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really plays on your emotions.i don't know if she escaped from horror to a greater horror. it's really really captivating story. keep writing I love it thank you for sharing and I recommend to other readers to get engaged into this story you won't be disappointed.
Hi! This is Molly, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in 2 week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
This is actually really interesting. I usually don't like this genre but the MC is very interesting and I'm looking forward to the challenges she'll face.
Wow! This creep me out! The emotion from the author come through the writing! From the chapter one it's already hooked up my feelings! I never read this genre type before, this is my first reading this genre! And it's impressive me! The writing also well done! The idea of the story is unique! The story make me curious more as soon as I read it! Good job author![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Interesting story , Very catchy and very unique , Can't wait for more updates ... It is really highly recommend to everyone , What a splendid story💗
This isn’t my normal genre of novel but this one captivated me. It’s so captivating and emotional. A job well done author...hope for more chapters soon
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels! + Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing contest! This contest is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi, but if you haven’t worked on these genres, that’s TOTALLY FINE! You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. As all new stories can get cash rewards, this might be your chance to begin your writing career and start to make a living by writing! Not to mention that you can take your chance to win the big cash and get your books published in hardcover! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email :Rebecca_661@outlook.com
Reading the first chapter made me cry. This is so emotional and l love how the author is revealing the emotion. It is a piece of art that really needs to be recognized
This book just dig in my emotions. That feeling of being drawn into the story and tears just fall unconsciously. This book hit me hard. Very impressive! Salute to the author. 🥂❤️
There is great contrast in this story, and more in a first chapter. Start with a phrase to celebrate. It recreates in a church, a scene of personal introspection and conflicts of contradictions of murmuring people, then it concludes in a home: harassing, cursing and merciful. Set the rhythm of the story and the physical and emotional characteristics of the character ... amazing ... I recommend reading him.
This story is unconventionally unique and intriguingly captivating. The experience and her present state makes one to find out more in a world where her true appearance is shattered and are inner appearance is depleting because of ridicule. This author is a spell caster. I am trapped to just keep reading and reading, as the synopsis got me immersed into the irresistible flow of well structured storyline, building a world of adventure... This is a commendable work author.. Keep it up. You already got me as one of your fan... I recommend this book a an excellent read.
The synopsis is extremely interesting. Captivating story from the beginning, cant wait for more uploads. Characters are relatable and I grew fond of them as the story developed. Well written and easy to read. Excellent novel, well done. [img=recommend]
Very Good Synopsis...Reading the chapters attracted me to the writing style and story plot...Good work, Author! If you are a horror & thriller genre fan I recommend everyone to read it.
I loveeeeddd the storyline. Its a different style from what I'm used to. Also, your writing style is beautiful, nothing too ambiguous but still passes the message across. I can't wait to read other chapters .
Wow, this genre isn't my normal cup of tea, but the way that the 'outcast' protagonist is portrayed, how the past and the present are interwoven and how the burning shame and grief are presented - all make for a fantastic piece. This is a really good job, definitely ahead of its competition, especially due to its phenomenal authors writing abilities.
Your writing quality,updating stability,story development,the designing of your characters everything is superb really good job. This book is chilling and can set you off the edge,am at a loss of words right now. I highly recommend this book for everyone to read that is if you are a lover of thrillers and horror
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! I feel bad for MC (cuz i havent read her name yet) but it feels desply relatable. sO much that somehow it hurts. great woek author![img=update][img=update]
The beginning is successful. Easy to read, a fluent one. Liked it. Adding names to chapters would be much better in my opinion to attract more readers. Keep going on writer[img=recommend]
I love the writer's writing quality, the book's title matches with the plot and the first Chapters got me hooked, I can't even drop my phone again, I'm so anxious to read more, I had to drop this comment.
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
really plays on your emotions.i don't know if she escaped from horror to a greater horror. it's really really captivating story. keep writing I love it thank you for sharing and I recommend to other readers to get engaged into this story you won't be disappointed.
Hi! This is Molly, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in 2 week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
This is actually really interesting. I usually don't like this genre but the MC is very interesting and I'm looking forward to the challenges she'll face.
Wow! This creep me out! The emotion from the author come through the writing! From the chapter one it's already hooked up my feelings! I never read this genre type before, this is my first reading this genre! And it's impressive me! The writing also well done! The idea of the story is unique! The story make me curious more as soon as I read it! Good job author![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Interesting story , Very catchy and very unique , Can't wait for more updates ... It is really highly recommend to everyone , What a splendid story💗
This isn’t my normal genre of novel but this one captivated me. It’s so captivating and emotional. A job well done author...hope for more chapters soon
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels! + Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing contest! This contest is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi, but if you haven’t worked on these genres, that’s TOTALLY FINE! You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. As all new stories can get cash rewards, this might be your chance to begin your writing career and start to make a living by writing! Not to mention that you can take your chance to win the big cash and get your books published in hardcover! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email :Rebecca_661@outlook.com
Reading the first chapter made me cry. This is so emotional and l love how the author is revealing the emotion. It is a piece of art that really needs to be recognized
This book just dig in my emotions. That feeling of being drawn into the story and tears just fall unconsciously. This book hit me hard. Very impressive! Salute to the author. 🥂❤️
There is great contrast in this story, and more in a first chapter. Start with a phrase to celebrate. It recreates in a church, a scene of personal introspection and conflicts of contradictions of murmuring people, then it concludes in a home: harassing, cursing and merciful. Set the rhythm of the story and the physical and emotional characteristics of the character ... amazing ... I recommend reading him.
This story is unconventionally unique and intriguingly captivating. The experience and her present state makes one to find out more in a world where her true appearance is shattered and are inner appearance is depleting because of ridicule. This author is a spell caster. I am trapped to just keep reading and reading, as the synopsis got me immersed into the irresistible flow of well structured storyline, building a world of adventure... This is a commendable work author.. Keep it up. You already got me as one of your fan... I recommend this book a an excellent read.
The synopsis is extremely interesting. Captivating story from the beginning, cant wait for more uploads. Characters are relatable and I grew fond of them as the story developed. Well written and easy to read. Excellent novel, well done. [img=recommend]
Very Good Synopsis...Reading the chapters attracted me to the writing style and story plot...Good work, Author! If you are a horror & thriller genre fan I recommend everyone to read it.
I loveeeeddd the storyline. Its a different style from what I'm used to. Also, your writing style is beautiful, nothing too ambiguous but still passes the message across. I can't wait to read other chapters .
Wow, this genre isn't my normal cup of tea, but the way that the 'outcast' protagonist is portrayed, how the past and the present are interwoven and how the burning shame and grief are presented - all make for a fantastic piece. This is a really good job, definitely ahead of its competition, especially due to its phenomenal authors writing abilities.
Your writing quality,updating stability,story development,the designing of your characters everything is superb really good job. This book is chilling and can set you off the edge,am at a loss of words right now. I highly recommend this book for everyone to read that is if you are a lover of thrillers and horror
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! I feel bad for MC (cuz i havent read her name yet) but it feels desply relatable. sO much that somehow it hurts. great woek author![img=update][img=update]
The beginning is successful. Easy to read, a fluent one. Liked it. Adding names to chapters would be much better in my opinion to attract more readers. Keep going on writer[img=recommend]
I love the writer's writing quality, the book's title matches with the plot and the first Chapters got me hooked, I can't even drop my phone again, I'm so anxious to read more, I had to drop this comment.
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.