บท 66: Fixing (Not an Update)

So I went back and fixed/ rewrote the first arc as I thought it needed some fixing. Mostly just read over it and fixed some small things. (Though some chapters needed major fixing) I also appreciate advice and let me know if I made any mistakes and I'll do my best to fix them. I'll also be doing this with the other arcs though I think the first arc was the only arc that really needed some fixing and I'll be putting out a new chapter very soon so look forward to that!