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I Like this novel, the quality seems good, but it's only beginning so I think is not right do judge story development and world background yet, the MC seems 'cool', she's not the cliche kind of "hero of justice" or "one of a kind genius" that always' exist in fantasy stories that's enough to me. The "system" part is good too, it's not too complex and doesn't have unnecessary stats and information, for me it's shows potential and I'll continue to read for now.
The character design is good . So is the background setting Some might think she is stupid at the beginning and that is true , she was still a kid . And its good that she has an optimistic personality considering the life she had in the alley when you get home she died I honestly respected that because she still had a will to live. and I know that you want to have a serious novel but that's going to happen a little later on due to Kana becoming stronger . Later in the hundreds of chapters there will be a lot of battles and problems with the world . The friends Kana meet and make died while she did mangage to revive them and save ... ok im going to stop there since I might reveal more spoiler . The world was destroyed and all kinds of chaos but I honestly like that despite all that drama she still had the personality she had in the beginning of the novel. Also one more thing Kana have been reincarnated countless times and one of those lives she met her current husband so you can say they've known each other for a life time . I know many may reading this review to see how the story is going but I strongly recommended due to Kana personality and the development of the story. Its not too slow and certainly not too fast . I honestly love this novel and will forever be a fan of the author . Amazing work author-chan If you have any questions do feel free to ask at your own risk .[img=update][img=recommend]
none of the promises made in ch 41 were ever fulfilled that i can find pretty much no point in reading a story where the author has the mc an friends swear to stop the murdering rapist necorphile child abuser than they just forget about him and the other bad guys..... the child marriage was creepy but tge way you treat the dude forced into it is quite awful the lack of brain power even after boosting the int stat i fcking cant with this bs
It's a good story if you're able to look past a few things, that I simply couldn't. Don't take it as me just hating on it as the writing quality is high, considering there're 1k chapters that also seems very consistent though the chapters themselves are short. It's a bit too cliche with some plot points but that doesn't bother me and all in all its a pleasant read for the 43 chapters I tried. Sadly though the few issues that persisted are too much for me to overlook so I will be dropping the series but don't be discouraged as you may not be bothered by the same things I am: 1. What does bother me is how self-loathing the story is, it feels like a wet dream for people who just hate themselves and want to see humanity trash-talked at every turn. I get it, you think we're all trash that should die a torturous death, no need to say it thrice in every paragraph. 2. The protagonist just doesn't fit her backstory, no one with that past is going to be as childish, gullible and irresponsible as her. If she was homeless for 2 weeks and then died fair, but she survived on the street for 9 whole years. 3. Some things are pointlessly done for subverting expectations like with Ray being bullied so we sympathize but then him being the son of a Baron and evil make no sense. How can they bully him if they believed he had the influence to ruin entire families if they kicked him out? 4. Barring the main cast, you can assume every other person (at least every human) is a complete piece of garbage, those who aren't won't be human for long. Very black and white. 3. Worldbuilding just doesn't seem to make sense, the system is wonky with levels, seems convenient to just give 5 levels for the bear and rabbit when she hunted dozens of animals. If I didn't read any other stories with much better systems it probably wouldn't bother me. 4. A baron raising 30 000 troops casually is actually crazy, it seems like so much here is done for the "wow" factor at the cost of consistency and plausibility, some might not care but I pay a lot of attention to these things. I feel kinda bad about this review but wanted to be honest about my thoughts on the story, everyone should form their own opinion so I would recommend you give it a try and maybe the things that bothered me won't bother you. I can certainly see why some people enjoy it.
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İlk önce 45.bölüme kadar sıkıcı ondan sonra gayet iyi ayrıca Hikaye genel olarak aksiyon,komedi ve güçlenme tarzı birşey. Konu bazen karanlık tarafa gitse'de sonra düzeliyor ben gayet beğendim insanı sıkmıyor tavsiye ederim.
So happy to see you succeeding old friend? If you might not remember me, I used to do review swaps with you when you first started? I'm happy to see you've come far. If you're on discord please chat me up on zero_lives. Thanks.
I am going to re-read this novel. Though this is definitely my number 1 favorite followed by your other dragon novel reborn with an op system. You're my number one author. The last chapter I had read before was 625 which I took a break from. I also love your other novels. Every novel is high quality. The background of the Mc is very deep and amazing.
the comedy just doesn't work for me. some is fine but other parts are just plain frustrating when it forgers her entire backstory and makes her act arrogant. it is also way to comedy focused for me however I believe people should give it a 10 to 15 chap go to see if they like it.
I like the creativity of the story very much the character Kana is the one that I love the most even though she is goofy sometimes she always makes me laugh [img=gift]
Great book, by far one of my best and one of the reasons I like female main characters now
Amazing novel so far a wild ride ive been here since the latest chapter was Kana stealing crieg as a husband and gotta say it's been a crazy and long journey. The wring quality is an amazing 5 stars every chapter has amazing immersement with funny moments and teachings although I wish we didn't have to wait like 600 chapters for backstory in the goddess of death training arc and stuff. the update stability 5 stars. Story development is a 3 stars because not many hints at backstory especially the reincarnations and what not and it took forever. character design is a 3 because the 2 main characters kana and creig was kinda forced in the beginning and it got too late to change it so I don't really blame inny for it. World background is perfect there's a lot of side story plotlines and different things leading up to the overall story. However it pains me to say that all this is perfect but the story in itself was kinda eh besides the amazing complexity and descriptive writing.
it's the best till now that i have been reading with the cute FL character 🥰🥰🥰🥰😍🥰🥰❣️❣️👍👍
I’m in love with this book, I love it. Invayne is my favorite author on this app. I sometimes get lost and end up rereading the beginning chapters due to excitement. Keep up the amazing work!
I'm giving a review to mark this so that I can think more on a matter before asking this question Anyways loved the book my favorite for a long time, I dropped it for a few months to cry for a bit so I am only at chapter 735, you may not think that is a lot but, I dropped it more than 100 chapters before this and I have only been reading for 12 hours
[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[Good afternoon. Did something happen to you? I think your story is great, I hope you keep writing it, because I have so much fun reading your story. If you are sick, I hope you get better.]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]
I just started reading this today and it is pretty good. It has a fleshed out plot along with good writing quality. I am only on chapter 163 so far but I would say give it a read for sure. Some things I do have to complain about so far tho are 1) the chapters I feel are pretty short. Averaging at about 1000 words a chapter. I don't know if this is long or not but I just feel like I am breezing through the chapters. 2) I feel like the whole system aspect is a little misleading. There is barley any presence in the system so far and it is not something that is unique to the MC. It is something that every person in the world has. Finally for someone who is so strong, I feel like Kana gets into soooo many dangerous situations. Its either that or its someone close to her that is getting pursued by the haughty young masters. (Kiliffia). Other than those reasons, so far it has been an enjoyable read.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Those old folks are very annoying, I hope Kana gets there and teaches these guys a lesson.
I would like to ask a question, would Angelica be an Elder Dragon? I ask this because almost nothing has been said about what kind of dragon Angelica is.
I’ve read about the first 100 chapters and I’m really enjoying the book and would recommend it to anyone who enjoy books about being reincarnated with a system overpowered Mc.
It is a cool book with a vast but sometimes confusing world background. In the first 300 chapters its really good, but it gets a bit confusing and complicated later on. But overall its a good book. I hope the author continues.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I love this book, I have been keeping up with it and have read every chapter so far. Some people may not like the cultivation section of it but I think it’s a nice change of pace. Keep Up the amazing work.
main character is super overinflated, she gets help from every god out there, and there so much sensless aoe killing but main character its stupid, old people, children innocents who has nothing to with, even friendlis. the story is just bad
Love the story. The star of the show is how Kana interacts with the people she comes across and form bounds with. But don't underestimate the worldbuilding or the fightimg either! I will say though the story really picks up and shines after 300 or so chapters (for me at least). So if you like the start conyinue and you'll find something amazing :) . If you don't like the start... well than ig this isn't really your cup of tea just know if keeps on getting better.
I Like this novel, the quality seems good, but it's only beginning so I think is not right do judge story development and world background yet, the MC seems 'cool', she's not the cliche kind of "hero of justice" or "one of a kind genius" that always' exist in fantasy stories that's enough to me. The "system" part is good too, it's not too complex and doesn't have unnecessary stats and information, for me it's shows potential and I'll continue to read for now.
The character design is good . So is the background setting Some might think she is stupid at the beginning and that is true , she was still a kid . And its good that she has an optimistic personality considering the life she had in the alley when you get home she died I honestly respected that because she still had a will to live. and I know that you want to have a serious novel but that's going to happen a little later on due to Kana becoming stronger . Later in the hundreds of chapters there will be a lot of battles and problems with the world . The friends Kana meet and make died while she did mangage to revive them and save ... ok im going to stop there since I might reveal more spoiler . The world was destroyed and all kinds of chaos but I honestly like that despite all that drama she still had the personality she had in the beginning of the novel. Also one more thing Kana have been reincarnated countless times and one of those lives she met her current husband so you can say they've known each other for a life time . I know many may reading this review to see how the story is going but I strongly recommended due to Kana personality and the development of the story. Its not too slow and certainly not too fast . I honestly love this novel and will forever be a fan of the author . Amazing work author-chan If you have any questions do feel free to ask at your own risk .[img=update][img=recommend]
none of the promises made in ch 41 were ever fulfilled that i can find pretty much no point in reading a story where the author has the mc an friends swear to stop the murdering rapist necorphile child abuser than they just forget about him and the other bad guys..... the child marriage was creepy but tge way you treat the dude forced into it is quite awful the lack of brain power even after boosting the int stat i fcking cant with this bs
It's a good story if you're able to look past a few things, that I simply couldn't. Don't take it as me just hating on it as the writing quality is high, considering there're 1k chapters that also seems very consistent though the chapters themselves are short. It's a bit too cliche with some plot points but that doesn't bother me and all in all its a pleasant read for the 43 chapters I tried. Sadly though the few issues that persisted are too much for me to overlook so I will be dropping the series but don't be discouraged as you may not be bothered by the same things I am: 1. What does bother me is how self-loathing the story is, it feels like a wet dream for people who just hate themselves and want to see humanity trash-talked at every turn. I get it, you think we're all trash that should die a torturous death, no need to say it thrice in every paragraph. 2. The protagonist just doesn't fit her backstory, no one with that past is going to be as childish, gullible and irresponsible as her. If she was homeless for 2 weeks and then died fair, but she survived on the street for 9 whole years. 3. Some things are pointlessly done for subverting expectations like with Ray being bullied so we sympathize but then him being the son of a Baron and evil make no sense. How can they bully him if they believed he had the influence to ruin entire families if they kicked him out? 4. Barring the main cast, you can assume every other person (at least every human) is a complete piece of garbage, those who aren't won't be human for long. Very black and white. 3. Worldbuilding just doesn't seem to make sense, the system is wonky with levels, seems convenient to just give 5 levels for the bear and rabbit when she hunted dozens of animals. If I didn't read any other stories with much better systems it probably wouldn't bother me. 4. A baron raising 30 000 troops casually is actually crazy, it seems like so much here is done for the "wow" factor at the cost of consistency and plausibility, some might not care but I pay a lot of attention to these things. I feel kinda bad about this review but wanted to be honest about my thoughts on the story, everyone should form their own opinion so I would recommend you give it a try and maybe the things that bothered me won't bother you. I can certainly see why some people enjoy it.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ İlk önce 45.bölüme kadar sıkıcı ondan sonra gayet iyi ayrıca Hikaye genel olarak aksiyon,komedi ve güçlenme tarzı birşey. Konu bazen karanlık tarafa gitse'de sonra düzeliyor ben gayet beğendim insanı sıkmıyor tavsiye ederim.
So happy to see you succeeding old friend? If you might not remember me, I used to do review swaps with you when you first started? I'm happy to see you've come far. If you're on discord please chat me up on zero_lives. Thanks.
I am going to re-read this novel. Though this is definitely my number 1 favorite followed by your other dragon novel reborn with an op system. You're my number one author. The last chapter I had read before was 625 which I took a break from. I also love your other novels. Every novel is high quality. The background of the Mc is very deep and amazing.
the comedy just doesn't work for me. some is fine but other parts are just plain frustrating when it forgers her entire backstory and makes her act arrogant. it is also way to comedy focused for me however I believe people should give it a 10 to 15 chap go to see if they like it.
I like the creativity of the story very much the character Kana is the one that I love the most even though she is goofy sometimes she always makes me laugh [img=gift]
Great book, by far one of my best and one of the reasons I like female main characters now
Amazing novel so far a wild ride ive been here since the latest chapter was Kana stealing crieg as a husband and gotta say it's been a crazy and long journey. The wring quality is an amazing 5 stars every chapter has amazing immersement with funny moments and teachings although I wish we didn't have to wait like 600 chapters for backstory in the goddess of death training arc and stuff. the update stability 5 stars. Story development is a 3 stars because not many hints at backstory especially the reincarnations and what not and it took forever. character design is a 3 because the 2 main characters kana and creig was kinda forced in the beginning and it got too late to change it so I don't really blame inny for it. World background is perfect there's a lot of side story plotlines and different things leading up to the overall story. However it pains me to say that all this is perfect but the story in itself was kinda eh besides the amazing complexity and descriptive writing.
it's the best till now that i have been reading with the cute FL character 🥰🥰🥰🥰😍🥰🥰❣️❣️👍👍
I’m in love with this book, I love it. Invayne is my favorite author on this app. I sometimes get lost and end up rereading the beginning chapters due to excitement. Keep up the amazing work!
I'm giving a review to mark this so that I can think more on a matter before asking this question Anyways loved the book my favorite for a long time, I dropped it for a few months to cry for a bit so I am only at chapter 735, you may not think that is a lot but, I dropped it more than 100 chapters before this and I have only been reading for 12 hours
[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[Good afternoon. Did something happen to you? I think your story is great, I hope you keep writing it, because I have so much fun reading your story. If you are sick, I hope you get better.]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]
I just started reading this today and it is pretty good. It has a fleshed out plot along with good writing quality. I am only on chapter 163 so far but I would say give it a read for sure. Some things I do have to complain about so far tho are 1) the chapters I feel are pretty short. Averaging at about 1000 words a chapter. I don't know if this is long or not but I just feel like I am breezing through the chapters. 2) I feel like the whole system aspect is a little misleading. There is barley any presence in the system so far and it is not something that is unique to the MC. It is something that every person in the world has. Finally for someone who is so strong, I feel like Kana gets into soooo many dangerous situations. Its either that or its someone close to her that is getting pursued by the haughty young masters. (Kiliffia). Other than those reasons, so far it has been an enjoyable read.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Those old folks are very annoying, I hope Kana gets there and teaches these guys a lesson.
I would like to ask a question, would Angelica be an Elder Dragon? I ask this because almost nothing has been said about what kind of dragon Angelica is.
I’ve read about the first 100 chapters and I’m really enjoying the book and would recommend it to anyone who enjoy books about being reincarnated with a system overpowered Mc.
It is a cool book with a vast but sometimes confusing world background. In the first 300 chapters its really good, but it gets a bit confusing and complicated later on. But overall its a good book. I hope the author continues.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I love this book, I have been keeping up with it and have read every chapter so far. Some people may not like the cultivation section of it but I think it’s a nice change of pace. Keep Up the amazing work.
main character is super overinflated, she gets help from every god out there, and there so much sensless aoe killing but main character its stupid, old people, children innocents who has nothing to with, even friendlis. the story is just bad
Love the story. The star of the show is how Kana interacts with the people she comes across and form bounds with. But don't underestimate the worldbuilding or the fightimg either! I will say though the story really picks up and shines after 300 or so chapters (for me at least). So if you like the start conyinue and you'll find something amazing :) . If you don't like the start... well than ig this isn't really your cup of tea just know if keeps on getting better.
The moral of every story should be to not lose your virginity to a rock XD