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The story isn't so bad and I don't get what people are complaining about.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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"And so on" ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎
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Great but slow updates................................................................................................................................................
It is a interesting story but certain points made me stop reading, making Queen an AI but not AI just complicates things for no reason, and the fact that the MC discarded his body to become a robot is just weird, there are plenty of ways to become OP without becoming a machine, especially in universes such as Marvel. Author, good luck with the story.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
another novel with reviews to buy. You are in such a rush to write that you skip a lot of events that can build the MC, but you ignored that. Worse still, you forget to introduce him to important minds, and don't even shake hands with Charles Xavier O_O. We don't even know the name of his parents and how his abilities work, so I can say that it's impossible for this novel to become famous if we don't rewrite it from the beginning with most of the details of his life to build his character
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
the only part that i did not like is sometimes he explans things in a wird way and my brain cant proses it ngngngngngngngnngngngngngnngngng
Written at chapter 39. This story has a lot of potential to be great, but the author is rushing it, there for dropping the quality by a lot. Overall, I would recommend it, but the story could do with a rewrite to make it smoother. WQ:2 SD:3 CD:2 US:3 WB:2
honestly I never thought people would like this book so much like at this point, this book is just here to remind me of my first attempts at writing a fan-fiction but since you guys like it, I will try to rewrite it into something much better but generally the same storyline forgive my shameless good review
the idea and the novel itself was good but the way he wrote it was not that nice. he rushed through everything toooo much time skips . and we develop over years but we dont see deeper into his character
please update more chapters ......👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Good novel. But fast paced. A child at 12 working at so dangerous experiment publically not good. ......................... Good novel. But fast paced. A child at 12 working at so dangerous experiment publically not good. .........................
I am not that knowledgeable about the entire comic universe but i still like to read them 😎 And i liked the story very much author☺️☺️ please continue 🙏😁
Grammar needs a bit of work but otherwise, it's pretty good so far .................................................................................................................................................
this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards. so please keep up the good work
Its a it to fast paced. you should take ur time to write it, there are too many plot holes ex the mindscape creation how or what fid you do there. The whole technology thing is a bit weird it seems like your only adding things after you have some idea without any background to them, like u write a chapter but later decide to add something new to it but dont have a strong reason for it to be there
amazing marvel fanfic i like it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Man, you are in a hurry to write and miss many events that can build our knowledge about MC, but you ignored that. We do not even know the name of his parents and how his abilities work, so I can say that it is impossible for this novel to become famous if you do not rewrite it from the beginning with most of the details of his life to build his character
If you actually took the time to flesh things out, it could be absolutely fantastic. But as it is, it seems more like an outline for a potential story rather than a story in itself. If you ever do a proper rewrite, let me know. But as it is, I can’t force myself to read this anymore.
The story isn't so bad and I don't get what people are complaining about.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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"And so on" ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎
Por favor, ánimo al Creador-ora a seguir con esta historia tan innovadora👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Great but slow updates................................................................................................................................................
It is a interesting story but certain points made me stop reading, making Queen an AI but not AI just complicates things for no reason, and the fact that the MC discarded his body to become a robot is just weird, there are plenty of ways to become OP without becoming a machine, especially in universes such as Marvel. Author, good luck with the story.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ another novel with reviews to buy. You are in such a rush to write that you skip a lot of events that can build the MC, but you ignored that. Worse still, you forget to introduce him to important minds, and don't even shake hands with Charles Xavier O_O. We don't even know the name of his parents and how his abilities work, so I can say that it's impossible for this novel to become famous if we don't rewrite it from the beginning with most of the details of his life to build his character
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ the only part that i did not like is sometimes he explans things in a wird way and my brain cant proses it ngngngngngngngnngngngngngnngngng
Written at chapter 39. This story has a lot of potential to be great, but the author is rushing it, there for dropping the quality by a lot. Overall, I would recommend it, but the story could do with a rewrite to make it smoother. WQ:2 SD:3 CD:2 US:3 WB:2
honestly I never thought people would like this book so much like at this point, this book is just here to remind me of my first attempts at writing a fan-fiction but since you guys like it, I will try to rewrite it into something much better but generally the same storyline forgive my shameless good review
the idea and the novel itself was good but the way he wrote it was not that nice. he rushed through everything toooo much time skips . and we develop over years but we dont see deeper into his character
please update more chapters ......👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Good novel. But fast paced. A child at 12 working at so dangerous experiment publically not good. ......................... Good novel. But fast paced. A child at 12 working at so dangerous experiment publically not good. .........................
I am not that knowledgeable about the entire comic universe but i still like to read them 😎 And i liked the story very much author☺️☺️ please continue 🙏😁
Grammar needs a bit of work but otherwise, it's pretty good so far .................................................................................................................................................
this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards. so please keep up the good work
Its a it to fast paced. you should take ur time to write it, there are too many plot holes ex the mindscape creation how or what fid you do there. The whole technology thing is a bit weird it seems like your only adding things after you have some idea without any background to them, like u write a chapter but later decide to add something new to it but dont have a strong reason for it to be there
amazing marvel fanfic i like it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Man, you are in a hurry to write and miss many events that can build our knowledge about MC, but you ignored that. We do not even know the name of his parents and how his abilities work, so I can say that it is impossible for this novel to become famous if you do not rewrite it from the beginning with most of the details of his life to build his character
If you actually took the time to flesh things out, it could be absolutely fantastic. But as it is, it seems more like an outline for a potential story rather than a story in itself. If you ever do a proper rewrite, let me know. But as it is, I can’t force myself to read this anymore.