Reviews of CEO He : Please Don't Love Me by Ada_5253 - Webnovel

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CleverFoxyVixen

Great story so far, it really has grabbed my attention right away. Can’t wait to see what happens next. 😊 Female lead seems like a strong character so far let’s hope she stays that way.

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3yr
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
Ada_5253

Hello! Little Author Here. If you have come till here then I would like to give some intro about 'CEO He: Please Don't Love Me.' So the story is basically about Mo Roulan who struggles between love and her responsibilities. She had already lost herself in her last life because of love, so in her next life, she chose to accept her responsibilities. Struggling with those responsibilities, the same love is now again ready to break the walls she had surrounded her heart with. But she is afraid to give it a second chance. ------------------ So if you have decided to read the story a chance then I wanna give you a big thank you. I don't have any writing experience so please bear with me in case of any mistakes. An honest review will always be appreciated. Thanks Ada:)

3yr
ดู 11 การตอบกลับ
Kira_4554

I am very glas that I stumbled across this book. I like how the Female lead tries to change her destiny. I kinda feel bad for her as she experiences all the bad things in her past. And yeah I like how she became independent. Author please make male lead remember his past life so that he can regret it and make up for her. Or else the trauma she has been throughout he Mr past life will be worthless. And please make her strong and independent. Lots of love and support from us. Update more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update].You are keeping us in suspense a lot. But yeah we love this a lot.

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3yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
falodeopemiposi6

The book is nice. it was exactly my kind of novel just like "Silent Scar, Loud Love." And I love the fact that its's not predictable.

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SilverLuna10

Story is bad, many cliches, bad characters and nonsensical plot.

10mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Payal_Pallawi

worth Bing reading. love it. the transformation of female lead is awesome and her not giving up attitude in danger is praise worthy.. looking forward to your good work 💞.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Maira_2003

I started reading the novel as I thought that the female lead is strong and she is capable of handling problems on her own.But it gave me so much disappointed that she does not even have a clarity of what she wants .For everything the ML comes out and helps.In 5 year time lapse I thought she can learn to be independent but unfortunately no matter what she is still lacking everywhere .

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
ParkerPP

Amazing, passionate, heartbreaking… a gem. You should really try it :)

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ainonai

This story really had potential at the beginning. It’s a shame it turned out bad. There was no character development and at some point the story was just dragging. It was written poorly, kind of tasteless, couldn’t like any character. Fl turned to be spineless and I don’t even know how to describe Ml. There were a lot of characters that were presented to us yet the story would not have changed much had they not been mentioned. Don’t even remember what they were there for.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
diavla
LV 15 Badge

Let me preface this by stating that I was initially obsessed with this novel. I paid for full privilege multiple times (which was 1,500 coins more or less). Unfortunately, the story just kind of fizzled towards the end. I’m a sucker for rebirth novels that center around not falling in love with the terrible male lead in their second life. It’s my kryptonite. I was invested in the plot from day one. As the novel progressed, I felt that the pacing was a bit slow. I didn’t comment on it or anything because I figured the author was in it for the long haul. I gave it a chance. I’ve read stories with a thousand plus chapters, so if the author planned to write for that long, then the pacing wasn’t an issue. As time went on however, the story just kept going in circles. It was always shrouded in mystery and it offered more mysteries than resolutions. It also introduced a lot of characters, yet only focused on some while ignoring others that seemed more important. An example of this is introducing all of He Jian’s friends but heavily focusing on only Liu Ji Fan (and his love interest Tian Yuan). Not only did I not enjoy spending a lot of time on his character, I also did not like him at all. He was an overbearing abusive CEO type of lover and I felt like Tian Yuan was just abused. It seemed that he was sexually forceful with him and basically had him caged. I did not care for him and his persona at all. It also didn’t benefit the plot at all. You could literally remove his character completely and the story would be better for it because it wouldn’t have any useless filler. Then I saw that the author created a new story. This was around the 500s in this novel. The lack of attention and dedication in this story was reflected in their slow updates. Especially since the other novel was more successful. The other novel ended and while the author was gracious enough to decide to finish this novel, they did not give it the proper send off that this novel deserved. In roughly 100 chapters, the author tried to wrap up all the story lines. That means all the mysteries were going to be unearthed and all the characters that were foreshadowed to be important would make their moves in just a few chapters. Personally, it feels like the ending focused too much on drama that separated the two lovers over and over again instead of just giving us closure and character growth. We’ve read hundreds of chapters of Mo Roulan suffering. Can she not catch a break? Can we not get some sweet moments? Literally the last chapter is them agreeing to giving it another shot. It has three side chapters. I was holding out hope that it could be redeemed, but two of them tell you all of the past while only the last gives you a glimpse into their happy future. If you want to read the entire novel in just three chapters, you can just read the side stories. It’s everything you need to know. I would have preferred it if He Jian recovered his first life’s memories earlier on, and they communicated with each other much earlier on. That way they could’ve both healed together and we could’ve gotten to see them mature as people and as a couple. It would’ve been nice to also see the mom’s family and to have seen her be happy. The mom had such a tragic life yet we didn’t get to see her live the happiness she deserved with Chi Rong. I also would’ve liked some kind of retribution towards He Jian’s friends for how they treated Mo Roulan during her first life. Now that I think about friends, it would’ve been great if Roulan had friends, but I digress. I hope if the author reads this they can handle my constructive criticism and focus on improving their future stories. It’s upsetting as a reader when you spend all of your time and money devoted to a story only to have such an unsatisfying ending. I have nothing against you as a writer. I hope you continue to create and improve, and wish you success!

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1yr
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
prati12

Author did great job. this book is amazing . I have read many books in this genre but this book was amazing to read, Thank You Author

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Shamim_A_Khanam

One of my favorite stories. I would like to have the story with happy ending and Lanlan and Jian to have a baby.

1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
SUSMITA_DAS

At first when I started reading this book it's because it was a free fr 24 hours ..bt then I started liking it so much❤️ that for the first time ever in my life I use my money 💰 for privileged chapter...

1yr
ดู 7 การตอบกลับ
Taruna_Singh_2668

book is fantastic like the character building of all stars .read your his rui the other book author I love your style of writing do give happy endings to all couples fl is strong ml is crazy after her I m there till the end author just update more frequently ❤️❤️💐

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Reshu_Gupta_8100

good novel but slow updates[img=faceslap]

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2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Krishna_1999

It's good novel but why there is so much misunderstanding between them i love both Jian and Lanlan together very fast😂😂 Like can't wait for some interesting development 😉😉 Overall love the novel😘😘

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2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
gati_lavenda

the quality of the book is top notch 😘😘I love it so much ..the characters are well arranged and used...you have a vivid description in every chapter

เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Orion_Kin

First of all, I extend my love to you dear author. You really know how to heal my soul with your stories. You're a true sanctuary creator and I appreciate it deeply. I'm not just flattering but I feel so relieved when I read your works. Please, please and please keep going on for I'll always seek for your works. I have a lot say but thank you. A lot

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
czennie_bb

wow just wow. i havent even start reading yet but the synopsis just brought tears in my eyes. i really hope this one won't disappoint. thank you so much author pls keep working hardd

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
mysteriousreader1

its very very draggy, its been like 450+ chapters but still no progress between the leads. Its like they will hold hands in 1000th chapter. Dont waste your time reading this

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Hanami_RV

this book is definitely a hidden gem, I love the twists and turns and the female lead character is shown very sweet and strong, I just got hooked up with this book, those who want to try definitely go for it !

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
MINI_L
LV 14 Badge

Hey author, overall this is a really good book. But the storyline in general is really slow. I hope there will be more development (especially regarding the relationship between Mo Roulan He Jian) in the future chapters. And please let this Shen Yiling girl finally realise in someway that He Hian doesnt love her. Like it’s a bit annoying that after 400 chapters she is still scheming etc.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
sparklegreen21

… an eighteen yr old attracted to a twelve year old? And Don’t say “she has an older mind set” that’s disgusting, yeah SHE might have experience as she’s reborn into life, but he just met her. Pedophilia shouldn’t be normalized….

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
mafiya_rope

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2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
darien127

Me encanta la novela 🥰 pero me gustaría un poco más de intimidad entre los protagonistas. Dios ese He Jian tiene un bajo coeficiente emocional 🙄 no sabe expresar sus sentimientos 😣 Me pregunto si habrá oportunidad de que él recuerde los eventos de su vida pasada. Es que dejan a uno en ascuas para saber que sucedió y si tuvo algo que ver esa @#€&🤬 de Shen Yilian? o como se llame 😡 y su estúpido perro Shi Fenju? Realmente hay tantos estúpidos que se dejan usar, que más que lastima merecen una paliza para ver si espabilan😤😡

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
amethyst_28

This is the first story that I feel depressed and sad at the same time. I feel bad for Shen Youlin all she wants is the love and affection of her parents. I hate her mother being a perfectionist. I hope Shen Youlin will be proud of herself and someday she will accept who she is

เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Sei_devil

Point out if i am wrong The fl helped kidnapped ml ok i get it she needed money to save her mother but then in her previous life ceo he did successfully run away he was captured again then didn’t fl feel guilty he was also a kid. she was literally stalking asking him to love her why would any would feel disgusted. Then in this she literally is treating herself as a victim why don’t she now look how he cares for her. Ughh I don’t get it. Everyone have some bad relatives she should at that time toughen up not be like love sick stupid fool.

3yr
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
Nina_Kov

You can't let it go until you go further to see what will happen. Nice[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Msmouamoua

I love the storyline of the FL trying to forge a different path for herself. However, it is a little difficult to read when the gender pronouns change for he to she or her to him, etc. Without the right pronouns, it’s hard to follow what is really going on when the pronouns are not correct. I also love the side stories of the other characters, but it can be hard to follow with the storyline of the FL and ML because of how they are split from chapter to chapter or within a chapter. For example, there was one chapter that mainly focused on the FL’s mother, and the chapter sorta ended with a cliffhanger, but the continuation of this chapter was seen at least a couple of chapters later, where the main storyline sorta move on a lot, making the timing weirdly off.

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Kira_4554

okay I wanna give this book afive star rating. And yeah I love the Female lead a lot. And I really want to smack some love knowledge into male lead. Author please do it as he is very cold 🥶🥶 like Antarctica. Make it warm for our baby Roulan. And yeah face slapping is what I like the most in this book. I suggest all to read this book you'll find it amazing. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
OneSevenEight

Right off the bat, the plot seems interesting (despite being a CEO series) and the writing is great. This seems like a contender for the spirities!

3yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
CleverFoxyVixen

Great story so far, it really has grabbed my attention right away. Can’t wait to see what happens next. 😊 Female lead seems like a strong character so far let’s hope she stays that way.

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3yr
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
Ada_5253

Hello! Little Author Here. If you have come till here then I would like to give some intro about 'CEO He: Please Don't Love Me.' So the story is basically about Mo Roulan who struggles between love and her responsibilities. She had already lost herself in her last life because of love, so in her next life, she chose to accept her responsibilities. Struggling with those responsibilities, the same love is now again ready to break the walls she had surrounded her heart with. But she is afraid to give it a second chance. ------------------ So if you have decided to read the story a chance then I wanna give you a big thank you. I don't have any writing experience so please bear with me in case of any mistakes. An honest review will always be appreciated. Thanks Ada:)

3yr
ดู 11 การตอบกลับ
Kira_4554

I am very glas that I stumbled across this book. I like how the Female lead tries to change her destiny. I kinda feel bad for her as she experiences all the bad things in her past. And yeah I like how she became independent. Author please make male lead remember his past life so that he can regret it and make up for her. Or else the trauma she has been throughout he Mr past life will be worthless. And please make her strong and independent. Lots of love and support from us. Update more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update].You are keeping us in suspense a lot. But yeah we love this a lot.

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3yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
falodeopemiposi6

The book is nice. it was exactly my kind of novel just like "Silent Scar, Loud Love." And I love the fact that its's not predictable.

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SilverLuna10

Story is bad, many cliches, bad characters and nonsensical plot.

10mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Payal_Pallawi

worth Bing reading. love it. the transformation of female lead is awesome and her not giving up attitude in danger is praise worthy.. looking forward to your good work 💞.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Maira_2003

I started reading the novel as I thought that the female lead is strong and she is capable of handling problems on her own.But it gave me so much disappointed that she does not even have a clarity of what she wants .For everything the ML comes out and helps.In 5 year time lapse I thought she can learn to be independent but unfortunately no matter what she is still lacking everywhere .

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
ParkerPP

Amazing, passionate, heartbreaking… a gem. You should really try it :)

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ainonai

This story really had potential at the beginning. It’s a shame it turned out bad. There was no character development and at some point the story was just dragging. It was written poorly, kind of tasteless, couldn’t like any character. Fl turned to be spineless and I don’t even know how to describe Ml. There were a lot of characters that were presented to us yet the story would not have changed much had they not been mentioned. Don’t even remember what they were there for.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
diavla
LV 15 Badge

Let me preface this by stating that I was initially obsessed with this novel. I paid for full privilege multiple times (which was 1,500 coins more or less). Unfortunately, the story just kind of fizzled towards the end. I’m a sucker for rebirth novels that center around not falling in love with the terrible male lead in their second life. It’s my kryptonite. I was invested in the plot from day one. As the novel progressed, I felt that the pacing was a bit slow. I didn’t comment on it or anything because I figured the author was in it for the long haul. I gave it a chance. I’ve read stories with a thousand plus chapters, so if the author planned to write for that long, then the pacing wasn’t an issue. As time went on however, the story just kept going in circles. It was always shrouded in mystery and it offered more mysteries than resolutions. It also introduced a lot of characters, yet only focused on some while ignoring others that seemed more important. An example of this is introducing all of He Jian’s friends but heavily focusing on only Liu Ji Fan (and his love interest Tian Yuan). Not only did I not enjoy spending a lot of time on his character, I also did not like him at all. He was an overbearing abusive CEO type of lover and I felt like Tian Yuan was just abused. It seemed that he was sexually forceful with him and basically had him caged. I did not care for him and his persona at all. It also didn’t benefit the plot at all. You could literally remove his character completely and the story would be better for it because it wouldn’t have any useless filler. Then I saw that the author created a new story. This was around the 500s in this novel. The lack of attention and dedication in this story was reflected in their slow updates. Especially since the other novel was more successful. The other novel ended and while the author was gracious enough to decide to finish this novel, they did not give it the proper send off that this novel deserved. In roughly 100 chapters, the author tried to wrap up all the story lines. That means all the mysteries were going to be unearthed and all the characters that were foreshadowed to be important would make their moves in just a few chapters. Personally, it feels like the ending focused too much on drama that separated the two lovers over and over again instead of just giving us closure and character growth. We’ve read hundreds of chapters of Mo Roulan suffering. Can she not catch a break? Can we not get some sweet moments? Literally the last chapter is them agreeing to giving it another shot. It has three side chapters. I was holding out hope that it could be redeemed, but two of them tell you all of the past while only the last gives you a glimpse into their happy future. If you want to read the entire novel in just three chapters, you can just read the side stories. It’s everything you need to know. I would have preferred it if He Jian recovered his first life’s memories earlier on, and they communicated with each other much earlier on. That way they could’ve both healed together and we could’ve gotten to see them mature as people and as a couple. It would’ve been nice to also see the mom’s family and to have seen her be happy. The mom had such a tragic life yet we didn’t get to see her live the happiness she deserved with Chi Rong. I also would’ve liked some kind of retribution towards He Jian’s friends for how they treated Mo Roulan during her first life. Now that I think about friends, it would’ve been great if Roulan had friends, but I digress. I hope if the author reads this they can handle my constructive criticism and focus on improving their future stories. It’s upsetting as a reader when you spend all of your time and money devoted to a story only to have such an unsatisfying ending. I have nothing against you as a writer. I hope you continue to create and improve, and wish you success!

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1yr
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
prati12

Author did great job. this book is amazing . I have read many books in this genre but this book was amazing to read, Thank You Author

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Shamim_A_Khanam

One of my favorite stories. I would like to have the story with happy ending and Lanlan and Jian to have a baby.

1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
SUSMITA_DAS

At first when I started reading this book it's because it was a free fr 24 hours ..bt then I started liking it so much❤️ that for the first time ever in my life I use my money 💰 for privileged chapter...

1yr
ดู 7 การตอบกลับ
Taruna_Singh_2668

book is fantastic like the character building of all stars .read your his rui the other book author I love your style of writing do give happy endings to all couples fl is strong ml is crazy after her I m there till the end author just update more frequently ❤️❤️💐

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Reshu_Gupta_8100

good novel but slow updates[img=faceslap]

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2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Krishna_1999

It's good novel but why there is so much misunderstanding between them i love both Jian and Lanlan together very fast😂😂 Like can't wait for some interesting development 😉😉 Overall love the novel😘😘

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2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
gati_lavenda

the quality of the book is top notch 😘😘I love it so much ..the characters are well arranged and used...you have a vivid description in every chapter

เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Orion_Kin

First of all, I extend my love to you dear author. You really know how to heal my soul with your stories. You're a true sanctuary creator and I appreciate it deeply. I'm not just flattering but I feel so relieved when I read your works. Please, please and please keep going on for I'll always seek for your works. I have a lot say but thank you. A lot

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
czennie_bb

wow just wow. i havent even start reading yet but the synopsis just brought tears in my eyes. i really hope this one won't disappoint. thank you so much author pls keep working hardd

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
mysteriousreader1

its very very draggy, its been like 450+ chapters but still no progress between the leads. Its like they will hold hands in 1000th chapter. Dont waste your time reading this

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Hanami_RV

this book is definitely a hidden gem, I love the twists and turns and the female lead character is shown very sweet and strong, I just got hooked up with this book, those who want to try definitely go for it !

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
MINI_L
LV 14 Badge

Hey author, overall this is a really good book. But the storyline in general is really slow. I hope there will be more development (especially regarding the relationship between Mo Roulan He Jian) in the future chapters. And please let this Shen Yiling girl finally realise in someway that He Hian doesnt love her. Like it’s a bit annoying that after 400 chapters she is still scheming etc.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
sparklegreen21

… an eighteen yr old attracted to a twelve year old? And Don’t say “she has an older mind set” that’s disgusting, yeah SHE might have experience as she’s reborn into life, but he just met her. Pedophilia shouldn’t be normalized….

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
mafiya_rope

[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
darien127

Me encanta la novela 🥰 pero me gustaría un poco más de intimidad entre los protagonistas. Dios ese He Jian tiene un bajo coeficiente emocional 🙄 no sabe expresar sus sentimientos 😣 Me pregunto si habrá oportunidad de que él recuerde los eventos de su vida pasada. Es que dejan a uno en ascuas para saber que sucedió y si tuvo algo que ver esa @#€&🤬 de Shen Yilian? o como se llame 😡 y su estúpido perro Shi Fenju? Realmente hay tantos estúpidos que se dejan usar, que más que lastima merecen una paliza para ver si espabilan😤😡

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
amethyst_28

This is the first story that I feel depressed and sad at the same time. I feel bad for Shen Youlin all she wants is the love and affection of her parents. I hate her mother being a perfectionist. I hope Shen Youlin will be proud of herself and someday she will accept who she is

เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Sei_devil

Point out if i am wrong The fl helped kidnapped ml ok i get it she needed money to save her mother but then in her previous life ceo he did successfully run away he was captured again then didn’t fl feel guilty he was also a kid. she was literally stalking asking him to love her why would any would feel disgusted. Then in this she literally is treating herself as a victim why don’t she now look how he cares for her. Ughh I don’t get it. Everyone have some bad relatives she should at that time toughen up not be like love sick stupid fool.

3yr
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
Nina_Kov

You can't let it go until you go further to see what will happen. Nice[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Msmouamoua

I love the storyline of the FL trying to forge a different path for herself. However, it is a little difficult to read when the gender pronouns change for he to she or her to him, etc. Without the right pronouns, it’s hard to follow what is really going on when the pronouns are not correct. I also love the side stories of the other characters, but it can be hard to follow with the storyline of the FL and ML because of how they are split from chapter to chapter or within a chapter. For example, there was one chapter that mainly focused on the FL’s mother, and the chapter sorta ended with a cliffhanger, but the continuation of this chapter was seen at least a couple of chapters later, where the main storyline sorta move on a lot, making the timing weirdly off.

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Kira_4554

okay I wanna give this book afive star rating. And yeah I love the Female lead a lot. And I really want to smack some love knowledge into male lead. Author please do it as he is very cold 🥶🥶 like Antarctica. Make it warm for our baby Roulan. And yeah face slapping is what I like the most in this book. I suggest all to read this book you'll find it amazing. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
OneSevenEight

Right off the bat, the plot seems interesting (despite being a CEO series) and the writing is great. This seems like a contender for the spirities!

3yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
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