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Lemme begin from quality (GAWHD!) it's so great and highly readable, world building and creation of hype along with the character insights is awesome. Oh! I liked the humorous remarks by the family and the system making plus the guild scenario. The tinge of lust and the sprinkle of their bond- attraction. The world building is fine too and especially the dealing with newly found powers is a great descriptive part. The words and vocabulary chosen is absolutely amazing and it differs from the regular system we read which kind gets complicated but this is far cooler to understand cuz if 'showing' factor. Lesha and Kiada have great beginning tbh and the characters seem real with their down to nature and life problems.
Honestly the dynamic of the relationship between the MC and her group is rather enjoyable. Instead of making everyone flock to the MC they have a girlfriend, as problematic as the relationship is proving to be. Beyond that the world has a good grasp of what's going on and as people come in more information is put out in an easy, understandable, and believable manner. I'm looking forward to see what else comes up from their trip plus how they deal with the problem they created. Thank you author and I am excited for more chapters.
Now that's alot to take in, sending all my love to the author 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💞💞💞💞💞💞💌💌💌💌💌💌💌💌💞💞💞💕💕💌 this is an amazing book and I love it
Omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg wow this book was just amazing oh my Gawd
Any way to get a physical copy? I like the series so far but I love to have physical books to read too! Please let me know and keep up the good work!
Ok, yes, like many webnovels, it could use some editing, but unlike most the errors don't heavily take away from enjoying this well written story. This is an entertaining and well plotted read. Definitely worth adding to your library. I got absolutely nothing done today as I started reading and couldn't stop until I caught up to the latest chapter (100+). thanks author, keep up the great work.
Everything is great but you messed up the genders a bit in a few of the chapters. 4.9 stars and my blessing for a bright future! bbbbnnnnnnn
Finally some Yuri!!!! Please, dear author do not drop this plissss [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~
it is good.......................................................................................................................................h
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Ahhh this I love it give me more especially the Mc I can already see this story becoming a very addict drug that I cant back away from please do not drop this
This is a review. This is a legitimate review. This is a legitimate 5 star review. This is a legitimate 5 star review by an honest author. This is a legitimate 5 star review by an honest author who couldn't do a meme well. Sorry I existed. Now go read the book.
I will give you guys 20 reasons to read this novel ! 😃 Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri
looks pretty good, I personally will read this as it's wrote, yup good stuff. Get your yuri and cuteness, oh I love my kawaii lovers! come check this out!
am not really into video games novel but damn this is a good one to read. am just a bit dizzy with the compacted paragraphs that looks so scary on my phone but who cares.. i will add this to my novels that I will binge read soon.. great job author!
extraordinary! this young man made a great novel. I was amazed to read it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A nice story that you don't want to lose the chance of reading It.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Pretty cute story with action and guild building, sexual frustration, and a whole bunch of other things. Story has been interesting so far, will keep reading.
Shameless! yuri? vampires? blood? way to use said blood? oh yes and so much more! come join Kiada on her journey to find her lost girls in another reborn series! this book is part of the reborn collection Harem Reborn Hyde, Worldwalker Reborn
Magic returns with his magical novel! Hehe~ As a proud author of LGBT+ book, I'm looking forward for this yuri novel Yuri and magic! Definitely my cup of tea!
Lemme begin from quality (GAWHD!) it's so great and highly readable, world building and creation of hype along with the character insights is awesome. Oh! I liked the humorous remarks by the family and the system making plus the guild scenario. The tinge of lust and the sprinkle of their bond- attraction. The world building is fine too and especially the dealing with newly found powers is a great descriptive part. The words and vocabulary chosen is absolutely amazing and it differs from the regular system we read which kind gets complicated but this is far cooler to understand cuz if 'showing' factor. Lesha and Kiada have great beginning tbh and the characters seem real with their down to nature and life problems.
Honestly the dynamic of the relationship between the MC and her group is rather enjoyable. Instead of making everyone flock to the MC they have a girlfriend, as problematic as the relationship is proving to be. Beyond that the world has a good grasp of what's going on and as people come in more information is put out in an easy, understandable, and believable manner. I'm looking forward to see what else comes up from their trip plus how they deal with the problem they created. Thank you author and I am excited for more chapters.
Now that's alot to take in, sending all my love to the author 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💞💞💞💞💞💞💌💌💌💌💌💌💌💌💞💞💞💕💕💌 this is an amazing book and I love it
Omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg wow this book was just amazing oh my Gawd
Any way to get a physical copy? I like the series so far but I love to have physical books to read too! Please let me know and keep up the good work!
Ok, yes, like many webnovels, it could use some editing, but unlike most the errors don't heavily take away from enjoying this well written story. This is an entertaining and well plotted read. Definitely worth adding to your library. I got absolutely nothing done today as I started reading and couldn't stop until I caught up to the latest chapter (100+). thanks author, keep up the great work.
Everything is great but you messed up the genders a bit in a few of the chapters. 4.9 stars and my blessing for a bright future! bbbbnnnnnnn
Finally some Yuri!!!! Please, dear author do not drop this plissss [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~Yuri~
it is good.......................................................................................................................................h
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Ahhh this I love it give me more especially the Mc I can already see this story becoming a very addict drug that I cant back away from please do not drop this
This is a review. This is a legitimate review. This is a legitimate 5 star review. This is a legitimate 5 star review by an honest author. This is a legitimate 5 star review by an honest author who couldn't do a meme well. Sorry I existed. Now go read the book.
I will give you guys 20 reasons to read this novel ! 😃 Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri Yuri
looks pretty good, I personally will read this as it's wrote, yup good stuff. Get your yuri and cuteness, oh I love my kawaii lovers! come check this out!
am not really into video games novel but damn this is a good one to read. am just a bit dizzy with the compacted paragraphs that looks so scary on my phone but who cares.. i will add this to my novels that I will binge read soon.. great job author!
extraordinary! this young man made a great novel. I was amazed to read it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A nice story that you don't want to lose the chance of reading It.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Pretty cute story with action and guild building, sexual frustration, and a whole bunch of other things. Story has been interesting so far, will keep reading.
Shameless! yuri? vampires? blood? way to use said blood? oh yes and so much more! come join Kiada on her journey to find her lost girls in another reborn series! this book is part of the reborn collection Harem Reborn Hyde, Worldwalker Reborn
Magic returns with his magical novel! Hehe~ As a proud author of LGBT+ book, I'm looking forward for this yuri novel Yuri and magic! Definitely my cup of tea!