17รีวิว
4.98
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The writing is outstanding, the story is gripping and well developed, the characters are well-made and iconic, and the background is excellent. What I'd like to see a bit more of is some description of the environment. Some description of the feelings that we Humans get (smelling, touching, seeing, hearing). I'd honestly like to know what people are wearing perhaps not every time but sometimes it really brings vitality to a story. With that being said, I've been on the line to decide if I should give you around 4.8 stars for having a strong well-rounded story that to me could have a couple more things (that are like bonuses) or to give you 5 stars because while you had most things but not everything. This time, I will give you 5 stars because I'm in a generous mood. I also invite you to check out my fanfiction "Avatar: Macai's Journey" which can be found on this platform. If you are interested, it would be nice to get the opinion of a vivid and creative writer such as yourself.
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this is !!!!!! this is!!!!! this is!!!!!! just worshiping 🙏🙇🙌 the Lord Author and his creation .[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Your such an amazing writer, from Self-eesh to cycled you always find another way to make great stories 😍 I'll waiting every monday and Thursdays for a new episode 👀🙌🙌🙌
I love the book cover and the areangement of events is very creative. if this book gets played as a real movie it will be a big hit because i wanna see all these characters flexing their aura. I appreciate you author, Salute
The fact that i first read this book when i wanted to get some sleep but now i always look forward to every Monday and Thursday is crazy ! I hope this book gets adopted as a real movie
I love how this book gets more and more interesting with each new chapter. And i know i sound crazy but i think Misaki is the sexiest, perfect lady in this book. I’m obsessed with this angel.
Less go less go less goooo! It’s the suspense of this book for me. it’s either you love a character or hate him/her, there’s no in btn. The balance btn the back story and the present life is insanely creative, and i enjoy each chapter! Such a bombass story 🐉
1 episode per week is so unfair ! I want to read this everyday, i love this book, i love the back story and the present story, i can’t wait for the connection PS: I already hate Qin
Ukraine is the most manly scaredy-cat , all his scenes are my favorite 😂😂😂 i haven’t seen any sparks yet but i already ship them! The backstory is very very very interesting 🙌🏾
I know a great story when i read one, and from the description i absolutely know how great this story is and how more interesting it will get. YOU WONT REGRET READING THIS
my all time and favorite author 😍she never disappoint 🤗another taste of story 😙i real like character names ziko unique 🤗 can't wait for more exps 🤗😍
Another hit story from Teemzie! She never disappoints. The characters are very-i don’t know- very interesting, i just can’t wait for the climax
🌼🌸🌺🍁🍀Hello guys, author here 👋🏽 I’m glad you’re following through my book, thank you so much. Feel free to drop your comments and reviews. I’d really like to know what you think. Thank you 🌼🌸🌺🍁🍀
The writing is outstanding, the story is gripping and well developed, the characters are well-made and iconic, and the background is excellent. What I'd like to see a bit more of is some description of the environment. Some description of the feelings that we Humans get (smelling, touching, seeing, hearing). I'd honestly like to know what people are wearing perhaps not every time but sometimes it really brings vitality to a story. With that being said, I've been on the line to decide if I should give you around 4.8 stars for having a strong well-rounded story that to me could have a couple more things (that are like bonuses) or to give you 5 stars because while you had most things but not everything. This time, I will give you 5 stars because I'm in a generous mood. I also invite you to check out my fanfiction "Avatar: Macai's Journey" which can be found on this platform. If you are interested, it would be nice to get the opinion of a vivid and creative writer such as yourself.
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this is !!!!!! this is!!!!! this is!!!!!! just worshiping 🙏🙇🙌 the Lord Author and his creation .[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Your such an amazing writer, from Self-eesh to cycled you always find another way to make great stories 😍 I'll waiting every monday and Thursdays for a new episode 👀🙌🙌🙌
I love the book cover and the areangement of events is very creative. if this book gets played as a real movie it will be a big hit because i wanna see all these characters flexing their aura. I appreciate you author, Salute
The fact that i first read this book when i wanted to get some sleep but now i always look forward to every Monday and Thursday is crazy ! I hope this book gets adopted as a real movie
I love how this book gets more and more interesting with each new chapter. And i know i sound crazy but i think Misaki is the sexiest, perfect lady in this book. I’m obsessed with this angel.
Less go less go less goooo! It’s the suspense of this book for me. it’s either you love a character or hate him/her, there’s no in btn. The balance btn the back story and the present life is insanely creative, and i enjoy each chapter! Such a bombass story 🐉
1 episode per week is so unfair ! I want to read this everyday, i love this book, i love the back story and the present story, i can’t wait for the connection PS: I already hate Qin
Ukraine is the most manly scaredy-cat , all his scenes are my favorite 😂😂😂 i haven’t seen any sparks yet but i already ship them! The backstory is very very very interesting 🙌🏾
I know a great story when i read one, and from the description i absolutely know how great this story is and how more interesting it will get. YOU WONT REGRET READING THIS
my all time and favorite author 😍she never disappoint 🤗another taste of story 😙i real like character names ziko unique 🤗 can't wait for more exps 🤗😍
Another hit story from Teemzie! She never disappoints. The characters are very-i don’t know- very interesting, i just can’t wait for the climax
🌼🌸🌺🍁🍀Hello guys, author here 👋🏽 I’m glad you’re following through my book, thank you so much. Feel free to drop your comments and reviews. I’d really like to know what you think. Thank you 🌼🌸🌺🍁🍀