บท 3: Ame no Kuni
AN: edit for the previous chapter. I realized I said a gallon of blood. I didn't know how much blood that actually was. So instead I'm changing that to a quarter of a litre for unwilling people. And only a shot for willing people (and for all you critics, it's because when they willingly give the blood the cells open up making it easier to get more). On to the chapter:
A falling sensation hit his face immediately, it was as if I was being dragged inside a whirlpool. My stomach lurched from unease, as it suddenly stopped and my body fell to the ground in an instant.
Even though I knew my stomach was empty, my body didn't seem to realize this fact, as I kept puking over and over. Not even able to move into a corner.
After what felt like hours but was probably only a few minutes, I started to come back to my senses. I looked around to see where I was 'dropped' in. An open house that looked more like a hut came to view. The walls seemed to be made out of a broken down wood, that has certainly not stood up to time. The floor was basically clay and I felt my foot slightly drop down as I stepped forward.
The roof was no better, made out of twigs and different small logs all around. It looked like a weird kind of mosaic made by a three-year-old. I guess some might find it appealing, but I just hope that it will let me take some shelter. After all, I'm now in the country most well known for its constant rain and chilly winds.
As I got a better look at the room I was in, it seemed to be the living room. I searched a bit of the house, finding a small bathroom and one bedroom. This could be a bit difficult, although it is small I guess it's still more than what the people who live on the streets have. I've also got a few pieces of bread as well, meaning at least I won't starve for a while. It seems to only be able to last me about two weeks. That will work well for me.
With a small grumble about how stingy god was, he started sitting down in a meditative pose. Trying to focus inwardly to find any foreign force inside his body, namely, Chakra. I know I must have some, after all, I did wish for the ability to control water and since it only works with chakra, he should have given me at least a bit.
And sure enough, inside his body right at his lower abdomen. He kept on trying to feel that sensation, making it clearer and clearer in his mind. After a while, a shattering sound appeared in his ears and he spits out some dirty black-colored blood, while the normal red blood fell from his nose in pain.
The chakra he can feel almost made him want to spit out blood again. I know that God didn't have to give me much to keep his promise but still. He could have at least given me a bit more. With this much chakra, I don't believe I could train in ninjutsu or anything else. However, it should be enough to let me strengthen and toughen my body a bit in case a fight breaks out.
Of course, this would be useless against even an academy ninja, however, he doubted he would meet any anytime soon.
Now next up on my agenda should be choosing my new name. I can't just go into the Narutoverse with my old one it would stand out a bit too much for me and if someone from my world ever came here as well I might be found out immediately.
I guess from now on I will be calling myself Yokoji, just Yokoji.
With a sigh at his abysmally low amount of chakra, Yokoji walked out of the front door, finally excited for something he has been looking forward to ever since knowing he would go to the Narutoverse. It was time to look for one of the most beautiful and elegant women in the show, who would go on to have a tragic future. However, this time I will change it.
I'm not too sure whether I should search for Yahiko and Nagato yet as although Yahiko had a strong heart for justice and wanting to create peace in Ame and stop the wars. Whereas Nagato is easily influenced by his emotions when at this point in time. He followed Yahikos's own goals after spending time with him and decided to go and show the world the ultimate pain and suffering to bring it peace after Yahiko's death. This shows how most of his personality was in a way influenced by Yahiko.
I will choose to bring in Nagato later because of his (or Madara's) Rinnegan. However, I am still half and half on what to do with Yahiko (comment for opinion please).
Now, however, it was time for me to visit the angel of the three, Konan. She followed Nagato after Yahiko's death and her undying loyalty continued for him even when he died. This is why this time, I will make sure she does not end up the same way as she does in the anime and I'll make sure that she can have a life that will not be as a tragic hero.
Yokoji turned left, down into a side-alley near his house, already knowing the general direction of where to go.
The view of the still somewhat decent village streets was completely destroyed as I entered the alley. Rats crawled around on the floor, some even went over to what seemed like corpses of some hungry homeless guy. Other homeless people were strewn across the floors in various positions, trying to find a way to hide from the incoming rain that chilled their very souls.
They looked at Yokoji with hope, which soon turned into their once again depressed faces as they noticed he wasn't wearing any good clothes.
I breathed out a sigh of relief at that, fortunately, God only gave me some ruined clothing, otherwise, I would have already been stripped naked and left on the floor. Even if I had the use of chakra it wouldn't do me any good over the hundreds of homeless people here.
Plus I wouldn't want to turn up talking to Konan in the nude, it would leave a rather...strange, opinion on her I would guess. I shiver at the thought.
With those thoughts passed out of my mind, I turned another corner and saw who I was looking for. She was huddled up against the corner of the wall, with a drunk-looking grown man standing over her and kicking her stomach. I knew she had a rough life before she met Nagato and Yahiko but if I knew it was this bad I would have came back earlier so that she never would have had to go through this. Who knows how many times this has happened before.
I silently ran up to the man and quietly crouched down behind him with the tiger hand seal, "Leaf village secret! Ultimate Taijutsu!" The man was about to turn around when his face suddenly contorts in a sign of extreme pain.
"One Thousand Years of Death!" The man suddenly had a weird expression on his face as I pumped my hands with as much chakra as I had, making me feel woozy. However, the effect was worth it as I see him fly over the alley wall while his scream shouted out.
I started to feel faint again from using up most of my already minuscule amount of chakra, fortunately, my chakra control managed to let me pull out that devastating technique otherwise I would have looked extremely weird.
As I look up at Konan I see her looking at me with a dumbfounded face. She looked cute. I give a little chuckle at her expression.
"Hi, my name is Yokoji, are you ok?" I ask with a kind smile on her face, as the wind seemed to brush my hair.
She looked at me stunned for a moment, I could see her with a dazed expression on her face once again for some reason, I hope she's ok.
"M-my n-name i-is K-Konan" did she have a stutter in the anime, I didn't think she did. I mentally shrug my shoulders, maybe she's just nervous from seeing an 8-year-old child shoot a man into the sky.
"Hello Konan, if you can walk would you like to come with me, I have a safe place for us to be at. You can at least get a roof over your head instead of being out here," I mention to her with the same look on my face as before. I once before see her face go a bit weird but I think nothing of it.
"C-can I really go with you? A-are you sure I won't be a burden?" she looks at me pitifully, as if remembering old memories.
"Of course you can and I truly doubt a beautiful girl like you could ever be a burden, come on, can you stand?" If Konan an S-Rank Ninja in the future could be a burden, then everyone else should basically die out of their incapabilities.
She was still sitting on the floor as she tried to pull herself up. I saw her wince in pain as she was doing so. "Don't worry about standing up, here I'll carry you back, is that okay?" Her face immediately goes bright red as she looked up at me.
"Y-yes, be gentle..." she looks down in embarrassment as I carefully pick her up and lift her into my arms in a princess style. She yelped a bit with shock as she was assuming she would be put on his back instead.
"Are you okay?" I ask as I hear her yelp, she just looked back up at me and nods her head with a red face that would put Kushina's hair to shame, while she immediately snuggled her face into my chest.
It was a bit difficult to walk with her due to my chakra overuse, but I would never give up the opportunity to be like this with a younger version of my waifu, *cough* *cough* I mean I am being a Man to care about an injured reason. No other reason. I nod to myself in my head as I start to walk back out of the alley.
As Yokoji walked out, as he was daydreaming he didn't notice the weird glares he was getting from the people nearby. **** was a normal occurrence here in the streets in Ame of course, but it was normally done to at least slightly mature women. They didn't see the incident where Yokoji saved Konan before, so they just assumed he knocked her out and was planning to do that sort of stuff to her. Disgusted one of the homeless people spat onto the floor next to him as he looked with hatred at Yukoji.
No one did anything to him of course as this was Ame, their business was none of their business and no one wanted to go out into the rain more to help. Plus they don't even know the girl except as someone that was even more pitiful than themselves.
Yukoji walked back to the house oblivious of the fact of what just happened, as he was still in a high from holding Konan. Even if she was currently only 8 years old. This was of course nothing sexual yet, just happiness due to being near her. After all, it is a surreal thing to know you're in Narutoverse, but to then carry a known famous figure from it...
Anyway just as Yukoji was opening the door, Konan lifts her head to look outside once again, her embarrassment still there in a light shade of red, but not as bad as before.
"Wow, you really do have a house, I thought you meant a small shelter in the woods or something," she looks at it in wonder.
"Yep, but this isn't just my house now. Now it will be our home." Yukijo says without a hint of shame on his face.
Konan couldn't help but turn red again.
Her blue hair really made her look extremely cute right now. I can't wait for when she grows up. What am I thinking, for now, let's just try and figure out a plan first.
"Konan, can you stand yet, I want to give you a tour of our new home." I beam at her with a smile. The wind once again brushing my hair. It's getting rather annoying but I guess it's just part of Ame.
"Y-yes" she replies, once again looking dazed. I think I figured out why this time. However, I will have to leave this sort of thing for the future for now.
"Ok, let's go." I held her hand as we both took a step into our new home.
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Novel_Creator Whew, late one tonight I believe, anyway tell me if these chapters are too long or too short. I can't really tell when I'm writing them. I also tried to improve my writing this time, please tell me in the comment section if it's gotten better. Also, was the romance too forced, it was my first time writing one. Hope you enjoyed ;)
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