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People say he is stupid, but you seem to forget that the moment he got his search bar, he was twisted by revenge his mentality changed, emotions unstable but it was kept in check by vengeance, you think he would he would keep his mentality from before his imprisonment? the love for his gf is a remnant of pre-twisted personality, and the author was so stupid that he was in a rush to complete the story and his incompetent rush made his work incomplete. the current story is hallow bone, his changes are not elaborated on, and there are many pieces are missing, the author is stupid and abandoned his almost master piece into a incomplete work.
Somewhat fun, quite a big worldbuilding but leads to nothing, same as the ending which doesn't end any of the plot points
I get why people are complaining so much but reading it until the last chapter, it was pretty decent read tbh. Sad that I will never know how he retaliate. First few chapters was a little inconsistent like you all are complaining about but it somehow understandable. He just got out of prison after all. It understandable his minds and action are inconsistent from his aim even with system. Those boxing part seem unnecessary too. Still though, it decent and pretty fun seeing the scheme unfold. Glad I didn't get influence by these comments before reading it.
Я остановилась на главе, где главный герой изменил своей девушке..и просто огромной разочарование.больше нет желания читать ЭТО дальше, мне не нравится такие персонажи..думала что главный герой верный, не забывает свою девушку, приходит, навещает, нооооооооо как всегда.получил чит и тут же забыл того кто его спас.чувствую что главный герой и дальше будет изменять с левой женщиной, а потом появится ещё одна, потом другая и т.д. и воооооот образовался гарем.2/10, 2 чисто за интересное начало
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I feel like I have wasted my time reading this novel. 😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠
I love this novel so much. Yes, I do think that I would have used the system differently if I had it, but you can tell from the MC's consistency that this is his character. And personally, I would rather the author have a character who isn't jumping around from idiot to genius purely because it is better received by readers. The only thing that I can think of making the book better is if it was completed, it last updated 12 months ago and on other sites it's marked as completed....and chapter 131 being the last chapter would make me more disappointed than if people actually believed the 1 star reviews that have been left.
this novel is example of wasted potential. great premise and beginning, but falls short of expectations. mc or maybe rather author cant use power they are granted. all to that novel feels like it is cut off from ending.
It's compelling at times, but as a whole, it's just a big, edgy revenge fantasy which isn't really worth reading. Make of that what you will.
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Writing quality... is chinese. MC is stupid. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Why stop translate? The RAW has more chapters................................................................................................
This post is great........................................................................I didn't know what to put so I just added periods.
The story started off a bit amateurish but as it went on, it became better and better. Towards the end both the writing quality as well as the story development become phenomenal. However its a pity that it ended at a cliffhanger and that too at only a 130 chapters.
trash novel, the starting concept was interesting but character are extremely one dimensional, the story is full of typo, contain some propaganda, start to seem like Chinese cultivation, in the end after 10 chapter, nothing good was found in there... sad the concept seemed interesting
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I absolutely love this book, it honestly had me reading it for awhile! The fact that I’ve read it twice amazes me, I do hope the autho post more chapters. I don’t know if the story is totally finished yet. (Recommend: For people who like dark themes *like me*)
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trash book the trash itself , so much potential everything is wasted sigh the most blockhead protagonist in the world when u can get anything in the world u r not using your brain but plotting and face slapping by how cool u would look by killing someone and that's okk if it's repeatedly done for the nth time then it's trash ,it's a story written by a kid who really liked Hollywood movies so he just wrote it to get the feel and i am somewhat ok with this but u just left the story in the middile of nowhere for sure trash
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I finished reading the story, tbh I am a bit disappointed where it ended off. I feel like the story has a lot potential in it to keep on going, plus just seems to be cut. The MC has an interesting power, a search bar that can answer anything. Though the potential is limited to only searching how to be safe(plot armour) and how to make the perfect crime. There could be lots of ways to use it instead of trying to predict the future. It seems like the power is only related to predicting the future. more side character development could be nice. the idea of having a powerful crew is good, we see the have a lot of potential but yet nothing develops with them. Tbh I like the dark power hungry revenge for love story. though fairly contradictory with a power that seem to be iq based. feels more like the power is in control than him. So in generals lots of potential, good ideas and development , good pace. It more of a book that need polishing but I found it an enjoyable read.
Honestly the beginning wasn't that bad, but everything change at the bar fight scene....like the he'll dude, the MC was all about revenge for what haooeb to him and his girlfriend but he never show real concern, he only visited once also at the first opportunity he cheats, and he could had done so much with his ability, like become Moriarty!
trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash
I should have read the reviews first before reading this...ifk what tf thus novel is. I dropped it at first because I thought it was stupid but then I saw the titles of the chapters. I'm like this is interesting maybe he'll go to the underground boxing thing to bet on the winner with his omnipotent power and start his business from there until he takes over the underworld. oh how wrong I was... and he cheated on his wife( I think it's his wife idk) who saved him in an accident just because of a woman "fragrance" smell. the author is brain dead just like his Mc. not even god can help this story. anyways I regret coming back to read this novel. goodbye.
I saw a review that was exactly the kind of "why isn't this pizza a cheeseburger?!" review that I hate the most...So, I figured I'd give it a shot, imagine my surprise when I read the story and found myself wondering the same thing. I don't believe in fighting the story, but certain incongorus/ill-fitting details kept popping up like skittles in my lentil soup. Basically Bitefuls of wrongness that ultimately made me have to bow out because I ended sort of feeling like the MC's a cocky fool with tunnel vision and a god complex(basically Kira from deathnote but worse)...an impression that grew stronger each time the author tried to call him a "genius"....real geniuses aren't IDed at the scene of the crime and plenty of people have gone to jail on less. Especially when your opponent is wealthy and corrupt. The concept is very cool though and so long as you can turn your brain off, this is a moderately enjoyable story.
Although It is similar to the series The Plateau (Fringe) . .still i like it very much .. .. When will its another volume come . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood start goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
People say he is stupid, but you seem to forget that the moment he got his search bar, he was twisted by revenge his mentality changed, emotions unstable but it was kept in check by vengeance, you think he would he would keep his mentality from before his imprisonment? the love for his gf is a remnant of pre-twisted personality, and the author was so stupid that he was in a rush to complete the story and his incompetent rush made his work incomplete. the current story is hallow bone, his changes are not elaborated on, and there are many pieces are missing, the author is stupid and abandoned his almost master piece into a incomplete work.
Somewhat fun, quite a big worldbuilding but leads to nothing, same as the ending which doesn't end any of the plot points
I get why people are complaining so much but reading it until the last chapter, it was pretty decent read tbh. Sad that I will never know how he retaliate. First few chapters was a little inconsistent like you all are complaining about but it somehow understandable. He just got out of prison after all. It understandable his minds and action are inconsistent from his aim even with system. Those boxing part seem unnecessary too. Still though, it decent and pretty fun seeing the scheme unfold. Glad I didn't get influence by these comments before reading it.
Я остановилась на главе, где главный герой изменил своей девушке..и просто огромной разочарование.больше нет желания читать ЭТО дальше, мне не нравится такие персонажи..думала что главный герой верный, не забывает свою девушку, приходит, навещает, нооооооооо как всегда.получил чит и тут же забыл того кто его спас.чувствую что главный герой и дальше будет изменять с левой женщиной, а потом появится ещё одна, потом другая и т.д. и воооооот образовался гарем.2/10, 2 чисто за интересное начало
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I feel like I have wasted my time reading this novel. 😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠
I love this novel so much. Yes, I do think that I would have used the system differently if I had it, but you can tell from the MC's consistency that this is his character. And personally, I would rather the author have a character who isn't jumping around from idiot to genius purely because it is better received by readers. The only thing that I can think of making the book better is if it was completed, it last updated 12 months ago and on other sites it's marked as completed....and chapter 131 being the last chapter would make me more disappointed than if people actually believed the 1 star reviews that have been left.
this novel is example of wasted potential. great premise and beginning, but falls short of expectations. mc or maybe rather author cant use power they are granted. all to that novel feels like it is cut off from ending.
It's compelling at times, but as a whole, it's just a big, edgy revenge fantasy which isn't really worth reading. Make of that what you will.
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Writing quality... is chinese. MC is stupid. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Why stop translate? The RAW has more chapters................................................................................................
This post is great........................................................................I didn't know what to put so I just added periods.
The story started off a bit amateurish but as it went on, it became better and better. Towards the end both the writing quality as well as the story development become phenomenal. However its a pity that it ended at a cliffhanger and that too at only a 130 chapters.
trash novel, the starting concept was interesting but character are extremely one dimensional, the story is full of typo, contain some propaganda, start to seem like Chinese cultivation, in the end after 10 chapter, nothing good was found in there... sad the concept seemed interesting
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I absolutely love this book, it honestly had me reading it for awhile! The fact that I’ve read it twice amazes me, I do hope the autho post more chapters. I don’t know if the story is totally finished yet. (Recommend: For people who like dark themes *like me*)
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trash book the trash itself , so much potential everything is wasted sigh the most blockhead protagonist in the world when u can get anything in the world u r not using your brain but plotting and face slapping by how cool u would look by killing someone and that's okk if it's repeatedly done for the nth time then it's trash ,it's a story written by a kid who really liked Hollywood movies so he just wrote it to get the feel and i am somewhat ok with this but u just left the story in the middile of nowhere for sure trash
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I finished reading the story, tbh I am a bit disappointed where it ended off. I feel like the story has a lot potential in it to keep on going, plus just seems to be cut. The MC has an interesting power, a search bar that can answer anything. Though the potential is limited to only searching how to be safe(plot armour) and how to make the perfect crime. There could be lots of ways to use it instead of trying to predict the future. It seems like the power is only related to predicting the future. more side character development could be nice. the idea of having a powerful crew is good, we see the have a lot of potential but yet nothing develops with them. Tbh I like the dark power hungry revenge for love story. though fairly contradictory with a power that seem to be iq based. feels more like the power is in control than him. So in generals lots of potential, good ideas and development , good pace. It more of a book that need polishing but I found it an enjoyable read.
Honestly the beginning wasn't that bad, but everything change at the bar fight scene....like the he'll dude, the MC was all about revenge for what haooeb to him and his girlfriend but he never show real concern, he only visited once also at the first opportunity he cheats, and he could had done so much with his ability, like become Moriarty!
trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash
I should have read the reviews first before reading this...ifk what tf thus novel is. I dropped it at first because I thought it was stupid but then I saw the titles of the chapters. I'm like this is interesting maybe he'll go to the underground boxing thing to bet on the winner with his omnipotent power and start his business from there until he takes over the underworld. oh how wrong I was... and he cheated on his wife( I think it's his wife idk) who saved him in an accident just because of a woman "fragrance" smell. the author is brain dead just like his Mc. not even god can help this story. anyways I regret coming back to read this novel. goodbye.
I saw a review that was exactly the kind of "why isn't this pizza a cheeseburger?!" review that I hate the most...So, I figured I'd give it a shot, imagine my surprise when I read the story and found myself wondering the same thing. I don't believe in fighting the story, but certain incongorus/ill-fitting details kept popping up like skittles in my lentil soup. Basically Bitefuls of wrongness that ultimately made me have to bow out because I ended sort of feeling like the MC's a cocky fool with tunnel vision and a god complex(basically Kira from deathnote but worse)...an impression that grew stronger each time the author tried to call him a "genius"....real geniuses aren't IDed at the scene of the crime and plenty of people have gone to jail on less. Especially when your opponent is wealthy and corrupt. The concept is very cool though and so long as you can turn your brain off, this is a moderately enjoyable story.
Although It is similar to the series The Plateau (Fringe) . .still i like it very much .. .. When will its another volume come . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood start goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Love it, but I would love more a chapter where everyone realizes what John did