16รีวิว
4.66
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
แบ่งปันความคิดของคุณกับผู้อื่น
เขียนรีวิว
Good 👍 storyline //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
This novel reads more as a slow day by day than an action adventure with slow pacing through roughly 100 chapters, the protagonist is defined as very ordinary and lacks any clear development so far, the worldbuilding is interesting but the protagonist is lacking meaningful strength, talent, wisdom or standing to make any story impact other than being fortunate. The romance is good enough though it seems his potential partners will lack in presence as they will be away for the majority of the time. Good but unfulfilling.
This novel feels a little bit bland compared to other Traditional Cultivation Novel. The world is so peaceful and might be the author's style that doesn't suit for writing this type of Cultivation novel, there is no that much face-slapping or arrogant young master or third-rated Villains for stepping stone. Also, that makes this novel quite unique. It is a good read.
A typical wish-fulfillment story where everything that could go right for the MC does go right. Every powerful woman he meets around his age ends up falling for him.
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good story plot ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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good///////////// . //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
So far its got an interesting direction and, plot developments, characters interactions and overall world building elements. Let us see how it progresses
This story is pretty interesting and updates are consistent, so have five stars from me! Anyways, I'll definitely be following along and I hope you finish until the end. :D
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This is outragous, this is unfair✌😂 Master Windu: . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
Good 👍 storyline //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
This novel reads more as a slow day by day than an action adventure with slow pacing through roughly 100 chapters, the protagonist is defined as very ordinary and lacks any clear development so far, the worldbuilding is interesting but the protagonist is lacking meaningful strength, talent, wisdom or standing to make any story impact other than being fortunate. The romance is good enough though it seems his potential partners will lack in presence as they will be away for the majority of the time. Good but unfulfilling.
This novel feels a little bit bland compared to other Traditional Cultivation Novel. The world is so peaceful and might be the author's style that doesn't suit for writing this type of Cultivation novel, there is no that much face-slapping or arrogant young master or third-rated Villains for stepping stone. Also, that makes this novel quite unique. It is a good read.
A typical wish-fulfillment story where everything that could go right for the MC does go right. Every powerful woman he meets around his age ends up falling for him.
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good story plot ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
good///////////// . //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
good///////////// . //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
So far its got an interesting direction and, plot developments, characters interactions and overall world building elements. Let us see how it progresses
This story is pretty interesting and updates are consistent, so have five stars from me! Anyways, I'll definitely be following along and I hope you finish until the end. :D
🛐is this a huge harem🛐 🛐is this a huge harem🛐 🛐is this a huge harem🛐 🛐is this a huge harem🛐 🛐is this a huge harem🛐 🛐is this a huge harem🛐 🛐is this a huge harem🛐 🛐is this a huge harem🛐
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This is outragous, this is unfair✌😂 Master Windu: . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..