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บท 40: Tatooine

Above the desert planet of Tatooine, a cloaked spaceship appeared. This ship, which was called the Untouchable, was not a normal vessel one would expect to see in this galaxy. For one thing, the Lantean cloaking technology was something unheard of here.

While plenty of ships were larger then the Untouchable in this galaxy, it still knew how to stand out from other ships. While it was similar in shape to a star destroyer, it was more smooth and featured no risen portion and no obvious command deck.

Just because it wasn't the largest, however, did not mean that it was small either. The Untouchable was 350 meters long, 100 meters wide and 80 meters tall at the back, so it was still a fairly massive ship.

The creator had gone to a decent amount of effort to make the exterior look pretty unremarkable, but the engines and arsenal within this ship vastly outmatched anything else in this Galaxy, with Sub-light engines capable of reaching speeds of 250,000 Kilometers per second and Faster-then-light engines capable of reaching speeds of up too 225 light years per second (Or 810,000 light years per hour).

The Untouchable was a ship designed for crossing between Galaxies, so if the owner had a map of the Galaxy they were now in then he could get to any system he wanted too in an extremely short period of time.

However, since he had just entered this Galaxy for the first time and had no star chart, the decision to land was a fairly obvious one. Before the pilot landed, though, he did a scan, to find an ideal spot to do so, well away from any sentient races. and an area that provided natural cover. Scanning the whole planet for such a place only took a bit over two minutes, though most of that time was him manually reviewing each result and choosing the right one over all the other options that the computer recommended.

He finally chose the one he thought was the best and started the landing process before opening his eyes.

He had been seated in a Lantean control chair while he had been coming to this place and analyzing the world below. Standing near him was three beautiful young women, each of whom were among his wives, Ruby Rose, May Zedong, and Penny Polendina. The man in the chair was none other then Death Rose.

"We appear to have reached our destination without issue, Husband Death." Penny insisted.

Death smiled at her and nodded. Even though Penny had become human eleven years ago, she still retained the same endearing personality. He reached out and grabbed Penny around her waist and pulled her into his lap before tenderly kissing her soft lips with his own. Kissing Penny was always an incredible feeling, as the relic of creation that had made her body did an incredible job, making him feel as though he was kissing a cloud. She was just unnaturally soft and light, compared to her physical appearance.

"Husband Death is so naughty." Penny said and then giggled after the kiss, but didn't try to escape from him either.

"The others are waiting" Ruby said to Death.

Death looked at Ruby and nodded "Of course." he let go of Penny, who thereafter rose up to her feet. "The autopilot has been set and the landing process is initiated. Lets meet them and prepare to debark."

"What can you tell us about this world, love?" May asked, thinking to question him as they walked.

"Well, you, Nebula, Gwen and Octavia will probably have the easiest time adjusting." Death chuckled as he got up and wrapped an arm around Ruby and May's waists as they walked "This planet is called Tatooine, and it is one huge desert, like Vacuo. Everyone will be fine though, since we came prepared."

"Wait, the entire planet is a huge desert?" May asked with surprise.

"That is correct." Death agreed "But we have Ambrosius and all the supplies we brought with us. I gave each of my maidens the magic of Item Box for a reason." he had used his system to give his four magical wives all the magics he possessed, including the absolutely useless (to him) Item Box. It was just vastly inferior to his inventory, since it had a limited space whereas his inventory was infinite.

Item box still could hold a substantial amount of items, but it cost mana to put things in and to take it out again. Well, with his semblance, him and his lovers had their mana regenerated nearly as fast as they could use it, but capacity was still an issue. He had let his magically-imbued wives carry the supplies that they would use to build their base on Tatooine.

Letting them carry so much was just Death's way of helping them to be a bit more independent when they needed to be. He had always tried to be there to take care of them, but there was no harm in making sure they have such skills for just in case they had to get by a few months without him, like when he used the Sword of Edicts and was unconscious for several months 11 years earlier.

Well he learned later that he was actually unconscious for several decades, but for his lovers it was only a couple months.

You would not know it by looking at him, but Death was 28 years old (or even older if you took into account his decades of slumber, which he generally did not), even if he looked 17 years old. He merely had not aged beyond that point, thanks to his semblance, which also affected his lovers and insured that none of them would die of old age.

He was not in his original Nephilim form, either, instead looking more human at the moment. His true form was one of the four horsemen that once served the Charred Council, but his current form looked much more human, with white hair and luminous teal eyes.

When he had gotten his human form, the first person he touched at that time was his wife Weiss (At the time girlfriend), so he guessed that the hair and eyes were a bit of her influence, though he didn't mind it because he thought it looked very good on him, and he got no complaints out of any of his beloved wives when he finally revealed his form later that day when they were all gathered together. He also proposed marriage to each of them that day, and started dating Neon and Ultear as well thereafter.

He could still go into his Nephilim form whenever he wanted too, but considering that as far as he knew nothing like the Nephilim existed in this universe, Death just figured he might as well take this opportunity to grow accustomed to his human form again.

At 6 feet tall, Death was about 8 inches shorter then he was in his Nephilim form, but was still decently tall for a human. He certainly still towered over each of his beautiful wives.

Death and the trio of beauties entered the lift and Death finally let go of Ruby and May's waists and gave each of their butts a playful swat. Penny hit the button for the lowest floor and they all focused on getting serious for the moment.

If he was just meeting the rest of his wives down here, then Death wouldn't bother getting serious, but they also had others accompany them into this universe and they tried to maintain a professional demeanor in front of these members of their crew.

When the elevator doors opened, three little girls that resembled tiny little versions of Ruby, charged over and hugged their mothers legs. The oldest was Scarlet, the middle girl was Celeste, and the youngest daughter was Hope. The youngest two, their twin boys, Sylvain and Rowan, were being held by their grandparents, Summer and Taiyang.

Gracie and Aurora, who were his daughters with May and Penny respectively, were older then the 5 children he'd had with Ruby, and managed to be a put more composed as their mothers returned..

Death knelt and hugged each of the little girls before standing up to face the crowd gathered before him, which made up everyone on the ship currently "Thank you all for coming with me. Though you cannot all walk beside me as I explore this new world, you'll all have your part to play in the coming years. I will send plenty of this worlds, or rather this Galaxy's, technology back for you to study, Dr. Polendina. You will certainly have no shortage of work ahead of you. Not to mention you will be helping to educate the children as well."

Dr. Polendina was the scientist that had built Penny back when she was still a robot. He had been a scientist and an old man, but now he looked far younger, around his early 20's, and had regained the use of his legs as well thanks to a gigai body hat Death had made for him.

Standing alongside Dr Polendina was Maria Calavera, and between them was Aurora Polendina, his daughter with Penny, who reminded him very much of Penny. As Death went around letting everyone know what was expected of them, he made sure to properly greet and show affection to each of his beloved children, feeling incredibly fortunate.

As he finished telling them their rolls, the ship had successfully landed without incident, so Death opened the hatch and led the group out into a barren and isolated valley. Frankly, the place looked completely devoid of life, even compared to Vacuo. Yes, Vacuo was in a desert, but it at least had cacti here and there, but they couldn't even see that here. "Jeez, this place will be our base of operations?" Nebula asked with surprise.

While Nebula wasn't one of his wives, she had managed to bind herself to him eleven years ago like they were bound to him. As such she'd been perfectly willing to follow him here, but this was not what she expected.

"This place will be perfect by the time Ambrosius finished up the place." Death reassured Nebula and chuckled "May, Penny, Amber, and Neo, please start taking out the supplies I gave you for Ambrosius to use."

The four wives that he had named were, of course, the current generations four maidens, the ones that he had given the magic of Item Box too. Each of the four nodded and started removing materials from their item boxes into four absolutely massive piles of materials.

Death took the opportunity, while they were taking everything out, to store his spaceship in his inventory, then waited for the four beautiful young women to finish. before they did so, though, an eleven year (Though she looked more like she was eight or nine) old girl with long blond hair and vibrant blue hair came up to Death and hugged him.

This adorable bundle of joy actually wasn't one of his biological children, but was rather the former great evil 'Queen of the Grimm' from the World of Remnant, though she had no memory of that. After defeating Salem, Death placed her soul into a gigai made to look like a baby girl, thus peeling away Salem's memories of the past, and he and his wives had raised her in a loving home while he had secretly worked towards purifying her soul, and her actual body which he retained in his inventory.

Well, little 'Salem Rose' knew she was adopted, but never complained since she got treated just as much like one of his children as were his actual children. If anything, not treating her different had made her more loving towards Death, he suspected in a romantic way.

Death returned the hug an smiled "Salem, there's nothing to fear. After Ambrosius and the maidens finish working, this place will be a little slice of paradise for our family." he reassured her.

"I want to go with you when you leave, and see more." Salem insisted.

Her statement surprised Death for a moment, but when he really thought it through, it made sense. They had sheltered Salem a lot back on Remnant, not wanting anyone to connect this darling little girl with the terrifying Grimm queen that she once had been, so asking to get out a bit more made sense. Besides, no one in this new world would know.

Death nodded in agreement "Okay. I'll bring you with me when I begin my journey again, though I have a year before that time comes." he notified her "I may go out every now and then to look around only on this small planet, but when my true adventure begins, I'll let you come along."

Before coming here, Death had briefly considered going to Naboo first, like in many of the fanfictions he had read in first life, but after careful consideration he had decided that plan was just terrible. If someone without an identity in the Republic suddenly appeared there, it might lead to questions that he did not want to have asked. If he appeared on Tatooine, though, it would be par for the course and wouldn't seem out of place at all, since the Republic does not have good records on any of these residents here.

As such, it will be far easier to arrange a meeting with Qui Gon Jinn and join up with him when he arrives on Tatooine. Here they could lay low, and he could help set up their base of operations in the next year, while also formulating his own plans and developing his newly awakened force-user skill tree.

"Thank you" Salem said to him cheerfully before stepping back as the Maiden's returned after piling up the supplies from their Item Boxes.

"Thank you all." Death told each of them before taking out the staff of creation from his inventory and summoning forth Ambrosius.

"Oh my, you seem to have brought me to an interesting place." Ambrosius noted while looking around "Doesn't look like much though."

"This is the place I want to build the fortress I told you about before" Death explained to Ambrosius "If you need anymore materials then what we have here, let my know and I'll provide them." Death got out the schematics and plans so that Ambosius could review them one last time before he got to work.

Twenty minutes passed for Death and his family and allies, though time had stopped for the rest of the universe while Ambrosius did his magic. In the end, though, the valley was very much expanded, and at its center was another Lantean City Ship, a miniaturized version of Atlantis that could protect his lovers, children and allies even if the Death Star appeared here in the future and destroyed the planet.

Death chose a place as isolated as possible, so that the relic of creation could transmute the stone and sand into rich soil giving them around 2000 acres to work with, but thanks to the Lantean technology they camouflaged the area from above as well, so that even if they teraformed such a large area, it would not immediately be noticed.

Death made sure to activate that camouflage with his technokinesis as soon as it was finished, not wanting time to resume without it active.

Finally the job was done and Death was satisfied and thanked Ambrosius before letting him leave. "May, Neo, Amber and Penny, lets go fill our new water reservoir" he said to the maidens before heading to the reservoir, after which they'd need to add trees and other plant life to the valley.

Considering the size of the Valley, it would likely take a considerable amount of time for them to fully fill it up, but in the end it would not be an exaggeration to declare it a small slice of Paradise.

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Aside from getting the valley in order, Death had a few priorities, and one of them ended up being pretty easy. After everyone settled in, Death planned to visit the various settlements on Tatooine, and the first one he entered was Mos Espa. He did not expect his luck to be so good, but he sure was not going to complain about it.

After that it was a simple matter to find Watto's shop, and saw eight year old Anakin Skywalker. Death did not want Qui Gon Jinn to be the one to collect young Anakin, but he knew he would have to return later with what he needed to trade with, since Watto wouldn't trade away Anakin cheaply, and he also intended to buy Anakin's mother and the Nubian T-14 Hyperdrive Generator that Qui Gon would want to get in the future.

Death returned to their valley using the City Ship's teleportation technology to spend a few weeks using magic with the Maiden's to grow out a forest in the immediate vicinity of the City Ship, since he did not want to be too obvious about the origin of the vegetation when Anakin and his mother arrived.

Once he was sufficiently satisfied, he returned to Watto with barter materials. He had a chance while at Mos Espa to briefly analyze a sample of durelium, which he knew was quite valuable, and he transformed some of the leftover metal that Ambrosius hadn't needed and soon had about three and a half tons of the stuff.

Death used a cloaked Puddle Jumper to carry the metal and arrived right outside of Watto's shop before uncloaking and landing the small vessel. Death got out of the Puddle Jumper, dragging a carrier that looked too heavy for a person to pull on his own like it was nothing, and pulled it into the shop while the puddle Jumper rose into the air again, clocked, and moved elsewhere.. He could call it back when he was ready to leave.

Watto came flying over grinning "Ah, a customer. How cam I help you?" he said while rubbing his hands together greedily.

"I have 3 and a half tons of ingots of pure durelium."Death pointed to the cart he was pulling "I want to trade it to you for the slaves, Shmi Skywalker and Anakin Skywalker, along with a Nubian T-14 Hyperdrive Generator that I hear you possess."

"You came to the right place for the Nubian T-14 Hyperdrive Generator. I have one, and you wont find another anywhere in Mos Espa" Watto bragged "But while your offer is certainly generous, the boy is too valuable to my business. I'm afraid I'll need more."

Death rolled his eyes at Watto's greed "Fine, I can return tomorrow with an extra one and a half thousand pounds of ingots, totaling 5 tons of pure durelium bars. I wont go a bit higher then that."

Watto nodded "Then I accept, assuming your bars are the real deal" he agreed.

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Watto kept his deal and Death collected Anakin and Shmi the next day in a Puddle Jumper and allowed them to retrieve their personal items, including Anakin's partially built pod and C-3PO. He carried the pod back using his inventory.

When they landed on a grassy field surrounded by tree's just a bit of a walk from the City Ship, the Puddle Jumper uncloaked and the hatch opened up to where Penny was waiting "Welcome home, Husband Death." Penny greeted and pounced at Death and hugged him.

"Hello Penny." Death chuckled "I brought some new guests. They have bombs implanted in them as they were kept as slaves before I found them. Can you please make arrangements to have those removed."

"Certainly Husband Death." Penny agreed before finally parted from the hug and looked at the two Skywalkers "My name is Penny Polendina, it's such a pleasure to meet the three of you." as a former robot herself, she of course included C-3PO in her counting.


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Most of the changes that had to be made were in the Remnant arc. I finished the whole star wats arc and am mass releasing it today. I didn't need to make any changes of substance to this section or the Pokemon one, so I actually have had this mass release ready for a long while, but just never uploaded it due to demotivation.

I actually intended to add a couple chapters to this section before uploading the second half of this arc, but I just can't find the motivation for that right now, so I'll upload them as is.

I apoligize for the long delay. I was just really depressed by the negativity and the lack of any support I have felt from the re-write.

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