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Till now, the story development is quite good. Looking forward to see further chapters and read the story ahead. Would surely recommend others to read, a little different thn normal stories!👍🏻❤
This is good and it shows every detail of the character and places, I m love in with a book , please please read this book .you all with love it
I don't mean to be rude but I honestly think that the writing quality still has a huge room for improvement, especially (but not limited to) grammar, punctuation and the general coherence. But it's certainly entertaining!
This is unique story. Good job Author. I am sure it will become more interesting with each chapter. I recommend this novel, because it is just interesting.
The synopsis is catchy and I love the way the world has been described. I would like to thank the author for designing the world in such a beautiful way.
I couldn't help but give this book a five star, it's really amazing. I was completely hooked reading the first chapter. I can see the passion the author has put into this work, keep it up dear author 👍.
The author has taken time with explaining and pulling us into the story earnestly <3 I can keep on reading and reading....... Keep up the good work author-san.
I love the plot of this novel and the author is doing a great job, it is a very interesting story after reading few chapters here I am to leave the rating. I hope you continue this amazing work.
Loving this story and this story have uniqueness in it and I m so much happy to read it .Kudos to author who is writing such an amazing Story
Wow! I'm done with the first two chapters and this story is unique and intriguing that I am getting immersed as I read further. I love how good this book is written. this is well-written, from the character designs up to the world background. everything is well-thought and well-written. the author did a great job writing this story and this is a must read/recommend!
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The author is great at setting the mood and leading the readers through the thought process that brought about this masterpiece. Hats off to you!!!!💯💯💯💯
Great book you've got there. Very descriptive and unique plot. I enjoyed reading the synopsis and like how the story flaws. Beautiful work of art. Keep it up.
This certainly took a while. The book is rich in detail and context. It doesn't take you on an immediate roller coaster ride. Rather it takes its time building up the atmosphere and everything. Truthfully, it took me a while to fully understand where this story was going with its cast of characters, chapter 10 onwards made it clear thankfully. Based on what I read, characters are there, although they could use more work so that they can really stand out in this book. If you enjoy a well paced story with great detail to its background and situation, then this book is for you.
wow, great author my mouth waters at the intensity of such good book, I would recommend it to anyone, am so intrigued by the book and would love to know more on it
Good novel, understandable and very good world background, i like the way of writing. Its very unique, they way you want to express your world background is clear too........................................................
Author your book is amazing. I don't whether to anticipate for Aelin's character growth in this book. Or to look forward to how Elentiya would avenge for Aelin with the help of Park Taekook. Not to mention i am looking for this taboo love story between Taekook and Kavya, too. Because, i can bet they will fall for each other. Harder than anyone can thought. Kudos to the author, you did a great work.
I love the writing progression. The exposure of multiple world and their idea is nicely done. The character mapping is really good. The world design is really interesting. I am really excited to read this 😸
Author, first of all the word that you used are very precise, you completely describe the world background so well, the characters, they are funny and very lovely! You know how to describe every move they create, where mind goes imaginative and precise about the scene.🤧❤️
🤩🤩 Bringing my bed to camp over 🛌 The story is really interesting the characters are fleshed and you can see how much work the author put into building her world. **Rubs hands together* Can't wait.
Unique as it seemed, it is so actually. The author has punched down her thoughts in words with the sheerness of a professional writer, and that's the uniqueness here. May the writer becomes successful.
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The writing here is beautiful, definately above most novels here on webnovel. Author's vocabulary is extensive and paints a vivid picture for the reader to lose themselves in. For any lover of fantasy, dont miss out!! give this one a shot for your own sake. <3
This novel has a good story background with little bit of Indian touch which I like the most. Improvement on writing style and grammar will definitely make it a top ranking novel.
I think the story is very good and pretty interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
Wow! I love the plot, the flow of the story and also the genre. Knowing the author personally somehow added to the excitement of reading the first chapters! I will be sure to return and read some more chapters soon! this is a highly enjoyable read! Best of luck my dear friend! ♥
.................................................... OMG this is one of the good novels I have read so far. love the story plot. and also love the way how the story moves on. hoping for more in the future dear author.
This book is so good?!!? I really like how the story develops and the author really has put on her passion in here. Ive seen books where readers get lost in writers world but writer getting lost in readers world is different and unique. Keep it up
woah.. great work author... everything is so perfect.. the synopsis is so catchy and literally this novel is a chef kiss..I would highly recommend it to everyone..
I am still dipping my toes into the literally fiction pool, finding what works for me and what doesn’t. Books like An accidental encounter of fate are definitely my cup of tea. This book is like the dystopian Lord of the Rings, with its richly developed culture and economics
This is one of the BEST stories out here in Webnovel platform. The writing is good and descriptive which maintained its stroyline's smoothness. I hope this book gains success and popularity in the future♥️
...........Writing quality is one of the best ............story development is also best . ........... Character design is also very detailed. I wish you win the contest best of luck .
Till now, the story development is quite good. Looking forward to see further chapters and read the story ahead. Would surely recommend others to read, a little different thn normal stories!👍🏻❤
This is good and it shows every detail of the character and places, I m love in with a book , please please read this book .you all with love it
I don't mean to be rude but I honestly think that the writing quality still has a huge room for improvement, especially (but not limited to) grammar, punctuation and the general coherence. But it's certainly entertaining!
This is unique story. Good job Author. I am sure it will become more interesting with each chapter. I recommend this novel, because it is just interesting.
The synopsis is catchy and I love the way the world has been described. I would like to thank the author for designing the world in such a beautiful way.
I couldn't help but give this book a five star, it's really amazing. I was completely hooked reading the first chapter. I can see the passion the author has put into this work, keep it up dear author 👍.
The author has taken time with explaining and pulling us into the story earnestly <3 I can keep on reading and reading....... Keep up the good work author-san.
I love the plot of this novel and the author is doing a great job, it is a very interesting story after reading few chapters here I am to leave the rating. I hope you continue this amazing work.
Loving this story and this story have uniqueness in it and I m so much happy to read it .Kudos to author who is writing such an amazing Story
Wow! I'm done with the first two chapters and this story is unique and intriguing that I am getting immersed as I read further. I love how good this book is written. this is well-written, from the character designs up to the world background. everything is well-thought and well-written. the author did a great job writing this story and this is a must read/recommend!
Err, where do I start? Hmm... Well, for one, I can say the writing quality's quite good, although a bit less of exclamations would be nice. Aside from that, everything's perfect. The story develops at a decent pace, not too fast, nor too slow, which I absolutely love! The characters are well built, and you can understand what they're like pretty easily. I haven't read that far yet, but from what I've seen, the world background is also nicely built. Definitely a must read. The author is doing a nice job. Hope you keep it up!
The author is great at setting the mood and leading the readers through the thought process that brought about this masterpiece. Hats off to you!!!!💯💯💯💯
Great book you've got there. Very descriptive and unique plot. I enjoyed reading the synopsis and like how the story flaws. Beautiful work of art. Keep it up.
This certainly took a while. The book is rich in detail and context. It doesn't take you on an immediate roller coaster ride. Rather it takes its time building up the atmosphere and everything. Truthfully, it took me a while to fully understand where this story was going with its cast of characters, chapter 10 onwards made it clear thankfully. Based on what I read, characters are there, although they could use more work so that they can really stand out in this book. If you enjoy a well paced story with great detail to its background and situation, then this book is for you.
wow, great author my mouth waters at the intensity of such good book, I would recommend it to anyone, am so intrigued by the book and would love to know more on it
Good novel, understandable and very good world background, i like the way of writing. Its very unique, they way you want to express your world background is clear too........................................................
Author your book is amazing. I don't whether to anticipate for Aelin's character growth in this book. Or to look forward to how Elentiya would avenge for Aelin with the help of Park Taekook. Not to mention i am looking for this taboo love story between Taekook and Kavya, too. Because, i can bet they will fall for each other. Harder than anyone can thought. Kudos to the author, you did a great work.
I love the writing progression. The exposure of multiple world and their idea is nicely done. The character mapping is really good. The world design is really interesting. I am really excited to read this 😸
Author, first of all the word that you used are very precise, you completely describe the world background so well, the characters, they are funny and very lovely! You know how to describe every move they create, where mind goes imaginative and precise about the scene.🤧❤️
🤩🤩 Bringing my bed to camp over 🛌 The story is really interesting the characters are fleshed and you can see how much work the author put into building her world. **Rubs hands together* Can't wait.
Unique as it seemed, it is so actually. The author has punched down her thoughts in words with the sheerness of a professional writer, and that's the uniqueness here. May the writer becomes successful.
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This novel has a good story background with little bit of Indian touch which I like the most. Improvement on writing style and grammar will definitely make it a top ranking novel.
I think the story is very good and pretty interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
Wow! I love the plot, the flow of the story and also the genre. Knowing the author personally somehow added to the excitement of reading the first chapters! I will be sure to return and read some more chapters soon! this is a highly enjoyable read! Best of luck my dear friend! ♥
.................................................... OMG this is one of the good novels I have read so far. love the story plot. and also love the way how the story moves on. hoping for more in the future dear author.
This book is so good?!!? I really like how the story develops and the author really has put on her passion in here. Ive seen books where readers get lost in writers world but writer getting lost in readers world is different and unique. Keep it up
woah.. great work author... everything is so perfect.. the synopsis is so catchy and literally this novel is a chef kiss..I would highly recommend it to everyone..
I am still dipping my toes into the literally fiction pool, finding what works for me and what doesn’t. Books like An accidental encounter of fate are definitely my cup of tea. This book is like the dystopian Lord of the Rings, with its richly developed culture and economics
This is one of the BEST stories out here in Webnovel platform. The writing is good and descriptive which maintained its stroyline's smoothness. I hope this book gains success and popularity in the future♥️
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