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เขียนรีวิวthe story is not bad even if the chapters are a little short you can see that the author has tried, there are various grammar errors, but the plot is good even if for the moment nothing concrete has been done except travel a bit, I hope the author continues that this story has good potential although I think the levels are too easy for both players and him
Hi! This is Kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $50 advance by joining the contest.
love the story love the mc and definetly love the reaper. Also damn Valyria is kinda badass and definetly diffrent then other girls which always get saved by the mc she seems to be able to stand up for herself even if she is devoted to Aton that much [img=recommend]
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Nice setting and each chapter ends with a littl clifhanger and despite only short chapters the mc defelopment is crazy definetly worth a try
For everyone looking for an funny stiry with a MC who gets traped in a Game after death its a very good choice even if the author does spelling mistakes
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Guys please dont mind the minor Spelling errors, in my opinion this despite only having 3 chapters is such an amazing story it really catched me instantly lets support the Author as best as we can!
Nice story but not sure were it will lead to which is i guess a good thing thought the Mc would just be a strong player so what happened to him was suprising hope theres more suprises for usup the aouthors sleves
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Despite spelling mistakes its a very good story making me exited what will happen next and the Reaper seems to have quite some humor. Definetly worth a try
Thank you for reading my book and I hope you will enjoy it in the future. Please rate it only after reading it so that you can share your honest opinion about it.
the story is not bad even if the chapters are a little short you can see that the author has tried, there are various grammar errors, but the plot is good even if for the moment nothing concrete has been done except travel a bit, I hope the author continues that this story has good potential although I think the levels are too easy for both players and him
Hi! This is Kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $50 advance by joining the contest.
love the story love the mc and definetly love the reaper. Also damn Valyria is kinda badass and definetly diffrent then other girls which always get saved by the mc she seems to be able to stand up for herself even if she is devoted to Aton that much [img=recommend]
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Nice setting and each chapter ends with a littl clifhanger and despite only short chapters the mc defelopment is crazy definetly worth a try
For everyone looking for an funny stiry with a MC who gets traped in a Game after death its a very good choice even if the author does spelling mistakes
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Guys please dont mind the minor Spelling errors, in my opinion this despite only having 3 chapters is such an amazing story it really catched me instantly lets support the Author as best as we can!
Nice story but not sure were it will lead to which is i guess a good thing thought the Mc would just be a strong player so what happened to him was suprising hope theres more suprises for usup the aouthors sleves
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Despite spelling mistakes its a very good story making me exited what will happen next and the Reaper seems to have quite some humor. Definetly worth a try
Thank you for reading my book and I hope you will enjoy it in the future. Please rate it only after reading it so that you can share your honest opinion about it.