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The Shinobi of Straw Hats

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นักเขียน: PeekACoo

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Jono is just an ordinary guy with ordinary life. But he died young because of pandemic. But when he's about to be judge by GOD, he's got a chance. But of course, just because you're reincarnated with some wishes, doesn't mean it will be a smooth road.
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This is my first time writing, and english is not my first language, so please understand if i made many mistakes.
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I don't own the characters in this story, even MC's appearance are not mine.
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PeekACoo

Don't mind me! I just want to support myself. Like what a wise man said: "Support yourself before others support you." altough it's very late to do this now. Also, thank you for you who have supported me so far, and sorry for those who didn't really like my story, but hey, that life. Not everyone have the same taste on something

3yr
ดู 6 การตอบกลับ
Izanmi

As always happens when a MC joins the mugiwaras ... they follow the plot, they only intervene in fights and hardly change anything. Even if the MC has cheats, Luffy will always be stronger. One Piece is one of the few animes that gives fanfic authors a lot of freedom to write something new, but many just end up copying the original. I left 3 stars just to value the author's effort. (Google translate)

3yr
ดู 6 การตอบกลับ
asaade_ragnarokm

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3yr
ดู 106 การตอบกลับ
LucasNamikaze

I don't think this fanfic is to my liking but I don't think it's bad, the MC's personality is very nice, but I see no reason why the MC is weaker than Luffy simply because he is the captain, not always the strongest person is necessarily the leader of something depends a lot on the person’s charisma and we all know that luffy has plenty, so since he doesn’t want to make the MC stronger than Luffy because he doesn’t make them have the same strength and become a kind of rival friendly, because Zoro is not necessarily weaker than Luffy, nor did he leave the crew for that reason, besides the fact that reading a story that the MC is always behind a person is not for me. Other than that the fanfic is not bad so my 4 star rating.

3yr
ดู 9 การตอบกลับ
JohnDeuz

there's nothing here, it's just original one piece+1 character (this ff's MC). MC's existence is like sakura from naruto (exist but useless). even with all the cheat he is still very dependant on luffy, i mean what the point of his existence if he is still got his ass saved by luffy every single time. he try to fight the bosses, got bitch slapped then say "if luffy's here he's gonna beat you" like some damsel, saved by luffy, then the story go like the original one piece.. reaaly? thats bullshit!!

3yr
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
Dr_Chad
LV 13 Badge

What's the point of this MC, if Luffy is highlighted. Just rewatch One Piece series again rather than reading it🤣🤣. ∧,,∧    (´・ω・) ⊂ノ  ニつ DIE!! (`(´ ノ   Mate!!!  || ノ (_(_)

3yr
ดู 8 การตอบกลับ
asaade9999

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3yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Thirdus

Honestly, just watch the anime or read the manga. This is not a fanfic of One Piece. This is literally just One Piece plus an inconsequential MC. Author didn't change anything at all. Sure the MC fights enemies, but that's it. The crew ain't any better because of him. None of the events nor it's consequences change. The MC might as well not have been there. I understand going with the plot. I even understand joining the strawhats, nothing wrong with that imo. And I never imagined I'd ever give a really low review on a novel(I'm pretty tolerant when it comes to these things). But blatantly copy pasting everything(except MC fights) that happens in the original is where I draw the line. So sorry, but Imma have to give this a low review.

3yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Idealist

Idk how to start it. I'd love so much about MC's attitude, he's a family man, and has integrity and principle. So it would be consistent. Damn it was so good that I thought I will be like MC if I was in the same circumstances. Emotionally, missing my family, and thinking like earthen people.

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3yr
ดู 15 การตอบกลับ
Lazytoast

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3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
MediocreSkater

Honestly this is probably perfect in my opinion. Some people may hate that he's weaker than Luffy but I'm really happy this is the case or he has no reason to be following his captain. He's strong but not overly so, as well as having the potential to surpass everyone. This premise I like. And from the charecter of the MC, it's also not bad. Although there could be a few things that's not to my taste, it's still a likable MC. I find that 80% of the fanfics I read have shitty personality so I'm relieved. I'm really looking forward to this so don't drop and carry on! 😁

3yr
ดู 18 การตอบกลับ
Vitor_Gamer_Br

that's copy and paste is nothing original 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

3yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SAGE
LV 2 Badge

I read 12 chapters so I don’t know if it changed or not, but writing in the narrative way makes the story very boring, which prevents me from focusing on events

3yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Majeh7

A is really disappointing this novel is not worth reading sorry ...........................................................................................................................................

3yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Ravi_Shankar131103

its shit basically the mc is like a non existant one he is strong joined luffy crew but changed nothing and everything happened same as cannon so really just cannon from a different point of view point of view of a new character only thing is stability of updates

3yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SeductiveWildPussy

luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog luffy's dog

3yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
XIANJING

The story is very good and I really like it, but unfortunately mc ..... damn I'm confused what to say and I wonder why this fanfic's rating is so high compared to other one piece fanfics, this carita only follows Canon's story, the author is not too creative and I feel sorry for one of the other fanfic writers on this stupid site

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3yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Diluc_Gunnhildr

This is not FANFIC, this is SHIT the whole story same as manga only add one OC as MC. FANFIC made for different story route, like one piece universe 7 or 6 or 11. just like that. but if the story route and goal as manga why the hell you write the story. this is plagiat. SORRY

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
aboshwkey

hello ... first of all the idea is good , update is good and character is good BUT .. why should i read it ? u r sticking to the original story .so what is there for me ?.. u should make ur own story in the world of 1 piece dont follow the original

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
MysticalNuts

story : not bad because its just like the canon duuh writing quality: the most accurate description i would give is half of you brain cells will die ** : for real author-san just get someone to edit your writing and you will be good to go like seriously dude....

3yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
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Chapter 281: 280. End, But Dreams Keep Going 5 months ago

จำนวน 2 : Journey in Paradise

  1. 8
    8. NAMI'S GOING TO DIE??!! 3 years ago
  2. 9
    9. Winter Island 3 years ago
  3. 10
    10. Damn Logic & Rip-Off 3 years ago
  4. 11
    11. Show-Off 3 years ago
  5. 12
    12. There's no medicine for regret 3 years ago
  6. 13
    13. Leaving & Reflection 3 years ago
  7. 14
    14. Road to Alabasta 3 years ago
  8. 15
    15. Finally Alabasta 3 years ago
  9. 16
    16. Rebels 3 years ago
  10. 17
    17. Alubarna 3 years ago
  11. 18
    18. Fight of Alabasta 3 years ago
  12. 19
    19. Annihilation 3 years ago
  13. 20
    Not a Chapter 3 years ago
  14. 21
    20. Croc's defeat 3 years ago
  15. 22
    21. After war 3 years ago
  16. 23
    22. Jon & Vivi 3 years ago
  17. 24
    23. A Fairy Tale 3 years ago
  18. 25
    24. Date 3 years ago
  19. 26
    25. Time to Leave 3 years ago
  20. 27
    26. Departure 3 years ago
  21. 28
    27. Yin Seal and Upgrade 3 years ago
  22. 29
    28. What Else? Training 3 years ago
  23. 30
    29. What a 'Normal' Journey 3 years ago
  24. 31
    30. Island of Goats 3 years ago
  25. 32
    31. A Dying Old Man? 3 years ago
  26. 33
    32. Rainbow Mist 3 years ago
  27. 34
    33. Falling Ship 3 years ago
  28. 35
    34. Sky Island? 3 years ago
  29. 36
    35. Norland The Liar 3 years ago
  30. 37
    36. Knock Up Stream 3 years ago
  31. 38
    37. GOD Land-Skypiea 3 years ago
  32. 39
    38. Upper Yard 3 years ago
  33. 40
    39. Priests 3 years ago
  34. 41
    40. Plans 3 years ago
  35. 42
    41. Survival Game 3 years ago
  36. 43
    42. Snake Stomach 3 years ago
  37. 44
    43. Enel 3 years ago
  38. 45
    44. Defying a God 3 years ago
  39. 46
    45. God's Defeat 3 years ago
  40. 47
    46. After War 3 years ago
  41. 48
    47. Descending from God's Land 3 years ago
  42. 49
    48. Long Ring Long Land 3 years ago
  43. 50
    49. Davy Back Fight 3 years ago
  44. 51
    50. Trampling Foxy Pirates Pride 3 years ago
  45. 52
    51. Captain's Fight 3 years ago
  46. 53
    52. Marine Admiral Aokiji 3 years ago
  47. 54
    53. Jon vs Aokiji 3 years ago
  48. 55
    54. Recuperating 3 years ago
  49. 56
    55. Water 7 3 years ago
  50. 57
    56. Split Apart 3 years ago
  51. 58
    57. Assassination 3 years ago
  52. 59
    58. CP9 3 years ago
  53. 60
    59. Confrontation 3 years ago
  54. 61
    60. Failed Attempt 3 years ago
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    61. Ennies Lobby 3 years ago
  56. 63
    62. Declaration of War 3 years ago
  57. 64
    63. Rescue Mission 3 years ago
  58. 65
    64. Jon vs 5 Vice Admirals 3 years ago
  59. 66
    65. Art is Explosion 3 years ago
  60. 67
    66. Farewell, Friend. 3 years ago
  61. 68
    67. Monsters Family 3 years ago
  62. 69
    68. Waiting the Ship 3 years ago
  63. 70
    69. Bounty & New Ship 3 years ago
  64. 71
    70. Talking Skeleton 3 years ago
  65. 72
    71. Thriller Bark 3 years ago
  66. 73
    72. Stolen Shadow 3 years ago
  67. 74
    73. Returning the Shadow 3 years ago
  68. 75
    74. Bartholomew Kuma 3 years ago
  69. 76
    75. Post Battle 3 years ago
  70. 77
    76. Mermaid 3 years ago
  71. 78
    77. Doppleganger 3 years ago
  72. 79
    78. Sabaody Archipelago 3 years ago
  73. 80
    79. Rescuing Caimie 3 years ago
  74. 81
    80. 'Dark King' Silvers Rayleigh 3 years ago
  75. 82
    81. Devastating Defeat 3 years ago
  76. 83
    82. Flying for 3 Days 3 years ago
  77. 84
    83. Way to Impel Down 3 years ago
  78. 85
    84. Infiltration 3 years ago
  79. 86
    85. Main Mission 3 years ago
  80. 87
    86. Escapees 3 years ago
  81. 88
    87. Leaving Impel Down 3 years ago
  82. 89
    88. Marineford 3 years ago
  83. 90
    89. Joining The War 3 years ago
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    90. The Great War 3 years ago
  85. 92
    91. The Great War 2 3 years ago
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    92. The Great War 3 3 years ago
  87. 94
    93. The Great War 4 3 years ago
  88. 95
    94. The Great War 5 3 years ago
  89. 96
    95. The Great War 6 3 years ago
  90. 97
    96. The Great War 7 3 years ago
  91. 98
    97. End of War 3 years ago
  92. 99
    98. Grieve 3 years ago
  93. 100
    99. Plan for Future 3 years ago
  94. 101
    100. 3D2Y 3 years ago

จำนวน 4 : The Last Sea: New World

  1. 127
    126. Return to Sabaody 3 years ago
  2. 128
    127. Deep Sea 3 years ago
  3. 129
    128. Falling Deep 3 years ago
  4. 130
    129. Ryugu Palace 3 years ago
  5. 131
    130. Heroes 3 years ago
  6. 132
    131. Power Show Off 3 years ago
  7. 133
    132. Noah 3 years ago
  8. 134
    133. Victory 3 years ago
  9. 135
    134. Poseidon 3 years ago
  10. 136
    135. Leaving Fishman Island 3 years ago
  11. 137
    136. Punk Hazard 3 years ago
  12. 138
    137. Centaurs 3 years ago
  13. 139
    138. Yeti Cool Brothers 3 years ago
  14. 140
    139. Alliance 3 years ago
  15. 141
    140. Smiley 3 years ago
  16. 142
    141. Jon vs Vergo 3 years ago
  17. 143
    142. End of Punk Hazard 3 years ago
  18. 144
    143. Road to Dressrosa 3 years ago
  19. 145
    144. Corrida Colosseum 3 years ago
  20. 146
    145. Deceived 3 years ago
  21. 147
    146. The War Started 3 years ago
  22. 148
    147. Factory & Toys 3 years ago
  23. 149
    148. Jon vs Burgess 3 years ago
  24. 150
    149. Climb Up 3 years ago
  25. 151
    150. Final Boss 3 years ago
  26. 152
    151. Finally 3 years ago
  27. 153
    152. Self-Proclaimed Straw Hat Grand Fleet 3 years ago
  28. 154
    153. New Bounty 3 years ago
  29. 155
    154. Zou 3 years ago
  30. 156
    155. Ninja & Samurai 3 years ago
  31. 157
    156. Bigger Alliance 3 years ago
  32. 158
    157. Sanji Retrieval Team 3 years ago
  33. 159
    158. Entering Totto Land 3 years ago
  34. 160
    159. Jon vs Cracker 3 years ago
  35. 161
    160. Most Dangerous Member 3 years ago
  36. 162
    161. Enraged Army 3 years ago
  37. 163
    162. Imprisoned 3 years ago
  38. 164
    163. Another Alliance 3 years ago
  39. 165
    164. Crashing Tea Party 3 years ago
  40. 166
    165. Escaping 3 years ago
  41. 167
    166. Cacao Island 3 years ago
  42. 168
    167. Jon vs Oven's Army 3 years ago
  43. 169
    168. Leaving Totto Land 3 years ago
  44. 170
    169. An Emperor 3 years ago
  45. 171
    170. Preparation On The Way 3 years ago
  46. 172
    171. Wano, We Arrive 3 years ago
  47. 173
    172. Bakura & Okobore 3 years ago
  48. 174
    173. Impostor 3 years ago
  49. 175
    174. Oiran Komurasaki 3 years ago
  50. 176
    175. Way to Get Stronger 3 years ago
  51. 177
    176. Slandering Others 3 years ago
  52. 178
    177. New Powers 3 years ago
  53. 179
    178. Saving Okobore 3 years ago
  54. 180
    179. Good Ol' Friend 3 years ago
  55. 181
    180. Raid on Onigashima 3 years ago
  56. 182
    181. Chasing the Beast 3 years ago
  57. 183
    182. Facing the Emperors 3 years ago
  58. 184
    183. Monsters 3 years ago
  59. 185
    184. Bind of The Past 3 years ago
  60. 186
    185. 2nd Attempt 3 years ago
  61. 187
    186. Showdown 3 years ago
  62. 188
    187. Steps Ahead 3 years ago
  63. 189
    188. Reinforcement 3 years ago
  64. 190
    189. Another Situation Arise 3 years ago
  65. 191
    190. Messed Up 3 years ago
  66. 192
    191. A Twin 3 years ago
  67. 193
    192. Treatment 3 years ago
  68. 194
    193. Options 3 years ago
  69. 195
    194. Rest 3 years ago
  70. 196
    195. New Good Stuffs 3 years ago
  71. 197
    196. Search and Rescue 3 years ago
  72. 198
    197. Possessing 3 years ago
  73. 199
    198. Negotiation? 3 years ago
  74. 200
    199. Bounties 3 years ago
  75. 201
    200. Preparation Completed 3 years ago
  76. 202
    201. Seclusion 3 years ago
  77. 203
    202. Freeing People 3 years ago
  78. 204
    203. Last 2 Days 3 years ago
  79. 205
    204. Day-H 3 years ago
  80. 206
    205. War Started 3 years ago
  81. 207
    206. Green Bull 3 years ago
  82. 208
    207. A Mistake with Big Cost 3 years ago
  83. 209
    208. Real Plan 3 years ago
  84. 210
    209. Old Fogeys 3 years ago
  85. 211
    210. Taking One At A Time 3 years ago
  86. 212
    211. Rinnegan 3 years ago
  87. 213
    212. Grave Mistake 3 years ago
  88. 214
    213. Last Boss 3 years ago
  89. 215
    214. Desperate 3 years ago
  90. 216
    215. Finish It 3 years ago
  91. 217
    216. Deciding The Future Path 3 years ago
  92. 218
    217. Strange Development 3 years ago
  93. 219
    218. Leaving 3 years ago
  94. 220
    219. Art of Bullshittery 3 years ago
  95. 221
    220. Crazy Thought 3 years ago
  96. 222
    221. Go Green 3 years ago
  97. 223
    222. Territory 3 years ago
  98. 224
    223. Elbaf 3 years ago
  99. 225
    224. King of Giants 3 years ago
  100. 226
    225. Thiefs 3 years ago
  101. 227
    226. Festival 3 years ago
  102. 228
    227. Mind Scape Training 3 years ago
  103. 229
    228. First Day of Fast 3 years ago
  104. 230
    229. Attacked 3 years ago
  105. 231
    230. War Begin 3 years ago
  106. 232
    231. Battle in Hunger 3 years ago
  107. 233
    232. Forcing A Limit 3 years ago
  108. 234
    233. Second Round 2 years ago
  109. 235
    234. The Beast Released 2 years ago
  110. 236
    235. Most Rewarding Day 2 years ago
  111. 237
    236. Jutsu Research 9 months ago
  112. 238
    237. Violent Woman 9 months ago
  113. 239
    238. Bored Fox 9 months ago
  114. 240
    239. Chakra Experiment 9 months ago
  115. 241
    240. Jon's Worst Day 8 months ago
  116. 242
    241. Red Hair Base 8 months ago
  117. 243
    242. Saving Barto 8 months ago
  118. 244
    243. Blackbeard's Attack 8 months ago
  119. 245
    244. Saving Alabasta 8 months ago
  120. 246
    245. Facing Blackbeards 8 months ago
  121. 247
    246. Jon vs Blackbeard 7 months ago
  122. 248
    247. Toying Blackbeards 7 months ago
  123. 249
    248. One-Man Army 7 months ago
  124. 250
    249. Betrayal 7 months ago
  125. 251
    250. Blackbeard's End 7 months ago
  126. 252
    251. Recovering 7 months ago
  127. 253
    252. Back to The Crew 7 months ago
  128. 254
    253. Way to Lodestar 7 months ago
  129. 255
    254. Lodestar Island 7 months ago
  130. 256
    255. Log Pose's Last Island 7 months ago
  131. 257
    256. Clue to Laugh Tale 7 months ago
  132. 258
    257. Secret Place 6 months ago
  133. 259
    258. Way to Laugh Tale 6 months ago
  134. 260
    259. Last Obstacle 6 months ago
  135. 261
    260. Laugh Tale 6 months ago
  136. 262
    261. Trial 6 months ago
  137. 263
    262. Giant Poneglyph 6 months ago
  138. 264
    263. Joy Boy 6 months ago
  139. 265
    264. Advanced Civilization 6 months ago
  140. 266
    265. Leaving Laugh Tale 6 months ago
  141. 267
    266. Pluton 6 months ago
  142. 268
    267. Pirate King 6 months ago
  143. 269
    268. Homecoming 6 months ago
  144. 270
    269. Promise 6 months ago
  145. 271
    270. Heartbroken 5 months ago
  146. 272
    271. Hometowns 5 months ago
  147. 273
    272. Reunions 5 months ago
  148. 274
    273. World Adventure 5 months ago
  149. 275
    274. Giant Dads 5 months ago
  150. 276
    275. Quitting The Crew 5 months ago
  151. 277
    276. Requests 5 months ago
  152. 278
    277. No Longer A Pirate 5 months ago
  153. 279
    278. Jon of Alabasta 5 months ago
  154. 280
    279. Royal Wedding 5 months ago
  155. 281
    280. End, But Dreams Keep Going 5 months ago

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