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seeing this stories descrption, :D seeing its another garbage novel with a harem that'll take over the plot, D: why do you authors always do this, IT DOESNT EVEN FIT WITH WHAT YOUR GOING WITH! 😤
Chapter 5, and i must say that i was scared and worried at first.... FF7+Howards+Marvel? But the author knows what he is doing. THe grammar is excellent too. And i quite like how he is developing the trio of Cloud, TIfa and Aerith so well.. Aerith turned out to be very mischievous once unleashed about her worries.
Who is the yuri with? Id prefer not to invest my time into this if it's tifa and Aerith. Ignore Ignore Ignore Ignore
It’s a nice fanfic, but I’m out I don’t really like yuri tbh.it feel like Ntr Writing quality :4 Updating stability: 5 Story Development: 2 Character design : 4 World background 2 If the autor decided don’t make it yuri, let me know pls
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Im loving this story - huge fan of both FF7 and HP and im hoping that it doesnt get dropped like the other FF7 and HP fanfic. Sotry has amazing world-building and hopefully get to see more soon!!
can you remove the yuri tag please?..........................................................................................................
Good story so far, but I've only read 4 chapters. I had put this story down as being dropped. I liked the old one also. Why did you Rewrite it? 🧙💐
____Written by Google Tranlate Portuguese/English___ I'm enjoying the book, but sometimes I get really confused by the lack of details like for example in chapter 22: "There was no shot, but he heard a bullet tearing through the air, about to hit his head, but it was slow as a snail in his eyes. He lifted the book, closed the book with his hand and walked away from the phone booth.'' did the bullet hit him? did he dodge? if so, how? let's say he lifted the book , was it to stop the bullet? or did he just close the book? this kind of thing happened several times in this story, I don't like it, it makes me confused, I want to know what happened, but it seems the author jumped? forgot to write?, it seems like a blank space that should be filled in but is empty.
Your story is great. I'll admit, the fact that you have Cloud, Tifa and Aerith does affect this rating. But this is mainly because of the story. I like how you went against canon from the start. It gives off that refreshing take on a story. Not only that but I love the character developments aswell. You are doing great. Looking forward for more. 😊
Any chance you still have the old story, before you replaced it with the new one? I kinda wanna re-read and compare, I think I liked the old one more but its been so long I forgot XD and I might like the new one more so i just wanna double check
you get a five star for now and it's toldly not because it has final fantasy characters in it and definitely not because of cloud *cough* any who this is temporary and will re rate it when I finish reading so ya.👍
Que puedo decir me acabo de pasar el final fantasy y quede co ganas de mas. Dovahkiin, Dovahkiin Naal ok zin los vahriin Wah dein vokul mahfaeraak ahst vaal! Ahrk fin norok paal graan Fod nust hon zindro zaan Dovahkiin, fah hin kogaan mu draal! Huzrah nu, kul do od, wah aan bok lingrah vod Ahrk fin tey, boziik fun, do fin gein! Wo lost fron wah ney dov Ahrk fin reyliik do jul Voth aan suleyk wah ronit faal krein Ahrk fin kel lost prodah, Do ved viing ko fin krah, Tol fod zeymah win kein meyz fundein!
Its great. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________ :)
I'm liking this story. I'm a fan of final fantasy 7 and I like where this story is going. please keep up this story author it's really good please don't drop this story please give us more author this is to good to be dropped. please give us more please
it's good to recommend, this is just one stable fanfic of ff 7 haha.................................................................................................................................................
seeing this stories descrption, :D seeing its another garbage novel with a harem that'll take over the plot, D: why do you authors always do this, IT DOESNT EVEN FIT WITH WHAT YOUR GOING WITH! 😤
Chapter 5, and i must say that i was scared and worried at first.... FF7+Howards+Marvel? But the author knows what he is doing. THe grammar is excellent too. And i quite like how he is developing the trio of Cloud, TIfa and Aerith so well.. Aerith turned out to be very mischievous once unleashed about her worries.
Who is the yuri with? Id prefer not to invest my time into this if it's tifa and Aerith. Ignore Ignore Ignore Ignore
It’s a nice fanfic, but I’m out I don’t really like yuri tbh.it feel like Ntr Writing quality :4 Updating stability: 5 Story Development: 2 Character design : 4 World background 2 If the autor decided don’t make it yuri, let me know pls
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Im loving this story - huge fan of both FF7 and HP and im hoping that it doesnt get dropped like the other FF7 and HP fanfic. Sotry has amazing world-building and hopefully get to see more soon!!
can you remove the yuri tag please?..........................................................................................................
Good story so far, but I've only read 4 chapters. I had put this story down as being dropped. I liked the old one also. Why did you Rewrite it? 🧙💐
____Written by Google Tranlate Portuguese/English___ I'm enjoying the book, but sometimes I get really confused by the lack of details like for example in chapter 22: "There was no shot, but he heard a bullet tearing through the air, about to hit his head, but it was slow as a snail in his eyes. He lifted the book, closed the book with his hand and walked away from the phone booth.'' did the bullet hit him? did he dodge? if so, how? let's say he lifted the book , was it to stop the bullet? or did he just close the book? this kind of thing happened several times in this story, I don't like it, it makes me confused, I want to know what happened, but it seems the author jumped? forgot to write?, it seems like a blank space that should be filled in but is empty.
Your story is great. I'll admit, the fact that you have Cloud, Tifa and Aerith does affect this rating. But this is mainly because of the story. I like how you went against canon from the start. It gives off that refreshing take on a story. Not only that but I love the character developments aswell. You are doing great. Looking forward for more. 😊
Any chance you still have the old story, before you replaced it with the new one? I kinda wanna re-read and compare, I think I liked the old one more but its been so long I forgot XD and I might like the new one more so i just wanna double check
you get a five star for now and it's toldly not because it has final fantasy characters in it and definitely not because of cloud *cough* any who this is temporary and will re rate it when I finish reading so ya.👍
Que puedo decir me acabo de pasar el final fantasy y quede co ganas de mas. Dovahkiin, Dovahkiin Naal ok zin los vahriin Wah dein vokul mahfaeraak ahst vaal! Ahrk fin norok paal graan Fod nust hon zindro zaan Dovahkiin, fah hin kogaan mu draal! Huzrah nu, kul do od, wah aan bok lingrah vod Ahrk fin tey, boziik fun, do fin gein! Wo lost fron wah ney dov Ahrk fin reyliik do jul Voth aan suleyk wah ronit faal krein Ahrk fin kel lost prodah, Do ved viing ko fin krah, Tol fod zeymah win kein meyz fundein!
Its great. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________ :)
I'm liking this story. I'm a fan of final fantasy 7 and I like where this story is going. please keep up this story author it's really good please don't drop this story please give us more author this is to good to be dropped. please give us more please
it's good to recommend, this is just one stable fanfic of ff 7 haha.................................................................................................................................................