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System In Avatar: The Last Airbender
4.33 (25 เรตติ้ง)
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Xiao Feng was an agent of some kind of spy and assassination organization in our world, he was the best at everything, but due to a rare and seemingly incurable disease, he was executed by the same organization that raised him.
The organization had told him that if he fulfilled all the imposed missions, at eighteen they would release Feng. Of course, this never happened, but now it had a ray of light, and it literally is.
Although he didn't know it right away, he was in the world of Avatar! one of the few things that he can appreciate. Motivated by Aang and his friends, he wanted to travel the world and find his own path in life. With that in mind, he did his best for the organization so that one day he could be like Aang.
- Avatar: The Last Airbender does not belong to me.
- English is not my mother tongue.
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I hope you don't make him a pseudo avatar but turn him into a madman with earth and sub elements like lava swamp and mabey something like bonebending (cau of the iron in the human body)
I'm liking it so far. I don't have enough information to rate this story just yet but since i really like the beginning I'm going to give you 5 stars.
the writing quality is good with a few errors that can be overlooked, the writer is getting an editor soon so dw about that the stability confuses me, IDK when the writer posts as it's practically random to me but I haven't payed any attention to that the story development is great, it is slow but not too slow showing you the main character and how the world is built around him and his interactions with the characters, so far not a harem if that's what you think I meant character designs are unique so far and not the usual " super handsome tall mc with jawlines splitting this universe as he breathes " but it's not as if he made the mc ugly, just uniue in a way world building is great, people like boomy are now being shown in a new realistic light while also keeping the same humor from the avatar in tact, under rated fan fic and I see it going places p.s ( please don't make it a harem and ruin it )
The MC is an complete brain dead person, Tnhf says everything i find wrong with the mc aswell.. also all this chinese bullshittery.. like **** off with that
this is a really good one please continue your hard work........mmmmmmmmmmmm.................mmmmm......................................................................
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this looks good. More chapters please. I would love to read more. this looks good. More chapters please. I would love to read more.this looks good. More chapters please. I would love to read more.
So far this has been a really good read for me and I'm enjoying it a lot. So please keep writing this so other people can enjoy it to. I would also suggest updating more frequently if possible, but if you can't its fine.
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If you go into it with the mindset of watching something from the Scary Movie franchise where it tries to be good but is nothing but a joke then you may enjoy it.
i enjoyed it so far, keep it going author,[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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One of the few times i actually feel like someone deserved a 5-star rating on their story keep up the good work kid............................
The thing about this book is that you use his name too much (i have done the same); you use the same verbs(I've done the same), and the story is a fanfic but all you have to do is improve, You still have the potential.
a really good story with bad grammar , you need intuition to differentiate some mistakes like the inconsistent gender word ( referring to his sister with he and referring to him with her )
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I saw two chapters, and it seemed rubbish to me. In the synopsis it says that the MC is a murderous spy but when he reincarnates in avatar he looks like a shit retard, as a spy he should have a cunning / intelligent mind with a will of steel ... but no !, I try to feel the vibrations like toph but he gave up on the first try and asks the system for help, then the system tells him that he needs 5000 points to buy a pill but since he doesn't have he gets depressed and says "I'll never be able to get out of here "The MC is not the one in the synopsis, he is just an ordinary person, a fool who is not a spy or a murderer.