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I've finished all the available chaps and all I can say is thay it's good, there are some things that I got mad About though, the mc claims that he knew mcu plot, but when they we're going back in time and when hulk was bringing everyone back from the snap he didn't do anything to stop nebula, he didn't even know it, this is just one instance, there are a lot more that didn't match up but it's good if you want to pass time or not that knowledgeable in mcu or jojo
A história é legal, porém o autor é burro. Motivo 1: mete o personagem em problemas, sendo que o mesmo diz que quer evitá-los. Mas mesmo assim vai e faz! Motivo 2: FILLERS. Centenas de capítulos detalhando histórias paralelas! Merda, se quisesse FILLER, veria Naruto! No demais, é até legal, mas a experiência final é DECEPCIONANTE.
Its good. Up until the girl he adopts becomes the Plot device for the duration of the show halfway thru. So yeah, the plot and the MC's involvement heavily clutched with the girl itself, ruining the whole story.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
The story is well written with a balance of action, drama, plot, and more, also does the Mc achieve the world over heaven?👍👍👍👍👍👍 thanks for reading.
This book is amazing! Amazing plot, characters, storyline and imagery. I however am not a fan of the dialogue. I get that it is translated, but the dialogue and words used are a bit awkward, though it is a common occurence in chinese literatures that are translated to english. The grammar has mistakes here and there as well, but overall it is intelligeble and could be understood with comtext clues. Currently at chapter 7, hopefully the translation improves, though it is not bad, it could still use a lot of work amd improvement.
I can't rate this novel higher than this I am currently at chapter 150 and I feel that he is wasting money . .. and seriously what the use of have a stand that changes your appearance when you couldn't even take they mobster jewelries and u just went to buy it and I have a question you said that in the beginning that ancient one was aware when he used the world powers but she don't appear after he use it continuously .. .. ancient one is a being who takes investigation seriously and so I am kinda confuse with the novel Sha
when i first read this sotry on mtlnovel it was very good a little hard to read but manageable give it a try with over 600+ pages and counting you may want to read at least 100 pages to get situated. But what i'm more consered about is after translating all 853 pages of the origanal will you the translator's try to continue the story? we are left in a bit of a clifhanger on the last chaptre.
a mediocre fanfic which ticks all the boxes for a typical Chinese webnovel, skip the first 50 or so chaps as it is a cooking show. If you want to enjoy this then better turn off your brain or you might get brain damage ps: the mc is a random Chinese guy and not dio, so don't expect the menacing dio, expect a cliche Chinese guy with all the typical characteristics of Chinese webnovels conclusion: not a bad read but just average at best
I don't know why everyone doesn't like this fan fiction. I have read 314 chapters so far and I REALLY like it Jdjsjwjhdhsnsnjdkdkkdkdkdkskajksfhksiwnxyrndkwkeoehks829w99299292929929299292992929299292847872992728299wkw7eujeowgshsksusbshsysuusjwiwoowowowppppppppppplollolololoktoprocitaltotloxandgei
this ff is at most 2.5 star but I am biased toward this translation team so I gave them 4 stars 🌟 .........................?........?.......?
Good translation! There's a bit of misspelling but overall, 4.8/5. Keep up the good work! [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
It's a n nice fanfic. But please maintain the update stability and increase the updates per week............................................
I don't really know, It just feels like the MC doesn't have any goal aside from survival. And I know that that is basically what life is about, but it just feels like it isn't going anywhere. It is a pretty good translation though
Muito bom a história, sem brincadeira gostei muito de ler essa história. O problema dessa história começou nos cap 550, teve alguns furos como: ganhando ouro, rolando a roleta, ganhando os stands apelões, mas tirando isso a história é muito boa. Recomendo muito a ler, valer o tempo gasto😀😆
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Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story!
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Pure brilliance i would have expected this to have 100 if not iver 500 5 star reviews even though this is only the translation the amount of chapters amazazes me
Honestly, the concept is very interesting but I think the writing of the story ruined it for me. The plot is very jumpy and be all over the place and the main character has little to no development or interesting characteristics, just a standard, polite guy with a somewhat bad temper, which is not even consistent throughout the story with the dude casually switching moods in a heart beat.
I gave 5 stars for the translation because its pretty good, but other than that Im dissapointed. The first 60 chaps were good but after that there was a lot of bullshit such as chapters wasted where the MC is fooling around with this girl and her sister which is boring af. Also the MC gets pissed over a lot of things easily, for example, one kid was getting bullied and he had to get SHEILD involve because he was going to cripple them or something. The MC has no fucking self control, and the fact that he got only 3 stands after about 500 draws is pure bullshit, I understand the author doesnt want to make the MC too OP but do it in another way instead of some bs like bad luck. Anyways, other than that the translation team is doing a good job, so props to you guys I hope you continue to translate stuff..... preferably better than this...😅😇😂
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this is actually pretty good.... mc from weak to strong [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hi, I am one of the translators in System Translator. I will regularly put chapters here, but please read on our site if you want to contribute to our community xD
In my opinion this is really good stuff ignore the one above so I hope you continue this because I think it is really good 😁😁😁😁😁😁😄😄😄😄
I liked it, read it if you have time and don't take things too seriously because there are holes in the plot, but it's an enjoyable read ...............................
I've finished all the available chaps and all I can say is thay it's good, there are some things that I got mad About though, the mc claims that he knew mcu plot, but when they we're going back in time and when hulk was bringing everyone back from the snap he didn't do anything to stop nebula, he didn't even know it, this is just one instance, there are a lot more that didn't match up but it's good if you want to pass time or not that knowledgeable in mcu or jojo
A história é legal, porém o autor é burro. Motivo 1: mete o personagem em problemas, sendo que o mesmo diz que quer evitá-los. Mas mesmo assim vai e faz! Motivo 2: FILLERS. Centenas de capítulos detalhando histórias paralelas! Merda, se quisesse FILLER, veria Naruto! No demais, é até legal, mas a experiência final é DECEPCIONANTE.
Its good. Up until the girl he adopts becomes the Plot device for the duration of the show halfway thru. So yeah, the plot and the MC's involvement heavily clutched with the girl itself, ruining the whole story.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
The story is well written with a balance of action, drama, plot, and more, also does the Mc achieve the world over heaven?👍👍👍👍👍👍 thanks for reading.
This book is amazing! Amazing plot, characters, storyline and imagery. I however am not a fan of the dialogue. I get that it is translated, but the dialogue and words used are a bit awkward, though it is a common occurence in chinese literatures that are translated to english. The grammar has mistakes here and there as well, but overall it is intelligeble and could be understood with comtext clues. Currently at chapter 7, hopefully the translation improves, though it is not bad, it could still use a lot of work amd improvement.
I can't rate this novel higher than this I am currently at chapter 150 and I feel that he is wasting money . .. and seriously what the use of have a stand that changes your appearance when you couldn't even take they mobster jewelries and u just went to buy it and I have a question you said that in the beginning that ancient one was aware when he used the world powers but she don't appear after he use it continuously .. .. ancient one is a being who takes investigation seriously and so I am kinda confuse with the novel Sha
when i first read this sotry on mtlnovel it was very good a little hard to read but manageable give it a try with over 600+ pages and counting you may want to read at least 100 pages to get situated. But what i'm more consered about is after translating all 853 pages of the origanal will you the translator's try to continue the story? we are left in a bit of a clifhanger on the last chaptre.
a mediocre fanfic which ticks all the boxes for a typical Chinese webnovel, skip the first 50 or so chaps as it is a cooking show. If you want to enjoy this then better turn off your brain or you might get brain damage ps: the mc is a random Chinese guy and not dio, so don't expect the menacing dio, expect a cliche Chinese guy with all the typical characteristics of Chinese webnovels conclusion: not a bad read but just average at best
I don't know why everyone doesn't like this fan fiction. I have read 314 chapters so far and I REALLY like it Jdjsjwjhdhsnsnjdkdkkdkdkdkskajksfhksiwnxyrndkwkeoehks829w99299292929929299292992929299292847872992728299wkw7eujeowgshsksusbshsysuusjwiwoowowowppppppppppplollolololoktoprocitaltotloxandgei
this ff is at most 2.5 star but I am biased toward this translation team so I gave them 4 stars 🌟 .........................?........?.......?
Good translation! There's a bit of misspelling but overall, 4.8/5. Keep up the good work! [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
It's a n nice fanfic. But please maintain the update stability and increase the updates per week............................................
I don't really know, It just feels like the MC doesn't have any goal aside from survival. And I know that that is basically what life is about, but it just feels like it isn't going anywhere. It is a pretty good translation though
Muito bom a história, sem brincadeira gostei muito de ler essa história. O problema dessa história começou nos cap 550, teve alguns furos como: ganhando ouro, rolando a roleta, ganhando os stands apelões, mas tirando isso a história é muito boa. Recomendo muito a ler, valer o tempo gasto😀😆
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Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story!
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Pure brilliance i would have expected this to have 100 if not iver 500 5 star reviews even though this is only the translation the amount of chapters amazazes me
Honestly, the concept is very interesting but I think the writing of the story ruined it for me. The plot is very jumpy and be all over the place and the main character has little to no development or interesting characteristics, just a standard, polite guy with a somewhat bad temper, which is not even consistent throughout the story with the dude casually switching moods in a heart beat.
I gave 5 stars for the translation because its pretty good, but other than that Im dissapointed. The first 60 chaps were good but after that there was a lot of bullshit such as chapters wasted where the MC is fooling around with this girl and her sister which is boring af. Also the MC gets pissed over a lot of things easily, for example, one kid was getting bullied and he had to get SHEILD involve because he was going to cripple them or something. The MC has no fucking self control, and the fact that he got only 3 stands after about 500 draws is pure bullshit, I understand the author doesnt want to make the MC too OP but do it in another way instead of some bs like bad luck. Anyways, other than that the translation team is doing a good job, so props to you guys I hope you continue to translate stuff..... preferably better than this...😅😇😂
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Hi, I am one of the translators in System Translator. I will regularly put chapters here, but please read on our site if you want to contribute to our community xD
In my opinion this is really good stuff ignore the one above so I hope you continue this because I think it is really good 😁😁😁😁😁😁😄😄😄😄
I liked it, read it if you have time and don't take things too seriously because there are holes in the plot, but it's an enjoyable read ...............................