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4.27
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a really epic novel, basically at first it seems like your typical boring wish fulfillment novel, but even though it is wish fulfillment it is not a poorly planned novel with the mc adding women whom he casually falls in love with instantly and travels to typical worlds that we have already seen as dxd, naruto or cliche worlds the mc travels through cultivation worlds that we almost and literally never see in webnovel, starting with battle through the heavens and continuing with rebirth of a urban immortal and going to other worlds that are not seen here like manhuas or other cultivation novels. Also although mc is very op at the beginning he does not stay complacent, or starts spamming broken anime skills to be `` OP '' he does not use his traps intelligently to cultivate all the cropping systems of the worlds he travels to and It has not traveled yet, resulting in an even bigger and not boring and brainless OPness that we see, also the interaction of the characters is very good and it gets better as the story progresses. definitely if you want to read something new with cultivation worlds, manhuas or little seen anime, you should read this novel
I like this book could you consider to continue it please and let’s go to tales or demons and gods 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
I actually know that the author discontinued this novel because the author was confused by the storyline of the FF novel itself, because it is clear that this novel is too forced and also Cringe for a work, why cringe? because the author is so deifying the Overpower character that I myself am sick of it, plus this is even more arrogant and unreasonable of the MC, and it is clear that people will not believe that the MC is strong because he has powers beyond that world and here what makes me most disgusted is that the MC acts like a wise person who is 1 billion years old but in my eyes looks like a naughty child who is given a new toy will be happy and show off other friends!!!
great story The way to tell beautiful and calm events, +18 content is fascinating in its own way, thanks for writing this fin Wonderful [img=exp][img=coins][img=recommend]
is this still being updated because I really liked this story and was really looking forward to the continuation. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁💯💯💯💯💯💯
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I hate characters with Chinese names, it is difficult to understand and remember Chinese names............................................................................................................
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Good nice for passing by time hope you don’t stop and go to other worlds cultivation worlds like against the gods. Also hope for some anime and manga in here to maybe some slice of life when he reaches the peak and goes through some heavenly rebirth like sora in ascending to supremacy it would be really nixe
well its good for wish fulfillment.....but just that don't expect any kind of plot it's utterly baseless without any direction.......that's it
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Well The premise was good and all but since its a gag type story but the story needs proofreading editing and much more its not fun just plain weird u leave details too many times
I was simply attracted by Yifan's cover image but looks like I found a hidden gem here bois. If I am not wrong it looks like you like our Butler Zhou too so although I am not expecting much but still looking forward to the day you make this MC here seek the Princess of the Tianyu Empire, The Touba family's beauty, Qingsheng, Shuang'er, Yuyu, etc. Well if you are a Butler Zhou fan then you probably should know who these diamonds are... Anyways, even if you don't add these here I will read it purely cuz of Rebirth of urban immortal cultivator and BTTH which I adore as much as SDE...O(∩_∩)O
Good and all but the moment you bring the parents back to life it not good for me Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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This is my honest review some time your writing is not written right and that makes it hard to understand the character design is easy to understand but the story development isn't the world development is easy to understand if they know battle through the heaven
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sorry in advance if my writing sounds harsh or something. I know that anything can happen in fanfiction. but at least can you make people's thinking and emotions more rational? Like in chapter 9 when the elder found out that mc could tear off duo zun's hand easily without showing his cultivation and slaughtered them, did that elder not inform the elder and clan master about him after returning to his clan? If indeed he have told them, can't they think that with such power is MC still someone crippled by calling MC Cripple when he visits his clan? didn't they think that maybe mc could hide his cultivation power? and other examples that I cannot possibly mention because the writing will be very long
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This is only harem no r18, a little disappointed but this is a good novel I can't wait for the continuation of the author's passion 🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻
Good but please no netori dont take aunt tang aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
I write this review cuz mc Is hypocritical. I quite dislike it when mc is hypocritical, don't ask me why but it is.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Continue ,please dont drop..............................................................................................................................
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I just say this "Battle of the heavens 'fanfiction" just don't drop this bro ... not so fast. Good luck and take my power stones [img=recommend][img=recommend].
MC. talk too much without real action. Why is he strong? If in the end he behaves like an idiot. arrogant idiot. too cliché, hiding power So that everyone looks stupid. even more so in the sub-romance. you as the author are too pushy so crisp. sorry I don't like it so I dropped this
Honestly this book went into face slapping and harem collecting real fast. I mean there is no real plot at all. MC appears only when enemies would be arrogant, at major plot points or where there are most influential women in the books. He basically doesn't do anything on his own he just goes with the flow kinda.
a really epic novel, basically at first it seems like your typical boring wish fulfillment novel, but even though it is wish fulfillment it is not a poorly planned novel with the mc adding women whom he casually falls in love with instantly and travels to typical worlds that we have already seen as dxd, naruto or cliche worlds the mc travels through cultivation worlds that we almost and literally never see in webnovel, starting with battle through the heavens and continuing with rebirth of a urban immortal and going to other worlds that are not seen here like manhuas or other cultivation novels. Also although mc is very op at the beginning he does not stay complacent, or starts spamming broken anime skills to be `` OP '' he does not use his traps intelligently to cultivate all the cropping systems of the worlds he travels to and It has not traveled yet, resulting in an even bigger and not boring and brainless OPness that we see, also the interaction of the characters is very good and it gets better as the story progresses. definitely if you want to read something new with cultivation worlds, manhuas or little seen anime, you should read this novel
I like this book could you consider to continue it please and let’s go to tales or demons and gods 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
I actually know that the author discontinued this novel because the author was confused by the storyline of the FF novel itself, because it is clear that this novel is too forced and also Cringe for a work, why cringe? because the author is so deifying the Overpower character that I myself am sick of it, plus this is even more arrogant and unreasonable of the MC, and it is clear that people will not believe that the MC is strong because he has powers beyond that world and here what makes me most disgusted is that the MC acts like a wise person who is 1 billion years old but in my eyes looks like a naughty child who is given a new toy will be happy and show off other friends!!!
great story The way to tell beautiful and calm events, +18 content is fascinating in its own way, thanks for writing this fin Wonderful [img=exp][img=coins][img=recommend]
is this still being updated because I really liked this story and was really looking forward to the continuation. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁💯💯💯💯💯💯
MORRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSS CHAPTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRSSSSS MORRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSS CHAPTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRSSSSS MORRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSS CHAPTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRSSSSS MORRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSS CHAPTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRSSSSS
I hate characters with Chinese names, it is difficult to understand and remember Chinese names............................................................................................................
more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters
Good nice for passing by time hope you don’t stop and go to other worlds cultivation worlds like against the gods. Also hope for some anime and manga in here to maybe some slice of life when he reaches the peak and goes through some heavenly rebirth like sora in ascending to supremacy it would be really nixe
well its good for wish fulfillment.....but just that don't expect any kind of plot it's utterly baseless without any direction.......that's it
please dont drop. [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update]
Well The premise was good and all but since its a gag type story but the story needs proofreading editing and much more its not fun just plain weird u leave details too many times
I was simply attracted by Yifan's cover image but looks like I found a hidden gem here bois. If I am not wrong it looks like you like our Butler Zhou too so although I am not expecting much but still looking forward to the day you make this MC here seek the Princess of the Tianyu Empire, The Touba family's beauty, Qingsheng, Shuang'er, Yuyu, etc. Well if you are a Butler Zhou fan then you probably should know who these diamonds are... Anyways, even if you don't add these here I will read it purely cuz of Rebirth of urban immortal cultivator and BTTH which I adore as much as SDE...O(∩_∩)O
Good and all but the moment you bring the parents back to life it not good for me Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Супер клас гарем гарем ллдььлллрроооооооооруиуруруруркркркркиарврвркоаррурцрупурцпцпыпцмцпупппуиурурурврырырврврурврврвруумвивиыпвпгмгпшпшршпгмгпгпгпшпшпшпшпшппмшпшггмгмгпгпгпгпгпгпгмлмшплпшплмлмшмлмлмомлмлпшпшпгпгмгмшпг
This is my honest review some time your writing is not written right and that makes it hard to understand the character design is easy to understand but the story development isn't the world development is easy to understand if they know battle through the heaven
I notice the pointless harem spam reviews and raise you a counter. Harem is trash. Harem is trash. Harem is trash. Harem is trash. Harem is trash. Harem is trash. Harem is trash. Harem is trash. Harem is trash. Harem is trash. Harem is trash. Harem is trash. Harem is trash. Harem is trash. Harem is trash. Harem is trash.
sorry in advance if my writing sounds harsh or something. I know that anything can happen in fanfiction. but at least can you make people's thinking and emotions more rational? Like in chapter 9 when the elder found out that mc could tear off duo zun's hand easily without showing his cultivation and slaughtered them, did that elder not inform the elder and clan master about him after returning to his clan? If indeed he have told them, can't they think that with such power is MC still someone crippled by calling MC Cripple when he visits his clan? didn't they think that maybe mc could hide his cultivation power? and other examples that I cannot possibly mention because the writing will be very long
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This is only harem no r18, a little disappointed but this is a good novel I can't wait for the continuation of the author's passion 🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻
Good but please no netori dont take aunt tang aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
I write this review cuz mc Is hypocritical. I quite dislike it when mc is hypocritical, don't ask me why but it is.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Continue ,please dont drop..............................................................................................................................
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I just say this "Battle of the heavens 'fanfiction" just don't drop this bro ... not so fast. Good luck and take my power stones [img=recommend][img=recommend].
MC. talk too much without real action. Why is he strong? If in the end he behaves like an idiot. arrogant idiot. too cliché, hiding power So that everyone looks stupid. even more so in the sub-romance. you as the author are too pushy so crisp. sorry I don't like it so I dropped this
Honestly this book went into face slapping and harem collecting real fast. I mean there is no real plot at all. MC appears only when enemies would be arrogant, at major plot points or where there are most influential women in the books. He basically doesn't do anything on his own he just goes with the flow kinda.