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4.14
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Wonderful novel. Have a concept of modern world reincarnation not showing unnecessary cultivation, magic etc. Just a little slow but overall it is good
Writing quality: third grade. The author doesn't know anything at all about English, and it shows. They constantly misuse punctuation marks, have no clue of the difference between your and you're, the language used is basic, and it's littered with typos and grammar errors. 2/5 Update stability: no clue, but giving it a 1/5 because this abomination deserves a low overall rating. Story development: missing. As of chapter 89, nothing of any note has happened except for the absolute worst examples of tropes. I rate this a 1/5 and would rate it lower if it was possible. My actual rating in this category would easily be a zero. Character design: the worst. I haven't seen dumber characters on this entire platform, and considering I've seen literally hundreds of novels on the Webnovel platform, that's truly saying something. The main character's brain could be used to forge Mjolnir, the best friend is the most annoying combination of best friend tropes, the ex-wife is irredeemably stupid, and... well, everyone is the dumbest version of their particular collections of cliches that it's possible to be. 1/5 and I would recommend to this author in particular that they keep their day job, because being an author is just something they shouldn't do. World background: abysmal. The bog standard modern-day face slapping novel, but the absolute worst version of that in every category. 1/5 Overall: I had low expectations but was somehow still disappointed. This showed up in my WN weekly recommendations for some unknown reason (someone probably sold their soul to the devil), and I started reading it solely because the chapters weren't locked. I regret it and wish I could light the brain cells containing the memory of this failed abortion on fire and burn them to complete and utter nonexistence. I regret very little about my life so far, but reading 89 chapters of this garbage excuse for a novel is one of those rare regrets. Author, I hope that you have to answer every seventh question you're asked with the phrase "in my butt" for the next four and a half years.
Loving this novel so far there is great character development I just have one question harem?
well I am out....too much frustration for me, if the story improves in the future I will read it again I liked the story but the protagonist who had 30 years of experience in business, married and betrayed does not realize when a woman who is in love with him while everyone around her notices her except him. I recommend if you want a rather slow romance story and watch out harem probably Yandere too (I started reading for this tag)
I think the author should change the cover of his story, it doesn't look very good, I think with the genres of this story you can find "much better"))
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well waiting for new chs........................................................................................................................................
At first I was frustrated with the MC as his dense with women character was carried over through all the years he was a simp. His revenge plot was trudging along even though you can tell the subtle changes in his personality. But like any other novel fair judgement is made only after the ending. I finished reading this satisfied on how everything turned out. His revenge revealed his growth as a person while giving the antagonist his just desserts. Overall a great read.
reading bad reviews lol i didnt even started reading any chps, well here in philippines we have the famous g bar. ADONIS G BAR🤣😆
man, i was happy at first when i found this novel as it had 400+ chapters to read which was gud to pass my time..but now tht I'm deep in here, it's terrible to see how it takes 9-10 or even more chapters to sort out every little situation our guy gets in with all those unnecessary drama which are supposed to be funny ,but is just all the more stupid to be in the plot of a guy who is supposed to be a little close to the age of my father(mentally). I'm guessing he would have barely crossed 2 weeks by the end of these 400 chapters..which i feel stupid to continue reading on knowing this in short, this was a complete dissapointment ...
its a pretty good story with a solid main character but the harem is a bit too confusing
this is great novel (ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉ even there's lot plotholes but good work author i will wait how mc will make that b**** and guy pay, i was expecting good revenge at guy and for girl make her falling with mc but mc rejected her
What I hate the most is the dense mc ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Bro this novel is hilarious the mc gets all the cliches of hahah you are ugly clown and osv. he gets ONE haircut and then They star faening over the man like chill. If you read this dont take it seriously and just enjoy yourself while reading. Still no yandere after chapter 47
I love reading this novel......[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm reviewing this with small amount of stars. The updating is such a headache and the cliffhangers is extremely annoying and gives me even more headache
It's a great novel but if the author can update it daily then, the fans will show more interest. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
I lost some brain cells reading this just by the amount of forced plots, the stupid motivations behind characters actions and when the author makes the mc stupid just to keep the plot going, the only way to enjoy this is if you turn off your brain, and even then I still go a headache after reading 100, there was just too much bs and unnecessary drama...
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writing quality: it's good! no mistakes as far as I remember. story development: slow or just right. well, it's because of that, that the readers gets more attached to the story more! character design: every character has their own personalities. they are not like robots who will show up only when needed. Everyone has a role to play and their personalities are like of that in real life as much as possible. updating stability: This is what I like about the author the most. Although it's not stable but, he updates as much as he can. and he never rushed the story just so that he can update! World background: It's very clear! the families, power, and what's happening is clearly mentioned at the story. HOPE YOU LIKE MY REVIEW!🥰
this novel is soooo gooood! why does it say it has 1.5 million views! I feel like it has less than 50! support the author more! atleast leave some comments to motivate him/her!
As the plot starts Lu Chen gets a shock that his wife is still in love with this Long shen, he still couldn't believe it. But he got killed by his wife's man and reincarnated again in his past, still he goes for her till the point reaches where he figures out that Lu Chen controls her like a doll, but still he couldn't figure out the other of his childhood also love him over excessive, that is, Yandere. Such a dense head boy he stiil could acknowledge that he does need that so called previous wife but people who really loves him as a person.
I love this story so far it’s very funny! I also assume there is supposed to be the harem tag in the description? I also wonder when the harem starts in the story?
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its great ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Read it on scribble hub and I got to say that most of the work are great the plot can be annoying sometime and sometime the characters development start to to go back in the new chapter the idea that the main character have mix personalities a vengeful personality of a guy who was kill by the girl he love and another is a simp lord that will lick the ground that the main villainess/heroin(I’m not sure if it true but the plot is leading to a redemption arc for the villainess ) The only thing that i think could be improve is the world development like what is city in which country some world history like how did the the family become so powerful and the character development can be improve by making the character feel more real have them express more emotion and have longer dialogue or some inside thoughts of those character. And the story development is a bit too slow in my opinion but it is still ok each arc is about 5 chapter long and it perfect.
Love the story, the mc has a perfect balance of intelligence and idiocy, all the characters are well developed and interesting. However, there haven't been any updates or news for a while.
love this❤️❤️❤️..... . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . still waiting for Author-sensie to make Liu fei fei Inlove with Lu Chen kukuhuhahaahah(*Evil Laughter*)
broo this is just godly, really amazing man, I hope you don't drop this!!!! Though I do hope that Lu Chen ends up with meixiu!! I just really like her.
Bagusss, lanjut Thor👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
when this novel will update again, i can't hold my curiosity anymore what will happen next
Wonderful novel. Have a concept of modern world reincarnation not showing unnecessary cultivation, magic etc. Just a little slow but overall it is good
Writing quality: third grade. The author doesn't know anything at all about English, and it shows. They constantly misuse punctuation marks, have no clue of the difference between your and you're, the language used is basic, and it's littered with typos and grammar errors. 2/5 Update stability: no clue, but giving it a 1/5 because this abomination deserves a low overall rating. Story development: missing. As of chapter 89, nothing of any note has happened except for the absolute worst examples of tropes. I rate this a 1/5 and would rate it lower if it was possible. My actual rating in this category would easily be a zero. Character design: the worst. I haven't seen dumber characters on this entire platform, and considering I've seen literally hundreds of novels on the Webnovel platform, that's truly saying something. The main character's brain could be used to forge Mjolnir, the best friend is the most annoying combination of best friend tropes, the ex-wife is irredeemably stupid, and... well, everyone is the dumbest version of their particular collections of cliches that it's possible to be. 1/5 and I would recommend to this author in particular that they keep their day job, because being an author is just something they shouldn't do. World background: abysmal. The bog standard modern-day face slapping novel, but the absolute worst version of that in every category. 1/5 Overall: I had low expectations but was somehow still disappointed. This showed up in my WN weekly recommendations for some unknown reason (someone probably sold their soul to the devil), and I started reading it solely because the chapters weren't locked. I regret it and wish I could light the brain cells containing the memory of this failed abortion on fire and burn them to complete and utter nonexistence. I regret very little about my life so far, but reading 89 chapters of this garbage excuse for a novel is one of those rare regrets. Author, I hope that you have to answer every seventh question you're asked with the phrase "in my butt" for the next four and a half years.
Loving this novel so far there is great character development I just have one question harem?
well I am out....too much frustration for me, if the story improves in the future I will read it again I liked the story but the protagonist who had 30 years of experience in business, married and betrayed does not realize when a woman who is in love with him while everyone around her notices her except him. I recommend if you want a rather slow romance story and watch out harem probably Yandere too (I started reading for this tag)
I think the author should change the cover of his story, it doesn't look very good, I think with the genres of this story you can find "much better"))
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ .......... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... ..........
well waiting for new chs........................................................................................................................................
At first I was frustrated with the MC as his dense with women character was carried over through all the years he was a simp. His revenge plot was trudging along even though you can tell the subtle changes in his personality. But like any other novel fair judgement is made only after the ending. I finished reading this satisfied on how everything turned out. His revenge revealed his growth as a person while giving the antagonist his just desserts. Overall a great read.
reading bad reviews lol i didnt even started reading any chps, well here in philippines we have the famous g bar. ADONIS G BAR🤣😆
man, i was happy at first when i found this novel as it had 400+ chapters to read which was gud to pass my time..but now tht I'm deep in here, it's terrible to see how it takes 9-10 or even more chapters to sort out every little situation our guy gets in with all those unnecessary drama which are supposed to be funny ,but is just all the more stupid to be in the plot of a guy who is supposed to be a little close to the age of my father(mentally). I'm guessing he would have barely crossed 2 weeks by the end of these 400 chapters..which i feel stupid to continue reading on knowing this in short, this was a complete dissapointment ...
its a pretty good story with a solid main character but the harem is a bit too confusing
this is great novel (ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉ even there's lot plotholes but good work author i will wait how mc will make that b**** and guy pay, i was expecting good revenge at guy and for girl make her falling with mc but mc rejected her
What I hate the most is the dense mc ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Bro this novel is hilarious the mc gets all the cliches of hahah you are ugly clown and osv. he gets ONE haircut and then They star faening over the man like chill. If you read this dont take it seriously and just enjoy yourself while reading. Still no yandere after chapter 47
I love reading this novel......[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm reviewing this with small amount of stars. The updating is such a headache and the cliffhangers is extremely annoying and gives me even more headache
It's a great novel but if the author can update it daily then, the fans will show more interest. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
I lost some brain cells reading this just by the amount of forced plots, the stupid motivations behind characters actions and when the author makes the mc stupid just to keep the plot going, the only way to enjoy this is if you turn off your brain, and even then I still go a headache after reading 100, there was just too much bs and unnecessary drama...
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ writing quality: it's good! no mistakes as far as I remember. story development: slow or just right. well, it's because of that, that the readers gets more attached to the story more! character design: every character has their own personalities. they are not like robots who will show up only when needed. Everyone has a role to play and their personalities are like of that in real life as much as possible. updating stability: This is what I like about the author the most. Although it's not stable but, he updates as much as he can. and he never rushed the story just so that he can update! World background: It's very clear! the families, power, and what's happening is clearly mentioned at the story. HOPE YOU LIKE MY REVIEW!🥰
this novel is soooo gooood! why does it say it has 1.5 million views! I feel like it has less than 50! support the author more! atleast leave some comments to motivate him/her!
As the plot starts Lu Chen gets a shock that his wife is still in love with this Long shen, he still couldn't believe it. But he got killed by his wife's man and reincarnated again in his past, still he goes for her till the point reaches where he figures out that Lu Chen controls her like a doll, but still he couldn't figure out the other of his childhood also love him over excessive, that is, Yandere. Such a dense head boy he stiil could acknowledge that he does need that so called previous wife but people who really loves him as a person.
I love this story so far it’s very funny! I also assume there is supposed to be the harem tag in the description? I also wonder when the harem starts in the story?
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ its great ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Read it on scribble hub and I got to say that most of the work are great the plot can be annoying sometime and sometime the characters development start to to go back in the new chapter the idea that the main character have mix personalities a vengeful personality of a guy who was kill by the girl he love and another is a simp lord that will lick the ground that the main villainess/heroin(I’m not sure if it true but the plot is leading to a redemption arc for the villainess ) The only thing that i think could be improve is the world development like what is city in which country some world history like how did the the family become so powerful and the character development can be improve by making the character feel more real have them express more emotion and have longer dialogue or some inside thoughts of those character. And the story development is a bit too slow in my opinion but it is still ok each arc is about 5 chapter long and it perfect.
Love the story, the mc has a perfect balance of intelligence and idiocy, all the characters are well developed and interesting. However, there haven't been any updates or news for a while.
love this❤️❤️❤️..... . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . still waiting for Author-sensie to make Liu fei fei Inlove with Lu Chen kukuhuhahaahah(*Evil Laughter*)
broo this is just godly, really amazing man, I hope you don't drop this!!!! Though I do hope that Lu Chen ends up with meixiu!! I just really like her.
Bagusss, lanjut Thor👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
when this novel will update again, i can't hold my curiosity anymore what will happen next