go... This novel is not for you. If you want the novel to have infinite time skips.... This novel is not for you. If you want the repeated cliches... This novel is not for you. If you want the usual wuxia/xianxia novel... This novel is not for you. You like to read a novel where you feel so immersive that 1 chapter feels as much as 3,4 chapters... This novel is for you. You like to read a novel where the side characters are not just throwaway... This novel is for you. You like to read a novel where you can feel a whole new type of world building than the ones you usually know... This novel is for you. You like to read a novel that follows different systems and cultures than the ones found usually in webnovel... This novel is for you. You like to read a novel where there are minimal plot tropes like the stupid young masters trope... This novel is for you. Above all, You like to read a novel which makes you experience a whole new world which is so detailed and in-depth and filled with emotions that make you feel like you were the one experiencing it... This novel is for you. The first chapter in itself is.... a piece of painting that morphs into a beautiful 3D animation. The lens travels from the smallest view available in the middle of nowhere, where u can feel each and everything around your surroundings to a magnificent backdrop where the story Starts to unfold. If you think that is all there is to it... Then the author throws a curve ball at the end to keep you hooked. To the author: Excited for more, happy to be part of the early journey of your recent work. Thanks for your writing.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์A good story for sure and the writing is excellent, but it is one og the slowest progression in a story I have come. A bit like reading the "LotR" books. 1 chapter of story, 3 chapter of explenation of the world and how thing works, and after 200 chapters I had to give up. I like the story and the MC, bit I felt the development of what i would call "the second MC" became too cheesy and OP and destroyed my immerson i felt for the main MC. Do not take that AS negative critisim, cuz the story and everything is good and Wells fleshed out, but after a while and how the character focuse devloped, it was not my cup of tea anymore. I like when i can immerse in one character. That keeps everything else more mysterious and thrilling for me.
I love the novel so far. It’s a very rich background with very good writing. I hope it gains much traction………………………………………………………………………………..
The writing itself is flawless. The world is interesting. Premise is interesting. Main character is interesting. Normal world failed to be established though. And some details are left to later great execution and to awful execution. Spoiler: ML has too few scenes and their first interaction shown is their reunion making them seem to have no chemistry and their relief and emotions hollow. The eye thing in a Kalki’s forehead has been MANY times mentioned but not explained by time of writing this review.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์So far the story has been very good, I can't wait to read more..................................................................................................
Pretty good story not too far in but have high hopes and it's pretty good so far. Pretty good story not too far in but have high hopes and it's pretty good so far.
I like the beauty and the beast very much ........................................................ ...... .................. .. ... ..... ..............
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Unique world with a unique magic system. The terms we've heard before but they have different interactions and setups. The early chapters are confusing because there's no explanation, you're thrown in the deep end and expected to just get carried by the tide till you understand, which you will. It's several chapters before you understand the MC isn't human, but I'm over 30 in and I don't know what makes her different then a human, that hasn't been explained yet. Well, she has blue hair.... Some of the action scenes are confusing, they are detailed but they don't make a lot of sense when you picture it. You just have to suspend your disbelief.
well done, I read three chaps and I can tell you that the story is beautiful, the way that the author describes the world is beautiful and lyrically imaginable.[img=recommend]
Solid author writes compelling novels. Only qualm I have ever had with Venus is he likes to repeat details or over analyse certain aspects of a plot. More of a pet peev then anything. Doesn't subtract from the fact his works are on the level of published writings or better.
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Interesting plot but FL. ….That makes little uneasy, ............................................................................
Generally, I don't give 5 stars to all novels. But for this after reading few chapters I felt this book deserves five stars. If I can, I want to give 5+rating. Unlike many novels, with different styles and other things. This book is unique. Its world-building is just impressive. The way the author put the words is just beautiful. When I start reading this book I felt like everything is happening in front of me. This is another great work from Author OV. I wish to see you win the WSA. All the best Author!
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Been looking for a female lead that's not romance! Thanks Venus! I really like the concept of the book. The quality is superb as always. Cheers to a future bestseller!
Beautifully crafted masterpiece from the author of Psychic Parasite. Love the thrill of it. Also, those horror elements were really scary. Love everything about this novel. It may be as good as parasite? It might even surpass it.
Wow good luck on your success Ovelord_venus! I hope you get the entry for the adaptation of your work! I gotta say you got what it takes for reaching it! More readers to come and I support you as a fellow author! Gambatte! Author sama!
Whoah Author, 😀another precious work☺️ Thank you so much for Murim Recurve, and I am so excited when I am reading the synopsis about Virtual and reality swap, and my enthusiasm lead me to read all the chapters in one go, Your cliffhangers are really killing me and I can't wait for next chapters. 🙃Please please please release more and more chapters author,🙃 Thank you so much... 🎉I hope you should earn alot along with massive votes🎉 and I am sure you are one among the persons who loot the 🌟Spirity treasure...🌟 😀Wish you all the success Author...😀
Totally recommended to those that love very in-depth character development. Description. So many vivid descriptions that made you be part of the journey. Not only that, even the emotions of the MC is transferred to the reader. But, sometimes I have to reread a sentence to have a clear scene in my mind. The story so far is telling us more about it as we follow the characters especially the MC. And from what was revealed the novel has an amazing plot and the Author is trying to be Original in his Ideas. It might be more promising than Psychic Parasite! The only difference is that Psychic Parasite is a Unique Masterpiece. While this one seem to follow a typical Xinxia Cultivation.
The novel is good, I liked the idea of novel; But I feel it missing something, I don't know what, the MC feels different than any novels I read, All n All its good.
The world is well detailed and easy to invision. The grammar is good and easy to read. The first chapters are engaging and descriptive. Things that others would not describe are and actually thought out in detail. I give this a 10/10 and recommend it as a read.
Great novel by the greatest over lord of all time. Apart from me of course I am pretty great :3 But in all seriousness I love how you approached this. Your first novel was a little too rushed but this seems really well paced and your grammar and word choice has gotten a lot better. I wish you luck my friend and have a great time writing this the plot is promising.
Cover - Checked✓ Synopsis - Checked✓ First 3 chaps - Checked✓ Update stability - Checked✓ Quality - Checked✓ The cover is outstanding, I love it very much. The syno**is is short, to-the-point and ends with a question, not only that but the last question of synopsis makes me curious about WHAT? it forced me to read the first chapter. As of the chapters, very good narration, excellent use of vocabulary and outstanding way of portraying scenes. I like the character Re'Kha, she is so strong both mentally and physically, the five star is for her. The update stability will never let you down. The author writing quality can't be judged by my review. Read this book or Psychic Parasite of our Author to know how remarkable the story quality is. Overall, I give 11/10 ( ◜‿◝ )♡
For anyone who is looking upon reviews to know if you want to read this novel or not, I'll make it as simple as i can. I've read the other book of this author and i can see the similarities in the way of writing. Let me make something clear ahead. If you want a hollow novel... this is not for you. If you want an OP mc on the get go... This novel is not for you. If you want the novel to have infinite time skips.... This novel is not for you. If you want the repeated cliches... This novel is not for you. If you want the usual wuxia/xianxia novel... This novel is not for you. You like to read a novel where you feel so immersive that 1 chapter feels as much as 3,4 chapters... This novel is for you. You like to read a novel where the side characters are not just throwaway... This novel is for you. You like to read a novel where you can feel a whole new type of world building than the ones you usually know... This novel is for you. You like to read a novel that follows different systems and cultures than the ones found usually in webnovel... This novel is for you. You like to read a novel where there are minimal plot tropes like the stupid young masters trope... This novel is for you. Above all, You like to read a novel which makes you experience a whole new world which is so detailed and in-depth and filled with emotions that make you feel like you were the one experiencing it... This novel is for you. The first chapter in itself is.... a piece of painting that morphs into a beautiful 3D animation. The lens travels from the smallest view available in the middle of nowhere, where u can feel each and everything around your surroundings to a magnificent backdrop where the story Starts to unfold. If you think that is all there is to it... Then the author throws a curve ball at the end to keep you hooked. To the author: Excited for more, happy to be part of the early journey of your recent work. Thanks for your writing.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์A good story for sure and the writing is excellent, but it is one og the slowest progression in a story I have come. A bit like reading the "LotR" books. 1 chapter of story, 3 chapter of explenation of the world and how thing works, and after 200 chapters I had to give up. I like the story and the MC, bit I felt the development of what i would call "the second MC" became too cheesy and OP and destroyed my immerson i felt for the main MC. Do not take that AS negative critisim, cuz the story and everything is good and Wells fleshed out, but after a while and how the character focuse devloped, it was not my cup of tea anymore. I like when i can immerse in one character. That keeps everything else more mysterious and thrilling for me.
I love the novel so far. It’s a very rich background with very good writing. I hope it gains much traction………………………………………………………………………………..
The writing itself is flawless. The world is interesting. Premise is interesting. Main character is interesting. Normal world failed to be established though. And some details are left to later great execution and to awful execution. Spoiler: ML has too few scenes and their first interaction shown is their reunion making them seem to have no chemistry and their relief and emotions hollow. The eye thing in a Kalki’s forehead has been MANY times mentioned but not explained by time of writing this review.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์So far the story has been very good, I can't wait to read more..................................................................................................
Pretty good story not too far in but have high hopes and it's pretty good so far. Pretty good story not too far in but have high hopes and it's pretty good so far.
I like the beauty and the beast very much ........................................................ ...... .................. .. ... ..... ..............
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Unique world with a unique magic system. The terms we've heard before but they have different interactions and setups. The early chapters are confusing because there's no explanation, you're thrown in the deep end and expected to just get carried by the tide till you understand, which you will. It's several chapters before you understand the MC isn't human, but I'm over 30 in and I don't know what makes her different then a human, that hasn't been explained yet. Well, she has blue hair.... Some of the action scenes are confusing, they are detailed but they don't make a lot of sense when you picture it. You just have to suspend your disbelief.
well done, I read three chaps and I can tell you that the story is beautiful, the way that the author describes the world is beautiful and lyrically imaginable.[img=recommend]
Solid author writes compelling novels. Only qualm I have ever had with Venus is he likes to repeat details or over analyse certain aspects of a plot. More of a pet peev then anything. Doesn't subtract from the fact his works are on the level of published writings or better.
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Interesting plot but FL. ….That makes little uneasy, ............................................................................
Generally, I don't give 5 stars to all novels. But for this after reading few chapters I felt this book deserves five stars. If I can, I want to give 5+rating. Unlike many novels, with different styles and other things. This book is unique. Its world-building is just impressive. The way the author put the words is just beautiful. When I start reading this book I felt like everything is happening in front of me. This is another great work from Author OV. I wish to see you win the WSA. All the best Author!
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Been looking for a female lead that's not romance! Thanks Venus! I really like the concept of the book. The quality is superb as always. Cheers to a future bestseller!
Beautifully crafted masterpiece from the author of Psychic Parasite. Love the thrill of it. Also, those horror elements were really scary. Love everything about this novel. It may be as good as parasite? It might even surpass it.
Wow good luck on your success Ovelord_venus! I hope you get the entry for the adaptation of your work! I gotta say you got what it takes for reaching it! More readers to come and I support you as a fellow author! Gambatte! Author sama!
Whoah Author, 😀another precious work☺️ Thank you so much for Murim Recurve, and I am so excited when I am reading the synopsis about Virtual and reality swap, and my enthusiasm lead me to read all the chapters in one go, Your cliffhangers are really killing me and I can't wait for next chapters. 🙃Please please please release more and more chapters author,🙃 Thank you so much... 🎉I hope you should earn alot along with massive votes🎉 and I am sure you are one among the persons who loot the 🌟Spirity treasure...🌟 😀Wish you all the success Author...😀
Totally recommended to those that love very in-depth character development. Description. So many vivid descriptions that made you be part of the journey. Not only that, even the emotions of the MC is transferred to the reader. But, sometimes I have to reread a sentence to have a clear scene in my mind. The story so far is telling us more about it as we follow the characters especially the MC. And from what was revealed the novel has an amazing plot and the Author is trying to be Original in his Ideas. It might be more promising than Psychic Parasite! The only difference is that Psychic Parasite is a Unique Masterpiece. While this one seem to follow a typical Xinxia Cultivation.
The novel is good, I liked the idea of novel; But I feel it missing something, I don't know what, the MC feels different than any novels I read, All n All its good.
The world is well detailed and easy to invision. The grammar is good and easy to read. The first chapters are engaging and descriptive. Things that others would not describe are and actually thought out in detail. I give this a 10/10 and recommend it as a read.
Great novel by the greatest over lord of all time. Apart from me of course I am pretty great :3 But in all seriousness I love how you approached this. Your first novel was a little too rushed but this seems really well paced and your grammar and word choice has gotten a lot better. I wish you luck my friend and have a great time writing this the plot is promising.
Cover - Checked✓ Synopsis - Checked✓ First 3 chaps - Checked✓ Update stability - Checked✓ Quality - Checked✓ The cover is outstanding, I love it very much. The syno**is is short, to-the-point and ends with a question, not only that but the last question of synopsis makes me curious about WHAT? it forced me to read the first chapter. As of the chapters, very good narration, excellent use of vocabulary and outstanding way of portraying scenes. I like the character Re'Kha, she is so strong both mentally and physically, the five star is for her. The update stability will never let you down. The author writing quality can't be judged by my review. Read this book or Psychic Parasite of our Author to know how remarkable the story quality is. Overall, I give 11/10 ( ◜‿◝ )♡