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A game novel, I was looking for a good one and now it seems my search has come to an end, I loved the way you describe the fights, the clarity with which you talk about the characters and the way you explain the world. Surely deserves a 10/10
It's well done. The language is smooth and easy, even if there were a few fumbles here and there. The characters are the exact kind of two-dimentional that usually appear in J-novels. I have searched long and wide, I am yet to meet a single pair of siblings or friends that sound half as understanding or inspirational as those appear in these kind of novels.. the genre is something I love, so as expected I love it to the bits. I love it when Genre novels do exactly what they should be doing! I think I found a keeper for my library.
Good start and fast development of events. Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.
I've already started reading th early chapters and I'm hyped for this book, with its. Nice and smooth story development. Highly interested in more to come author keep up the great work! Kudos to you.!
Another success in the making! I was extremely captivated by the first chapter and God! The ml is just so cool. I really used to wonder how people are able to pull off such writing skills. As a writer, I recommend this book. Good luck in Spirity, dear 😁
This story is hurt by poor grammar. There is a kernal of something interesting underneath, but it is difficult to get at it. The character seems very one-dimensional, so we're not really rooting for him so much as just sitting back and watching.
Very nice story! After reading the synopsis and the first few chapters, I think this novel was right up my alley. It is interesting, and each chapter has descriptive details that explain the characters' behaviors and motives. I hope the author will continue to release more chapters. Good job, author!
Very enjoyable with some lengthy chapters. The main character is fascinating but so are the side characters. The back story was well written, giving you a good state of mind for the main character. However, I would have loved it if you build on that a little more and added more details. Aside from that, this story is amazing, both engaging and rewarding to watch.
This is the first time I've read this type of novel. Ans I'm telling y'all, give this book a try. It won't disappoint you. I love the male lead, he never quits.
I am very pleased to see such an amazing novel! It was so good that I didn't know that I have already read a few chapters! The characters were very lifelike and realistic. With emotions to let us see their character. The plot was steadily building up and it was nice! The worldbuilding was vast and detailed. I like how you explain the nooks and crannies in your craft. Overall, It was easy to get lost in your novel as it was very immersive! I will wait for your work to reach a million views and that will be pleasing to the eyes! Kudos and good luck! Peace ✌️
You need to improve your grammar as it really ruins the story. The character is way too open with his abilities and your transitions aren't the smoothest. The story is alright but you should probably lay out more information about the current world the MC lives in.
Very nice! The chapters are nice and long, and full of great descriptive detail that makes this story a pleasure to read. I love the plot, especially with the idea of restarting a life after a tragedy has occurred. The characters are well fleshed out, though I would maybe like to see a bit more detail in their personality here and there. I think the one thing the author needs to work on is being careful not to switch tenses. There were several occasions that the tenses shifted, and a few grammatical errors, but these can easily be fixed. Great work author
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Honestly, I'm not a fan of videogame type genre until I've seen Overlord yet I still thought I won't love reading it and there's this novel. I love how spotless it is, grammar-wise(ain't an expert in language but certainly certify if there's errors, it is minimal). I'm in awe with the world building as well as Yumiko's background. For me, I feel like rooting for him because his disability in real world is not the end of the world for him. It's like the game opened doors for him to go beyond the limits he was not supposed to surpass(at least from what I understand). Keep rockin' and if it's not much a stretch, I like to see this animated or live action movie. Wish you well!
A game novel, I was looking for a good one and now it seems my search has come to an end, I loved the way you describe the fights, the clarity with which you talk about the characters and the way you explain the world. Surely deserves a 10/10
It's well done. The language is smooth and easy, even if there were a few fumbles here and there. The characters are the exact kind of two-dimentional that usually appear in J-novels. I have searched long and wide, I am yet to meet a single pair of siblings or friends that sound half as understanding or inspirational as those appear in these kind of novels.. the genre is something I love, so as expected I love it to the bits. I love it when Genre novels do exactly what they should be doing! I think I found a keeper for my library.
Good start and fast development of events. Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.
I've already started reading th early chapters and I'm hyped for this book, with its. Nice and smooth story development. Highly interested in more to come author keep up the great work! Kudos to you.!
Another success in the making! I was extremely captivated by the first chapter and God! The ml is just so cool. I really used to wonder how people are able to pull off such writing skills. As a writer, I recommend this book. Good luck in Spirity, dear 😁
This story is hurt by poor grammar. There is a kernal of something interesting underneath, but it is difficult to get at it. The character seems very one-dimensional, so we're not really rooting for him so much as just sitting back and watching.
Very nice story! After reading the synopsis and the first few chapters, I think this novel was right up my alley. It is interesting, and each chapter has descriptive details that explain the characters' behaviors and motives. I hope the author will continue to release more chapters. Good job, author!
Very enjoyable with some lengthy chapters. The main character is fascinating but so are the side characters. The back story was well written, giving you a good state of mind for the main character. However, I would have loved it if you build on that a little more and added more details. Aside from that, this story is amazing, both engaging and rewarding to watch.
This is the first time I've read this type of novel. Ans I'm telling y'all, give this book a try. It won't disappoint you. I love the male lead, he never quits.
I am very pleased to see such an amazing novel! It was so good that I didn't know that I have already read a few chapters! The characters were very lifelike and realistic. With emotions to let us see their character. The plot was steadily building up and it was nice! The worldbuilding was vast and detailed. I like how you explain the nooks and crannies in your craft. Overall, It was easy to get lost in your novel as it was very immersive! I will wait for your work to reach a million views and that will be pleasing to the eyes! Kudos and good luck! Peace ✌️
You need to improve your grammar as it really ruins the story. The character is way too open with his abilities and your transitions aren't the smoothest. The story is alright but you should probably lay out more information about the current world the MC lives in.
Very nice! The chapters are nice and long, and full of great descriptive detail that makes this story a pleasure to read. I love the plot, especially with the idea of restarting a life after a tragedy has occurred. The characters are well fleshed out, though I would maybe like to see a bit more detail in their personality here and there. I think the one thing the author needs to work on is being careful not to switch tenses. There were several occasions that the tenses shifted, and a few grammatical errors, but these can easily be fixed. Great work author
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Honestly, I'm not a fan of videogame type genre until I've seen Overlord yet I still thought I won't love reading it and there's this novel. I love how spotless it is, grammar-wise(ain't an expert in language but certainly certify if there's errors, it is minimal). I'm in awe with the world building as well as Yumiko's background. For me, I feel like rooting for him because his disability in real world is not the end of the world for him. It's like the game opened doors for him to go beyond the limits he was not supposed to surpass(at least from what I understand). Keep rockin' and if it's not much a stretch, I like to see this animated or live action movie. Wish you well!