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เขียนรีวิวNot worth the read, it's nonsensical, nothing is properly explained and things just happen without reason or consequence. ..................
1.2 read half of 1 chapter, the wishes mc makes causes lack of depth to thale character which you wouldn't be able to develop later The wishes 100 percent impractical in writing It have been better author if you just gave a list of characters and mc has to choose who he will be appearance wise and which abilities he would get from that character This would be Alot less subjective, more understandable allow you to give pros and cons of your selected selection and it wouldnt have to be character from marvel
Don't bother. It's like the whole story was written by a schizophrenic person during one of his delusional periods....flight of idea much?
The wishes the Mc makes no sense, he wishes for an immortal body and mind but makes it so that he can still die and makes it so the "immortality" means Zenkai boost. Wishes for wolverines healing factor along with a vibranium skeleton, and the others are just as stupid. the story is hella rushed, the grammar sucks, there's no character design, and the reason it's more then one star is because the ff is finished so I gave full stars for updates.
Idea was cool. Felt like it was quite boring. I would honestly only read this if you have no other Marvel fan-Fics to read. (Even then I wouldn’t recommend it)
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Really good premise but there's no Passion at all no emotion it's very blah. Decent writing but I just can't get past the faking emotion hes like all happy that his mom got sealed away and hes getting sent thousands of years in the future it's just weird weird not realistic at all.
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i dont understand anything you write. i dont know about your updates so i am giving 3 stars as avarage. story development is good altough i could only understand few. there are no character designs. world background is 3 because you decided to use marvel timeline instead of 1000bc like before. its like you just completely bored
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not the best but also not the worst. If you feel like reading something without spending mental energy then give this a try. will finish in 2 hours.
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this is a good book. it might not be my absolute favorite. but it is a really good book. I am glad that he decided to finish it. he did an amazing job with this book.
Хорошее начало , но походу автор что-то не то курнул и его унесло в открытый космос . Просто я не понимаю зачем ему столько плюшек !? Автор их пихает везде и всюду !. Это конечно дело автора и все такое , но это моё мнение и я его высказал .
Fun little stoy, with a satisfactory close. The MC, while a bit OP, is still compelling enough to make it fun to root for him. Definitely worth the read.
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I read it but there were so many spelling mistakes and also just wrong text like if it was machine translated but not double checked. story idea is good in my opinion. needs to be checked and more fleshed out. also don't like that they are making so many non story chapters chapters. if you have some author notes put it there.
Two words to describe this ff. It’s “hot trash” the mc looks like he has no mind of his own as he kills a god just because he was ordered to. What’s worse the god was living a humble life as a “mortal”. Then let’s not foget about the plot holes. The author just loves skipping the places that would’ve needed a bit of detail. no character development....we don’t know anything about the mc. Mc doesnt seem like he has learned any other moves other then the first three at the beginning of this ff. Those are just one of the few flaws of this ff. Read at your own risk.
Not worth the read, it's nonsensical, nothing is properly explained and things just happen without reason or consequence. ..................
1.2 read half of 1 chapter, the wishes mc makes causes lack of depth to thale character which you wouldn't be able to develop later The wishes 100 percent impractical in writing It have been better author if you just gave a list of characters and mc has to choose who he will be appearance wise and which abilities he would get from that character This would be Alot less subjective, more understandable allow you to give pros and cons of your selected selection and it wouldnt have to be character from marvel
Don't bother. It's like the whole story was written by a schizophrenic person during one of his delusional periods....flight of idea much?
The wishes the Mc makes no sense, he wishes for an immortal body and mind but makes it so that he can still die and makes it so the "immortality" means Zenkai boost. Wishes for wolverines healing factor along with a vibranium skeleton, and the others are just as stupid. the story is hella rushed, the grammar sucks, there's no character design, and the reason it's more then one star is because the ff is finished so I gave full stars for updates.
Idea was cool. Felt like it was quite boring. I would honestly only read this if you have no other Marvel fan-Fics to read. (Even then I wouldn’t recommend it)
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Really good premise but there's no Passion at all no emotion it's very blah. Decent writing but I just can't get past the faking emotion hes like all happy that his mom got sealed away and hes getting sent thousands of years in the future it's just weird weird not realistic at all.
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i dont understand anything you write. i dont know about your updates so i am giving 3 stars as avarage. story development is good altough i could only understand few. there are no character designs. world background is 3 because you decided to use marvel timeline instead of 1000bc like before. its like you just completely bored
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love it ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
not the best but also not the worst. If you feel like reading something without spending mental energy then give this a try. will finish in 2 hours.
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this is a good book. it might not be my absolute favorite. but it is a really good book. I am glad that he decided to finish it. he did an amazing job with this book.
Хорошее начало , но походу автор что-то не то курнул и его унесло в открытый космос . Просто я не понимаю зачем ему столько плюшек !? Автор их пихает везде и всюду !. Это конечно дело автора и все такое , но это моё мнение и я его высказал .
Fun little stoy, with a satisfactory close. The MC, while a bit OP, is still compelling enough to make it fun to root for him. Definitely worth the read.
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I read it but there were so many spelling mistakes and also just wrong text like if it was machine translated but not double checked. story idea is good in my opinion. needs to be checked and more fleshed out. also don't like that they are making so many non story chapters chapters. if you have some author notes put it there.
Two words to describe this ff. It’s “hot trash” the mc looks like he has no mind of his own as he kills a god just because he was ordered to. What’s worse the god was living a humble life as a “mortal”. Then let’s not foget about the plot holes. The author just loves skipping the places that would’ve needed a bit of detail. no character development....we don’t know anything about the mc. Mc doesnt seem like he has learned any other moves other then the first three at the beginning of this ff. Those are just one of the few flaws of this ff. Read at your own risk.