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I already wrote a critique on this, in a chapter comment, but now that I am a bit further in the story I will write this one. The first 30 chapters are weird. The writing quality is good. the world seems interresting, but the pace and MC are off. Its too clean, too many times you think "huh, but..." and the author is probably right in saying he has thought it over very thoroughly, but just thibking it amacka you out of the story. The pace is too slow and the progress not very interresting. This combined with the constant urge to tell the author that it he could have done something different (experienced by not only me) makes it hard to go through. Huh, but why the 5 stars then? Well the beginning makes it all the more obvious that the story after ch 30 really picks up, it finds its pace, its soul. The MC and side characters become more interresting, you just want to continue reading. Its fun. There is suspense. a bit of veil is uncovered. I stopped reading 4 different times reading the first 30 ch. And read the next 30 ch in 3 hours straight (I am a slow reader). Guild wars is my favorite novel on WN, and I was sad with the sudden hiatus, but now I am a bit less sad as this definitly is growing to the same heights. Excited to read the rest, and that means it deserves 5 stars.
Another beautiful work of art by the lord god himself, Kotario-sama! The development of the world around the main character is amazing. Every single thing that is mentioned has value to the story, as well as keeps the reader entertained. Most stories end up losing the interest of the readers when they have to explain a large quantity of things, but this story does it in a way that keeps the reader interested while not explaining literally every single thing. Instead, all that is needed to be known is able to be easily inferred by reading between the lines. The interactions between characters is also phenomenal. Every action or thought is in line with the person’s character/personality. The main character is not one of those stupid goodie-two-shoes heroes who are overly nice and naive to the point of insanity. The main character also isn’t a stupid edgelord only focused on being Mr. Meanie. The main character is simply the best of both worlds, and is logical and realistic, yet not utterly perfect (since that would be boring). The chapters themselves do two things at once: prepare for the following chapters, and continue upon the previous chapters. Everything in this story flows very well and contradictions are yet to be seen. 11/10 I have nothing but praise for this glorious masterpiece.
Please Author don't tell me you abandoned DARIUS SUPREME?!!!!!! I'VE been waiting for a year now for an update,and to me that seems to be the most interesting book you've written so far(Aside Immortal Simulation, I haven't read that one yet). Please can you continue Darius supreme?
heyaaa, I commented on your other novel, Guild Wars some time ago, maybe it's a year ago or two, I said if I can use your leveling system for my novel, well I didn't continue with it, so many times I'm being lazy, but that's not why I'm here, I'm here because I want to ask you directly if you know what chapter did Darius bombed that technological continent? I stopped reading there because there's no new chapters and eventually I forgot about it, and I'm lazy to search for it, I quite believe that I wouldn't have forgotten some other important plot, soooo… just really wanna know what chapter that arc is
hey my man, when is this coming back? you also left it on such an interesting point of the plot, we still need the xianxia part completed and gunners and xelas past conflicts resolved, and from the last dozens of chapters, we still got like a war(?) with the other gods champions
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the mc acts like a child with huge narcissism. I dont really know why you made parallels with the mc from warlock of a magus world when they are nothing alike. your mc is like the 12 year old the reads warlock of a magus world and thinks "thats so mee".
A good novel, but not my cup of tea. I expected Villain protagonist, but it was Anti-Hero, which is alright since Villain is a subjective term. I believe the Author sometimes went on long charades about things than needed (like Pedo and medieval thing), which 'I' didn't like since that was filler to 'Me'. And another thing is the Mc thinks against selling transmutated items in the beginning to avoid being questioned and then proceeds to make plans to sell common health potions, he made plans only till where i read. And another factor i personally don't like is that he relies on transmutation skill too much. The reason i gave character design less stars is because 'I' think the Mc's is not living or making decisions like a cold hearted businessman and becomes emotional about things, which i think should be out of character for a Top Businessman because he became the top business and he should have seen the many dark practices of the Business world and shouldn't be this prone to emotions that they effect his decisions and judgement. BTW Yes, i didn't read many chapters before writing the review because I didn't feel attracted to the novel after some chapters, and thats what novels are supposed to do to keep new readers engaged. Anyway, These are just My personal opinions so try the novel before making conclusions.
I thoroughly enjoyed the plot and the beginning of the story. It intrigued me to see a protagonist with a mature mindset who carefully considers his actions before taking any steps. The overall progression of the story impressed me as well. While the world building wasn't exceptional it served its purpose adequately for the time being. I genuinely wanted to continue reading the subsequent chapters but unfortunately, the writing technique became a deterrent for me. The author tends to prolong the narrative unnecessarily often straying from the main plot and providing lengthy explanations on irrelevant matters. For instance when any character engages the protagonist in a conversation the author frequently digresses from the dialogue delving into various unwanted info dumps through the inner thoughts of the main character spanning for an entire chapter. It consistently disrupts my focus on the story and hampers my immersion. This issue occurs far too frequently and as a result I have decided to put the story on hold for now.
Did the author drop this or what? I'm really looking forward to the continuation of the story. One of the few good newer novels out there, would be a shame to see it left unfinished while other authors kill us with generic garbage.
one of the best works I have ever had the pleasure of reading, the author is truly very talented in all aspects of the craft. I look forward to read all of your works and any future work you make!
me encantó este libro, su estructura está bien ,hecha, a veces hay detalles con las estadísticas, pero nada mal,
Evil mc False y no por eficiencia de la primera ni siquiera se vuelve amable y sentimental de que sientes mejor conocida por la fuerza ob7bububuubyb6b6v6vyv6v6h06tccoofocooccocororxixorcr ttctpctctooto5o5g9g5f5f5c5f5oo5o5foc5c5g5f9f5f5f56pg5%6g5g6pg Pi De los traduzco con traductor de la pagina que webnovel no me deja
interesting MC, kinda villainy which is a breath of fresh air, but the story progresses so slowly, like 40 chapters just for the introduction. explaining every little tiny thing, going on and on about the MC thoughts process and repeating the same stuff all the time.
He's Back!!! I said . ...He...Is......Back!!! Kotaro is Back!!! Grab your copy, Now!! Thank you author for returning, and welcome back, we have been waiting for your return.
Author, please we are pleading 🙏🙏🙏, continue this book. I don't know what is happening but I pray everything is well. I have been waiting for a few months for this awesome book to continue but nothing yet 😭😭😤😡.
4.4/5.0 for the sudden lack of updates. Allow me to explain to you exactly why this story is so great. Not perfect, but definitely a gem in the countless heaps of garbage Webnovel shoves down your throat. Darius Stone is a smart man. So smart that he surpasses the ordinary person by more than one hundred percent of the average intelligence of humans on Faust. We can see how he employs his mercantile knowledge from Earth to threaten or convince other superior beings, and his villainous side is revealed whenever he tries to make a deal. He wages wars and instigates conflicts because he is forced to, but also fishes for benefits during these wars. He is evil in ways that make us people think, "Hey, that's not too bad," but the reality is that he sacrifices thousands for the sake of his survival. After all, if he didn't make himself a monkey for the goddess "it would be oblivion for him", as quoted directly from the novel. Darius' journey to become a Supreme is entertaining because we see him using his experience as a person who built himself up from the very bottom. He exploits the bugs in the system and finds ways to improvise regardless of whether any abilities or specific details are withheld from him. His climb to the top of the world is exciting because we see him interact with beings who understand their place in the world, and the power levels are concrete and not ever-increasing. The world is set to be a massive, chaotic clash of different fantasy genres of our generation, and it achieves that perfectly. Despite having already been to and explored more than half of the seven continents, Darius still has much to uncover and overcome, giving Kotario - our author - the much-needed space to write an interconnected story instead of a constant power curve which is never fun. Overall, it is a entertaining read for anyone who enjoys watching a ruthless main character make his way up to the top, and is a must-read in my eyes. I seriously recommend this novel.
Very good story and characters but some of the scale of the world is a bit unrealistic in my mind. On another note, is Darius Supreme on permanent hiatus while Kotario focuses Damon's Ascension or will this novel be picked up again at some point?
Probably the best novel on this platform, (Even better than Guild Wars). Anyway, I hope to see new chapters soon... I'm starving for new chapters here
sinceramente historia interresante e tal mais não li tudo pois no capitulo 30 ,eu já percebi que alem do protagonista, não ser do mal, ele também é um baita de um hipocrita, quando a ele se parecer ou não com leylin, só queria que vocês se lembrasse que mesmo leylin transou na academia com uma garota, com idade para ser sua filha
I absolutely love the story, characters aren't 2d, the world ain't secluded, there are twists and turns, but what is the author doing I haven't seen a chapter in quite a while, is there an update anywhere on the situation
Really like it, good grammar and a great quality of story and character development. Still didn't like much when around 190 he suddenly losses so much...
It has been an excellent story so far, I've read up to chapter 600, And I'm only waiting for chapters to accumulate, So I can binge read them. This review won't be very long, Since many details Escape me from the 600 chapter I have read so far. let's just get into it, Grammar: I don't have much to say, It's good so far as I can tell, I use a text-to-speech application to read, Since I'm dyslexic, (I'm using Google Translates speech-to-text function to write, If anyone was wondering.) So to my ears it sounds fine, That's basically it for Grammar. As for the story itself: It's good... I really can't think of anything else to add, It's just good. As for the pacing of the story: As the Author said the pacing is slow, I personally don't have anything against it, There was only really a few points where I thought it was dragged out, Like a few pointless fight scenes, Where they could have been greatly shortened and still have the same effect, And there is the flashback with the Romantic interest/female MC? (Not sure what to call her) It felt way too long and dragged out, Other than that, There are a lot of skill descriptions and math, And again I don't have a problem with that, (I actually really like skill descriptions, One of the reasons why I like this story so much) Though the math could be turned down a little bit, And it has been in recent chapters, So not really a complaint. As for the remarks about the MC not being evil/villainous, Well, he isn't particularly evil, But certainly not good either, He has done a lot of scummy things, He's just not a good person, Don't have much else to say about this point. Now for my final remarks: Thank you Kotario for writing this story, I really enjoyed it, I binged read the whole thing in a few days, And now I'm reading Guild Wars and enjoying it to, And excuse me if there are any grammar mistakes, Since like I said I'm dyslexic. That's it for this review, It was a bit longer than I expected it to be, But oh well, I think it turned out pretty decently for my first review.
Pretty good, worth reading. The only thing that I don't really like so far is the fact that he seems to believe that whatever he is told by Caesar (or well Vena indirectly) is the truth even without evidence. The guy is supposed to be smart so why does he take whatever he is told as the truth? Even if it might be true, I just don't like the fact that he doesn't doubt the information given to him...
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Author You are great! I just enjoy this novel! write more post more often! I'm all for this novel! Darius' development has gotten better and I like it more honestly! I can't wait until he gets to the top and will either overthrow the goddess or fight on her side! It will be epic for sure!
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All you need to know about this story: at the point when MC is 5 times as clever as a standard person + all his previous life experience the MC still can’t figure out that killing a being 8 levels higher than him will make him god level…. With just one kill of 19 lvl human or beats while MC is 11 lvl would grant him enough XP to insta lvl up to god. The author proclaims MC to be a genius and at the same time MC can’t figure out such simple formula. “Clever” author made a “clever” level up system with a loophole, every normal human being would use it but the MC can’t for the sake of the story…🤡🤡🤡
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This is a really great webnovel, whose author is a very expert. The beginning is really boring but I like how the author focuses on some of the details. I will continue with it and hope not to be disappointed.
Frankly, I'm surprised at how rabid the critics are for this novel. This is one of the best novels on this site and people are complaining about the wrong things with the novel. I would complain about the status windows taking up large chapter portions or how there isn't much character development, but I instead see people complaining about how an 80+ year old man didn't sleep with an underage girl. This novel is amazing and I think it is even better the Kotario's Guild Wars because of how refined it is with its storytelling. I specifically stopped reading Guild Wars because it felt like an edgelord's wet dream after a while, so seeing the improvement is nice. People obviously skimmed through Darius' character introduction and details because they obviously missed the point that he is a schemer and not a full blown psychopathic murderer. Darius uses his amazing mind to gain what he wants, instead of using his fists like a CN protagonist. Knowing that people gave this less than 3 stars makes me feel like if batman was called an edgelord detective instead of a superhero.
there's only one thing that i hate of this novel..the chapter are so short 😤 i hope we can see darius supreme at top 10 soon................
The author is fairly experienced person,a good story line.although the story is slow paced but i think it is neccesary for a good backgroundand story building for the story. The problems that i think this novel have for me ( these problems are probably only for me) : Too diffcult grammar,well in a way it is good since i am learning new grammar but it is really time consuming to go to google and then come to read the remaining novel. Overall i really love this novel.
I already wrote a critique on this, in a chapter comment, but now that I am a bit further in the story I will write this one. The first 30 chapters are weird. The writing quality is good. the world seems interresting, but the pace and MC are off. Its too clean, too many times you think "huh, but..." and the author is probably right in saying he has thought it over very thoroughly, but just thibking it amacka you out of the story. The pace is too slow and the progress not very interresting. This combined with the constant urge to tell the author that it he could have done something different (experienced by not only me) makes it hard to go through. Huh, but why the 5 stars then? Well the beginning makes it all the more obvious that the story after ch 30 really picks up, it finds its pace, its soul. The MC and side characters become more interresting, you just want to continue reading. Its fun. There is suspense. a bit of veil is uncovered. I stopped reading 4 different times reading the first 30 ch. And read the next 30 ch in 3 hours straight (I am a slow reader). Guild wars is my favorite novel on WN, and I was sad with the sudden hiatus, but now I am a bit less sad as this definitly is growing to the same heights. Excited to read the rest, and that means it deserves 5 stars.
Another beautiful work of art by the lord god himself, Kotario-sama! The development of the world around the main character is amazing. Every single thing that is mentioned has value to the story, as well as keeps the reader entertained. Most stories end up losing the interest of the readers when they have to explain a large quantity of things, but this story does it in a way that keeps the reader interested while not explaining literally every single thing. Instead, all that is needed to be known is able to be easily inferred by reading between the lines. The interactions between characters is also phenomenal. Every action or thought is in line with the person’s character/personality. The main character is not one of those stupid goodie-two-shoes heroes who are overly nice and naive to the point of insanity. The main character also isn’t a stupid edgelord only focused on being Mr. Meanie. The main character is simply the best of both worlds, and is logical and realistic, yet not utterly perfect (since that would be boring). The chapters themselves do two things at once: prepare for the following chapters, and continue upon the previous chapters. Everything in this story flows very well and contradictions are yet to be seen. 11/10 I have nothing but praise for this glorious masterpiece.
Please Author don't tell me you abandoned DARIUS SUPREME?!!!!!! I'VE been waiting for a year now for an update,and to me that seems to be the most interesting book you've written so far(Aside Immortal Simulation, I haven't read that one yet). Please can you continue Darius supreme?
heyaaa, I commented on your other novel, Guild Wars some time ago, maybe it's a year ago or two, I said if I can use your leveling system for my novel, well I didn't continue with it, so many times I'm being lazy, but that's not why I'm here, I'm here because I want to ask you directly if you know what chapter did Darius bombed that technological continent? I stopped reading there because there's no new chapters and eventually I forgot about it, and I'm lazy to search for it, I quite believe that I wouldn't have forgotten some other important plot, soooo… just really wanna know what chapter that arc is
hey my man, when is this coming back? you also left it on such an interesting point of the plot, we still need the xianxia part completed and gunners and xelas past conflicts resolved, and from the last dozens of chapters, we still got like a war(?) with the other gods champions
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ the mc acts like a child with huge narcissism. I dont really know why you made parallels with the mc from warlock of a magus world when they are nothing alike. your mc is like the 12 year old the reads warlock of a magus world and thinks "thats so mee".
A good novel, but not my cup of tea. I expected Villain protagonist, but it was Anti-Hero, which is alright since Villain is a subjective term. I believe the Author sometimes went on long charades about things than needed (like Pedo and medieval thing), which 'I' didn't like since that was filler to 'Me'. And another thing is the Mc thinks against selling transmutated items in the beginning to avoid being questioned and then proceeds to make plans to sell common health potions, he made plans only till where i read. And another factor i personally don't like is that he relies on transmutation skill too much. The reason i gave character design less stars is because 'I' think the Mc's is not living or making decisions like a cold hearted businessman and becomes emotional about things, which i think should be out of character for a Top Businessman because he became the top business and he should have seen the many dark practices of the Business world and shouldn't be this prone to emotions that they effect his decisions and judgement. BTW Yes, i didn't read many chapters before writing the review because I didn't feel attracted to the novel after some chapters, and thats what novels are supposed to do to keep new readers engaged. Anyway, These are just My personal opinions so try the novel before making conclusions.
I thoroughly enjoyed the plot and the beginning of the story. It intrigued me to see a protagonist with a mature mindset who carefully considers his actions before taking any steps. The overall progression of the story impressed me as well. While the world building wasn't exceptional it served its purpose adequately for the time being. I genuinely wanted to continue reading the subsequent chapters but unfortunately, the writing technique became a deterrent for me. The author tends to prolong the narrative unnecessarily often straying from the main plot and providing lengthy explanations on irrelevant matters. For instance when any character engages the protagonist in a conversation the author frequently digresses from the dialogue delving into various unwanted info dumps through the inner thoughts of the main character spanning for an entire chapter. It consistently disrupts my focus on the story and hampers my immersion. This issue occurs far too frequently and as a result I have decided to put the story on hold for now.
Did the author drop this or what? I'm really looking forward to the continuation of the story. One of the few good newer novels out there, would be a shame to see it left unfinished while other authors kill us with generic garbage.
one of the best works I have ever had the pleasure of reading, the author is truly very talented in all aspects of the craft. I look forward to read all of your works and any future work you make!
me encantó este libro, su estructura está bien ,hecha, a veces hay detalles con las estadísticas, pero nada mal,
Evil mc False y no por eficiencia de la primera ni siquiera se vuelve amable y sentimental de que sientes mejor conocida por la fuerza ob7bububuubyb6b6v6vyv6v6h06tccoofocooccocororxixorcr ttctpctctooto5o5g9g5f5f5c5f5oo5o5foc5c5g5f9f5f5f56pg5%6g5g6pg Pi De los traduzco con traductor de la pagina que webnovel no me deja
interesting MC, kinda villainy which is a breath of fresh air, but the story progresses so slowly, like 40 chapters just for the introduction. explaining every little tiny thing, going on and on about the MC thoughts process and repeating the same stuff all the time.
He's Back!!! I said . ...He...Is......Back!!! Kotaro is Back!!! Grab your copy, Now!! Thank you author for returning, and welcome back, we have been waiting for your return.
Author, please we are pleading 🙏🙏🙏, continue this book. I don't know what is happening but I pray everything is well. I have been waiting for a few months for this awesome book to continue but nothing yet 😭😭😤😡.
4.4/5.0 for the sudden lack of updates. Allow me to explain to you exactly why this story is so great. Not perfect, but definitely a gem in the countless heaps of garbage Webnovel shoves down your throat. Darius Stone is a smart man. So smart that he surpasses the ordinary person by more than one hundred percent of the average intelligence of humans on Faust. We can see how he employs his mercantile knowledge from Earth to threaten or convince other superior beings, and his villainous side is revealed whenever he tries to make a deal. He wages wars and instigates conflicts because he is forced to, but also fishes for benefits during these wars. He is evil in ways that make us people think, "Hey, that's not too bad," but the reality is that he sacrifices thousands for the sake of his survival. After all, if he didn't make himself a monkey for the goddess "it would be oblivion for him", as quoted directly from the novel. Darius' journey to become a Supreme is entertaining because we see him using his experience as a person who built himself up from the very bottom. He exploits the bugs in the system and finds ways to improvise regardless of whether any abilities or specific details are withheld from him. His climb to the top of the world is exciting because we see him interact with beings who understand their place in the world, and the power levels are concrete and not ever-increasing. The world is set to be a massive, chaotic clash of different fantasy genres of our generation, and it achieves that perfectly. Despite having already been to and explored more than half of the seven continents, Darius still has much to uncover and overcome, giving Kotario - our author - the much-needed space to write an interconnected story instead of a constant power curve which is never fun. Overall, it is a entertaining read for anyone who enjoys watching a ruthless main character make his way up to the top, and is a must-read in my eyes. I seriously recommend this novel.
Very good story and characters but some of the scale of the world is a bit unrealistic in my mind. On another note, is Darius Supreme on permanent hiatus while Kotario focuses Damon's Ascension or will this novel be picked up again at some point?
Probably the best novel on this platform, (Even better than Guild Wars). Anyway, I hope to see new chapters soon... I'm starving for new chapters here
sinceramente historia interresante e tal mais não li tudo pois no capitulo 30 ,eu já percebi que alem do protagonista, não ser do mal, ele também é um baita de um hipocrita, quando a ele se parecer ou não com leylin, só queria que vocês se lembrasse que mesmo leylin transou na academia com uma garota, com idade para ser sua filha
I absolutely love the story, characters aren't 2d, the world ain't secluded, there are twists and turns, but what is the author doing I haven't seen a chapter in quite a while, is there an update anywhere on the situation
Really like it, good grammar and a great quality of story and character development. Still didn't like much when around 190 he suddenly losses so much...
It has been an excellent story so far, I've read up to chapter 600, And I'm only waiting for chapters to accumulate, So I can binge read them. This review won't be very long, Since many details Escape me from the 600 chapter I have read so far. let's just get into it, Grammar: I don't have much to say, It's good so far as I can tell, I use a text-to-speech application to read, Since I'm dyslexic, (I'm using Google Translates speech-to-text function to write, If anyone was wondering.) So to my ears it sounds fine, That's basically it for Grammar. As for the story itself: It's good... I really can't think of anything else to add, It's just good. As for the pacing of the story: As the Author said the pacing is slow, I personally don't have anything against it, There was only really a few points where I thought it was dragged out, Like a few pointless fight scenes, Where they could have been greatly shortened and still have the same effect, And there is the flashback with the Romantic interest/female MC? (Not sure what to call her) It felt way too long and dragged out, Other than that, There are a lot of skill descriptions and math, And again I don't have a problem with that, (I actually really like skill descriptions, One of the reasons why I like this story so much) Though the math could be turned down a little bit, And it has been in recent chapters, So not really a complaint. As for the remarks about the MC not being evil/villainous, Well, he isn't particularly evil, But certainly not good either, He has done a lot of scummy things, He's just not a good person, Don't have much else to say about this point. Now for my final remarks: Thank you Kotario for writing this story, I really enjoyed it, I binged read the whole thing in a few days, And now I'm reading Guild Wars and enjoying it to, And excuse me if there are any grammar mistakes, Since like I said I'm dyslexic. That's it for this review, It was a bit longer than I expected it to be, But oh well, I think it turned out pretty decently for my first review.
Pretty good, worth reading. The only thing that I don't really like so far is the fact that he seems to believe that whatever he is told by Caesar (or well Vena indirectly) is the truth even without evidence. The guy is supposed to be smart so why does he take whatever he is told as the truth? Even if it might be true, I just don't like the fact that he doesn't doubt the information given to him...
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Author You are great! I just enjoy this novel! write more post more often! I'm all for this novel! Darius' development has gotten better and I like it more honestly! I can't wait until he gets to the top and will either overthrow the goddess or fight on her side! It will be epic for sure!
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ All you need to know about this story: at the point when MC is 5 times as clever as a standard person + all his previous life experience the MC still can’t figure out that killing a being 8 levels higher than him will make him god level…. With just one kill of 19 lvl human or beats while MC is 11 lvl would grant him enough XP to insta lvl up to god. The author proclaims MC to be a genius and at the same time MC can’t figure out such simple formula. “Clever” author made a “clever” level up system with a loophole, every normal human being would use it but the MC can’t for the sake of the story…🤡🤡🤡
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This is a really great webnovel, whose author is a very expert. The beginning is really boring but I like how the author focuses on some of the details. I will continue with it and hope not to be disappointed.
Frankly, I'm surprised at how rabid the critics are for this novel. This is one of the best novels on this site and people are complaining about the wrong things with the novel. I would complain about the status windows taking up large chapter portions or how there isn't much character development, but I instead see people complaining about how an 80+ year old man didn't sleep with an underage girl. This novel is amazing and I think it is even better the Kotario's Guild Wars because of how refined it is with its storytelling. I specifically stopped reading Guild Wars because it felt like an edgelord's wet dream after a while, so seeing the improvement is nice. People obviously skimmed through Darius' character introduction and details because they obviously missed the point that he is a schemer and not a full blown psychopathic murderer. Darius uses his amazing mind to gain what he wants, instead of using his fists like a CN protagonist. Knowing that people gave this less than 3 stars makes me feel like if batman was called an edgelord detective instead of a superhero.
there's only one thing that i hate of this novel..the chapter are so short 😤 i hope we can see darius supreme at top 10 soon................
The author is fairly experienced person,a good story line.although the story is slow paced but i think it is neccesary for a good backgroundand story building for the story. The problems that i think this novel have for me ( these problems are probably only for me) : Too diffcult grammar,well in a way it is good since i am learning new grammar but it is really time consuming to go to google and then come to read the remaining novel. Overall i really love this novel.