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this is currently my fav novel on this platform and i'll do my best to recommend it to my frinds. the mc's character is realistic but cynical, smart but not a genius, he's not too op but still is strong. and what ii ike nost about this is his bloodline, it is unique and not used by most authors. the concept of necromancy and system might be too overused but this story is a fresh breath of air. world buildung is superb, plot is amazing and writing quality is great. honestly this one is an all rounder, now all i need is a webtoon/manhwa out of it and i can die happy.. thank u author for the hard work, i'll always try my best to support you! please never stop writing!
I have just read through all of the 71 currently available chapters for this story and have to say that it definitely is an interesting story with a unique premise, and definitely worth the time to read. The actions and twists with the plot are almost impossible to see through much less guess, which makes the world and the main character that much more interesting, as you discover more about the MC's fate and the changes he is making to the world. The pacing of the story is just right to allow you to not get bored with constant grinding for the tiniest gain in power but not make you bored with the MC becoming an over powered God in say 30 or 40 chapters. The authors talent for amazing world building, character development, and in depth planning of his story's and where he wants to take them which is easily seen in his other work Level Up Legacy, is easily found in this story as well. Besides the occasional misspelling, the story is an amazing read, with nothing else quite like it available.
This hasn't been updated in a year, but I hope the author continues it, because it is very unique in the way everything works in this series, it's very different from others I've read on this app.
Why don't they update it? I even created an account to read this novel but for several months there has been no update, I don't know if it only happens to me.
I liked it at first, but the PC becomes more and more inhuman, especially when he kills innocent people I can't stand :'( (chp 183, I didn't really understand why he killed her, there was no reason . sad, I stop here personally )
Interesting world building premise as well as a nice diversity of interesting powers. Characters are very obviously good or bad, if they’re bad they’re narrow-minded bullies who act irrationally constantly, if they’re good they range from cliche to interesting. Main character quickly becomes better than everyone else at everything within a couple chapters, whether it’s something trivial or not, and has a SSS++ event/item handed to him every couple chapters. To me the story lacks good writing. Could be a fun read but author is too quick to jump into powering up the MC and getting back at bullies.
A hero with high morals and a sense of justice, yes, same stupid Chinese clichés, saving children, helping innocent people, etc. Don't be fooled by him killing his classmate in the first seasons. He's not evil and his words are contradictory, meaning friends, justice and pretty girls around him as usual.
lemme tell you a little story... hahahahahahahahhahahahahahhaahhahahahahahahhaahhahahahahahahhahahahahhahahahahhahahahahahahahahhhahahahahhahahahah
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Its a good story about changing fate. Necromancy still hasn’t popped in, but the story is progressing at a decent pace. The main character vengeful to a moronic degree, but the author tries to fix it later on. Last gripe is the updating stability, but besides this stuff solid story.
This is an excellent story, that quality-wise ranks higher than most stories on this site and I hope the author would continue this one of the readable pieces of works in Webnovel(Please, I beg Thee!!!!!!)
A very good novel so far (chapter 150). The MC is a cynical survivor trying his best to prevent a catastrophe The scars of what occurred in his first life also mold the way the MC reacts and behaves. It's logical and there plot armour is invisible making the story engaging, the side characters are fully fleshed out and don't exist only to praise the MC or be stepping stones. Pacing is very good ie. The MC doesn't level up everytime he turns around. So non of the usual webnovel nonsense 😏
Very interesting story where the main protagonist has unusual character and background. The story describes the fate of Nikol, who was hated by people in his past life. This time he got a chance to chance his fate. Killing, stealing and planning...Nikol is boy, who will dominate the world. The story is very simple, but interesting :)
This is so basic that i needed to write here i woupd give 3 star for everything but that one line saying that the cristals should go to the person who last hited is beyond stupid so 2 stars for everything
quality was gold only about one scene confused me l ll l l ll l l l ll gjhgkhgkuj,jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj
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well I've read to chapter 3, the Grammer is near flawless but, the mc is the "I'll kill everyone who wronged me and my main personality is revenge and edge" so I already can't stand him, but other than that looks like he planned a story behind his system and has a ploy in the brew, but I absolutely cannot stand characters with black and white personalities
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The story is great, but why it stopped? I mean, it's about a month since the last chapter. I'm not a writer so i can't judge the difficulty of writing, and i'm not close tot the author to know his personal life, but a reminder that the story is în an indefinite pause would be nice. If you're the author and you see this, just you know, i'm watching 😑😑
it's a basic cliche story about going back in time for revenge, unfortunately the character don't have any defining features. they all act at the whim of the almighty author, people comment how the MC did "X" act or thought "y" thought and the author jumps to correct it in the latter chapters, this diminishes the origin of the characters and their motives especially for the MC. which drops the quality of the story. The story development also lacks because of this, there is no realistic way to make a story progresses without it feeling shallow with bad characters. good luck in your future endeavours author and I wish you the best of luck.
Well, this is a 1st. for me... I feel compelled to write this review based not on the story i read so far but on the actual reviews posted. I do not mean 2 offend when i say in reply to some comments. #1 Spend less time doing your math homework//proving how clever you are by talking about odds calculation accuracy #2 Spend your time learning that human character-behaviour, (unlike odds), is not easy to define or quantify. Character is formed//behaviour is determined by nature vs. nurture, life experience, environmental influence, personal propensity to act & react (according to innate traits). You do not need a rule-book or psych. degree. As humans we are constantly evolving, learning, changing & adapting. Be patient, read story to the end. Only then will you come to understand MC. That is the beauty of the story. Character development & growth, not fancy maths. But that is just me. As i said no offence, just give the story more time. Also, how we act does not always equate how we feel. Complex characters need time & space to grow. As do we. Let us support Author's hard work and encourage through honest, respectful words of assessment//opinion. I am not an expert in any field, just a simple reader. Please excuse my rant. Wish you all a happy & safe read during covid times & beyond.
what a fantasy novel should be .. this novel made me feel as i as once again reading my very first novels on wuxiaworld ... this novel has everything u need in an epic novel . ..
one of the most interesting books I've ever read the background the character development it's pretty well made pretty well thought of how interact with people is brilliant triple thumbs up I recommend everyone to read this book
Just here to boost the ratings since there are a bunch of reviews that give bs reasons for a low rating (i.e one review gave a 1 star because the title made the story hard to find, which is not true).
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
So just started the book it might get better later on but the start is not great from world building to character Design Most of the things are not strong the mc character Acts weird he time travel after suffering So much but when he see his school bully He is still scared a little, i cant not understand Why he thinks like a kid some time and They dont explain Much of what happened to him before He traveled back in time
So far i am really enjoying this novel. i hopped on webnovel to try it out and this was the first thing i clicked on. thank you for hooking me into your story and keeping me Entertained for a while
I have read till 82 chapters when I wrote this review and rating might change in future. Because generally when you read nearly a hundred chapters of a novel you will get an idea whether you would like it or not. But for this novel it not that case as till now in this novel nothing happened which will get readers attention. It has a very slow progress rate giving more importance to world building and it is good for someone who is reading novels for a long time but not for someone who is new. In fact I would say story development is very slow and it will irretate a lot of new readers. Till now MC did not even get any skills yet he only unlocked his blood line like 10 chapters back while in other novels which are similar to this novel main character would unlock his blood line with first 10 chapters and get his first skill at most by 20 chapters so you can understand right this book is different. So finally would I recommend this novel yes if you are a not new to reading webnovels and are ok to read a slow progressing novel. But if you are expecting a fun read which has a fast development then this novel is not for you. Note: When I mean world building. I mean the litteral world don't confuse with Character development because in this novel almost every character till now is one dimensional. I hope author can improve in this in future.
A great story. One started reading, I couldn't stop. The pace is good and it keeps you engaged. People should give it a try. I highly recommend it.
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I think some clarification is needed, so here's my review! The synopsis mentions necromancy, but the system doesn't have that function. The protagonist goes back in time and gets the ability to manipulate probability. Using his knowledge and his new bloodline, he'll learn the art of Necromancy. The system will act as a support for Necromancy and summoning/creating the undead. If you're impatient to get to the necromancy point, this novel isn't for you. I don't want to mislead you. The necromancy is crucial to the story, so I'm not going to throw that in just yet. :) I promise, however, that you'll have an interesting read. Not because of the cheat the mc has, but because the story development is unique. :)
this is currently my fav novel on this platform and i'll do my best to recommend it to my frinds. the mc's character is realistic but cynical, smart but not a genius, he's not too op but still is strong. and what ii ike nost about this is his bloodline, it is unique and not used by most authors. the concept of necromancy and system might be too overused but this story is a fresh breath of air. world buildung is superb, plot is amazing and writing quality is great. honestly this one is an all rounder, now all i need is a webtoon/manhwa out of it and i can die happy.. thank u author for the hard work, i'll always try my best to support you! please never stop writing!
I have just read through all of the 71 currently available chapters for this story and have to say that it definitely is an interesting story with a unique premise, and definitely worth the time to read. The actions and twists with the plot are almost impossible to see through much less guess, which makes the world and the main character that much more interesting, as you discover more about the MC's fate and the changes he is making to the world. The pacing of the story is just right to allow you to not get bored with constant grinding for the tiniest gain in power but not make you bored with the MC becoming an over powered God in say 30 or 40 chapters. The authors talent for amazing world building, character development, and in depth planning of his story's and where he wants to take them which is easily seen in his other work Level Up Legacy, is easily found in this story as well. Besides the occasional misspelling, the story is an amazing read, with nothing else quite like it available.
This hasn't been updated in a year, but I hope the author continues it, because it is very unique in the way everything works in this series, it's very different from others I've read on this app.
Why don't they update it? I even created an account to read this novel but for several months there has been no update, I don't know if it only happens to me.
I liked it at first, but the PC becomes more and more inhuman, especially when he kills innocent people I can't stand :'( (chp 183, I didn't really understand why he killed her, there was no reason . sad, I stop here personally )
Interesting world building premise as well as a nice diversity of interesting powers. Characters are very obviously good or bad, if they’re bad they’re narrow-minded bullies who act irrationally constantly, if they’re good they range from cliche to interesting. Main character quickly becomes better than everyone else at everything within a couple chapters, whether it’s something trivial or not, and has a SSS++ event/item handed to him every couple chapters. To me the story lacks good writing. Could be a fun read but author is too quick to jump into powering up the MC and getting back at bullies.
A hero with high morals and a sense of justice, yes, same stupid Chinese clichés, saving children, helping innocent people, etc. Don't be fooled by him killing his classmate in the first seasons. He's not evil and his words are contradictory, meaning friends, justice and pretty girls around him as usual.
lemme tell you a little story... hahahahahahahahhahahahahahhaahhahahahahahahhaahhahahahahahahhahahahahhahahahahhahahahahahahahahhhahahahahhahahahah
no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability no update stability
Its a good story about changing fate. Necromancy still hasn’t popped in, but the story is progressing at a decent pace. The main character vengeful to a moronic degree, but the author tries to fix it later on. Last gripe is the updating stability, but besides this stuff solid story.
This is an excellent story, that quality-wise ranks higher than most stories on this site and I hope the author would continue this one of the readable pieces of works in Webnovel(Please, I beg Thee!!!!!!)
A very good novel so far (chapter 150). The MC is a cynical survivor trying his best to prevent a catastrophe The scars of what occurred in his first life also mold the way the MC reacts and behaves. It's logical and there plot armour is invisible making the story engaging, the side characters are fully fleshed out and don't exist only to praise the MC or be stepping stones. Pacing is very good ie. The MC doesn't level up everytime he turns around. So non of the usual webnovel nonsense 😏
Very interesting story where the main protagonist has unusual character and background. The story describes the fate of Nikol, who was hated by people in his past life. This time he got a chance to chance his fate. Killing, stealing and planning...Nikol is boy, who will dominate the world. The story is very simple, but interesting :)
This is so basic that i needed to write here i woupd give 3 star for everything but that one line saying that the cristals should go to the person who last hited is beyond stupid so 2 stars for everything
quality was gold only about one scene confused me l ll l l ll l l l ll gjhgkhgkuj,jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ well I've read to chapter 3, the Grammer is near flawless but, the mc is the "I'll kill everyone who wronged me and my main personality is revenge and edge" so I already can't stand him, but other than that looks like he planned a story behind his system and has a ploy in the brew, but I absolutely cannot stand characters with black and white personalities
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The story is great, but why it stopped? I mean, it's about a month since the last chapter. I'm not a writer so i can't judge the difficulty of writing, and i'm not close tot the author to know his personal life, but a reminder that the story is în an indefinite pause would be nice. If you're the author and you see this, just you know, i'm watching 😑😑
it's a basic cliche story about going back in time for revenge, unfortunately the character don't have any defining features. they all act at the whim of the almighty author, people comment how the MC did "X" act or thought "y" thought and the author jumps to correct it in the latter chapters, this diminishes the origin of the characters and their motives especially for the MC. which drops the quality of the story. The story development also lacks because of this, there is no realistic way to make a story progresses without it feeling shallow with bad characters. good luck in your future endeavours author and I wish you the best of luck.
Well, this is a 1st. for me... I feel compelled to write this review based not on the story i read so far but on the actual reviews posted. I do not mean 2 offend when i say in reply to some comments. #1 Spend less time doing your math homework//proving how clever you are by talking about odds calculation accuracy #2 Spend your time learning that human character-behaviour, (unlike odds), is not easy to define or quantify. Character is formed//behaviour is determined by nature vs. nurture, life experience, environmental influence, personal propensity to act & react (according to innate traits). You do not need a rule-book or psych. degree. As humans we are constantly evolving, learning, changing & adapting. Be patient, read story to the end. Only then will you come to understand MC. That is the beauty of the story. Character development & growth, not fancy maths. But that is just me. As i said no offence, just give the story more time. Also, how we act does not always equate how we feel. Complex characters need time & space to grow. As do we. Let us support Author's hard work and encourage through honest, respectful words of assessment//opinion. I am not an expert in any field, just a simple reader. Please excuse my rant. Wish you all a happy & safe read during covid times & beyond.
what a fantasy novel should be .. this novel made me feel as i as once again reading my very first novels on wuxiaworld ... this novel has everything u need in an epic novel . ..
one of the most interesting books I've ever read the background the character development it's pretty well made pretty well thought of how interact with people is brilliant triple thumbs up I recommend everyone to read this book
Just here to boost the ratings since there are a bunch of reviews that give bs reasons for a low rating (i.e one review gave a 1 star because the title made the story hard to find, which is not true).
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
So just started the book it might get better later on but the start is not great from world building to character Design Most of the things are not strong the mc character Acts weird he time travel after suffering So much but when he see his school bully He is still scared a little, i cant not understand Why he thinks like a kid some time and They dont explain Much of what happened to him before He traveled back in time
So far i am really enjoying this novel. i hopped on webnovel to try it out and this was the first thing i clicked on. thank you for hooking me into your story and keeping me Entertained for a while
I have read till 82 chapters when I wrote this review and rating might change in future. Because generally when you read nearly a hundred chapters of a novel you will get an idea whether you would like it or not. But for this novel it not that case as till now in this novel nothing happened which will get readers attention. It has a very slow progress rate giving more importance to world building and it is good for someone who is reading novels for a long time but not for someone who is new. In fact I would say story development is very slow and it will irretate a lot of new readers. Till now MC did not even get any skills yet he only unlocked his blood line like 10 chapters back while in other novels which are similar to this novel main character would unlock his blood line with first 10 chapters and get his first skill at most by 20 chapters so you can understand right this book is different. So finally would I recommend this novel yes if you are a not new to reading webnovels and are ok to read a slow progressing novel. But if you are expecting a fun read which has a fast development then this novel is not for you. Note: When I mean world building. I mean the litteral world don't confuse with Character development because in this novel almost every character till now is one dimensional. I hope author can improve in this in future.
A great story. One started reading, I couldn't stop. The pace is good and it keeps you engaged. People should give it a try. I highly recommend it.
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I think some clarification is needed, so here's my review! The synopsis mentions necromancy, but the system doesn't have that function. The protagonist goes back in time and gets the ability to manipulate probability. Using his knowledge and his new bloodline, he'll learn the art of Necromancy. The system will act as a support for Necromancy and summoning/creating the undead. If you're impatient to get to the necromancy point, this novel isn't for you. I don't want to mislead you. The necromancy is crucial to the story, so I'm not going to throw that in just yet. :) I promise, however, that you'll have an interesting read. Not because of the cheat the mc has, but because the story development is unique. :)