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4.22
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why did u deleat it ?your edited chapters are realy good. hope you re upload them again , becous i dont like reading mtl novel on other hps.
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very good novel concept , everyone loves a good naruto verse fanfic. the only issue I have is the grammar which is negligible to some extent. if you need someone to do some form of editing im free to help. keep up the good work
very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good y
The writing is okay, but needs a lot of editing. Story wise it seems pretty decent and interesting to follow Kakashi. His personality is off but that could be easily explained as the soul mergers fault. Nothings explained so far about the original soul, no real world building but not much expected from a fanfic I guess. Overall, the writing needs the most improvement, otherwise it's hard to read and quickly gets dull.
Look at me. I am Kakashi now. I couldn’t read the title without thinking about this everytime, so now that’s out of my system. Aside from that, not a bad start with a good idea since most people kinda dismiss Kakashi when making fanfics. I feel a bit off about the random bleach technique, but it’s been interesting overall.
I actually read this story before... It seems as author reposted it. Adding crap chapter to pass 15 k words mark. Such evil needs to be punished with negative review. 1 star for stability of updates. You could just write 15 chaps and release them... instead you copied random crap and boosted your word count. Writing quality 4? I am not really picky about grammar and other things. I don't think it's really good or bad. It's fine. Story development 3 stars. I might be biased because of feeling of dejavu. Character design 2 stars. You didn't put a lot work in design. Mostly already existing chars. World background 1 star - It's fanfic set in default mode Naruto universe. If you show me some creativity in future of the story. I don't mind changing my ratings.
Good job .................................................................................................................................................
thanks man & good work😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊😆😆😆😆
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why did u deleat it ?your edited chapters are realy good. hope you re upload them again , becous i dont like reading mtl novel on other hps.
what!!! [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
very good novel concept , everyone loves a good naruto verse fanfic. the only issue I have is the grammar which is negligible to some extent. if you need someone to do some form of editing im free to help. keep up the good work
very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good y
The writing is okay, but needs a lot of editing. Story wise it seems pretty decent and interesting to follow Kakashi. His personality is off but that could be easily explained as the soul mergers fault. Nothings explained so far about the original soul, no real world building but not much expected from a fanfic I guess. Overall, the writing needs the most improvement, otherwise it's hard to read and quickly gets dull.
Look at me. I am Kakashi now. I couldn’t read the title without thinking about this everytime, so now that’s out of my system. Aside from that, not a bad start with a good idea since most people kinda dismiss Kakashi when making fanfics. I feel a bit off about the random bleach technique, but it’s been interesting overall.
I actually read this story before... It seems as author reposted it. Adding crap chapter to pass 15 k words mark. Such evil needs to be punished with negative review. 1 star for stability of updates. You could just write 15 chaps and release them... instead you copied random crap and boosted your word count. Writing quality 4? I am not really picky about grammar and other things. I don't think it's really good or bad. It's fine. Story development 3 stars. I might be biased because of feeling of dejavu. Character design 2 stars. You didn't put a lot work in design. Mostly already existing chars. World background 1 star - It's fanfic set in default mode Naruto universe. If you show me some creativity in future of the story. I don't mind changing my ratings.
Good job .................................................................................................................................................
thanks man & good work😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊😆😆😆😆
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